Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed
Date: August 07 2022
Title: Chapter 3: Recon
I really like the details and the set up for this story so far; I sometimes just skim intros and look for the "plot", but this one is actually interesting. I also love a good unaware story!
Can't wait to see that "butt" story tag get put to good use!
Author's Response: Hi! I'm glad to see a new nick among the reviews! I hope you'll share your thought more often from now on :D
Thanks for the kind words. I was actually really nervous about the feedback I'd get about this chapter, as I thought there's not enough action included. So, I'm relieved to see, that it's actually interesting in your opinion. What details do you like the most? The descriptive ones (ex. how the living room looks) or the realistic ones (ex. remembering that Matt didn't eat dinner and therefore is hungry)? Or maybe different type, that I don't even see? Let me know, so I'll be able to improve my writing skills and make the story even more interesting! And please, don't hold back. I'd love to get a wall of text full of your thoughts and remarks!
The butt scenarios are certainly getting closer and closer with every chapter but right now, there is a decision to be made, whether Matt stays full size for a few chapters or he shrinks in the very next one. Therefore I am postponing the writing process, to gather your opinion on that matter. I have several ideas for normal size unaware action, but the readers are divided into two groups. Some are loving the idea, whereas some deeply hate it, so I'm trying to find some common ground on that subject. What do you think? Is it okay for Matt to stay at his size for a few chapters and encounter erotic unaware scenarios like that or it's not your thing and you're against the idea? Please let me know, I'd greatly appreciate it!
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Cya soon!