Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: September 29 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"[...], albeit a very detailed and comprehensive one that seemed to go on for many, many yards around." - Very solid choice to use yards due to their origin.

Not that there were many buildings left standing anyways; most of them had been destroyed as the city was picked up, and many more were still being destroyed as Marnie held them, crumbling from the subtle movements of her hands, movements so minute that they didn't even register for her. - Thanks for this attention to detail.

"“Welcome to your new life, you worthless little specks. I hope you enjoy being my little worshippers because that's what you're going to be doing for the rest of your lives. You can start right away by worshipping the smell of my feet.”" - I wonder how the members of Team Yell would react to this treatment..

 

I reckon Sonia ventured into one of these Worlds and was thus snuffed out by Gloria and Marnie. I gotta say though. This is probably the story with the by far most damage I've ever read at least five Universes destroyed... Hardly any story can compare even those with Genies or Deities.

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: April 16 2024 Title: Chapter 3: Suzi in Sydney Pt. 1

I really enjoyed the chapters so far. My only real gripe is that the fact that Angie was rampaging through San Francisco wasn't really pronounced at all. It could have been any city. If you put your protagonist into a well-known city at least make sure the reader "feels" that. It doesn't need too much to achieve that. Angie tripping over a tram or her view glancing the Transamerica Pyramide or the Golden Gate Bridge and she decides on a whim to go in the direction with the intent to destroy it, the chapter would proceed the same as she doesn't arrive at the landmark within three seconds.

The same criticism can't be brought up with chapter two and three though as you have never told us where Ayako was beyond "Japan" and most of Suzi's giantesstime so far took place in the open ocean instead of in Sydney proper.

I have two questions though:

One:

Now that we now that recently mutated algae are the reason for the massive growth and change in demeanor among the affected women: How did Angie and Ayako got exposed? Contaminated water? Swimming (though we pretty much just had that with Suzi), maybe direct consumption? Though that would be quite the cliché given Ayako's Nationality...

Two: Is the glowing bright orange hair unique to Suzi or did Angie and Ayako had those particular hair color as well but nobody thought it was worth mentioning?

As for suggestions: I have less suggestions for the women themselves, but for where they should roam:

If you have a story with mayor cities as canvas you got to have Chongqing as the chinese City outclassed Tokyo as the largest city on Earth a few years ago (though Tokyo still has more inhabitants).

Brasilia - With a giantess roaming Brasil's capital you are in an even more dire situation than you normally would be... Take your chances with the monster inn the City or flee to the Rainforest... That's less of a question of whether you die, but how?

Addis Abeba - A politically inclined giantess would go the Ethopia's Capital immediately to shut-down UN Relations and the Headquarters of the African Union post-haste to make sure her toys and snacks can't mount any defense whatsoever.

And whilst I don't have a specific city in mind: Have one of your giantesses rampage in the Balkans. They never get any giantess attacks. And they might very well be thankful for that, but someone should change it regardless.

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: December 06 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A Goddess’s Game

This site could really use an alarm function of sorts...

"Little Tiny Tom, Tiny Admiral of a tiny fleet." - I would've used "Teeny Tiny Tom, Mini Admiral of a flimsy fleet." but that may be just me.

"soliciting" I just learned a new vocable.

Was Mio already in the first part? Tow Japanese Women appeared but I don't remember their names...

Another great Chapter but it surprised me that it wasn't written from Alice's Perspective - or do I misremember the original switching between the two each chapter?

Author's Response:

"Teeny Tiny Tom, Mini Admiral of a flimsy fleet." I like it. I should of used that one...

Mio wasn't in part 1 of this story. I recall some Japanese women at the end of the first Game of Sizes but I think they were both throwaways.

The story perspective will shift to Alice after a few chapters. This time around I am going for long spells from the perspective of one character. Bit of a change of style, maybe I'll go back to alternating later.

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: December 21 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Domination Victory

So know it's from Tom's Perspective now. Do I sense some "Biggo Bias" here?

“I’m sure my wife won’t mind if I use you to relieve my long-term sexual frustration. I’m sure she will never find out anyway” - Long-term misses the "-" in your text. Somehow this is is the most unbelievable thing in the story so far. Even if it wasn't just a thin guise for "I want to fuck with you, Alice."; the claim that his wife wouldn't find out if he fucks with a hundreds of meters tall giantess whilst being thousands of miles tall himself is let's say fairly optimistic.

"When I finished myself off I grabbed both Alice and Mio from my sagging dick and[...]" "I repeated as I carefully lowered Alice and Mio to the ground,[...]" - Her name isn't Mia. ;)

I expected Alice to one-up Tom yet again on a planetary scale. And I like "Twice Teeny Tiny Tom" a nice alliteration.

Author's Response:

Oh no, you're right! I got Mio's name wrong! That is embarrassing. Have fixed that now.

the claim that his wife wouldn't find out if he fucks with a hundreds of meters tall giantess whilst being thousands of miles tall himself is let's say fairly optimistic.

