Reviewer: Donnert Signed 



Date: December 29 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Morning
Your story is absolutely one of the best I have had the pleasure of reading. The chapters which set the background, and which typically are overlooked, we're exciting and stimulating. Mia's interactions with Stan lead the reader into their power games and really paint a picture of what it is like for Stan. I can honestly say that I most look forward to Stan interacting with his mother later in the story while she is unaware. Panty play, vore, toys, etc. are all welcome in my book. Personally, I would like to see Stan glued into the shared toilet bowl but thats just me. Please continue this fantastic work.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm very happy you like it so much! Hopefully I can incorparate your idea sometime :)