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Summary:

A prequel to "The Cheerleader's Town " explaining how a Dupuy College cheerleader created a whole new society after all the other people in her college town shrank to a few inches in height.


Categories: Lesbians, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Butt, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, New World Order, Unaware, Violent, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Cheerleader of Dupuy
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9487 Read Count: 27026
[Report This] Published: June 08 2012 Updated: June 08 2012
Reviewer: free Signed
Date: June 15 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great story+great author THX



Author's Response:

 

Thank you! Check this out also....

 

http://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=619

Tina and Lara by Hedin Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Tina and Lara are best friends. Their trip to the beach just turns out to be much different than expected. After an annoying ride they eventually arrive at the beach. After taking a nap they find themselves enlarged to mega size. In a playful way the two explore the new possibilities.


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Toilet, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24305 Read Count: 34556
[Report This] Published: November 16 2012 Updated: November 16 2012
Reviewer: free Signed
Date: June 10 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Tina and Lara

Très belle histoire merci

Beachball by Hedin Rated: X [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Two boys get shrunk on a beach. Their struggle for survival and geting noticed ends fatal.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Feet, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8359 Read Count: 14433
[Report This] Published: November 16 2012 Updated: November 16 2012
Reviewer: free Signed
Date: June 10 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Beachball

Good story THX - I love stories with sport

Summary:

With a super secret and powerful weapon stolen from a government base the weapon quickly falls into the hands of stacy, a cruel and evil 13 year old. Overcome with power she decides to use the gun to get her way and to punish everyone who has ever "wronged" her.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Butt, Crush, Feet, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25365 Read Count: 123292
[Report This] Published: November 10 2013 Updated: June 20 2014
Reviewer: free Signed
Date: August 07 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Kate's new home

yes your story is verry good pleas continu raiting

 

Reviewer: free Signed
Date: August 07 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Kate's new home

yes your story is verry good pleas continu raiting

 

Summary:

Chloe finally gets to use the serum, and along with Jennifer's help, two more unsupecting victims fall into the ultimate experience. 


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59028 Read Count: 119909
[Report This] Published: February 16 2014 Updated: April 27 2014
Reviewer: free Signed
Date: June 10 2019 Title: Chapter 22: Tony's Great Escape

Verry verry good storie ...one of my prefrence

 please continue writing  you have great talent

Summary:

Alex vivait une vie normale, d'adolescent moyen jusqu'à ce qu'il rétrécisse . Cette histoire se concentre fondamentalement sur l'évolution des personnages et leurs interactions avec le protagoniste qui perd toute puissance. Pourquoi cela est ce arrivé ? Que va t'il devenir ? Et surtout Comment va réagir son entourage ?


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27420 Read Count: 40739
[Report This] Published: April 13 2014 Updated: August 07 2014
Reviewer: free Signed
Date: August 07 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Compétition et fête

c'est vrai que c'est bien écrit et en francais en plus tu dois continuer parceque ces histoires en francais sont rares

Small Emily by Luidgi Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

Emily is troubled and discovering strange needs. 

Focused on girl footwear / feet and shrinking. 

Enough said.

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1697 Read Count: 115667
[Report This] Published: November 25 2014 Updated: January 15 2015
Reviewer: free Signed
Date: January 01 2015 Title: Small Emily

verry good story continu pleas

Summary: When Sheldon tries to build a shrink ray, he accidentally shrinks himself and Leonard. When Penny walks in on them, she unknowingly picks them up for one of them oat adventurous days of their lives.
Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6004 Read Count: 53751
[Report This] Published: March 04 2015 Updated: July 16 2015
Reviewer: free Signed
Date: July 17 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i realy like your story. i think that you must continuing in unknoun and writing more chapters as possible

thk.

 

Summary:

Disappearences of ships, people and other strange things happen on a remote mysterious Island. A 20 year old college sophmore visits the Island for an internship at a facility... Powerful forces put her at the forefront of life changing events and some events that could even change our world forever.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Destruction, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing Woman, Humiliation, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 53203 Read Count: 77103
[Report This] Published: July 23 2017 Updated: August 09 2020
Reviewer: free Signed
Date: April 13 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 19 - Exploring the Sea

Hi barrowman

I just finished your excellent story. It holds a special place in my library. The style is correct. Fluid writing. The explanations are reasonable and logical. The reader can easily identify with the heroes (the shrunken characters)

But there are still many points to clarify:

- Characters wearing orange coveralls deserve more than one chapter (two or three) to tell the story of each one

- The story of Mark and Samantha and his family members

- The rest of the story about Roberta and Lisa and their friends (rebels?) Is important

(…)

There are many characters and each one has its own story.

