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Summary: A young woman seeks the privacy of nature, unaware that she's destroying a civilization.
Categories: Odor, Giantess, Butt, Crush, Insertion, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16917 Read Count: 247258
[Report This] Published: January 17 2007 Updated: January 11 2009
Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Nudism with nicotine and alcohol

You're back!!! ;) Thanks so much for continuing :) And great chapter! The best about this chapter was, that Jenna was so shy and worried someone could watch her :p I really hope your writing mood came back and you would maybe continue The Greatest Show on Earth too. Anyway, welcome back ;)

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Look Out Below

Hi there -.-,

actually I did not want to use the review feature a 2nd time because it is used to rate a story, so I just saw I did not rate this story like I did with the other one, but I had to and now I'm doing this, of course it will be 10 stars, with my other 2nd try to reach you!

So I hope you're still out there, and if you do not remember me, please read my other review on The Greates Show on Earth again^^

Bye, and please don't stop this wonderful writing :(

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The View from Above

Hey^^

thank you again for the new chapter!!! Liked it so much like the rest ;) I was so happy when I got eMail that a new chapter was written! Hope to get a comment back from you here, the privat message system does not work apparently :( The part about “He must think he’s a bug or something” was a cool idea, liked it to see it happen again :p ButI dont know for sure, are the girlsjust playing with him or are they aware what really is happening? Hope it still will be unaware^^ Hope the next chapters or maybe a chapter of The Greatest Show on Earth will be a butt topic again^^ So, awesome chapter again from you!!! Faved and giving it again 10 stars! Bye!!! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks of course for the response. I appreciate the reviews but if you'd like a better way of messaging me I will be an active user on the forum that they just set up here. So feel free to post over there if you'd like to make any suggestions or help me make my writing better. Thanks.

Summary: Kate, a lonely college girl, struggles with the decision to finish her lunch. An initiation for something much larger.
Categories: Lesbians, Giantess, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Vore, Couples , Crush, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14050 Read Count: 86676
[Report This] Published: February 03 2007 Updated: January 29 2008
Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Initiation

Hi there!

This is actually another or one last try, :(, to get in contact with you, tried the pm function here but either you are not anymore out there :( or it does not work.

Let me first say, both of your stories are really the best I knew and ever have read. I'm mostly into micro unaware vore and insertion, so, you see why I'm liking your two stories so so much. I don't know any other author here who ever had combined micro unaware with such great detailed story telling, story ideas and deepness of the characters.

The first time I read your stories it started to change something deep in with me. I was long time not sure what I really want or like the most. But your stories changed that. After reading I was so stunned and full of emotions I knew it instantly. That was what I wanted, that was what I would like the most. Your stories were in complete agreement of my inner heart feelings.

That was what I wanted to tell you :) And of course... if you're still out there, somewhere... please, for god's sake don't stop writing! Or acutually, please start it again :)

I so damn hope to get an reply from you to this little comment of mine one day.

Bye!!!



Author's Response:

Thankyou. I'm amazed that my stories have had such an affect on you. I am sorry I have not posted anything new in so long. I'll try and have some new chapters done in the next few days. So when you see the next chapter, know that your comment was the motivation.

Summary: Past Featured StorySeth couldn't let Kari go, and a beautiful stranger gave him the chance to be with her again. But sometimes, our wishes don't take us where we want them to.
Categories: Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Couples , Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Aphrodite Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13328 Read Count: 146394
[Report This] Published: July 03 2008 Updated: November 09 2008
Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi there :)

thanks for sharing this new story. I'm mostly only in unaware micro stories, so this one is a big drop into the small community of this rare sort of stories.

I also like insertion or vore the most :p The story idea is great combined with very good character descriptions and twisted humiliation. The story goes very awesome when Kari's new friend enters the story and the real 'fun' begins :p I loved the idea so much what the protagonist has to suffer in those humiliating places, so near and so far away at once from his girlfriend, but also so near her new boyfriend, he, I'm sure, never would want to meet his privates ;)

I'm waiting with so much joy now for the next chapter. Can't wait what new position Kari wants to try :p I hope there will be an anal insertion maybe too, and also a little the spell which protects him atm maybe will wear off with the time ;)

10 stars, faved, thanks again :)

Summary: A female construction worker unwittingly opens a portal to another dimension, much to the dismay of one of that dimension's most beautiful inhabitants...
Categories: Giantess, Instant Size Change, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Toilet, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2107 Read Count: 39112
[Report This] Published: October 16 2008 Updated: October 16 2008
Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 22 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Legend of Sleepy Bowel

Hey!