Must have been a wife from a very far away universe...

I know, the increasingly paper thin explanations are just building up to the finale...

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: March 20 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Roaring Over Rutgers

If you were to polish your writing methods (as in the reading flow seems a bit unnatural sometimes) a little, your Story about Dani causing Destruction because she now can could be even more enjoyable than it already is.

I am not sure why her Belly grows each time she eats a singular person, but it's your story and your rules as how a giant's body operates.

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: March 13 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Scorched Earth

This story feels oddly distinct from those normally on this site.

Most Stories here a Fetish Reads (of course they are, that's the point) some bad, most solid to good, a few outstanding.

This Story doesn't feel like that though. It feels more like an excerpt of a Fantasy Novel that just "happens" to have size content in it.

And by "excerpt of a novel" you can probably see that I consider "Crevalle's Tantrum" as Metario put it, very well written.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much; I’m really glad you enjoyed the story!

And honestly, the fact that it didn’t feel like a fetish piece is exactly what I go for in my writing! I love size and power, but my perspective on it isn’t sexual at all—so my goal is to write cool stories about the ways power can be used and the impacts it can have, with an emphasis on aesthetics.

That being said, I know most of the people who bother to read my stories are coming at it from a fetish perspective, and I’m totally okay with that! I’m just glad people enjoy what I write, no matter the reason.

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: March 16 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Immortal: Untouchable

"He was standing atop the now mountainous breast of the woman he had been stepping on earlier."

"You’ve realized it now, haven’t you? Why immortals seem to disappear whenever I’m hired?”

Rumble." - This Juxtaposition made me think she would eat (and digest to get past his Invulnerability, I think a constant acid bath would eventually kill him, or at least wear his body and psyche down to a state that can hardly be called "alive" anymore) him.

This story makes me a little sad, albeit I quite like it.Especially the Chapter End Note. Because it would only need some minor changes to fit into "Appraise and Change", which I still hope against hope that it eventually will get another chapter. >.>
It still is an enjoyable standalone offer though. Nice idea, that a very short woman of all people has (maybe due to that as your mind and soul most likely greatly influence your magic capabilities) an insane aptitude in usage of Mini Magic and uses is to "cut arrogant immortals down to size". Quite literally.

Author's Response:

It'd be nice to finish another one of the Appraise and Change chapters I started. Hopefully I can when I find the time since one of those chapters is at least halfway done. Digestion to wear away immortality is an interesting idea. Maybe I'd use it for a different immortal type.

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: June 24 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Malon Aware

"Finally, when she was about to give up marion saw her magnifying glass she uses to take ticks off her animals" Who is "marion"? :P

" "Hello there oh great giant, we've come to you to ask a question: What did we do to make you angry?"

"These are dark times, marion." There is this unknown person again...

"I've come here numerous times to pray and take care of Link."

" "Is there anything I can do" marion asks" I know the joke is wearing thin but why "marion"? Not even capitalized...

"Now tell young man, how did your village get destroyed by a flood of milk?"

I didn't expect a Town built inside of a Coin, but that's a great idea of nothing else.

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: August 16 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Ethnic Food (Hard Vore, F/m, F/f)

"I didn't want to join the "Free the Tinies" movement to not draw any unwanted attention, yet I cringed every time I saw someone from the rival group, especially when they dramatically demonstrate how they think Norms should treat Tinies." - I just realized: Are there PeTA-like organizations on either side of the argument?

"Maybe if I can somehow sneak into the train home I might survive." - Is that supposed to be a "hope" instead of a "home"? Even if, this sentence is just weird.

"It was cramped and diminishing." - I thought Shrunks would be beyond the point of "diminishing"? :P Given this clearly unhygienic storage - Can people with the Tiny Gene contract the Virus and shrink even smaller?

Generally, diseases are a problem with Tinies. Wild Tinies live without actual clothes, proper healthcare, etc. (I sound like an ad for "Farm-bred Tinies"...) Yet there is a reason living livestock fell out of style after refrigeration was widespread. Dead Meat cannot contract diseases... Sure, it can spoil but that's easier to prevent.

"[...]Tinies are being exported to other countries, something about different flavor." - That sounds like utter bogus to me. Wouldn't the Shrunk's stature (fat-height ratio in particular) influence their taste and not their nationality(which is revoked in the moment of Shrinking anyway)? Also, this is never mentioned in Vore Stories, but I would shave the head of the Tinies I am about to consume. Hair is neither tasty nor digestible.

"Above me, there's the face of an eastern European woman in her 50's." A Spelling Mistake again, also a good idea of you to have the pred be a person in their 50ties. Usually, this role is always fulfilled by a beautiful young woman due to... let's call it happenstance.

I like this first short story. The journey of Tom, the Norm with the Shrinking Gene to his final fate as a Shrunk (ingredient) ;) is a good introduction to this world. It gets how much the Norms don't care for Tinies across well.

Author's Response:

Hey there! Thank you very much for this review again! 

