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Last Of My Kind by SheerForce Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: The last man standing after a vicious rampage chronicles his attempts to survive his hunters.
Categories: Vore, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Giantess, Destruction, Feet, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6301 Read Count: 34219
[Report This] Published: October 31 2015 Updated: September 26 2016
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: September 27 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good luck.
Later,
Diesel

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: September 27 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Cool.
Later,
Diesel

A Forbidden Land by SoleWriter Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Set in 1449, Henry is forced into a previously forbidden land by his people in search of food and resources. During his search he comes arcoss some of the resources he needs, but also runs into some surprises. 


Categories: Humiliation, Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12463 Read Count: 86900
[Report This] Published: November 11 2015 Updated: March 01 2016
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: November 11 2015 Title: A Forbidden Land

Cool start. He was dumb to go inside. What is the exact size difference?
Later,
Diesel

Tiny by GuyGoneSmall Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

A story about a girl named Melissa who has a few weeks before college and lives with her mother.  Her curiostiy gets the better of her in the attic.  What will she find???  


Categories: Giantess, Fantasy, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9806 Read Count: 100533
[Report This] Published: November 23 2015 Updated: February 16 2016
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: November 24 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Nice start. Looking forward to more.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thanks for the encoragement.  I am looking forward to doing more to the story. 

Microscopic Colony: Jessica & Ryan by Toxenisfun Rated: R [Reviews - 3]
Summary: After shrinking Destiny, John's colony has seen a brighter future than ever before. But after three month of being alone, two new girls move in to replace her. Jessica is the one that moved into Destiny's old room who kind and gentle girl that is willing to help the colony with whatever they need. Meanwhile, when Ryan is introduced, she is aggressive to the colony. Basically, Ryan is the complete opposite of Jessica. Prepare for the continuation of Microscopic Colony: Destiny.
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23795 Read Count: 49914
[Report This] Published: November 24 2015 Updated: May 07 2016
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: November 25 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Second Tour

Just read this. It is very good and interesting. I have not read the other one. I will. You look like a talented writer.
Looking forward to more,
Diesel

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: March 01 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Love & Punishment

Cool. A very enjoyable story.
Later,
Diesel

Swinging Friends by tinyandgiant Rated: X starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Two married couples swing with each other. This is the journal of what happens when they receive a shrink gun.


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Giant, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 855 Read Count: 13743
[Report This] Published: November 29 2015 Updated: November 29 2015
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: November 29 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 0: The Prologue

Nice intro. Good setting up with the characters. Are any other characters going to be introduced?
Later,
Diesel

Location by Nigma Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

A tiny civilisation has never seen a human before. Their first meeting may be their last.


Categories: Crush, Giantess, Destruction, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Sci-Fi, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4775 Read Count: 22828
[Report This] Published: December 05 2015 Updated: October 03 2016
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: December 07 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Battle

Very good.well done in the writing department. My only add would have been the terror of how she found them. Maybe she followed a mosquito sized airplane and found the city.
Nice work,
Diesel

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: October 03 2016 Title: Chapter 2: The Victory

Fantastic, well done story. Love the tiny metal statues.
Later,
Diesel

The Nefarious Nine by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Having been transferred in from several different high security prisons, nine extremely dangerous and notorius felons find themselves incarcerated in a privatized institution unaware they are the subject of a pilot project. 


Categories: Watersports, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24239 Read Count: 144934
[Report This] Published: December 10 2015 Updated: March 05 2016
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: January 29 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Fabulous story. Greatly enjoyed the setup. You described each character so well that I could picture them in my mind. The part where first you had the prisoners talking about where they were was great. Then the ladies talking about the men, chilling. Then the ingenious breakout.Dagmara strumming her nails before getting up was also chilling. This is written soooooo well. I can hardly wait for more. I hope she has black pumps on her feet.
Love it,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I like to set the characters up to establish some context and I am delighted I've managed to convey enough personality into each of the players, male and female, that it makes a decent read. thanks again!

