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Fairytale by Lady Prey Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: A return to his childhood haunts results in a young man's fantasies becoming uncomfortably real with the added liability of having to operating within the "rules of fair play" according to fairies at the bottom of his garden.
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Gentle, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5770 Read Count: 11351
[Report This] Published: March 16 2006 Updated: March 16 2006
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 21 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi LadyPrey, I read this one a while back, but just revisited it. I really love it!

Author's Response:

Hi Scrumptious, you're one of my favorite authors and often re-read yours.

Rowena by Pixis Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

A gentle (but sassy) giantess is persecuted by a boorish knight and finds love with a diminutive squire in this humorous fantasy tale.


Categories: Fantasy, Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37 Read Count: 51732
[Report This] Published: April 30 2007 Updated: April 30 2007
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 10 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I very much enjoyed this story. It was very well written. I considered knocking off points, because I don't think that the fantasy setting and sassy-ness work very well together (at the same time, I don't think fantasy should be all bold knights with bold rhetoric.) I'll also express that I'm a touch frustrated that she never gobbled anyone up, given all the mouth play teasing you write into the story. Fortunately, I knew that the vore was not coming ahead of time. Still, it is not unlike every time I re-read Lord of the Rings with the secret hope that this time Lady Galadriel will just grab the ring from Frodo and seize ultimate power. Thankfully, I see that the sequel is billed as including vore. I look forward to reading it.
Anyway, awesome story! Ryantherebel successfully pimped it, and without his recommendation, I probably would not have noticed your tale.

Summary: Peter's ex boss knows how to shrink people into a swallowable size. She invites Peter to her party.
Categories: Giantess, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4764 Read Count: 13558
[Report This] Published: June 21 2007 Updated: June 21 2007
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 19 2008 Title: Chapter 1: How Mrs. Ryder ate Peter

Wow! That was an amazing story. I've not yet read the sequel, but I really look forward to it.
This one, I'd have to analyze more to give a thorough review, but I think the pace is great, the power relationship, his wanting to be swallowed coupled with her forceful treatment of him and setting of the terms was phenomenal!!

Resort by girlfood Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A beautiful resort where women can kick back, relax and enjoy their favorite treats.
Categories: Giantess, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15413 Read Count: 41128
[Report This] Published: July 09 2007 Updated: July 18 2008
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 15 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sorry to hear that a second chapter was lost. While there is nice broad detail in this story for it continue or spin off, given the universe-detail that you offer, it is also a good stand-alone.
Well done!

Author's Response:

Thank you for writing so many reviews Scrumptious . I do enjoy getting them and take into consideration any suggestions people make. It is very kind.

Yes the second chapter was lost. It was a good chapter in my opinion but I have written a new one with banfield. This takes the story in a different direction than I had planned but I hope it will be enjoyable. The posting should come within a few days. Thanks again.

Sorority by girlfood Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: getting into a sorority can be tough on the girls boyfriends.
Categories: Vore, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1291 Read Count: 12134
[Report This] Published: August 10 2007 Updated: August 10 2007
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstar
Date: March 15 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's a cute short story. I tend to like the short ones, though I have some longer ones of my own brewing. However, with the brevity of this one (it's VERY short), I think that you lose some of the sensuousness of thicker description of the act of consuming the prey.
I think it is a nice touch that later in the story, the giantesses swallow their prey knowingly, and without the surrounding food.

Author's Response: Yeah it was kinda fun but I do agree; a few good scenes but noting great. I was considering taking it off the sight. Thanks for the review! :)

Summary: A woman on a hike out in the wilderness comes across a settlement of tiny people
Categories: Crush, Vore, Entrapment, Adventure
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8743 Read Count: 46785
[Report This] Published: September 04 2007 Updated: September 28 2007
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 15 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Suprising Discovery

This is an awesome story!
I liked it when she was able to convince the village to trust her.
A nice touch that I would have liked, was if she had been able to convince/coerce them into worshiping her as a Goddess who deserved to be fed.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I have always considered this as one of my better stories. Yeah I thought earning the trust of the second village was fun. :) 

My first snack by girlfood Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: A woman describes her first experience with vore and swallowing a man.
Categories: Vore, Giantess, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4024 Read Count: 23331
[Report This] Published: March 09 2008 Updated: March 09 2008
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have to say that this is one of the best stories I have read in this genre (and it is my fav. genre!)