But above all, we must explain the origin of this technology (It cannot be human). Giants cannot live forever and in large numbers on a small island. On this island there is a portal that leads to a parallel world or another planet more adequate to accommodate the giants? I think presenting it like that will be easier. But that's your story and it's up to you to see…. I just encourage you to continue on the same style. To develop the intrigue and the mystery. Imagine more interactions between the giants and the shrunken ones. And with fewer links between the real world and the world of giants. Let us escape our sad reality. The idea of r03;r03;illustrating your story with pictures is great. I encourage you to do it again for the other characters. Otherwise put links or indications of resemblance to celebrities….

If you need any other suggestions I will be happy to help. Even though English is not my language. (My language is French) But above all keep writing. I am waiting for your answer. Thank you and good luck

 



Author's Response:

Hi free.
Thanks for the tips and liking this story. I have more chapters/parts written about the orange suits, the Parker family, Mark, Roy.
Roberta and Lisa will also get more development.

The origins are indeed important and how the growth work is complex and very interesting(And it is really plausible, I'm really proud/excited about). The logistics about a lot of things will be explained along the way.
Plausible logistics for the readers, development, transitions, relatable/understandable choices etc is what I strive for.
It is always good to ask the questions, who, how, why, what, when, if, etc.

I have multiple interesting chapters already written and have the ending/goals already written. My greatest struggle to overcome is the sequence of the events that will take place and what written chapters to drop. This is really hard for me, because the exact timing when things need to happen is very important or when to give subtle clues. The devil is in the details.

Thanks for this review. It encourages me to write further. English is also not my first language.

 

Summary:

Greg finds a watch that allows him to shrink and grow, he uses it to get closer to his neighbours.


Categories: Insertion, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Instant Size Change, Odor, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36326 Read Count: 124920
[Report This] Published: February 24 2018 Updated: June 13 2019
Reviewer: free Signed
Date: March 25 2020 Title: Chapter 18: A race at school

Hello WOOTJIMBOB

your story become more and more interresting chapter after chapter and the last one is the best. If you want to continu writing  i amready to help you with suggestions or any additions . Please continue  this storie THX

 

Summary:

Tony Capucilli is a low-level employee of the notorious criminal empire known as the Bianchi Family. Power, money, women, he has it all - all he has to do is take care of importing the illegal items the family requests. The only problem is that he's been betrayed. The entire operation is crashing on his shoulders and he needs an out.

Enter witness protection. The updated program ensures complete anonymity for the duration of your natural life, but at a cost. Tony will be forced to choose between being transformed into everything (from his nemesis' daughters' panties to a shrunken servant marketed as the newest premium luxury pampering service) and being hunted down by the most powerful crime lord in the area.

Can Tony last until the Bianchi family is taken down for good?


Categories: Feet, Adventure, Object, Unaware, Butt, Body Exploration, Breasts
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12744 Read Count: 21232
[Report This] Published: May 22 2018 Updated: May 28 2018
Reviewer: free Signed
Date: August 30 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Consequences of Crime

I read your story a few years ago and am still waiting for the next chapters. Your story becomes more and more interesting chaptere after chapter. If you intend to continue it I am ready to help you with suggestions and advice ... Thank you    

Reviewer: free Signed
Date: September 01 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Consequences of Crime

Bonne histoire. Il est possible d'y agouter beucoup plus de chapitres. Ne nous faites pas attendre s'il vous plait

Summary: A shrinking master thief and his archenemy fight to the death over a prize. The battlefield? A giant, unknowing policewoman’s body!
Categories: Muscle, Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Sci-Fi, Unaware, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1854 Read Count: 9532
[Report This] Published: June 11 2018 Updated: September 11 2018
Reviewer: free Signed
Date: August 23 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

please continu ...

Summary:

 A Giant girl has an adventure.


Categories: Mature (40-49), Giantess, Adventure, Butt, Fantasy, Gentle, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35334 Read Count: 25581
[Report This] Published: March 30 2019 Updated: September 13 2020
Reviewer: free Signed
Date: June 12 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. She is changed.

