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Bloody Ann by Aspen Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Anastasia Rayne, sister of the Director of the Rayne Conglomerate, is charged with the government of a city in the brink of collapse. The catch is, humanity has been shrunken down to prevent environmental disaster, and the Raynes and their governors remain the only normal sized people on the planet. 

The other problem is that Anastasia is by all accounts a tyrant. To check on her, the Director sends her right hand woman, the three inch tall Elizabeth. But Anastasia’s methods will soon become a corrupting influence on the woman's moral code. 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Destruction, Humiliation, Feet, Slave, Giantess, Violent, Gentle, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9158 Read Count: 7440
[Report This] Published: October 15 2022 Updated: October 23 2022
Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great so far! Anastasia makes a compelling argument. It seems that Beth will see the value in violent methods, but will she also learn to enjoy it the way Ann does? I sure hope so!

I love when a giant is friends with one tiny and does fucked up stuff to other tinies. Maybe Beth will take the lead in suggesting crueler punishments as she grows more comfortable with everything? Or even take an active role during a punishment?

I really like how “Bloody” Ann can be. The deep fry scenario is excellent. I hope we get full scenes like that! Does Ann always execute, or will she just mutilate for lesser offenses?



Author's Response:

The main thing that inspired this dynamic was just that: a giant that does horrible things to tinies, except for one. I just thought it was really interesting and wanted to try it out!

As for Ann's arguments, it came to me while reading about my favourite Space Marine Legion from Warhammer 40k, the Night Lords. Fucked up people with even more fucked up morals, I love them.


Ann is totalitarian, but that doesn't mean she always executes people. Her main point is that terror is the best tool to maintain order, and so she will go out of her ways to create terror in those who she feels will threaten said order. This includes torture, holding loved ones hostage, engaging in various forms of psychological warfare, etc. Now, this is still a smut story and not a political thriller. The fucked up things she will do will be in service of said smut. 


Thanks for the review!

Summary: In an alternate reality, where humanity is divided into giants and tinies, Ryan is a serious boy with a mysterious past who one day is bought as a pet by Amber, a sunny and outgoing girl.
Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, New World Order, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8486 Read Count: 14463
[Report This] Published: February 12 2023 Updated: July 27 2023
Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26 2023 Title: Chapter 5: A day in the woods, part 3

Wow, Amber really can’t help herself! Great so far, keep it up! Hope we see Amber develop real respect for Ryan, but I also want to see her brutalize some Tinys lol

Summary:

An energetic woman tries to maintain a healthy balance between her professional life, her sex life, and raising a son and daughter...or stepdaughter. The fact that one of her children is hundreds of times bigger than her only makes everything even more unpredictable.


Categories: Violent, Giantess, Couples, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50175 Read Count: 42222
[Report This] Published: May 26 2023 Updated: November 29 2023
Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Presentations

This is exactly the kind of fucked up stuff I come to this website to read.

Would like to see more of Lester. I hope he gets an apology. Mary’s violence up to this point is mostly “justifiable” from her point of view, but I think even she knows that not standing up isn’t a good enough reason.

The comparisons with Victoria were great. I also loved the imagery of Mary’s abs being the only separation from her stomach. I hope that’s revisited after she swallows someone, with someone outside her listening in.

I love the psychological intimidation from Mary. It would be cool to see her ordering Tainys or Minis to hurt or fuck each other. Like force Victoria to let Fred dominate her.

Mary is a wonderful character! The relationship with Judy is fascinating. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Presentations

Fantastic dialogue and world building. Great perspective from Judy, handled very delicately. It will be interesting to see Mary take more responsibility in her actions. She’s now responsible for Judy and Lester’s happiness. Judy has been shown to have a power kink. Will Mary provide the same role her father did, dominating tinys and minis for her mom? And how does Lester fit in? Will anyone at school date him knowing what happened to Evelyn? Will Mary force some girl to be his new girlfriend / sex slave as an apology? Is that something he would even enjoy, or be encouraged to enjoy?

Keep it up! One of the best stories on here.

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 01 2023 Title: Chapter 8: She in his place. He in her place. Everyone in everyone's place

Great chapter! I like how you balance Mary’s acts of cruelty against her more reasonable relationships with her friends and family. The way you write her thought process and her conversations about power dynamics are what really elevate the story.

