Penname: Kosmita [Contact] Real name:
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Summary: In the not-too-distant future, a drug is invented that induces growth in every organic thing that absorbs it - except human males. This is a story of a man living roughly one hundred years later - when the male gender has become nothing more than a myth, and women stand over 250 feet tall.
Categories: New World Order, Giantess, Gentle, Insertion, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61928 Read Count: 242301
[Report This] Published: April 01 2006 Updated: April 01 2006
Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 26 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Next Big Thing

Great Stroy, I couldn't stop reading it. Definetly in my top 5 of best stories I've read...and I've read a lot of GTS stories.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it.

Lo Mein by morsel Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Jenna sits down to a dinner of Chinese food.
Categories: Giantess, New World Order, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2320 Read Count: 14239
[Report This] Published: April 09 2006 Updated: April 09 2006
Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Lo Mein

Fucking awesome! Consuming thousands without a thought--now that's my type of girl. I love this story and I've read it a few times now. You should keep writing stories.

Summary: All the guys in the freshmen class get shrunk and accidentally eaten by a senior named Trish.
Categories: Giantess, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1642 Read Count: 15885
[Report This] Published: April 09 2006 Updated: April 09 2006
Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed
Date: July 06 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Do you Know What's in Your Food?

Yea, I keep revisiting this story over and over. I love the whole micro unaware vore thing. I wish there were more stories like this. Great job by the way.

Summary:

A boy and girl wind up shrunk by a device called a portisizer.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Slave, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11365 Read Count: 22673
[Report This] Published: September 24 2006 Updated: September 24 2006
Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: January 04 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Although I don't like the age of the characters, I did find it entertaining. I like the little world you created and the ruthlessness of the giantess'. Here's hoping that it will be completed...

That's Hot by Berkhart Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Paris Hilton becomes a mega sized goddess. Unable to resist her, the planet quickly falls under her rule.
Categories: Feet, Humiliation, New World Order, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1643 Read Count: 13255
[Report This] Published: November 28 2006 Updated: November 28 2006
Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 26 2014 Title: Chapter 1: That's Hot

This story is great--not because Paris Hilton--but because of her attitude towards everyone around her. I love this story and wished there was more!

Summary: In the world of Gulliver and Gullivera 500 years on the sizes are just starting to mix and live amongst each other. There were bound to be bumps along the way.
Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6905 Read Count: 76418
[Report This] Published: April 29 2009 Updated: April 29 2009
Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 16 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Short, but I loved it!!!   :)

Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 09 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I never get tired of this story. I just finished re-reading it again. Absolutely loved it!

Summary: Bret's own wife Carrie was trapped somewhere within the city -- or at least she had been in the city at the time when he shrunk it down to its present size. There was every possibility she had been wiped out by now, but Bret preferred to think she was still among the survivors. If she wasn't so tiny (and if he could actually find her) he would make sure her death was as humiliating and painful as possible. Carrie was well aware of the power her husband had to shrink things (or people) using only the power of his mind, and so she had rightly feared his wrath if she ever were caught cheating on him. Unfortunately for her, she was caught doing this and knew she would be shrunk and cruelly punished just like Bret's previous wives had been. So she fled. She traveled to the nearest city she could find and hid herself among the dense populace. She had thought she was safe and that Bret would never find her among the sea of people...
Categories: Butt, Instant Size Change, Vore, Slave, Violent, New World Order, Muscle, Insertion, Giant, Humiliation, Feet, Crush, Couples
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2728 Read Count: 25103
[Report This] Published: June 03 2009 Updated: June 03 2009
Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Dames and the Giant Peach

Read the story over at GiantessCity. Absolutely loved it! Keep up the great work Chozo!

Summary:

A tiny high school guy finally loses his virginity, with the help of a friend.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Couples , Insertion, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2371 Read Count: 32079
[Report This] Published: July 17 2009 Updated: July 17 2009
Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow I love this story! I love all the characters and the relationship between Richard and his friend. Great job, I hope to read more stories like this!

Summary: A woman uses her power of enchantment to shrink an entire city of millions to an insanely small size, and then carries it off to her bedroom for a nighttime of fun with her man.
Categories: Body Exploration, Instant Size Change, Vore, Violent, New World Order, Mouth Play, Insertion, Giant, Entrapment, Crush, Couples , Butt
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2690 Read Count: 32706
[Report This] Published: November 15 2009 Updated: November 15 2009
Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 08 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love your story Chozo. I agree that there needs to be more mixed female/male giant stories. Heck, as long as it's tagged appropriately, there shouldn't be a problem; there are certain tags I avoid.

@banfield: haters gonna hate.

Summary: In the world of Gulliver and Gullivera 500 years on the sizes are just starting to mix and live amongst each other. There were bound to be bumps along the way. This is the story of a mixed size couple.
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 77076 Read Count: 298585
[Report This] Published: April 15 2010 Updated: February 16 2013
Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 19 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Episode XI: Free At Last?

