Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed
May 16 2014
Chapter 61: Chapter 61: Everything Happens at Once
Great new chapter here, and it's great to see you getting the updates out so quickly. Sorry to not really have reviewed this one yet, though I have been reading it since the beginning, just not one to usually write the reviews and such. Getting really good though. The pace you're going at it strong, and I may be wrong here, but I'm guessing you have a pretty big story idea on the horizon, but want to try to get this one finished before you start commiting to a new story? Maybe not, but it feels like that's the case.
I do hope to see Charlie swallowed alive haha, though whatever happens to him shall be interesting. Great little way Jack baited him at the end. Also wondering as to where things go with the baby, whether it will be kept there, or if Julia will maybe grow it to normal size and take it to an orphanage or something, because the care and raising of it might be too much. Lots of interesting little threads here, and it feels like we're getting closer and closer to an endgameAuthor's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing! You're actually pretty spot-on about my plan for this thing. There's a decent-sized turning point coming up in the next couple of chapters that I wanted to reach before beginning any new stories (probably Mommy's Time-out 6). It seemed best to reach a logical story break before taking an actual break again from it.
The endgame set-up, however, is still getting closer here. Charlie's in for some retribution, but the way I've got planned is a little different than anything I've done in this story yet. I won't spoil about the baby either, but I will say Julia's more than a little attached to her after holding her for the first time.