Reviewer: Master_Builder Signed
Date: March 30 2020
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
- You certainly did a good job portraying Euryale and Stheno. Kinda hateable, yet secretly endearing, with their thoughts expressing what they actually feel. But sometimes I wonder how does Medusa deal with them.
- I'm surprised to see Gorgon around them. I'm more surprised to see that Gorgon obeys their orders.
- All in all, there's certainly no shortage of Servants that want Chaldea's master all to themselves, with some even having their own plans to bring him back to the Throne with them. This could be the start of some amusing confrontations.
- I'm glad to see more of these. You certainly know how to portray Chaldea, its atmosphere and the different Servants and characters. Nice work, as usual.
Author's Response: Thanks, it was difficult to balance their selfish natures with their affectionate sides, but I'm happy with how it came out in the end. I feel like Medusa knows her sister's truly do love her, they did stay on the Shapeless Isle with her until thier deaths even though they never had to.
Gorgon actually still has her deep seeded respect and obedience for her sisters, and since she is their little sister she can't disobey Stheno or Euryale should they catch her (which is likely one of the reasons she tries so hard to avoid they).
Yeah, I figured either way Chaldea's Master is getting recorded into the Throne by this point, but high ranking magic, like the EX rank both Stheno and Euryale hold, should be able to manipulate how they get recorded. While this does become a point of conflict among the Servants, I should mention that each of my Fate stories is set in a separate timeline from the others. Fujimaru Ritsuka doesn't cheat on his Servants lol
I'm glad you enjoyed it and hopefully I can continue to keep an accurate portrayal of the Fate setting.
