Penname: Jay [Contact] Real name: Jay Menardo
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Summary:

Scott Stevens once again finds himself shrunken and in the hands of his sister Maggie, who brings her tiny sibling along for a week of soccer camp. When her teammates discover the miniature teen, he'll find himself in problems even deeper than giant shoes.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14746 Read Count: 126287
[Report This] Published: November 29 2012 Updated: December 09 2012
Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 29 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)

You know how much I enjoy and appreciate your story-telling skills. Everything you've contributed is excellent and fun as hell to read. With that said, please don't take this the wrong way. And, I realize that this may have been brought up before, but this particular story is among my favorites, and I wanted to share my thoughts. Your style is great, as are the characterizations. However, I really wish the sister was at least 16-18. I obviously find it arousing to imagine a tiny person (in this case brother) being subjected to the pungent feet of their mother and/or sister. And while it's the act itself that ia paramount, I also use my imagination to "see" these characters. I don't like conjuring up a 13 year old as an active character. I really find it difficult to find as much joy in reading about a near adolencent acting as cruel tormentress. I'm in no way impugning your character or anything. Rather, I'm offering some advice as to how to keep the vast majority of readers engaged on the action. Thirteen is just too young no matter how you slice it on a fetish site. It just doesn't work, but that may just be me. Thanks for continuing this awesome series, though!



Author's Response:

I can respect your opinion.  Mainly, though, I think of it more like this.  Personally, when I read a story, I sort of mentally put myself into the mind of the character and not just myself.  I certainly wouldn't want to read one of these kinds of stories about someone in, say, their mid-thirties getting involved in fetish material with a teen.  By doing it this way, I'm emphasizing the relationship of a couple of teenagers, not an adult and a teen.  Additionally, there's not going to be any overt sex/incest going on here, and, while I'm certainly not comparing my story to these guys, some of the top stories on this site like homunculus or christmas eve at my cousin's feet have involved characters near this age or even younger, in the case of the first one, and that was ok because they integrated the characters in such a way to make them the instigators of the psychological elements, not just sex objects. The story after this will probably return to Scott's mom again, but for now, unless i get a flood of other complaints, i'll probably stick with this.

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 05 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)

Just so that there's no misunderstanding, I have always apprciated your work here. I think you are immensely talented and this place is exponentially better with your contributions. Your sibling/mother/son stories are phenomenal and need to continue on! I may annoy some here, but find incest-themed gts stories, particularly those that included foot domination, awesome. The intimacly of the relationships make the femdom stuff all the more cruel and humiliating. Again, my only "complaint" is that it's difficult for me to erotically enjoy stories that use characters that are only 1-2 years above twelve years of age. If this site was just for sci-fi stories that happened to include a giantess 13-14 year old, that's cool. The hangup me and a few others have (and it's not a condemnation) is to include femdom-stuff featuring a youngster on a site that is fetish-origented. To be blunt, folks flap it to the stories here. Personally, I enjoyed Parts 2-3 of A Little Blackmail much more than the opening chapter due to Carly's age. However, don't beat yourself up or anything. You know my intention and where I'm coming from, so keep up your great work. I also hope the next part of this tale eventually includes Judy really using her pungent feet to crush his self-worth!



Author's Response:

valid points; i'm perfectly aware of what this site means to many people.  at the same time, i will point out that you've already taken a look at the story in the earlier chapters and decided the subject matter was not for you, so i suppose i'm not entirely sure why you're giving it a lower rating again when you were already aware it was not a subject you agree with because of the ages. again though i will respect your opinion.  the next story in this series will do sort of what Blackmail 3 did and jump forward far enough that hopefully most people's issues with age will be quelled

Reviewer: Jay Signed
Date: December 05 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)

I was honestly unaware that I was downgrading you. I have been posting from a source other than my desktop, so there is a possibility that I'm not seeing everything. I have seen #8 as the hightest on my phone. This is my faul if I screwed up. I'll cease posting point scores until I am back in my home and can see everything.



Author's Response:

fair enough. and again i do see where you're coming from on the point you made. i'm pretty sure the next story, which will do sort of what Blackmail 3 did by jumping forward some years, will put your concerns to rest

Summary:

A Mother's day tale that's more sour than sweet.

Michael plans a suprise for his Mum, but when something goes wrong before he can deliver it, it turns into a fight for survival at his mother's (allegidly) unaware mercy! 


Categories: Violent, Adult 30-39, Teenager (13-19), Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Unaware, Instant Size Change, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1728 Read Count: 16955
[Report This] Published: March 11 2013 Updated: March 11 2013
Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Mother's Day

Hey, I really enjoyed this. I sent you an email and am curious whether his mother really knew it was him all along or just towards the end as she put him in her shoe. Or, was she really oblivious the entire time? One would think she'd be suspicious of the wet feeling after she crushed him. Perhaps you could do one where the son really thinks his mother doesn't know it's him, then give her point of view that she is aware. Thanks for a fun and cruel story.

