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Summary:

After so many painfully smelly excursions with his sister, Denver has vowed to cut Jackie out of his life for good. But after her brother almost confesses the truth to their parents one day, Jackie goes out of her way to show up to Denver's house before he can reveal anything further, and plans to inflict a punishment so long and torturous that he won't even dream of questioning her authority ever again.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Incest, Odor, Scat, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: The Holidays with Jackie
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11481 Read Count: 31369
[Report This] Published: July 09 2022 Updated: October 01 2022
Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 10 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love the start so far, and the visual of being trapped in the apparatus waiting for her farts. Here's hoping that this one has some good butt/fart action with him shrunk now too! (maybe in the back of her panties?)



Author's Response:

the whole series is butt centered so there's some more of that coming up

Summary:

(A Panty Transformation Commission featuring a collection of OC's)

Sammy is going away to college, and going to be living at the dorms, but her girlfriend Honda doesn't want to be so far away from her. Using a magical item they find a solution, transforming her into a pair of panties to be worn throughout the semester between her girlfriend's heavenly thighs.

However things become far more complicated when they meet her new dorm roommate, Layla, an old childhood bully and rival of Honda's who's long held a grudge against her. When she catches wind of the two's polymorphing arrangement she'll stop at nothing to make Honda's transformed life a living hell.


Categories: Humiliation, Object, Unaware, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Lesbians, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10379 Read Count: 8007
[Report This] Published: July 16 2022 Updated: July 16 2022
Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 16 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great writing! Party transformation is my favorite. Love the aware and unaware combo in one. Would love to see some sweat or gassyness brought in for future chapters.

Summary:

Matt has made a bet with his inattentive girlfriend Aria, that he could live with her for 3 months without her even knowing. What she doesn't know is that the witch he knows used a shrinking spell on him to help him win. But as it turns out, there's a catch.

Hidden Resident is entirely unaware-themed series, telling the story of Matt's 3 months stay at his girlfriends house along with her younger sister, mother and some episodic characters along the way. 

This series will consist of sizes from Nano to Munchkin.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Instant Size Change, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8217 Read Count: 35612
[Report This] Published: August 01 2022 Updated: July 22 2023
Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed
Date: August 07 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Recon

I really like the details and the set up for this story so far; I sometimes just skim intros and look for the "plot", but this one is actually interesting. I also love a good unaware story!

Can't wait to see that "butt" story tag get put to good use!



Author's Response:

Hi! I'm glad to see a new nick among the reviews! I hope you'll share your thought more often from now on :D

Thanks for the kind words. I was actually really nervous about the feedback I'd get about this chapter, as I thought there's not enough action included. So, I'm relieved to see, that it's actually interesting in your opinion. What details do you like the most? The descriptive ones (ex. how the living room looks) or the realistic ones (ex. remembering that Matt didn't eat dinner and therefore is hungry)? Or maybe different type, that I don't even see? Let me know, so I'll be able to improve my writing skills and make the story even more interesting! And please, don't hold back. I'd love to get a wall of text full of your thoughts and remarks! 

The butt scenarios are certainly getting closer and closer with every chapter but right now, there is a decision to be made, whether Matt stays full size for a few chapters or he shrinks in the very next one. Therefore I am postponing the writing process, to gather your opinion on that matter. I have several ideas for normal size unaware action, but the readers are divided into two groups. Some are loving the idea, whereas some deeply hate it, so I'm trying to find some common ground on that subject. What do you think? Is it okay for Matt to stay at his size for a few chapters and encounter erotic unaware scenarios like that or it's not your thing and you're against the idea? Please let me know, I'd greatly appreciate it!

And as always. Consider adding my story to your favourites, not to miss out on new content as I will be posting relatively often!

Cya soon!

Red by newguy31311 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

The story of a young man desperate to be closer to his crush, whether she knows it or not.

This is being done as a commission. 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Object, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Slave, Unaware, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8911 Read Count: 31912
[Report This] Published: August 04 2022 Updated: February 19 2024
Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02 2023 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love a good unaware panty transformation story!

Summary:

You're a young and briliant amateur scientist, today is supposed to be the day you show the world your worth, but something goes awry...


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Scat, Unaware, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8704 Read Count: 7331
[Report This] Published: August 19 2022 Updated: August 19 2022
Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like the unaware and ridiculous size premise. This was VERY well written! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words and the 5 star review!