Thank you so much for writing this. It was really a surprise and it made my day as I found out about this story. I'm a big fan, or just only a fan of unaware shrinking and unaware oral/anal vore, so, yeah :p Very good written and the story idea was also very cool! The story had some parallels to the stories of Galstaff, the two stories of him/her are one of my all time favorites here, but I think he/she does not wrtie anymore :( And of course I hope it will not be the last unaware shrinking story of yours :p 10 stars and faved :)

Party time by nostromo Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A party ends dramatically for Vivien, a not quite usual girl. She ensures the men responsible are present in the second party she organizes...and keeps them very close to the buffet.
Categories: Butt, Crush, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11925 Read Count: 25136
[Report This] Published: October 27 2008 Updated: October 27 2008
Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Already told you how much I liked this story and what I missed :p Just wanted to rate here too^^

Author's Response: Thanks a mil for the kind rating, man!!

Haley by Chozo Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: A dork shows off his latest invention to one of the hottest girls at school, with the intention of impressing her. Little does he know, the girl is only interested in his invention, and soon he and his entire family become her first victims...
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Toilet, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3230 Read Count: 51440
[Report This] Published: December 15 2008 Updated: December 15 2008
Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey,

just said already, but did not review :p So, I really liked your new story so far! Anal vore, but it is not unaware, I really enjoyed it, it is rare to find and every time much fun to read! The story so far has a lot of humimilated twist with a touch of humor too, I liked the part about 'she went in the wrong direction'^^

Keep it up, of course :)

Summary:

This story is quite a bit different than any story I've ever read before, so I'm not sure how it will be received. Its basically about a teacher who shrinks her students, and its very violent and sexual and whatnot, so you've been warned.

June 21, 2013 EDIT: Finally updated after over 4 years of stagnation!!

July 12, 2013: Red Valkyrie needs food, badly! :)


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Body Exploration, Mature (40-49), Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Toilet, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17007 Read Count: 136638
[Report This] Published: February 24 2009 Updated: July 12 2013
Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15 2009 Title: Chapter 2: In Her Shoes

Chozo!

I'm sorry, was so busy the last few weeks because of finals... Awesome 2nd chapter you wrote here! I loved the ending of chapter two so much :) Just wanting to rate of course, giving it 10/10. See you soon :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, friend. :)

Summary: Second person story where you recieve a device that can make living things smaller, and while your girl's away, you decide to have some fun with it. Of course, when she comes back early, things start to go to pot.
Categories: Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3927 Read Count: 18315
[Report This] Published: March 04 2009 Updated: March 04 2009
Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 06 2009 Title: Chapter 1: An Unwise Investment

Already told you^^

Thanks for writing a new unaware story again :) Just wanted to rate it too of course^^

Summary:

Josh has been dating Millie, the daughter of a genetic's engineer, for over a year. As their senior year of high school begins to come to a close, Millie's father dies tragically in a car accident. Millie, having just turned 18, has inherited the family home by the lake. Millie uses the excuse of her father's death to end the relationship.

As Josh quickly finds himself heartbroken, he tries desperately to rekindle their relationship. By calling reguarly, leaving notes in her locker, and stopping by her athletic practices after school, he unknowingly draws the unwanted attention of Millie's darker side.

This story follows Josh and Millie, as she takes care of her ex-boyfriend once and for all.

WARNING: My writing tends to get descriptive and extremely perverse quickly. This story is NOT recommended for anyone under the age of 18.

DISCLAIMER: All pubicly recognized characters, schools, locations, and/or businesses are the imagination of the author. In no way are these things meant to protray any real life persons, places, or things. Absolutely no copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Instant Size Change, Adventure, Butt, Couples , Entrapment, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Toilet, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12531 Read Count: 264450
[Report This] Published: June 28 2009 Updated: March 25 2010
Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven: No Longer A Toilet Boy

Hey,

awesome latest chapter, 10stars! I liked it very much how it went with the story. As Im a fan of unaware shrinking^^ Keep up the great wrok! Im so much seeking out now for next chapter :) Maybe poor Josh could meet a male orifice too, that should be very humiliating for him I think ;)



Author's Response: I think I've set that one up rather well... and I'm just putting the finishing touches on it. Check back in the next few days.

