Penname: Gershwin [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: January 08 2018
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Nick's Journey: Volume 1. The Social Threat by Ant-Man and the Air Rated: R starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Nick is 16 years old. He lives in Litlle Bastid, Pennsylvania. He will soon enter in high school with his best friend: Alizée Sullivan. There, he will meet friends, enemies and maybe even love.


It would be a lambda summary, if Nick was not 4 cm tall ! He will have to fight to make things better, more just in his eyes, in a world too big for him ...


But at its size, can we really fight with equal weapons? Only he knows ...

 


Categories: Entrapment, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Vore, Feet, Violent, Breasts
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18575 Read Count: 29570
[Report This] Published: March 24 2019 Updated: May 25 2019
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 07 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Nick VS High School

It is an interesting story, and I get that your first language is not English. One thing that really breaks the story is that you repeatedly get “his” “her” and “he” “she” wrong, making it sound like every character in the story is male! If you can fix that it will make it a lot better.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I'm very happy that you find my story interesting. I'm gonna try to fix the problem to improve the story. Have a good day !

Incest Is Wincest by Tiny Jedi Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

When Jon, 19, decides to move in with his sexy 18-year-old sister who is a magic user, he realizes he is in over his head.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Incest, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15281 Read Count: 45233
[Report This] Published: May 15 2019 Updated: June 05 2019
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

I look forward to see where this goes. It’s a good start.

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot, Gershwin.

Just Like In The Movies by Flagpole_Sitta97 Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: (This story will be set in the same world as my previous Story, A Different View. I deleted that one due to the fact I wasn't really feeling it and I didn't really have much time to write on it). 17 year old Dave gets invited to a new years eve party and gets shrunk by a ex who happens to be at the party also.
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Feet, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22217 Read Count: 65411
[Report This] Published: May 30 2019 Updated: June 21 2019
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstar
Date: June 04 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Who Knew?

It’s interesting. I like how it starts and look forward to it’s progression. Not sure about chapter three, seems a bit ... random.

Author's Response: Yeah I didn't really have much of a plan for that chapter, I kinda started making things up. Trust me, I won't go as random as I did then.

Stuart's Sexy Sister by Tiny Jedi Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

Stuart, 19, has a super hot 17-year-old sister.  He must decide whether to shrink himself or not.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Incest, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18920 Read Count: 84823
[Report This] Published: August 14 2019 Updated: August 29 2019
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 02 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapters 8 to 12 ... 8-29-19

An interesting story. Enjoyed most of it - I found some of the interactions/behaviour a little chaotic, oten bouncing between moods too quickly or overreacting to events. Also it's all been a bit PG rated so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  I get what you're saying about moods.  That's on purpose for the excitement of it (not meant to be too realistic) yet it was a challenge and I also thought it was chaotic at times.  I agree it is a bit PG to PG-13.  The character's personality prevented going further.

Shrunk, Found, and Used by Thatgirlyouknow Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Evan has been shrunk! His sister's friend will take care of him until they find a cure....


Categories: Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14517 Read Count: 68864
[Report This] Published: November 29 2019 Updated: January 20 2020
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Tanya's Needs

Great stuff. A good deal of detail and well written sexy action.

REAL2U by high5s4ever Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

A wife has a surprise for their husband after he is gone for a long business trip. He is about to take another trip, but this is strictly for pleasure.


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Couples, Insertion, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5482 Read Count: 5935
[Report This] Published: January 26 2020 Updated: January 26 2020
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 28 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well written and lots of nice details. I enjoyed the premise a lot too. I personally could have done without the sour patch stuff but each to their own I guess.

Fairy Girlfriend by The Ice King Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

A man goes on a strange journey thanks to his fairy girlfriend. This story also contains TG 


Categories: Giantess, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41157 Read Count: 83878
[Report This] Published: March 19 2020 Updated: February 25 2021
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 22 2020 Title: Chapter 3: A visit to a fairy's bedroom

An enjoyable story in a fun world. I like that there’s a story here that I want to see expanded.