Summary:

A short story about a mother who stumbles upon her son's fantasy to transform into a thong for a week while reading his results on a goofy "online personality test". Mildly perturbed by what she reads, she decides to spare the world her son's dirty answers, but unintentionally ends up having way too much fun rewriting his answers in a way she finds much more funny. Unfortunately for him, she has no idea how real the test is, let alone the consequences of her changes.


This story is in every way a simple rewrite of an incredible caption done by JustAnBox on Deviantart. I highly suggest reading his version especially if you'd prefer the premise to revolve around a sister and pantyhose instead! Here is the link: https://www.deviantart.com/justanbox/art/Changing-His-Answers-926797626


Categories: Object, Adult 30-39, Unaware, Mature (40-49), Butt, Incest, Maternal, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3144 Read Count: 12329
[Report This] Published: October 28 2022 Updated: December 01 2022
Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 17 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Arriving...Home?

I'm excited about where you might go from here. So many options...

Maybe she ends up wearing him through a regular work day, or a sweaty exercise, or a gas inducing meal, or out dancing, or all of the above! I'd love to hear your descriptions of what it's like going through those as a thong with enhanced senses.

Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Changing His Answers

Love the concept so far! Thong transformations are my favorite, so I'm glad that's the theme of the story. Experiencing double taste/smell, while she's unaware is an exciting choice.  Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

True! They're among my favorite as well! Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Arriving...Home?

Absolutely love the slow buildup and descriptions. Love how the senses are too much and he's not even "on" yet. Can't wait for what you have in store after this!

Summary:

A short story featuring the members of Red Velvet on their quest to dominate their new world.

Solely inspired by this picture:


Categories: New World Order, Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Lesbians, Vore, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 525 Read Count: 1881
[Report This] Published: November 01 2022 Updated: November 01 2022
Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Intro

Red Velvet is my favorite music group! I was surprised to see this picture from Queendom on here. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.



Author's Response:

Thank you!
The picture made them seem like such natural giantesses when I saw it.

Summary:

A series of connected stories taking place in, what else, Pokémon Legends Arceus. Can you make it back to your own time-period before disaster strikes? Here's hoping! 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Object, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Legwear, New World Order, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18429 Read Count: 10998
[Report This] Published: January 02 2023 Updated: April 10 2023
Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22 2023 Title: Chapter 3: Mission 2: A Day in the Life of Akari’s Underwear

Being stuck as living underwear is one of my favorite concepts. I love the Arseus setting and having Akari as the tormenter. Being stuck with her gas and at the mercy of her butthole are great additions.

The Error by S_P_R Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12] New!
Summary:

Geneticom, one of the most cutting edge tech companies and inventor of tiny terrariums with miniaturized unintelligent humans in them, has made a costly error: accidently giving them intelligence. These are the horrors the small humans endure under an uncaring world. 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Insertion, Mouth Play, Scat, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15432 Read Count: 48060
[Report This] Published: January 14 2023 Updated: May 03 2024
Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02 2023 Title: Chapter 4: The Bedroom

I'm really enjoying the way these are written so far. Looking forward to a butt focused chapter.

Summary:

After shrinking from an experimental weight-loss shake, fitness trainer Tanner is at the mercy of the girl he is coaching. The tough workouts and protein heavy diets in his fitness plan are going to set him up for a world of torture, but it is as they say, no pain no gain!


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Crush, Giantess, Butt, Entrapment, Unaware, Odor, Insertion, Scat, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5839 Read Count: 19732
[Report This] Published: January 19 2023 Updated: October 03 2023
Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19 2023 Title: Chapter 2: Getting the Body Pumping

Loving it so far! Always a fan of ass focused stories with sweat and gas. Being trapped under the thong now is perfect. Can't want to see what's next!

Summary:

     After Tim mistakenly drinks a mysterious, secret potion his mother brought back from a research trip to the Amazon, he winds up shrinking to a mere 1-inch tall; now, while his mother frantically works to formulate a cure for her tiny son, Tim is stuck at home in the care of his aunt, who starts taking advantage of her nephew’s “little” condition.


1/29/2024 — Based on the feedback I’ve received, I’ve decided to go ahead and write an epilogue to this story. I’m not sure exactly when it will be finished and posted, but I’ll be working on it as well as a few other small projects as I prepare to write my next novel. I just wanted to thank everyone for all their support and honest feedback. This story was just supposed to be practice for my novels, but it’s certainly taken on a life of its own.


Hooray for 175K reads! 🥳


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: A Series Of Scenarios
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 151215 Read Count: 191299
[Report This] Published: February 06 2023 Updated: January 23 2024
Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03 2023 Title: Tim’s Tiny Week

Love the description of the time with her butt and the smooth panties. Great chapter overall!