I like the orientation in the predator, and the hunger you express for her. It's also a very good length.

The only hitch, I suppose, is that George goes down because of an involuntary reflex, rather than the act of desire on her part. Sure, she was likely to do it anyway, but I much prefer the vore where the swallower is in full control and is fully knowledgeable about what she is doing.

Author's Response:  i appreciate you constructive criticism with the reflex. She was indeed planning to swallow the man, the reflex just sped things up. thank you for the review and the rating:)

Summary: A man speaks with magical woman who just might make his dreams a reality.
Categories: Instant Size Change, Giantess, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4441 Read Count: 12865
[Report This] Published: April 18 2008 Updated: April 18 2008
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 11 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi GF. Nice little story. Pleasant and straight-forward. You have, however, done better with others. At the end - the climax - it just seems a bit bland. It could use some more cathartic description, I suppose.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Scrumptious. Yes, this could have done with some more work. I'll work on a better punch for the ending of my next story. :)

Summary: Two employees, one promotion - we all know how this is going to get settled

Categories: Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1462 Read Count: 8690
[Report This] Published: August 19 2008 Updated: August 19 2008
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 19 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked the story. You did everything that you needed to for a short tale of this type.
I'm looking forward to your future work.

Author's Response: thank you for your kind comments. i hope you enjoy my future work. I think I've found a good place to write my vore stories.

Summary: A couple enjoy trying to understand their fantasies. When a submissive boyfriend gives being dominant a try, he goes a little too far...and enjoys it. All at his girlfriends expense.
Categories: Feet, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3386 Read Count: 14977
[Report This] Published: August 19 2008 Updated: August 19 2008
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 26 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The beginning

I very much tend to abhor the dominant male over female idea.... but that said, the story was very well written and unexpectedly erotic for me. Thank you for surprising me, and I'm curious to see where you take it.

Summary:

After disappearing for months, a man finds himself back in his home city but being only an inch and a half tall. He finds refuge at his friend Jennifer's place. She takes him in but soon their friendship starts developing along a totally unexpected road.


Categories: Humiliation, Body Exploration, Crush, Gentle, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21912 Read Count: 134682
[Report This] Published: December 26 2008 Updated: February 05 2009
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 19 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Giantess Jen and I

Yes, this story is very worthy. I really liked it. I hope we're getting more, but that it isn't something that will never conclude (such as my own work...ahum).

Author's Response: Thanks to everyone for the reviews, I already gve it an end but I find its the hardest part of the writting! Hope to come up with better stuff in the future.

Summary:

A teenager's uncle disapears under suspicious circumstances. The same is about to happen to him.


Categories: Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1283 Read Count: 8866
[Report This] Published: June 15 2009 Updated: June 15 2009
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 18 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very short, sweet, and to the point. However, I'm left wanting for some emotion; the catharsis of being consumed is missing. Keep it up, though. I look forward to reading your next story.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'll keep that in mind.

The Ad by coolguy8919 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: This is a story about a young teenage guy that is in search of a good time with a milf. But he may end up getting more than he bargained for when he realizes it may be more setup than he thought.
Categories: Slave, Couples , Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2630 Read Count: 29037
[Report This] Published: July 27 2009 Updated: May 25 2014
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed
Date: August 03 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story is quite intriguing, so far. You play on my remembrance of teenage hormones quite well.
I would prefer to withhold my rating until I read a continuation, but it's looking good!

Summary:

A story about a womans inner feelings.