Summary:

This will be an interactive story in which you, the reader can help influence what happens to Jake next! Simply leave a review with a general idea of what you'd like to see Jake put through next, don't forget to actually review though!

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Follow Jake, a half inch tall teenager as he adjusts to his new home life at his new shrunken size. In a world where a rare few are shrunk by a virus, and in which the shrinkees are typically abandoned or put out of their misery, Jake thought he was "lucky" to be going home with his family from the hospital, however, his three older siblings, a brother and two sisters, and their mother, might not have his best interests at heart as they each deal with their little brother in a variety of ways.


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), BBW, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18753 Read Count: 547750
[Report This] Published: June 25 2013 Updated: August 18 2013
Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed the past few chapters, despite being a forced-footsmelling fan. In fact, given how tiny he is now and the monstrous smell of his sister's and mother's feet, I am going to hope hard that this story ends in a fatality. And I know you enjoy the forced-foot stuff, too. So, I am voting for Amy to scrunch her super tiny son under her mammath toes and let the pungent smell destroy him. I think that would be an awesome ending and a way to finally introduce (one time only, of course) her much-lauded foot stink.

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I am cool with folks that don't like cruel stuff like this between family members. However, this is the perfect kind of story for me. The absolute cruely without hope for reprieve for this son, coupled with the poweful feet of his siblings and mom, makes me super excited to see more meanness taken to a pungent and fatal end! I do have to say, while this is just my own opinion, I hope the brother steers clear fo anything interaction with his young, smaller brother.

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Just my two cents: I think Amy's feet and their potency have been forshawdowed enough that I'd like to see one death be at her pungent feet. I think it would be a ruthless way to snuff Jake out. In fact, I almost would feel sorry for the tiny guy...almost!

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Unaware vore by Jake's friend

To each their own, but I'm not at all a fan of male/male gts interaction. I'm not judging anyone, just giving my opinion. I really appreciate that you're going to give SEVERAL endings. I think I'll be happy with a particular one, hopefully. :) Some folks appearantly didn't grasp that, thinking that this was the final conclusion.  Also, each story has a theme and feel to it. I'm a fan of darker, cruel stories. This entire tale has been fairly dark and ominous and I have to strongly disagree with those that are wishing for a "happy" ending. Nothing about this awesome story has indicated that a happy ending was in the cards. I would kind of find it intrusive and jarring to all of sudden see Jake spared or safed somehow. It's simply unwarranted for this story. Happy endings can be found in other tales. Again, that's just my two cents, once again. :)

Summary:

In trouble with the law, Scott Stevens avoids jail time by being indefinitely shrunk and placed under the supervision of his household. Now at the 24/7 mercy of his gigantic family, Scott may have been better off going behind bars.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31556 Read Count: 198414
[Report This] Published: December 05 2013 Updated: January 21 2014
Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Life of the Party

I'm super glad you're continuing this tale of maternal domination! This will be spectacular, no doubt. I do hope part of his punishment consists of being even smaller and that his mom's foot stink completely crushes his sled-worth this time.

Author's Response:

There is definitely some severe punishment coming up.  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Life of the Party

I am a big fan of the dream sequences, as it allows you to do things to a chaacter that you don't plan to have them experince in "the real world." As you know, I'm a fan of the death-by-smelly-feet scenario, so if you're able and willing, maybe writing a dream sequence with that little scene at the feet of Judy or the sister would be great. Thanks for continuing this series.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  Though this will be the only dream sequence in this story, there may be more down the road that explore ideas like that, given the heavy foot-focus of this series.

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Life of the Party

Great stuff, as usual. I like Scott's realization of the full measure of Judy's power at this point. Maybe you could have a scene where Judy takes pictures of Scott being forced to kiss and smell her feet (him scrunched under her toes) and either uploads them to Facebook and/or makes him look at them later with her, where she forces him to say how he felt in each scene and what her feet smelled like.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing.  While the Facebook thing wouldn't quite be Judy's style, I could certainly see her wanting a little more personable attention on her feet in the future.

Summary:

After perfecting his life's dream, an actual shrink ray, Jake can't wait to show it off! However he unknowingly makes the mistake of inviting his mother, sister, and aunt, and girlfriend to his private cabin in the hopes of surprising them with the device they all said could never be built. He arrives earlier than stated (hence the surprise),only to accidentally shrink himself. And his invited guests won't expect him for another week. Will he survive? 