- About organization like PeTa and such- well it depends on the story. On each story that it is relevant I try to write about it briefly. To be honest in most of the stories I try to focus more on the being eaten part, the background is just "another excuse" to get you there. 

- "... sneak into the train home..." No I did not mean "hope", I meant home, as if "the train towards home" or "the train that will take me home". I thought that writing "the train home" is understandable enough. English is not my main language, maybe a native English speaker would write this sentence differently. 

- That's the point, shrunken people still see themselves as regular human. They have false hopes that society will treat them equally.

About mixing genes with virus and getting extra small- Maybe, I don't know. If such a thing would have happen it would probably be rare, and the final size will be really small, less than a millimeter, which is hard to find. If such people exist, they would probably just disappear without someone noticing them to actually study the phenomenon. 

- Well, people who came from different places in the world are exposed to different foods, different ingredients, different environment. This might cause different flavors when they are shrunk and eaten. Is that actually nuisance? Maybe. Does that stops Norms from eating different Tinies, believing that different race or origin resulting in various tastes? No. 
About the hair - LOL.  I am bald, and so I usually forget to specify and write that the shrunks hair is sometimes being removed (if processed).  Generally, I don't always full describe appearances of characters, so the the reader can imagine them however they like, according the the association that was build in their head. 

- As said and mentioned, misspelling and better grammar is something that I try to improve. And yes, I LOVE mature women preds. 

Thank you, I'm glad you liked this one.  
a279;

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: August 20 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Coffee Flavored (Soft Vore, F/m)

"By the way, I don't even know if you read those responses, but I feel like it's right writing them anyway. " - I do read your responses. ^^

"Also, the first story ended with the main character being digested (and dead), so I'm not sure how would that continue LOL." Sure Tom is dead, but his devourer Svetlana isn't. Unless she by now shrunk and was eaten too.

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"[...], but natural reasons like genetic or viral shrinking could happen to almost anyone at any given time." - I just realized: Imagine a woman shrinking by genetic predeposition whilst being heavily pregnant... I guess Caeserean Section is no longer the bloodiest way to enter this world...

"Furthermore, if already bothering making edible clothes, why not make them flavored?" - Sure, why not as long as the flavor in question isn't "veggie" because that would make no sense whatsoever. I have read this exact thing (with tinies considered 'veggie' because they aren't animal meat) before though. I think it was in a Story of VortexFoodsTM, but don't quote me on that.

"I bet you would taste great in a BLTT (bacon, lettuce, Tiny, tomato) sandwich!" - It would've been amazing if I read this yesterday, as I had a BLT for Brunch.

"It is you! What are the coincidences?" - Spelling Mistake  And I think "What are the odds?" would sound more natural.

"Oh no! Please no!"

"The stomach acids felt tingling on my skin,[...]"

I expected the teacher to pick our protagonist up and just dump him in her coffee on the side, so the whole system concerning at-school shrinking surprised me, but given schools tend to overcomplicate anything on the other hand...

He surely had the worst luck though. Shrinking in the class of a teacher he hates, then narrowly getting away from her by a technicality... Only to end up with (and in) her anyway after all is said and done.

Author's Response:

Thank you Avid Reader, I'm glad you enjoyed that too! 

- Pregnant shrunken woman- I actually have one story in this collection with a pregnant shrunken woman. I don't remember if I made her shrink before or after getting pregnant, but it's a really cruel story with multiple stuff in it. If you're interested, it is the "Tinies Caviar" one.  

- Usually I like to think of tinies as the meat, and have them eaten with veggies. However, I do like to use different approaches in different stories, sometimes having them eaten with meat, sometimes considered as a live animal food (won't be eaten by vegans), and sometimes as legitimate live food (would be eaten by vegans). So it depends on what I felt like writing.

- "What are the coincidences?" LOL I have this problem, even in my own language when I speak. Sometimes there are two ways to say the same thing (or two words even), and my brain haven't decided which one he wants to use, and I end up sayin half and half. In this case I probably mixed up "what are the chances/odds" and "what a coincidence" . This problem gets even worse when I'm speaking, trying to decide between "excellent" and "awesome" and what goes out of my mouth is "awe-xcellent".

- Well, I'm against writing about underage characters if any sex is involved. Tbh, I try to avoid writing about them even when it's just fetish without describing sex or any sexual stuff. However, I had a HUGE fantasy back when I was in school myself, to be (shrunk and) eaten by my teachers. So I try to be very careful when writing about this. 
The idea of a teacher dumping him in her coffee on the side is awesome too, but here I tried to go with something a bit new.

- Yes, I like to use cruel narratives a lot, trying to play with giving a false sense of hope, or trying to mislead the reader at first to intensify the evilness of the cruel twist at the end. 

On personal note- I like you ideas and thoughts on this world and fantasy, it's always a pleasure to talk to other people about this things, hear new ideas. 

By the way- From time to time I try to read again on of my stories, finding out spelling and grammar mistakes and fix them (if I even find them lol). I haven't got to all of them, so some might have more mistakes than others. Apologies.