Childhood Friends by KaijuCarnival Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Melody is Jared's childhood friend, but in a world where men exist as food for women, Jared isn't ready to take their relationship to the next level. Melody has other ideas.

This story takes place in a world ruled over by a "New Giantess Order" in which women have been given the demonic powers which make them taller, more dominant, and able to shrink men at will.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Gentle, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4720 Read Count: 20387
[Report This] Published: June 24 2020 Updated: June 27 2020
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Introductions

Well I’m certainly interested to see where this goes.

Meeting in the Middle by Xiao-renzhe Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A couple of close friends, Emeline and Stephan, spend some quality time together to unwind over a movie after taking their finals for the semester at the University of Augural Sciences. What begins as a casual evening takes a turn for the fantastic, however, when some of the content in the movie inspires a particular reaction in Stephan that leads Emeline down an interesting line of questioning. 

 

This was done as my half of an art trade with Gershwin! My first story of that sort. 

Disclaimer: this story is for entertainment purposes only, it was based on a brief prompt, and any resemblances to persons in real life or in other intellectual property is coincidental. 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Fantasy, Gentle, Growing Woman, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7471 Read Count: 6005
[Report This] Published: September 30 2020 Updated: September 30 2020
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01 2020 Title: Chapter 1: A Cause for Celebration

An excellent story, thank you! The character interaction and situation feels very natual, with great attention to detail wihtout getting too much. Very sexy, very erotic and well written.



Author's Response:

Very much obliged, friend! It felt very natural to write, probably in no small part due to an excellent prompt! This was the easiest to produce thing I've done in a while. it just flowed! So I'm glad you were satisfied with it. 

Romantic Encounter by tinyZ Rated: X Round robin starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

As Raul meets a very attractive woman that he finally connects with, he begins to realize she has more power over him than he initially felt. 


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3381 Read Count: 8349
[Report This] Published: January 27 2021 Updated: January 28 2021
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 28 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Not bad at all. Perhaps a little short per chapter, doesn't really let the reader get into the action/story before it's over. I like where it's going though.

Property of Lily by Yougts, johnsmith10992, Vexed Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

A night of  promised shrunken fun with a friend quickly takes a turn for the worse. Our unfortunate protagonist is about to become the sex toy of someone quite familiar to him.

Co-written by Johnsmith10992

Taken over by Vexed chapter 10 and on

Join the discord: https://discord.gg/Kav8XwAwN4 


Categories: Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 82132 Read Count: 193735
[Report This] Published: January 28 2021 Updated: August 26 2021
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 28 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The trickery

I enjoyed this intro, looking forward to where it goes next :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Read Before Opening by Xiao-renzhe Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

A man has been keeping his deepest fantasies a secret from his wife, but not from the women with whom he loves to role-play them all. His wife is secretly privy to these ongoing, covert conversations, and has a few surprises of her own up her sleeve. Can her husband survive her spurred scorn, or will his wife's vindictiveness be the end of him? Will life and love find a way? 

Find out In this story of drama, humor, desires, cruelty, passion, and understanding. 


Categories: Adult 30-39, Giantess, Couples, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17451 Read Count: 9917
[Report This] Published: March 16 2021 Updated: March 25 2021
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 17 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Letter

Really enjoyed reading this, it's a fantastic setup with so many options where it goes next, who knows what might happen! Very much looking forward to the next encounter.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Gershwin!! Always means a lot to get feedback from you, especially considering how long I've been a fan of your work! 

The best thing about this setup is the potential! I'm sure I won't let you down! 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Gershwin!! Always means a lot to get feedback from you, especially considering how long I've been a fan of your work! 

The best thing about this setup is the potential! I'm sure I won't let you down! 

Living Together by Navar51 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 85]
Summary:

 

Ryan lives a normal life for a tiny: he works online, he keeps in shape at the local gym, he games online with friends he never meets, and he tries his best to avoid getting stepped on. Of course it was just his luck that the apartment he lived in got foreclosed on and now he’s been evicted.

Thankfully one of his online friends, Lena, offers to let him crash with her. Of course, having never met, Ryan doesn’t know she’s a bit bigger than he thinks.

 

 

Note: There will be no deaths in this story.

