Penname: anonlol [Contact] Real name: Anon
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Summary: In the seventies, Ben was a stud, he could easily get any woman he wanted, now it's the late nineties and his heyday is now behind him, he's divorced, his friends have moved on from him. The only thing he has left is his looks, seemingly aging well over the years. He hits it off with a new Midwestern transplant by the name of Tiffany at his job, who's about 30. She shrinks him due to some type of potion made out of English grass, wanting to keep him with her forever. He's always wanted to find love again, but he never wanted it to go this far!
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25500 Read Count: 36968
[Report This] Published: July 01 2020 Updated: July 28 2020
Reviewer: anonlol Signed
Date: July 27 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Better Days

Hey, yeah, like the other guy said, this story has been pretty good, and I think we were all expecting more interaction with at least the previously mentioned characters, if you didn't plan on introducing new ones. In my opinion, the dark ending could be an alternative, just for the people that dig that kind of thing.



Author's Response: Thanks man, I'll keep that in mind. I'll doing a epilogue involving Ben's son ten years later, which will make up for the ending and also leave room for a possible sequel.

Summary:

A hapless 11th grader at a high school with a very strict principal volunteers to help some of his teachers complete training for shrink discipline certification. Whatever that means...

 

(This is my first story - critiques or comments are appreciated)

(Complete as of 2020-12-15 - it seems I can actually finish something from time to time)


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Butt, Feet, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83452 Read Count: 165884
[Report This] Published: July 26 2020 Updated: December 16 2020
Reviewer: anonlol Signed
Date: August 30 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Miss Erenli's mouth, and interlopers

Amazing story overall, though for me Mrs Miller was quite a tease, lol. Any chances we get a chapter where she indeed puts Brett in her big ol' booty? Or an alternate version of this chapter? Sorry if it's too much to ask, your story rocks anyway. One of the better ones I've seen here. 


If by any chance, you go through with the alternate chapter, I'd personally like if something happened like Mrs. Miller didn't exactly how to operate well the controller and maybe shrank Brett a lot more than she intended (an inch / half an inch), so he'd be trapped in the plumpest booty we've seen so far in the story. I wouldn't mind some farts while at it either, lol.



Author's Response:

Thank you! If you'd like more big booty action, rest assured it's coming from other Westwood teachers.

I won't be doing alternative chapters, that isn't really my style. It just makes it hard to do serial timelines where events build on each other. I like maintaining continuity and don't generally want to interfere with it just to explore a missed opportunity - but I do try to leave it so that characters may be revisited in future stories though. Especially if they didn't have much time to shine, like Mrs. Miller.

Reviewer: anonlol Signed
Date: September 02 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Alicia Gomez's vibrant mouth and intense feet

Another great chapter, and lol, you 're definitely delivering. Awesome! Looking forward to the next one! And specially looking forward to booty content, but overall the story is pretty solid. Personally, I hope he stays at half an inch tall when she decides to go for it.


On an unrelated note, the final paragraph was a bit strange to me, it looked like Amber was talking to someone at first, it had me do a double take on it. But then again, English isn't even my first language so, maybe it's on me.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the support!

All the "dialog" in the last segment was in Amber's thoughts. Amber was outside the back of the school waiting for a ride from her stepdad. She saw Alicia and Brett in the car (they did not notice her) and she realized Brett was the shrinkee and started thinking about what that entailed.

Reviewer: anonlol Signed
Date: September 04 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Alicia Gomez's massive ass

Amazing! Definitely looking forward to the rest of this story overall, but for now, hell yeah for Mrs. Gomez's booty, looking forward for more of it in the next chapter, lol. I wasn't expecting her to be that flirty, nice touch!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback!

Alas, I still have several more teachers to cycle Brett through - Alicia is going to have to take a backseat in the next chapter, or this story will never end. :)

Reviewer: anonlol Signed
Date: October 02 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Mrs. Samson and Nancy's unaware friend Melissa

Lol, very good chapter. I thought Mrs. Samson and Nancy's tacos were gonan lead to something, but it turned out fine just the way you did it, I hadn't even really accounted for Melissa, lol.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I like throwing an unexpected curve in! :)

Reviewer: anonlol Signed
Date: December 18 2020 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Amber's fury, and Loren's reemergence

Huh, I didn't even know that was supposed to be the story's end until I double checked. It's an excellent story, but the ending feels weird in my opinion, kinda anticlimatic. Not because of any of it being badly written, but simply because it seemed there'd be so much more to cover, in other words, it felt like it ended too soon.


