Reviewer: Haloichigo Signed
Date: December 08 2019
Title: Chapter 1: Start
Finally! It has been such a long time since i read something that grasped my interest like this. The premise is simple but effective and at the same time original. The story has a plot element, but isn't bogged down in too much story telling itself and gets to the good stuff pretty quickly. Which is great since well this is erotica for a macro and shrink lover and sadly too many writers add too much story when all I really want is something quick and arousing. I love the over all diresting this story has been going and as I write this i have only read three chapters. I am giving this max stars, but would like chapters to be a bit longer and more heavy detail, but that is just a bit of criticism to a story that i am over all loving.
I am constantly going to be looking forward to this series and heck I like it so much I would even like to write something within the same universe of this story, maybe a spin off or even contribute a chapter with your blessing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much that review.
I really enjoy reading from you guys what your thinking about my story. And it is especially great if its coming from and author which I really like.
I loved all of your stories so far!
I'm a little concerned that all of a sudden everyone wants to write a story with this concept because I think it could influence my own progress. Although I I'm excited that you are gping to write something like this because I really enjoy your writing!
I will try to be more detailed but I just want to get the story to the good stuff:D Sine most it is already planned out.
Anyways chapter 4 will hopefully be to your liking and chapter 5 will be posted soon as well