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: Out in the World Again

Yay!!! Another chapter^^ So glad seeing an update on one of my favorite stories atm and looking forward to next chapters :) Liked the back in humiliation concept of the chapter^^

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 31 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen: A Horrible Way to Go

wow o0 that idea with the suppository was just awesome and plain mean! im glad you found back into writing mood =) insertion in such mean ways are always the best, but unaware are a little bit better :p

Summary: Several tiny men meet their fate in the form on a woman
Categories: Instant Size Change, Adventure, Entrapment, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6568 Read Count: 44256
[Report This] Published: June 30 2009 Updated: June 30 2009
Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you so much for writing again XD Just perfect amazing story you shared again with us :)

Author's Response: thank you for the review and the rating!

The schedule by nostromo Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary: A man ends up shrunk and sold to a young woman who is unaware he is not a simple toy
Categories: Body Exploration, Insertion, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30149 Read Count: 68213
[Report This] Published: July 12 2009 Updated: July 31 2010
Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was wondering why you didn't put it up here^^ Of course you get my best rating for your awesome story :) Aaand, how're you doing :ppp I'm seeking out for next chapter of course :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Zol ! Yes, I was a bit slow bringing this tale to the site, I must say. ;-) But hey, glad you could give it a good rating, after all these tales, I'm always worried of getting short of ideas!

Summary: A fast food employee accidentally feeds a vegetarian a little meat.
Categories: Vore, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1894 Read Count: 10095
[Report This] Published: August 03 2009 Updated: August 03 2009
Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Reasonable Substitutions

Everyone have their own liking ;) So I liked that yoghurt part very much, as far as I like 'drink accidents'^^ Awesome to see someone else writing unaware stuff, hope you will stay it XD Cool story, 10 stars :)

Author's Response: drink accidents are awsome. My first gts vore experience was a dream involving one.

The Quencher by oishi1 Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Ashley wants to show Steve her sister's secret invention, as usual in this kind of story something bad happens.
Categories: Vore, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Instant Size Change, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1733 Read Count: 11600
[Report This] Published: August 06 2009 Updated: August 06 2009
Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 08 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Quencher

Hey^^

wow, thank you again so much. Really awesome seeing you now writing new stories and unaware of course :p Really liked this one! I'm a fan of unaware situations where it is the fault of someone who is aware, that the poor little guy gets into not so pleasant moments of someone else who is not^^



Author's Response: me too. something about the innocence of the pred makes it more fun, but I wouldn't want to be the one who had to explain the accident.

the magic words by Mr_G Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A woman shrinks when her roomate says smaller and grows when she says bigger.
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3364 Read Count: 13422
[Report This] Published: March 30 2010 Updated: March 30 2010
Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 01 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That was a very unique story idea, liked it a lot. I would had find it more exiting going a little bit further in a story plot like what had happened if the growing spell would not work anymore, I had tis in mind when I read "WarningOnly one wish per personOnce you make a wish you can’t take it back" so only the shrinking would work :p And by misusing it would lead to very tiny proportions and lost situations. Anyway, very good story.

Summary: What happens when A boy pushes the law to its limits.  The law pushes Back.
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Butt, Humiliation, Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Insertion, Maternal, New World Order, Slave, Vore, Unaware, Adventure, Body Exploration, Incest, Instant Size Change, Toilet, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Shrinking World Order
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7502 Read Count: 187324
[Report This] Published: May 10 2010 Updated: January 10 2011
Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Sent to Karens Ass

I so much hoped you would go this way. Definitely the best chapter so far, 10 points :p You have to continue those evil like ones ;)

Author's Response: Yes sometime soon i'll continue this and more evil things will happen to him

Summary: You have been having trouble with your manager, Melissa, coming on to you at work. When you decide to go to her office and confront her about it, you shrink to a quarter of an inch when you touch the handle of the door. How will she notice you now and what will she do if she finds you?
Categories: Unaware, Butt
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9267 Read Count: 212314
[Report This] Published: June 14 2010 Updated: March 10 2013
Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Melissa goes from boss to giantess

Hey,

just wanted to let you know this is one of the best unaware story Ive read on here for a while. I thought they died out for sure. Perfect shrinking size, great details, awesome humiliation moments. I hope it will stay unaware and will contain another anal vore or/and vore ending too, containing digestion maybe. Keep up the great work, Im sure there are lots of people on here who would see something like this continued even on a new story.