J'aime vos histoires et je vous encourage à continuer

 



Author's Response:
Pourquoi merci

 

Summary:

Alors qu'il est sur le point de se rendre au Salon des Sciences, Nick est accidentellement rétréci par sa machine. Il tente d'attirer l'attention de sa mère et sa sœur, qui le croient parti, mais réduit à seulement 5 millimètres de hauteur, le garçon va rapidement s'apercevoir que le moindre geste des femmes géantes va devenir un véritable danger pour lui !


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15932 Read Count: 5763
[Report This] Published: September 12 2019 Updated: August 10 2020
Reviewer: free Signed
Date: August 09 2020 Title: Chapter 1: J'Ai Été Rétréci !

Enfin un auteur qui écrit en français! Et dans ce cas il faut bien continuer cette histoire. Je ne l'ai pas encore lu mais personnellement je préfère qu'on écrive quelques histoires longues avec intrigues  et developpements que plusieurs histoires courtes. C'est un gaspillage de talon. J'éspère que vous allez faire le premier choix. Moi même je suis auteur. Si vous voulez bien je vous enverrez ma première histoire avant de la publier pour avoir un second avis dès que je l'aurait fini. 



Author's Response:

Merci pour ton commentaire ! Pour ma part, j'oscille entre histoires longues et courtes. Pour l'instant, il n'y a que celle-ci sur giantessworld mais tu en trouveras d'autres sur mon DeviantArt ;) C'est avec plaisir que je lirais ce que tu as fait. Si tu veux me l'envoyer en privé : nickyszalinski@gmail.com

Summary:

This is a story about a sociopathic highschool student with a blossoming desire to dominate those she feels are inferior. After getting a taste of overwhelming power, she quickly becomes addictied and searches for a way to keep the high going.

 

Follow me on Twitter if you'd like @Omanahan88

 

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Odor, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55866 Read Count: 129503
[Report This] Published: January 14 2020 Updated: April 28 2020
Reviewer: free Signed
Date: March 25 2020 Title: Chapter 22: Monday Morning Blues

Hello OMANAHAN88

Thank you for your recommendations. We are all at home around the world. This story becomes more and more interesting chaptere after chapter a I am ready to help you with suggestions ... But I would like if you accept to tell us what the characters (especially the girls) in your story look like by sending photos or indicating famous personality names. For example: Megan looks like Cameron Diaz. But it will be better if you send photos that you would have chosen yourself on the internet. This is important so that we readers can integrate the story. THX



Author's Response: Hello Free!!! I’m so glad you’re enjoying the story thus far! As far as pictures go, I really don’t have anything to offer here. The characters are usually loosely based on people in my life, and I keep the descriptions vague so that the reader can sort of implement their own visualizations. However if it’s helpful to you, here’s what I can give. Ms. Crowell is similar to Cameron Diaz’s character in bad teacher, although Ms. Crowell is much more serious about her career. Camilla I would say is somewhat similar in appearance to Gal Gadot, but with slightly darker skin. Kerri is pretty much any picture of a college volleyball player out there. Take your pick haha! Thanks so much for the review and I hope you stick around to read the rest!

Summary:

The lone survivor of a horrific Shrinkee massacre is left dealing with the four giantesses responsible for the bloodbath as they compete to become her sole owner. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, BBW, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 43452 Read Count: 20937
[Report This] Published: September 01 2020 Updated: October 17 2020
Reviewer: free Signed
Date: October 18 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Hi WofP. Thank you for a really exciting and very well written story. Your way of describing the feelings of the characters (Annabelle) is perfect... Chapter 4: "" but for Annabelle she would be airborne for several seconds, crash into the giantess' palm only to be lifted into the air again. This allows the reader to soak up and identify with the shrunken girl. And even makes you want to be in her place. LOL! Description is very important when there is no visual support. But I would like to ask you if it is possible to send some indication of the appearance of the characters through links to photos on the net for example. Know that I care a lot. I encourage you to continue writing this story with as many chapters as possible because one long story is better than several dozen short stories. And this is the opinion of most of the readers and writers I have contacted.P. S. I always have to translate into French. and your story goes very well in the translator. this is not the case for all the stories on this site; this is why I will be grateful if you continue to use literary language. While waiting for your answer I would have one or two proposals for the continuation if you allow it. Keep writing. Thank you    

Reviewer: free Signed
Date: October 18 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

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