I have to with happy endings more often than cruel endings as my preferred choice of story. I do like how you mention the miscommunication between the two of them at their different sizes and how you try to keep it realistic. I would say that he would try to prove himself too her by shrinking again without her noticing and go through tough situation like the pussy, ass, or nipple to say that there is nothing wrong with him shrinking.

I have enjoyed reading this story and I like your writing style and hope to learn from it. I was expecting something like this to happen with the shrinking as it seemed like this was where was heading before you decide to change it up a little. I was hoping for a little happeir note for Nick but I see that you gave that with Jenny for some happiness, so I am happy about that, and it prepares for what is to come. 

I noticed that you have been getting a lot of flak with this last one and wanted to give this review to you to encourage you. many people will give their opinions of their wants and desires. As a writer, this helps us improve but in the end write what you want to write and what you envisioned. you have story to tell so tell it the way you want it. I have enjoyed the story no matter what ending you chose. I found it to be a good story.

To others reviewers out there about the question of his accidental shrinkage. I think I have an idea of why it happens from my interpretation of it. Nick is not using the book the way it was intended to be used, the other users of the book did minor things and only a little bit of adjustments to themselves. Nick is going into uncharted waters with what he is doing so there is really no guide about shrinking himself down to such a small state. The other note I found was his mental state to cause the shrinking. he trained in a control setting with very little stimulation to control it. Cassie and Jenny were not there to make sure that he could grow back to normal if he was thrown in a situation like before with Cassie, he did not have that risk while he train but instead lived on the desire of being in relationship again. When Jenny came along, it did the opposite of what his training was suppose to do. He was suppose to win Cassie with his control when he got to the apartment not go recklessly in a love session with Jenny, it messed him up mentally to stop him from shrinking accidently. Nick was knocked into his old habit and not set on a new one because Jenny gave him what he wanted, not what he needed.

Great story, He is aware of the dangers of being small and plans out what he should do. you should continue it. 

There is still time for readers to put their input of how the overdose will affect Steve and Kady.

My vote is number one on the poll. I hope that Jackie's milk sprays on the crowd, causing them to shrink. Jackie has to sit down later because she is tired walking with the huge jugs. She doesn't notice a person she shrunk with her milk is already sitting where she wants to sit. the person falls into the butt crack and struggles to escape. the person gets pulled into her asshole and Jake has to pull that person out. just an idea for the shrinking milk.

I would say that Mick and Steve met in college or something like that. Nick is 25 and Steve is 19, soon to be 20. Mick could have been a good friend or mentor when Steve was in middle school and told him about his condition. or Steve was aiming for an internship at Mick company and they became good friends that way, keeping in touch and all. There are a lot of ideas.

Really hot chapter. I love the interaction and descriptions between the son and mother. Their relationship will never be the same. I wonder if Mick will go head first sometime. Can’t wait for more!

Author's Response:

Hey, glad to hear from you again!

Thanks for the feedback, I did enjoy writing this chapter, so it makes me happy that you and so many others liked it!

Be prepared for what's to come. 😉

Great start. I like the relationship the two have. Lexi developing a fetish as she continues to use Chris. It is an interesting chemisty. The writing style is good. I am trying to impove mine and think of new ways to do things and this looks fun way to do it.

I hope that Lexi either wants to spend a long time with Chris or that Lexi loses track of Chris for a little and he explores other parts of her.

Great story. I like the build up they have as they enjoy each other. I hope that Alexis forgets that he is in the rag and starts rubbing him over herself. Or leaves him there and Heather finds the rag. I can't wait for the next chapter

This is a hot story! Love the interaction between the sister and brother. She is in control and able to live out some crazy fantasies.

Since she is in full control of his height, will she increase his height a little when her parents are not going to disturb them so she can more ways to have fun. Like growing him so she can suck his dick until he cums to show that he really belongs to her.

The watch and the app being able to communicate is interesting. It allows her to tease him more and figure out what gets him the most.

Author's Response:

Thanks! Yeah, she's in full control :)