Categories: Scat, Entrapment, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15750 Read Count: 59948
[Report This] Published: August 02 2009 Updated: August 02 2009
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 04 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi Amanda,

This is a good story! I like the perspective of the hungry giantess. My only critique is that it is, in many ways, repetitive. You cover the same ground - insertion - many many times, and I'm not sure that is really required to make the story work in a shorter amount of words and reading time.
Please keep up the story-writing!

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words,i write with my emotions and at the time of compiling these stories i was getting aroused by these thoughts so i would write down my feelings whilst still fresh within me.I can see your point of view i shall try to regain control of my brain instead of letting my sexual disposition dictate the story writing.

Breaking in by girlfood Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary: A man tries to avenge the death of his cousin
Categories: Adventure, New World Order, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4759 Read Count: 53333
[Report This] Published: August 07 2009 Updated: August 07 2009
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Superb story as ever, Girlfood!

Author's Response: thank you kindly Scrumptious

Summary:

A submissive woman is directed to purchase sexy clothes for her Dominant, and discovers (too late) that it causes her to shrink so that he will be able to completely control her.  His desires are not the same as hers any more.


Categories: Slave, Humiliation, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7022 Read Count: 12719
[Report This] Published: December 13 2009 Updated: December 13 2009
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Magic Shrinking Lingerie and the Dominant’s Desires

My preference is obviously for F/m, but this is a very well-written story! Kudo's!

Author's Response:

Thank you... I am learning that some topics seem to be more popular! Glad you took the time to read - even if not your preferred topic.

Pamela

Summary: A woman who has found satisfaction in taking better care of herself through Lap-Band Surgery for weight loss has found a tiny man in her pantry.  Should he be on her menu?
Categories: Vore, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2557 Read Count: 20097
[Report This] Published: January 05 2010 Updated: February 07 2010
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed
Date: January 06 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Weight Lost and Man Found

This is very promising, and I certainly like your writing style. With her surgery, however, I get the feeling like the vore will not be a finale for little David. More's the pity.

Author's Response:

Well, I have a few ideas... Stay tuned.

Summary:

Beware of the shadows the unknown lurks within.


Categories: Adult 30-39, Body Part, Entrapment, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2972 Read Count: 14070
[Report This] Published: April 07 2010 Updated: April 15 2010
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstar
Date: April 07 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This has the makings of a really awesome story. It is lusciously written, and is enticingly disturbing.

However, it REALLY needs editing. Often times I'm unsure what the meaning is, due to bad sentence structures and punctuation failures. I usually don't bother to comment or rate based on grammar - but I think this could be a magnificent story, if it could be edited for this.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your comments i have made changes to the txt, it was poorly written,i would like your opinion on it now,my grammar is not the best xx.

Amanda. 

Summary: i find myself in a little trouble when i wake up on my best friend
Categories: Giantess, Butt, Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Insertion, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1164 Read Count: 24167
[Report This] Published: May 05 2010 Updated: June 02 2010
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed
Date: May 06 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 exploring

This story has good potential. However, please consider separating paragraphs. If it is just one big block, it's horrible to read. Also, it's good to just wait until you have a real full-fledged chapter until you post it.

But I'll be watching this story!

Summary:

Mjolnir is the Old Norse word for 'crusher'. Perhaps Thor's hammer wasn't literal.

This story is centered around Mikiko Funayama, a normal high school girl who finds an ancient artifact of incredible power.

Chapter 1 of this story is mostly devoid of eroticism. Chapter 2 starts the hot action. Chapter 3 hosts the most extreme content yet. Chapter 4 contains mild female giantess domination. Chapter 5 (the end) is up and contains tender loving and some truly perverse happenings.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Body Exploration, Couples , Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Toilet, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FM/f, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15428 Read Count: 50270
[Report This] Published: May 26 2011 Updated: June 03 2011
Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 27 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Vengeance

Wow, this is incredibly well-written. I prefer the soft vore angle myself with the micro/prey point of view - so your story did not get to me on a sexual level, but for those who like this sort of thing, this is the sort of thing they will like!

Great work!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I'm more of a fan of hard vore, but I'd be willing to try some different things out in time if people really want it.