When shrinking is finally possible, you volunteer to be your sisters toy for the holiday
Your story is absolutely one of the best I have had the pleasure of reading. The chapters which set the background, and which typically are overlooked, we're exciting and stimulating. Mia's interactions with Stan lead the reader into their power games and really paint a picture of what it is like for Stan. I can honestly say that I most look forward to Stan interacting with his mother later in the story while she is unaware. Panty play, vore, toys, etc. are all welcome in my book. Personally, I would like to see Stan glued into the shared toilet bowl but thats just me. Please continue this fantastic work.
Thanks for the review! I'm very happy you like it so much! Hopefully I can incorparate your idea sometime :)
A man discoveres a shrinking potion and his voyeuristic tendancies get the better of him, with unfortunate consequences.
Luke finds himself subject to the whims of his beautiful mother and sister after an unfortunate illness.
I'm so glad that you came back for chapter 5. I've been waiting patiently for a very long time and feel like the wait was worth it. Your descriptive narratives really paint a picture for the reader and I hope that you continue to write more stories. All the best.
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! Now that the baseline canon is established, If I end up writing more with these characters it will likely be in shorter "check-in" style stories. Gives me a bit more flexibility to avoid getting stuck in all the non-sexual continuity stuff that chronological chapter based storytelling writing calls for. I'd also love to see other authors take a crack at spin-off stories if anyone is keen to!
A new adult shop has opened up, and women have been raving.
It's awesome when you find a story that someone has written that mirrors a personal fantasy! Great imagery and I look forward to future chapters.
Anna finally agrees to let her boyfriend be shrunk. She is hesitant, but hopes to grow into the role of his dominating giantess.
Great story! I can't wait to see where it goes!
Author's Response:
Always nice to hear a positive review. I'll do my best to keep you reading.
Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.
After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.
I like where this is headed. Dona has a wicked personality! As always, thank you for the update and I look forward to more!
Thanks for taking the time to share some positive feedback! It is always much appreciated. :)
After such a fantastic story, I do feel like it is time to retire this one and work on more masterpieces (The Ad maybe?). Perhaps combine the two endings? I would like to see Aunt Dona take out Tom in a sexy, devilish way. This way the story gets closure and we get some more awesome storyline. The shrinking reversal process could backfire and Tom could find himself very miniscule. It would be very easy to become lost in an orifice, sealed in a toy of some sort, or woven into a pair of someones panties. Whatever you decide, thank you for providing us with constant updates and excellent content.
Thaks for sharing your thoughts. for the moment it would appear some haven't quite reached their limit of tom, so it will continue for the time being.
He thought he was breaking up with her gently. Now she will break him.
I liked it and would like to read the epilogue as well. Keep writing!
Awesome story!
My girlfriend's best friend captures me after tricking me into kissing her. She takes me to my girlfriend's house and tells her all about it. The two women try to figure out how best to punish me.
Kevin is an inventor and has always dreamed of seeing the world from a different scale. Lucy is his beautiful loving wife who would do anything to see Kevin happy. When Kevin invents his shrink pad, his dream can become a reality, but in reality, dreams don't always follow the script.
Great story, I like where it's headed
A mistreated, yet capricious girl gets her sweet revenge by shrinking, swallowing, and digesting her abusive boyfriend whom she can't quite bear to leave.
I really enjoyed your writing style. Thank you for sharing your work!
I appreciate your appreciation...much and more to follow!
I thrill at the chance to share my work with you, Dear Reader.
This is a response to Lumberpanda's "Shrunk in a factory" challenge. A man somehow gets shrunk while working in a factory producing feminine hygeine products. The hapless victim ends up where you'd expect.
I love this story! Very detailed, keep up the good work. I really hope it goes in an unaware F/m direction. Thanks!
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Drake Dobson stumbles onto a strange object that his best friend has found. Unfortunately for Drake, the object was not so user friendly to him.
I cannot wait to see how this story unfolds. I wonder how Rachel will.introduce Drake to Christine? Like the previous reviewer hypothesized, Rachel may disguise or make Drake unrecognizable. She could attach him in some manner to a toy and then be used unaware (heart skips a beat thinking of it). Last but not least, Christine could hand Ricky over to Rachel for some rough play. Once Christine turns around to accept Ricky, Rachel swaps the boys out. Ricky goes into Rachels purse as her desired shrunken man and Drake is in for one hell of a ride. Either way my anticipation is growing for the next chapter. I appreciate your clear warnings regarding the male interaction. While it's not my thing, I can appreciate that others enjoy it and I won't stop reading your wonderful story because of it.
What happens when you tell your horny friend your dirtiest fantasy?
Amazing beginning! I cannot wait to see where this story takes us. We'll done!
Fantastic story! Please continue this.
During a night of being annoyed by his older sister's a sleepover with his girlfriend.In the morning Jason finds himself standing at only an inch tall and ends up in a terrifying situation! Will his sister and girlfriend notice him in time?
Great story! I appreciate your storyline and detailed descriptions. Even though you stated that this was your single foray into the water sports arena, you should consider writing more. Well done.
Thank you, Donnert. Glad you enjoyed the story! ^w^ I may or may not write more of these types of stories, I just don't got a whole lot of ideas at this very moment for one.
After receiving chilling news, a man readies himself for the end. However, it's the year 2089, and a quick-thinking doctor comes up with a solution. There's just one catch: he'll have to be an inch tall. How will he and his wife adjust to him suddenly being tiny?
I absolutely love this story so far. The premise behind the shrinking is new and not something that is re-hashed over and over in other stories. The interaction between husband and wife is very believeable as well. I look forward to reading this story as it progresses. I wouldn't complain if it turns more R rated, away from the current PG status.
Glad you like it! It's going to go to some dark places in the future which may necessitate an R rating on their own, but if you mean overtly sexual content there are currently no plans to include that.
On my way to a seminar, things take a unexpected turn as I end up taking a crash course in human survival.
This is a first person unaware shrunken story that contains much graphic content and is intended for entertainment purposes only which may not be suitable for some.
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Loved the story so far. Looking forward to future chapters!