Victor is not a very interesting character so far, but I like Fred a lot! Watching Mary orchestrate everything was awesome!

Regarding Judy, you previously wrote “In those games she could be a queen who decided the fate of the victims, … or even a victim, camouflaged among the others, listening to their plans to escape and savoring their pain and fear.” I would love to see either of those scenarios written out.

I’m still #TeamLester. I realized that he has grown up his whole life without fear thanks to Mary’s seal, unlike Judy who I assume at one point was vulnerable. How does that affect his personality? How does it affect his relationships? Are people jealous of his status?

You’ve written several times that Mary feels very protective of her family. I want to see this in action. We haven’t seen Mary actually get mad yet, and I wonder what she would do to someone who tried to hurt her mom or brother. Maybe a relative of someone she killed seeking revenge?

Does Mary always go for the kill, or does she ever deliberately maim, cripple, blind, etc.?

Keep it up!

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed
Date: August 15 2023 Title: Chapter 9: Speaking the people understand

Good chapter! The restaurant concept is awesome and horrifying. Victor is still less interesting than Fred, but I think his discomfort is a good contrast to Mary’s eagerness. 

I keep thinking about last chapter when Fred was venting to Mary. I hope Mary continues to show a submissive streak. I don’t know if Fred would be morally ok with dating Mary, but they seem like a better fit in that Fred actually has the confidence to “boss” Mary around.

Hope we get to see Mary force some Victor/mini interactions. The big F - medium M - small f/m dynamic is awesome and underutilized.

I love the way you describe Mary’s abuse, but I think the individual deaths would be more impactful if you switched to the victim’s POV some of the time.

What do Mary and Victor talk about? Does Mary have hobbies outside acts of control? Her embarrassment that the date wasn’t going well could have been played up more. Near the beginning, Mary makes a joke to her Mom about cleaning her foot then gets embarrassed. And later gets embarrassed when she tried to intimidate her. I love these moments.

I check the website for updates to this story every day!

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed
Date: September 05 2023 Title: Chapter 10: Intimacy of two

Great chapter! I loved how Mary hyped herself up, and how quickly it wavered when she thought Victor was scared. I’m not a fan of animal stuff but the scene was well-written.

Happy to see the return of flashbacks! You do a good job of integrating them into the story. I would love to see more flashbacks of a younger Mary testing her power and wiping out some families along the way.

Next chapter sounds exciting!

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12 2023 Title: Chapter 13: The three previous steps: You can do it Vicky!

Great update! Mary definitely seems mentally stable enough for this to work - good luck Vicky!

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30 2023 Title: Chapter 14: Intimacy of several

Excellent chapter! The “little Mary” concept was clever and well-executed. I loved how you reintroduced Judy and how her relationship with Mary is changing. Poor Victor :(

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed
Date: November 05 2023 Title: Chapter 15: Dream the shit out of it.

Wow! I love that Mary sees the opposite POV and her realization isn’t “be nicer” but rather “damn it’s good to be an Apex.”

Mary’s terms are the perfect way to frame their relationship going forward. I hope Judy is equally capable of compartmentalizing - her advocacy for Lester is encouraging. I’m curious to see how the tension with him gets resolved.

Can’t wait to see Judy unleashed! I want to see her personally handle some minis.

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed
Date: December 06 2023 Title: Chapter 16: That doesn't fit there

That was intense and kind of sad. I think the scene was really well-written, but I found it surprisingly hard to connect with a domination scene where the dominant person isn’t into it. I think it worked best at the end when Mary directly orders him to destroy Julia’s corpse, involving herself in the action instead of lurking.

Looking forward to seeing how this ends! Any new stories in the works?

Summary:

Bruna is a senior college student that has a forbidden pleasure: swallow tiny people alive. All tinies usually scream and beg for their lives while they're being consumed as snacks, but what will happen when Bruna meets Mia, a tiny that actually enjoys seeing giant girls eating tinies like her?

Copyright: This is a story written by me, and all characters/situations are my original work or are used with permission/'expectancy of permission' from other authors (which are mentioned in such cases). There's no intention of disrespecting anyone's work.


