A scientist finds a way of communicating with a woman from another world. He transports himself to her world without her knowledge, the only catch being that everything in her world is on a far larger scale... But that's just the tip of the iceberg.
very good story, but I wonder if it is a coincidence that they are almost all women...?Oh, well that will remain a mystery... but good story though. Like that suit thingy that he invented. (Yes I said "Thingy") and good grammer as always.... Hope you continue it or make another wonderful epic that we all know and love. yes. indeed.
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No coincidence there - at the time I was writing, I didn't really like the concept of a giant male, even if he was part of a giant couple. Hence, mostly women involved in this tale, although I hope it didn't suffer though.
As far as epics go, I've got one coming at the moment, although I don't know how long until it's finished.
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It's an okay story megarazefreak, you and your catgirl-mega-giantess-"Oh I don't care what happeds to teh people" fantasies. Oh, well I suppose I didn't write it, and have never wrote one, but yeah.......
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Zalrus IX
I like this story; simple quick and elegent. but I do wish she was wearing open-toed shoes. Oh, well. That's probably why you're the site admin and I'm not, or something. Like that.
Alot like the movie with the usual evil twist that andrew nellis puts on his stories.
Very good, Andrew. Though I think Lisa is an evil biach i do rather think see is meant to be, but I would rather like to know what happens to her. It is also a bit disgusting, too, but as is all of your other stories.
I. Love .This .Story. Of course, you hearedthat in thelast few reviews, so now for something completely diffirent: I thought this story was one of your best, and the love triangle I don't think was ever explored in a GTS story I ever read before, however I think that that woman compleatly justified the killing of millions and i don't think that was what you would call and "original sin", but is was by no means a good thing that he did. Also I like your good grammer. You have no IDEA how many stories I read that don't use quotations properly or use words like "hunny" which, according to this spell check, is spelled wrong, but I digress because it will probably will not take this long rant any longer so I say goodbye. do respond.
Zalrus IX
Thank you for the complements.
Cheryl didn't completely justify her actions; she simply explained herself. She still feels guilty for what she did all those years ago, and both she and Adam know that what she did wasn't right. The key is that Adam decides to break the cycle, and stops looking for vengeance (even if that is ultimately what he achieves).
From the start, I thought about exploring a love triangle in this story; I'm glad you thought it worked out well.
Grammar is very important to me too.
Glad you liked the story, and hope to hear from you about future tales.
Why would youwrite something like this. I see no way Explain mr morsel EXPLAIN!!!!!!!!!!
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Zalrus IX
Well, I don't find any sexual pleasure in vore, this story has some of its ups. Pretty good. pretty good.
Oh, dear. An unhappy ending. Oh, well can't win it all the time. And good grammer, with the exception of the times you forgot to put in quotations, but nobody's perfect. good al in all good. respond.
Author's Response: thanks for reading my story and commenting on it, Zalrus!
I really like this story. I like the idea that people grow less intelligence when they grow. I hope you update it very soon.
Very interesting twist. I sort of like it.
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One thing I can say: learn how to do quotations. Otherwise the reader will not understand and then they will stop reading or flame you sort of what I am doing but i am nice. Ha! Yeah! right!
ZOMG! Giantess Goddess Bitch and her Trickster God Boyfriend taking over! What shall be done?!?! If only Zalrus IX were here to set things right, but wait. He Can't!! this is all up to the creator, Ramsus VIII to set things right, and make a happy ending!
Any great story, and nice chapter names, I wish I could do as well with my fanfiction at fanfiction.net where I have the same pen name as here. But yeah, good story, make it a happy ending, maybe with a duex ex machina with yours truly, and, yeah.
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Zalrus IX (one more than you)
ITS THE END I TELL YOU! THE END!
As for endings, I have multiple in mind, but only one will make the cut.
As for a happy ending, that really depends on the reader. Har de har har.
Very interesting, but I can't see why that Lindsay character would want to take vengence and why those people didn't kill her when they had the chance? Oh, well, I guess the world isn't fair. Ho Hum. life goes on. Great story nevertheless, minus the lack of a happy ending.
Interesting story, but I just don't feel it. I think it has something to do with those girls bieng omipotent. Why back in my day, When normal giantesses destory houses and kill people and other acts of destruction they have to pay for the consequences C9usually, but not always, but there are consequences.). The whole "reset thing is not cool! NOT COOL!. Now, I don't want you to take it as a flame, because I am not so good at consructed critisism, but still. Don't take offence to this, if you do read it and RESPOND. like the Beatles always say "We Can Work It Out."
Zalrus IX
Really? I thought it was clever at the time. It's your preference of course. I will agree that this isn't my best-written story. It did SOMETHING right at one of the forums, apparantly, so there must have been something to it. Still, I do say this isn't my best writing.
Could you go into more detail as to what you don't like about it? You mentioned omnipotence as one reason. I'd like to know so I can know how to improve.
Okay, I'll go into more detail. What I didn't like was the fact that Chiaki's powers were, too powerful. I mean the "reset" spell. I mean it is okay to give a person size changin abilities, and maybe some other things, but when you get to big, It becomes boring sometimes. It's like superman. I find him the most boring hero because he can do evrything. But otherwise, I like it. just don't give people too many powers, but if you're going for a god or goddes, then find a god or godess to be the opposite. make balance. so yeah.
Hope I haven't offended your work
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Zalrus IX
I'm not a fan of Incest of Vore, nor does the person who writes the Great Reigon series and I have the same reason, but I also believve in thr first amendment so I let this pass, good giantess though.
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Zalrus IX
WHY, SUSIE?!?!?! WHY?!?!?!?!??!!?
Sorry. But that was a frusturating ending. Ironicly funny, but frusturating. I don't... understand.
WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE?!?!?!?!?!? HE WAS TEH GREATEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Sorry angain. I mean seriously, why? Oh, well good story. Nice NIce Nice Very Nice, except the ending. *sniff*
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Love story. I like the balence of good and evil, so I am very happy when he gets to see susan and the feet.... well, who could not love the feet? (Don't answer that.) but yes very long too, I liked that, very good. good.....good. just good. 10 for you. Now Write more stories. and respond to reviews. and eat your peas. that is all.
Author's Response: Yes, I realize I have an unhealthy fascination with feet. Fortunately, I have a lovely girlfriend who not only thinks it\'s adorable, but enjoys mashing that particular button. Life is pretty goddamn sweet ;-)\r\n\r\nI\'m writing another story, and I *finally* responded to the reviews. I make no promises about the peas...\r\n\r\nThanks, Zalrus!
Hey, good story, but your grammer was a bit .... so-so. I mean I've seen worse but you could do better (Don't switch tenses. If you switch tenses then a crow will eat your soul.)
Anyway, I don't know what else to put as to your writer's block, but I should come around a bit, just ask NFALC or Stanley williams.
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Zalrus IX
WHY?!?!?!?!?!? this story has nothing but people bieng crushed underfoot time and time again. This isn't right. Stories should have a balance in them, with evil and good, or at least a happ... oh, wait. There is a happy ending. whoops. but I still want to keep that rant steph. I like it.. Oh, well.
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Zalrus IX (nine more than yours)