Hoping to see Tim become more acquainted with her panties and ass in the future.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I’m glad you liked it…

…and there will most certainly be more ass content in the future.

Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31 2023 Title: Chapter 14: Friday Morning Pt.2

I'm more interested in seeing McKenzie in the story. 


While we're talking about what we want to see. I'd love some more butt and either fart/sweat content. Could be from anyone and aware or unaware. Maybe trapped in the back of some panties/thong for chores or errands. 😀 



Author's Response: Yeah, I kinda figured as I was outlining the next chapter that people might want to see McKenzie. I think, in actuality, with the way I had envisioned the next chapter, that it’ll only work if BOTH neighbor woman show up.

Summary:

Jackie and Emma are the last two interns, both in the running for a full-time position at a highly regarded tech company. They need to really impress their boss Chad if they want to be selected. As the events of the day unfold, Chad will find himself completely blown away by these two beauties.  


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Humiliation, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2362 Read Count: 2646
[Report This] Published: February 14 2023 Updated: February 14 2023
Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 15 2023 Title: Chapter 1: The Boss's Seat

Glad you like to see Shrunken guys stuck under the backs of thongs as much as I do! Can't wait for more of this story (and your others too). 

You're quickly becoming one of my favorite authors on this site.

Summary:

Have you ever wondered what it might be like to become a pair of panties?  When a security guard named James found out that the research company he worked for was developing a device that could remap living beings onto inanimate objects through a process called "Shifting", he thought of little else.  After months of no success, James finally managed to convince his girlfriend Amy to let him become a pair of her panties for the night of his birthday. 


Categories: Breasts, Object, Body Exploration, Butt, Feet, Footwear, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15987 Read Count: 15174
[Report This] Published: February 21 2023 Updated: October 01 2023
Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Matter & Consciousness Reticulation Device [James]

Your writing style is fantastic! I always love a good panty transformation story, and this is so far one of the better written ones I've seen.


Looks like it'll be focusing on the front of the panties? Should be great, but I'd also love to see an alternate where it goes right and he gets the full experience, or even just the back of the panties instead. ;)

Looking forward to more from you! 



Author's Response: We'll see what happens! Thanks for your feedback.

Summary:

Sarah blackmails Derek, but when his mother Abby finds out he's in for an interesting punishment


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Breasts
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4513 Read Count: 14245
[Report This] Published: February 22 2023 Updated: April 05 2023
Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24 2023 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I enjoy the premise and the dice rolling along was fun.


Hoping to see some butt related "torture", maybe something to do with those black silky panties from the start of the first chapter? 

Summary:

James gets a surprise visit from a friend. Unfortunately for him, she’s got a new “prank” to test out on him. The results… are life changing.


Categories: Humiliation, Giantess, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Footwear, Unaware, Odor, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77864 Read Count: 32751
[Report This] Published: March 01 2023 Updated: January 28 2024
Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Can’t We Work This Out? Part 1

Wow! Your writing style is fantastic! I loved the back story and slow build. The prank turning into unaware torture was great. Being shrunk and stuck to sweaty panties is a favorite ploy of mine, and the back and forth between James and Gabby's perspectives was well done. Loved the description of the asshole on the other side of the panties.


Would love to see more butt/panties torture stories from you. Maybe involving some gas, if you're into that too.



Author's Response:

Oh for sure, thanks! I think I have a couple gassy booties on here already, but There’s a ton of booty (some gassy) to be posted here soon! 

Summary:

Aiden is in a pretty unique relationship with his two roommates who he met in college, that lets him fulfil some of his strange, perverted proclivities. However, while indulging his fetish one evening, Aiden suffers a strange side effect. Now it's for him to decide if he's living in heaven or suffering in hell. 



Categories: Giantess, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Lesbians, Nose, Odor, Scat
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m, FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49996 Read Count: 88653
[Report This] Published: May 17 2023 Updated: February 16 2024
Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17 2023 Title: Chapter 1: The Event

Wow! Starting right in with the fart content, I love it. Excited to see where this goes with a start like that.


Hoping Molly's sadism ends up putting Aiden up Carmen's crack some more. Maybe in the back of her panties for a while?



Author's Response: If there's one truth in this universe, it's that an Omanahan story is gonna have some giantess farts in there somewhere. Glad you enjoyed the first couple chapters. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03 2023 Title: Chapter 9: Pushing Back

House arrest up against her ass/asshole or maybe unawarely up against Carmen's sounds fitting.



Author's Response:

It does, doesnt it. Here's to hoping that Molly gets her way!


Thanks for reading!!