Categories: Couples, Gentle, Humiliation, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5081 Read Count: 9271
[Report This] Published: July 13 2023 Updated: July 13 2023
Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18 2023 Title: Chapter 1: 01. A new friend

Cute story! I love it when some tinies are friend and others are food.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I also liked the dynamic between Bruna and Mia, and who knows what more adventures these two will have together? By the way, this story is strongly based on suggestions and on some favorite scenarios of a friend I have, with some parts written by her, so maybe you would like to check her own stories too: look on DeviantArt for Misty064 (I don't know if I can post hyperlinks here, so I'll just show her DeviantArt pen name

Proper Disposal by Karpazan Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A sadistic gal taking out the thrash. Incredibly dark and cruel story, featuring brutal and inhumane ways of killing tinies.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Odor, Scat, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2217 Read Count: 3247
[Report This] Published: August 07 2023 Updated: August 07 2023
Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 08 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good one-shot! I loved the creativity of methods. I’ve never thought of using cigarette smoke to kill tinies! The individual deaths felt a little rushed. Some victim POV could help with that.

Summary:

Two-inch-tall Simon Groff never figured he'd meet somebody like Beck Phillips. 

But after a chance meeting in his normal-heighted sister's apartment, Beck melts Simon's heart and opens his eyes to a new world of possibilities in the big-person world. 

It's not just that he risked everything on a once-in-a-lifetime trip down her throat (and her pants). He might actually have real feelings for this girl… even if she's a thousand times his size. 

But before the lovestruck (and size-crossed) pair can explore their feelings further, they've got to survive a night on the town at Studio H, the notorious tiny-inclusive bar, where girls with more sinister interests in Simon's diminutive size lurk. Will Simon's luck hold?

Or does another fate await him?



Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7117 Read Count: 7797
[Report This] Published: August 09 2023 Updated: September 02 2023
Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed
Date: August 09 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Live From Studio H

Fear and Delight was great, I’m excited to read the sequel! Good start!

Summary: A esteemed tutor visits one of his wealthy students when she invites him over to catch up. Offering him a job at her company over a rather strange game of chess.
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Crush, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3397 Read Count: 2023
[Report This] Published: August 11 2023 Updated: August 11 2023
Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 11 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting and well-written. You do good world building in a very natural way. The characters seemed a bit muted - is Charles really so jaded to violence to barely react to people being eaten? Is this a commentary on capitalism?

From a smut angle, I’d love to read Charles suggest horribly cruel yet practical ideas for Clara to implement.

Summary:

Two exes end up in a mysterious arrangement in which they take turns as giants and shrinkees, depending on each other for survival (with some vengeance and shenanigans intermixed). Will they manage to peacefully resolve their differences and co-exist as a couple? Or will their vengeful, cruel, psychopathic natures lead them to drive each other to a sex-crazed insanity? 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Instant Size Change, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Giant, Humiliation, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FM/f, M/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30608 Read Count: 25959
[Report This] Published: August 12 2023 Updated: December 05 2023
Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 27 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A Tiny Re-Introduction

Great work! I love the complexity of their relationship.

Summary:

In an alternate world where one’s height determines societal power, Jennifer, an average-sized human from our reality, is transported to a dimension inhabited by Lilliputians, a race of people merely three inches tall. Unlike Gulliver’s Travels, where Lemuel Gulliver held absolute power over the Lilliputians, in this world the race of small beings is deadly and hellbent on killing Jennifer. Struggling to adapt and survive in this strange land, Jennifer forms an unlikely alliance with Kara, the smallest Lilliputian in the land, who becomes something more than just an enemy.

As Jennifer struggles to find a way home, she must navigate the odd prejudices and political world of the Lilliputians. Jennifer and Kara find themselves caught in the crosshairs of a ruthless war waged by the tyrannical Queen Lysandra. Her army, led by a stoic and unwavering general, is hell-bent on eradicating all giants and those who dare to ally with them. Facing insurmountable odds, Jennifer and Kara must confront each other's differences and learn to work with one another if they want to survive.

Vore, crush, adventure, quests, and best of all, an unlikely F/f relationship that will make your heart melt.


**My attempt at creating a novel with intriguing plot, character development, and worldbuilding.**


Categories: Insertion, Adventure, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Gentle, Lesbians, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 167994 Read Count: 47435
[Report This] Published: September 15 2023 Updated: May 11 2024
Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17 2024 Title: Chapter 1: The Experiment

Excellent so far! I really enjoy Jen and Kara’s dynamic. You’ve done a good job making their progression believable. I hope Kara continues to get corrupted and listens to lots more people screaming inside Jen, but I also like that she’s standing up to her.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment! The relationship between Jen and Kara is the highlight of this story. Kara's character will definitely evolve throughout the story.