I think many loose ends were left, like actually finishing the certification program (I know it was implied, but he didn't meet the principal again), or what would happen with Brett's mom and him. Amber's villainous subplot was pretty good, but I felt it ended too early lol. Then again, she already had gone for a nuclear option so if she got any other chances to get her hands on him, she'd definitely kill him, I understand that. I thought she'd be more subtle and try to exact her revenge via torture rather than just kill him.


Anyway, you're the author and I respect that. I hope there's a sequel of this



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment!

Sorry to hear that you didn't approve of the ending. I will take the criticism that the last chapter could have been two chapters to flow at a better pace, but you might be missing why I chose the exact moment to end. The character's development has allowed him to form a sincere, loving bond with another character in the course of what turned out to be an unpleasant duty for him. I wanted that warmth to linger. I don't derive much satisfaction from dwelling on mean-spirited torturous exploits, though I do grant that the threat of violence can be necessary for certain motivations in the characters to be plausible, and violence delivered unintentionally or with reluctance can still be titillating.

Adding a scene at the end, or even throwing in an interstitial scene where he is given hollow congratulations and veiled threats by the principal in demanding good behavior - well, that wouldn't add much in my opinion, and I thought you could already imagine that was what would happen.

So while I do think pace matters, I am philosophically against tying up all the loose ends (especially if there is a possibility of revisiting the world). Some writers think that Chekov's gun should always be fired, but I'm in the Hemingway camp where I think that is a bit fussy and silly - and it can lead to even more clumsiness.

Reviewer: anonlol Signed
Date: December 19 2020 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Amber's fury, and Loren's reemergence

Lol, like I said, it was all very good, and maybe I just selfishly didn't want it to end yet lol. I respect your choices as an author, and well, I wanted loose ends to be tied up assuming there wouldn't be a sequel, but if you want to revisit this unvierse you created, please go right ahead when you feel like it. I think I'll enjoy whatever you decide to write. I understood your points, the story ended up in a good note after all.

Summary:

An intern gets kidnapped and shrunk for a frumpy woman's sextoy.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, BBW, Middle Age (50+), Butt, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57270 Read Count: 57977
[Report This] Published: August 25 2020 Updated: September 05 2020
Reviewer: anonlol Signed
Date: September 03 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Rush, Push, Catch

Amazing story! Now that we've seen the damage that Dotty's gas can cause from afar, I wonder how bad he'll have it up close, lol.

Summary:

Charlie Paar is at the mercy of his childhood friend Kim Collins, an energetic tomboy who teases him just a little too much. But, when Charlie mysteriously shrinks at Kim's house after a workout, will he be able to get her attention before it's too late?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Insertion, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4802 Read Count: 17444
[Report This] Published: September 21 2020 Updated: September 22 2020
Reviewer: anonlol Signed
Date: September 22 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Exhaustion

Amazing so far! Looking forward to what's next

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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: anonlol Signed
Date: March 09 2021 Title: None

Awesome story overall! Personally looking forward to more farts from Lori though, lol. Big ones like in chapter 8. Also, what a cliffhanger!

Summary:

Naoe from Plus-Sized Elf is mysteriously shrunken down and must rely on the otherworldly women around him for help.


Categories: Adult 30-39, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Maternal, Muscle, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30918 Read Count: 40040
[Report This] Published: March 30 2021 Updated: June 08 2021
Reviewer: anonlol Signed
Date: May 14 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Oga the ogre

Amazing story! Personally looking forward for more micro Naoe and Kuroeda's booty content

Summary:

Jerry finds himself the guinea pig of an experiment at a friend's party. He only wanted to impress his ex-girlfriend; the stunning, sexually assertive Jennifer, but when the experiment goes horribly wrong, embarrassing him in front of his friends, he is certain he has dashed any chance of winning back her love.

He may be wrong yet.


Categories: Humiliation, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124581 Read Count: 142199
[Report This] Published: April 14 2021 Updated: June 16 2021
Reviewer: anonlol Signed
Date: June 16 2021 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue: Remy's Machine Pt 3

Amazing story! But this epilogue is too much of a tease. Will there be a sequel? I personally would love to see this smaller Jerry have to deal with Jennifer's big butt at that scale, lol.