Family Recipe by Asterisk Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A story about a woman baking gingerbread men for her kids. Done for EmmaGear's Squishmas


Categories: Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4583 Read Count: 10779
[Report This] Published: December 15 2015 Updated: December 15 2015
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: December 19 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed the story very much. It was well done and you really set the scene with the mom. Loved when she used her finger to push one into the dough. Well thought out and well done.
Later,
Diesel

30 Days in the Hole by GoddessGold Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

A very stinky punishment for a deserving step-son.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Butt, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Maternal, Odor, Scat
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2961 Read Count: 99404
[Report This] Published: December 28 2015 Updated: January 02 2016
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: January 28 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1 - Day 2

Very good

When I Became the Guinea Pig by ThatOneDrumGuy Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary:

Steve Jones, a money-seeking high schooler, gets more than he bargained for when he signs up to become a drug tester.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Muscle, Sci-Fi, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20857 Read Count: 214137
[Report This] Published: January 04 2016 Updated: May 05 2016
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: January 24 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Babysitter 3'7"

It was great to see him at 3'7. Having Gina mistake him for a little kid was nice. Please do not take this criticism the wrong way but it would have been great to see even more interaction between the characters. More examples of the size difference and how it affects him. Maybe a character who says, I am Mrs. So and So and she continues to treat him like a child. Maybe taking something away from him or out of his hands because she is an adult and he is a child.
Maybe he needs to go to the children's department for new clothes or he ends up in an elementary school somehow.
Love your story and your writing. I would say just more description of their interaction. I know if I were writing a great story like this I would always invite feedback good or bad. I also would love suggestions they can only help. Plus you do not have to use everything sent to you, only what you like.
Greatly enjoying it,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thanks so much Diesel.  My plan was to take it REALLY slow until he is really small, that was my thinking, but you definitely gave me something to consider!  Thanks for being such a loyal reader!

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: January 26 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Babysitter 3'7"

I agree with you that the story should go slow. After all it is a slow shrink tale. I was just saying to not leave a particular scene so quickly. Let's feel his shame or her caring or non caring in a particular scene..
Another idea for a scene is that he goes along to celestes parent teacher night just to visit his old school. Maybe he wanders off to explore the school and is in a closed off area. Maybe a teacher finds him and treats him like a child that is disobedient. Maybe he picks up something off the floor and she takes it away. Maybe he plays along that he is a child to try to get out of the situation quietly. Maybe answers her with yes ma'am.
Just some thoughts,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Very constructive, thank you man!

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: January 27 2016 Title: Chapter 17: A Tough Decision 3'6"

Nice chapter. Now he has someone else to trust in Gina. I can hardly wait to see what Angela comes up with, clothes wise.
Another future idea could be that he has an intruder or maybe Gina who has not been there in a while enter his room. Maybe he is hiding in fear and she uses the wall to see how small he is. Then maybe she says out loud. Hmmm he is only a foot tall. I wonder where he is.
Nice chapter,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thank you, we shall see what happens.

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: January 28 2016 Title: Chapter 17: A Tough Decision 3'6"

I was in the mall today and I saw a lady kneeling down and correcting her son. Anyway, when she stood up her son was only a little taller than her knee. I immediately thought of our slow shrinking friend Steve. I know that someday he may be in that situation.
Just thought that I would share,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Lol, thank you for sharing.  I haven't really had time to write as of late because I have been filling out college applications.

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: February 01 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Conversation at the Doorstep 3'4"

First off this is a really well written chapter. Loved it. I think you make it real when you mention SNL and Kohls. It adds realism.
Angela is right when he can barely reach the knob. Loved her picking him up and holding him on her hip. His comment about not doing it in the hallway was a good one. Reminds me of a child not wanting to be seen with his parents.
When Angels said he was like a second child he did not disagree. Basically he condones that opinion. Will Angela get to a point where she has to discipline him?Maybe she disciplines Celeste and him at the same time.
I am sure Celeste is not going to be happy when Angela talks to her about the way she treats him and uses her size advantage.
When Angela comes back at 9 will she tuck him into bed?
Nice chapter,
Diesel (35,501)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: February 29 2016 Title: Chapter 22: A Helping Hand 3'3"

I liked the way she bolted the door. Maybe that will be his salvation.
I can fully understand his holding his breath in the bathroom and then trying to breath quietly. Well done.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thanks man, I was trying to be as immersive as possible with this whole sequence.

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: May 06 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Amnesia 2'11"

Your taking time to enhance the story is time well spent. Reading it makes you feel like you are there.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thank you Diesel!

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: March 04 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Amnesia 2'11"

Very cool. You describe it so well. The grabbing of her 2 fingers, the cradling of him like a baby, I can clearly picture it.
Standing in his avengers underwear, priceless.
I also greatly enjoyed Daphne saying, my eyes are up here little guy and her talk of being superior. All true.
Nice chapter,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thanks Diesel!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.