Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed
August 04 2013
Chapter 8: Conflict of Interest
Ann is getting the beating of a lifetime and I can't wait to see what Nina has in store for her.
In my opinion this story needs a semi-gentle gts who gives Ann occasional relief by being slightly less cruel than the others.
This would give you a chance to develop Ann's character a bit more by focusing more on a relationship between two characters rather than just sex.
Just an idea though, and either way I'm still looking out for this story.
Keep up the good workAuthor's Response:
Great minds think alike! Gotchya covered AW! It's coming up in the next chapter (which I'm almost done with). Ooops! I gave something away! I hope I didn't ruin it for you. :)
Since these chapters are 3 to 4 times longer than I want them to be, I can't post chapters and teasers on schedule. I've written about 9,000 words in 5 days. That's more than the average professional novelist and I still can't keep up. This is why I don't like writing long stories. No matter how hard I work, I can't keep up wth schedule. But at the sametime, the story is leading me to write long chapters. In order to obey my sadistic mind's bidding, I must continue as planned.
My brain is mush from me trying to be creative and I'm starting to get burned out from all of this writing. But the story compels me to keep writing. I'm hoping to have the next chapter done by the end of today but it won't have a teaser at first.
Sorry for my complaining. I guess I needed a fellow writer to vent to and empathize with me.