Deelann! its been a while man, what have you been up to?

The plot thickens? hopefully?

Another good chapter from you deelann. you should be more active on this website, we need fun loving writers like you.

Kayla is an interesting girl. She seems to have adapted well to her roll as an executioner, but still feels guilty for killing people.

I guess since its her job to deal out torture and death she can't help but be a little casual about it.

I would like to apologize for being a review bomber.

There was a lot of stuff in both chapters 8 and 9 that really made me think. Which is awkard because it was also arousing lol.

First was the self-righteous attitude/ feelings of revenge Kayla had which really made me appreciate her more as a character. Then there was that bit about how everyone likes to see a murderer suffer which I found quite interesting as well.

Of course what I thought was argueable the best scene was when she burst into the bar with Alana still stuck to her heel. I can just imagine all the drop jawed stares.

You were right UHF I did like these last 2 chapters. The amount of cruelity and absolute disregard for Alana's life was really well done.

On a less serious note you finally fufilled you snail content obligation.

A solid start, but it needs to be longer. Also we don't need exact heights for the characters. other than that though it seems good enough, and I feel confident that in time this story will improve.

Also congrads on including african characters a rarity on this website for some reason

Well unlike gerald I don't really have much to say other than that there isn't enough historical fiction on this site so I commend you on giving it a try.

Also in response to the little debate about whether the ancient weapons would be able to penetrate the giantesses flesh. I must bring up the fact that any metal weapon is significantly harder than human skin and under normal circumstances would have no problem entering the body.

taking this into account I would say that the question is not "can the weapon penetrate the skin " but rather "can the weapon penetrate the skin far enough to cause signifigant damage".

The answer to that question if you are truly interested can only be obtained if you know the hardness of both the weapon and the giantesses skin as well as how much force is behind it.

I guess I did have a lot to say

I just noticed this story Gadget. Congrads on uploading your first of hopefully many stories.

First off, the pictures are an interesting touch. Not a lot of people use the picture finction anymore so props for using that. 

Secondly, the quality of this work is far above the average of most first stories. Your grammar is excellent, the dialogue is used well (not too much, not too little), and its well paced (no timeskips or leaps in plot logic).

Lastly, I like how candid the story is. Those two paragraphs after the word "CRUNCH" really got me excited for future chapters.

I look foward to reading more of this sometime.

Tommy just dogged a bullet this chapter. Although if I were in his position, I would have simply just pleased her so she would shut up about it.

Lots of sexy vampire giantess action in this chapter. 

This may have been the most sadistic story you two have produced yet. It is so simple and brutish to use someone to satisfy ones sexual urges, but the fact that Chelsea loves Elishtaya as she tortures her makes it that much more cruel and twisted.

You two transcend the typical "girl tortures tiny" dynamic and take it a whole new level.

And I love how most of the time your giantesses arn't evil (at least in my opinion), but rather are just naturally sadistic and very dominant. I feel that giantesses like these are what true sadistic giantesses should be.

Bravo! 10/10.