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08 2024 Title: Chapter 15: Lost in Translation

Jen and Kara are so good together! Jen is my favorite kind of giantess - brutal, with a soft spot for someone special. The scene where Jen puts Kara on a throne and Kara has her break an ankle was amazing. I definitely want to see Jen dish out more punishments beyond the usual stepping on or devouring, and I hope Kara participates more.

You’ve done a good job playing up the conflict between Jen’s brutality and Kara’s pacifism. I can’t wait to see where it goes. I think it’s more likely that Kara becomes more violent than Jen stops entirely, but I suspect both will change each other. Jen has shown willingness to restrain herself, like with the villagers that pampered her, but I still don’t think she cares about most Lilliputians. I don’t see how a relationship with Kara is possible if that doesn’t change, unless Kara goes full evil too.



Author's Response:

Thank you for commenting!  Jennifer is the whole reason I set out to write this story. I'm with you, brutal giantess, but kind and endearing to someone tiny they care about, is so awesome to imagine.

I, too, am excited to see how Kara evolves with Jen as the story progresses. You can kinda already see how Jennifer is changing because of Kara. But Kara has mostly remained the same person. Maybe in the next chapter, Kara will start to change *wink* *wink*

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 12 2024 Title: Chapter 19: Hot Springs

I love Kara’s growing realization of the physical power she now possesses through her relationship with Jen.

They’re so cute together! The intimacy of this sex scene was definitely worth the wait.

I liked how you show Jen’s mouth as both a nightmare for most but heaven for Kara. You could give the same treatment to the rest of Jen’s body. Give us a POV of some poor Lilliputian soldier for whom Jen’s pussy is actually the big scary monster that’s going to eat him up. Show Jen’s fingers crushing or contorting someone then giving Kara a gentle massage.

I want to find out exactly how many Lilliputians Jen can fit up there. I wonder if Kara would like to see that too? Would Kara be comfortable with Jen adding her victims to their lovemaking?

Can’t wait to read more!

Summary:

One year has passed since four unsuspecting humans ascended to godhood, their mortal lives forever transformed. As they navigate their new roles as towering titans, they must confront the challenges of balancing their lingering humanity with the immense power and responsibilities of divinity. The world trembles beneath their feet, and the consequences of their actions shake the globe, testing their relationships with friends, family, and the very fabric of society.

Unlike most god-genre stories here, this story takes a grounded look of mortals transforming to gods who are NOT sociopathic, power-hungry megalomaniacs—all the while a deeper, secretive threat lingers in the shadows, barely hidden from the gods. Trust me, you haven’t read a story like this before. Contains the smut I love, such as breast play, crush, vore, some giant couples action, and servitude to the gods.


Categories: Slave, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Gentle, Giant, New World Order, Violent, Vore, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FM/f, FM/fm
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 76676 Read Count: 20448
[Report This] Published: December 25 2023 Updated: May 11 2024
Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Goddess Melissa

The soul-ownership aspect is really interesting. If a goddess eats someone, do they get their soul regardless of who they worshipped? How does Carlos feel about knowing he’ll be owned by his mom when he dies (or will he, if he doesn’t worship her)? Will Hailee make amends with Grace and convince her she won’t be subject to eternal damnation? Alexandra seems like a bit of a hypocrite - does she give her victims a pleasant afterlife? Great work so far!



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for your comment! You raised a lot of though-provoking questions.

In my documents folder, I have 5 pages of lore, world building, and rules that define the universe in this story. I’ve written everything about souls, the afterlife, religion, and politics across these pages and use it as my bible (heh) when I write the story. I also have an explanation of the start of the universe and the who, what, where, and why these four gods are (seemingly) out of nowhere become gods. In other words, I theory-crafted the ever living shit out of this universe before I uploaded the first chapter.

Because I’m one of those, show don’t tell writers I won’t be answering your questions here. You can always DM me on discord if you want to speak privately, and I’ll give you the low-down if you don’t mind spoilers. But I recommend sitting back for the ride. Because it’s gonna get good.