Fantastic story and one hell of a cliffhanger to leave us on. Jack assumes he's going to be abducted back to her place, but who knows? Maybe Caitlin has other plans. If she really is as angry as she seems, she may consider getting Amber involved to help get the info she wants out of Jack. Or maybe she does take him home with her for round 2. Or maybe the abduction gets stopped by something. Who knows. 

I really do hope that this story is resumed some day and we get to find out.

What a great story this was. Loved the character development that so many got, loved the plot, and the descriptions of the interactions between the various sized people were very well done. You really are a talented writer.

It's a real shame that the stories talked about in the chapter end notes never came to fruition. It feels like there is still so much more to tell about a lot of the characters here, not to mention all of the mysteries raised (how the hell did Kayla end up being some sort of god? How/why do people become Omegas? What exactly is the Fire, and is there any hope of stopping it from pushing Omegas down a very dark path?)

Regardless, even if those questions are never answered, I'm still happy with what we got. Hope Ackbar is doing well, wherever he is and whatever he's doing.

This story was a lot of fun. Despite the large cast of characters introduced in such a short time, I ended up invested in all of their lives and they way they were entwined. Dave in particular was particularly interesting; his story was so tragic and I was really hoping things would get better for him eventually.

I know this story is very, very dead and I'm probably typing into the void, but in case you ever read this, great story!

Hey, I know I'm commenting on this way late, but this is an interesting universe and a fun story you've built here. I really enjoy the interplay between the different personalities here, especially Izzellah's assertiveness.

Regarding the chapter end notes, if you're not being sarcastic, all of the titan empire stuff is on its own website (thetitanempire.com). There's a lot there. It's absolutely my favorite size-related universe that I've found.

Wow, never expected this to get updated again. This is one of the hottest stories on the site. Love the juxtaposition between their playful attitudes and the fucked up things they do. 

Well, that was a cute story. 

Enjoying this story a lot. It's interesting to explore just how hard it would be to make new friends at that size without scaring them off and the confidence issues that might arise.

How in the hell is Elliot still a virgin if he doesn't want to be? In the first story most MAJORS were wildly horny, aggressive, and desperate for a chance at a bond. Regardless of how awkward he is, he shouldn't have any problem getting laid. 

Finally caught up on all of the Omega stories; what an interesting universe this is. 

I don't know what Lexi and Alma are even gonna talk about. Alma has very consistently been portrayed as an unrepentant monster, so there's clearly no redemption to be had for her. Hopefully Lexi is able to throw off the mental and emotional burdens she's been carrying around because of Alma once and for all. After the shit she's been through, she deserves to move on.

Speaking of emotional burdens, I hope the eventual reunion between Lexi and Bridget doesn't go smoothly, at least initially. Which is weird to type, since I'd like both of them to have a happy ending in the long run! It just feels like Bridget inflicted such a massive betrayal of trust in Inheritance that it should take some real struggle to heal that relationship. If I remember right (which I might not be), Bridget didn't even really entertain the idea that Lexi was telling the truth about her innocence. Considering how close their relationship was, that comes across as deeply fucked up. I suppose the Fire could be blamed a bit, but that's still no excuse.

I don't know if you can or would even want to answer this question, but any idea what happened to Ackbar? It certainly seemed like there was more planned for the characters and mysteries from Consequences and I bet a lot of people would love to read about them. Every once in a while an author will come back after a years-long absence, so while it's certainly a longshot, I figured it wouldn't hurt to ask.

Is Bridget gonna try and get Kayla to make her a Beta (or maybe an Alpha, but Beta feels more likely)? It seems like the kind of drastic thing she'd want to do, given her mental state. I guess she could also try and get Kayla to make Lexi an Omega, but that feels less likely.

Also, Lexi seems a bit off with the whole lightning strike analogy. It's an apt comparison for what initially happened, but Bridget's response to the situation involved a bunch of conscious decisions. She decided to go through with the punishment, she decided to not believe Lexi. The lightning strike comparison ignores that Bridget had agency.