 


Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67589 Read Count: 97503
[Report This] Published: April 08 2021 Updated: August 20 2022
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19 2021 Title: Chapter 3: CH3. Teased and Confused

I had a recomendation to read this story, and glad I did!

I'm really enjoying this whole setup, its really sweet and makes me look forward to the more lewd stuff that may occur even more.

I'm happy knowing you'll keep it soft between them (No accidently digesting her new friend!).

You've done well making their behaviour feel realistic, with natural conversations and reactions, while also giving just enough details to make the world feel like a proper place, but not getting bogged down in too much unnecessary details.



Author's Response:

I'm happy you decided to follow their recomendation, glad you liked it! I say the buildup is more than half the battle in a story like this one, so theres more of that to come in the future. I'm glad you like the balancing I've managed so far, hope I'll be able to keep you satisfied with the amount of detail!

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 27 2021 Title: Chapter 4: CH4. All Work, No Play

Another great chapter, an enjoyable read, though I have to say I'm really glad things between them are starting to pick up pace, towards the end at least. I'm not sure how many more awkward looks and embarassed glances I could take!

Also appreciate the grumbly-stomach forshadowing...



Author's Response:

The awkward idiots continue their romp, grumbly tummy and all!

Fear and Delight by MisterInker Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

Simon has Regressor's Syndrome, rendering him and all other sufferers on the planet around two inches in height. Normally, he lives in a specially designed colony with other people of his height and disposition, but this week he's visiting his normal-sized sister, Milla, who's just out of college and living on her own for the first time in her life. Simon's ready to cut loose and enjoy the big-person world for all the delights it has to offer... but he didn't count on one factor: Milla's roommate Beck, who seems to have a strange fascination with our tiny hero's size...

But Simon is an optimist. He can make friends with anybody, especially somebody his protective big sister loves and admires. Will he win Beck over? Or does another fate await him?


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Fantasy, Gentle, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35190 Read Count: 75560
[Report This] Published: November 05 2021 Updated: April 04 2022
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: SIMON SAYS... I CAN'T SLEEP!

I really enjoyed reading this so far, excellent story, well written and importantly, very hot! The relationship (if a little quick to develop) is sweet. I’m looking forward to seeing this develop, not least because of where this chapter ends!



Author's Response:

Whoa... Gershwin! Thanks so much for chiming in, you're one of my inspirations on this site. Your content is great and I hope to see more real soon. 

And yeah, that was my entire goal with this series. I wanted it to be both erotic and sweet, a romance you could really root for. 

Amazing what putting a ticking clock on your lovemaking will do, eh? These crazy kids...

A Dinner Date with a Witch by Greenanon Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

In a world where magical creatures and mankind have only recently rediscovered one another curious souls from both worlds are exploring the other side. After a run in with a cute witch Dave finds himself going out to dinner with her... on the magical side of town. How different could the restaurants there REALLY be though?

A soft/non-fatal vore focused oneshot


Categories: Vore, Fantasy, Gentle, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7610 Read Count: 6982
[Report This] Published: February 12 2022 Updated: February 12 2022
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this story, the characters felt fun to read and believable, the budding relationship cute. And of course the fetish aspect was handled well.

The Horizon's Promise by SpudWoke Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

J'kabi is an Aizu, the newest species to join interstellar civilization. Looking to prove herself and show the other species what the Aizu can bring to the table, she joins the crew of the independent shipping contractor Horizon's Promise. But when disaster strikes, the ship is left spinning through space a million miles from help. With most of the crew presumed dead except for her and the ship's engineer Cygnus, they must utilize each other's strengths to survive, repair the ship, and get back home. To do so though will require some unorthodox and creative approaches.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Lesbians, Sci-Fi, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18465 Read Count: 2109
[Report This] Published: January 22 2023 Updated: January 25 2023
Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Per Amicitia Ad Astra

This is extremely well written, putting the fetish aspects aside, its simply a good science fiction story, with good structure, dialogue and pacing. The fetish aspects are the icing on the cake, well executed and not gratuitous.

I look forward to reading more of this, both for the fetish and the story.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.