Also, the stuff with Stuart surprised me, I was expecting something to go wrong, but I never imagined he'd cheat on Jennifer like that, good plot twist there, among many others.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, anonlol, and sorry to leave you hanging! No guarantees but a sequel could happen. I think of Jerry's mouse size being a fixture, and his super small size is a temporary 'glitch' which would need to be corrected for certain story developments. But not before having some fun with it. I'm wary about gratuitous sequels so the plot would need to be right.

Summary:

Jim always had a crush on his roommate, Julia. In a horrible lapse of judgement, he found hismelf lodged deep within Julia's asscrack.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1524 Read Count: 4742
[Report This] Published: May 11 2021 Updated: May 11 2021
Reviewer: anonlol Signed
Date: May 11 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Horrible Lapse in Judgement

I really enjoyed the story, hope you do more chapters on it, it's definitely worth it if you ask me.

Summary:

Jasmin brought her extremely tiny brother to a girl-only school, what could go wrong?


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Odor, Scat, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1611 Read Count: 7350
[Report This] Published: June 07 2021 Updated: June 07 2021
Reviewer: anonlol Signed
Date: June 08 2021 Title: Chapter 1: The Starting Butt-Hug

Pretty good. Personally, looking forwards to more butt content, but it's a pretty nice plot you got going there.

Summary:

9 shrunken college students trapped are trapped in locker room filled with a team of post-practice soccer girls. Scared and confused. the students despairfully try to escape their brutal fates at the hands of the unaware soccer team. 

 

This is a commission story that contains a lot of gore and unaware cruelty.

 


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Odor, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7737 Read Count: 61435
[Report This] Published: June 17 2021 Updated: August 10 2021
Reviewer: anonlol Signed
Date: July 03 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Panty Panic

The story has been incredible, but I loved the most this chapter and the first one.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words! I'm happy you're enjoying the story~

Mum's Bum by Badguy Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

A son's first test run with shrinking technology causes him to experience his mother's most private moments on a massive scale. 

Done as a commission for NotOnTime! 


Categories: Butt, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Maternal, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7978 Read Count: 19359
[Report This] Published: July 06 2021 Updated: July 06 2021
Reviewer: anonlol Signed
Date: July 06 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hello! That was a fantastic story, and this is coming from someone that's not into scat, lol, but you're one of those writers who's so good one can kinda gloss it over.

Hey, this might not be the best place to ask, but I didn't know where else to contact you, I'd like you to check out my interactive story at writing.com. I'd be greatly honored if you were to add some chapters to it if you liked it enough, but if not, that's perfectly okay, you might still enjoy reading some of the storylines me and a few other writers have been developing there. Have a nice day/night!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm not necessarily "into" it either, I just like the humilation and horror aspect to it. I think I've seen your story over there and I've been meaning to add to it, Writing.com is just such a pain to navigate these days. 

Summary:

Shrunken students and a big, curvy, unaware giantess teacher. What could go wrong?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, BBW, Butt, Crush, Feet, Mouth Play, Nose, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5655 Read Count: 5639
[Report This] Published: July 16 2021 Updated: July 16 2021
Reviewer: anonlol Signed
Date: July 17 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Mrs. Applebaughtom's alone time

Random Anon here! Lol, I know I reviewed the story before on writing.com but I'm still happy to see it here. Loved it. Curvy MILF teachers are some of the best kinds of giantesses, and unaware really makes her massive body all the more devastating. Everything in this story is excellent, and the only valid complain I'd accept from anyone is that it was the fact that it ended. Also love the chapters you're adding on my interactive. Looking forwards to more of your writing altogether!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words! Again! I'm glad to see people excited for more as well! And yeah, you can expect some more interactive stuff as well.

Summary:

After being sat on by his cruel coworker Kim, squishy tiny Jim finds himself beginning to transform into her anus.

This is a commission I made for Bronzehawkz in the interactive Tiny Life Guard.  I welcome any and all feedback.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Part, Butt, Humiliation, Odor, Scat
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8444 Read Count: 24359
[Report This] Published: November 08 2021 Updated: November 08 2021
Reviewer: anonlol Signed
Date: December 07 2021 Title: Chapter 1: A Tanning Session in Kim’s Butt

Hey, Random Anon here! Good to see you, I've been checking your work even though I'm not into the scat content or much into tf style myself, but still I love how you write gts booty. It sucks that they deleted our stuff but at least it wasn't completely lost. Looking forward to whatever you do next!



Author's Response:

Hey RA!  Thanks for the kind words.  I didn't realize you had lost some chapters too, that sucks since you're such a solid writer.  Always looking forward to what you add next to your interactive, glad to see you're writing again!