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Adventure, BBW, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples , Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore, Watersports, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8834 Read Count: 122091
[Report This] Published: January 02 2014 Updated: May 22 2014
Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey man, I was actually pretty worried about you. I'm terribly sorry to hear about what happened. That's a fear I have and is why I'm so careful about my fetishes. I'm glad you're doing better and are back. I for one would truly love to see you rewrite an ending to A New Role in the Family with the mother using her feet to end Jake's life. I think it would be awesome.

Summary:

Luke finds himself subject to the whims of his beautiful mother and sister after an unfortunate illness.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Odor, Scat, Watersports, Butt, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23004 Read Count: 161159
[Report This] Published: April 22 2014 Updated: September 02 2016
Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 22 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really appreciate your writing style and dedication to detail. I hope you continue this and really make this kid a tiny toy for his mom and sister. I don't mind ass but sincerely hope, even if it's not your thing, you include some devestatingly smelly foot scenes. Being an inch tall and forced to smell ass, immediately followed by feet, would teach this kid how weak he really is.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - I'll try to have the next chapter up soon! 

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

As a foot guy, I'm still enjoying this sordid tale a lot. I love how the mom is so horny at using her little boy as a tiny toy. I hope he regrets his actions and is used as a pet for mommy's stinky body parts. I hope feet get used a bit, too, and hope his life is eventually snuffed out, as well. :)

Summary:

Scott Stevens, shrunken and incarcerated in his own home, faces dire consequences for his crimes in the hands (and shoes) of his giant family and acquaintances.  All the while, his mother Judy is hard at work on her senatorial campaign, and as usual has some conniving tricks in store.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Couples , Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70647 Read Count: 348743
[Report This] Published: July 15 2014 Updated: February 15 2015
Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 01 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: MVP

I do enjoy this series and how he is a tiny little toy for women's stinky feet. I think you've established the universe by which these characters act and relate to one another. I'm not sure why after 5 other installments of the family crushing and punishing him, a few readers would complain about the cruelty and ask you to tone it down. It's not a gentle story so please don't succumb to any requests that fundamentally go against your vision for these characters. I truly hope Judy forces her feet to do unspeakable things to Scott.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing. There will be some gentle content in this story, though most of the action will still be focused on intensive foot (and mouth) interaction, as it was with past installments. And Scott will be back with Judy's feet in a couple chapters.

Summary:

This is the story of a 20 year old guy named Paul. After falling vicitm to his Sister's black magic, Paul begins his descent into the world of feet. 


Categories: Unaware, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20447 Read Count: 192354
[Report This] Published: December 01 2014 Updated: June 20 2015
Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The shrinking

I like this premise. It's simple and direct, which means you can delve right into the olfactory carnage. I really like that you're playing up the smell angle. I personally hope you take this in a dark direction. Given how potent Rose's feet are when he's at normal height, they need to completely destroy him now that he's so puny. I hope to see a fatality from just her stinky feet.

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The shrinking

I like where this seems to be headed. I hope Rosie finally gets to force him to smell her feet, hopefully while only an inch in height. My fingers are crossed that he meets a pungent demise at the stinky feet of Rosie.

Summary:

Will is an introvert, his twin sister Summer is an extrovert. Will has always been jealous of Summer's social nature, but a new device allows him to become whatever he wants and he wants to be Summer's flip flop. What could possibly go wrong?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Object, Feet, Footwear, Odor, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21852 Read Count: 99589
[Report This] Published: January 24 2015 Updated: May 20 2015
Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 10 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Triumvirate Sciences

Hey, it's great to see you return to this great story. I hope you are able to continue producng new chapters. Don't worry about writer's block; whatever you muster out will likely be just fine. One hope I have is that the main charachter simply begin shrinking to a tiny size without necessarily morphing into an ojbect or clothing particle. I think being human and tiny at Summer's feet would be interesting to see. And punishing as hell for him.

Tiny Sails by covetous Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

A young pirate in Nassau crosses the wrong woman and tries to survive the consequences.


Categories: Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Mouth Play, Odor, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5261 Read Count: 17260
[Report This] Published: April 03 2015 Updated: September 17 2015
Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just came across your stories and am beyond impressed. We share the same appreciation for pungent feet and the effects such powerful odors have on tiny people. I hope the young man gets more of her feet down the road. And I hope it's too much to take. Great job.

Summary:

After leaving a violent relationship, Andrew returns to his ex's house one last time to collect his clothes and belongings. However, he finds his ex's mother alone in the house, hungry for revenge. 


Categories: Giantess, BBW, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2248 Read Count: 29313
[Report This] Published: April 05 2015 Updated: April 06 2015
Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 05 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey, I really enjoyed your setup and hope you continue this soon! I like the tags you chose and feel you have the potential to produce an excellent and cruel story. I especially hope his ex's mom crushes his spirit entirely with the smell of her feet. I love stories where the woman is already much larger and formiddable than the guy. It makes what happens to them when they're tiny all the more demoralizing and overwhelming. Keep up the awesome work.