Minuss, I've re-read this story front to cover several times already. I just can't get enough of it. I sincerely hope you find some time to conclude this epic tale. I think this may be my all-time favorite story. I only hope to emulate your literally style and create worlds as fascinating as yours. Keep up the great work; I hope to read more fantastic stories from you!

Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue First Encounter

What a wonderful story. I absolutely love this world you created; there are just so many possibilities. I also enjoyed how you have a popular GTS story mixed in with the GTS-Couple scenes. It's really hard for me to describe how great this story is, and I sincerely hope you continue contributing stories, especially in the lilli-gull-brob world.

Cheers!

Summary:

The Realm of Melanie was brought to an epic close a while back. With an epic cliff hanger. It was all a dream... Or was it?! Now we get to see what happens after the end of TRoM, with the beginning of TRoK!

This story takes the same title, and the same universe, and even some of the same characters, themes, ideas, and what not from TRoM, and the TRoX series. However I hope to make this story unique in its own self. So give it a read and tell me what you think; I know it will be different from TRoM, and might attract a different crowd, but thats what I'm trying to do! Write something new, and fresh!

Chapters: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9P1, 9P2, 10P1, 10P2, 11P1, 11P2, 12P1, 12P2, 13P1, 13P2, 14P1, 14P2, 15, 16, 17, 18P1, 18P2, 19, 20P1, 20P2, 20P3, 21P1, 21P2, 22-N {U=Updated, N=New}

UPDATE (07/22/09) - (06/25/10): It's been nearly a year, and I've decided to put everything back up. So like always, give it a read, give me a note, some comments and ratings, and let me know what you think! :)
--TFK


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Gentle, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67273 Read Count: 96711
[Report This] Published: June 25 2010 Updated: July 18 2010
Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed
Date: December 11 2014 Title: Chapter 24: End of Document

I just finished reading this novel of a story today. It took me three days to read everything here plus the missing chapters over at DA. This story was posted back in 2011 and it amazes me that I didn’t see it before (I’ve been a part of this community since the late 90s when I was in my teens).

It further perplexes me that no one has reviewed this story or dropped you a comment. This seems really fucked up to me because this is a good story and a huge contribution to the community. Not to mention how fat and imaginative it is. Well, I read the story in its entirety and I’m going to let you know what I think.

I started reading the story after reading TRoM – Final Edition because I could not get enough out of that story. I love Melanie because she’s the perfect giantess in my opinion. I loved her bubbly attitude with David and her ruthlessness with her victims.

 

The Good:

Kendra was just as great. She easily fell into the role of a voracious giantess, similar to Melanie, thanks to David’s light manipulation. I’d say she fell into the role too quick, but I loved the scene of her first willing victim. I thought it was wonderful. Kendra did seem a lot like Melanie – to be honest, the first part of the story was just like TRoM – she did have her own personality in regards to her playfulness with her magical abilities. I’m recalling the moments when she was shrinking the cars and stuff. Another thing I forgot to mention when I read TRoM, is how these girls eat people, digest them, and then completely forget about them. I think that just makes these naïve girls even more terrifying. We see them questioning their behavior, yet they continue to eat people, digest them, and forget about them. I loved that.

Oh, and I can’t forget about Macy. Her introduction to vore seemed believable considering she watched her best friend do it first. I loved that part of the story where David was sitting between both girls as they devoured their victims. Macy’s trip to the fantasy world was also fun because we get to see her as a rampaging giantess – only to find out later that she was tricked into destroying the good guys (spoiler warning, lol). Towards the end of the story, I was enjoying Macy more than Kendra because of how many lives she took underfoot.

The first part of the story was my favorite. Kendra exploring her powers, shrinking people, eating people, and playing with them was fun. Introducing Macy to vore and the fun of shrinking people was also great. The only thing that would have made it better, is if Kendra shrunk Macy for fun. Not to eat her, but to have fun with her and to tease her. So yea, I liked those parts of the story.

 

The Bad:

David. I started disliking David a lot as the story progressed. In all honesty, I don’t understand why Kendra didn’t rid of him earlier. I didn’t feel or see a connection between the two. After the third time of him asking “what are you going to do today?” I was hoping Kendra would just throw him out the window. He was a shallow character, with shallow dialog, and generally unimportant to the story. Don’t get me wrong, I love the tiny accomplice scenario, but David didn’t really do anything but watch Kendra eat people. I’m just saying, if I were in his position, I would do more than just ask Kendra what she was going to do next. His dialog with Kendra almost sounded like a bad RP session.

The last part of the story – the one in fantasy land – though it was good storytelling, it didn’t feel like it belonged to the same story. I felt like I was reading TRoK and then it jumped to another story without me realizing. Please don’t take my comments as an attack. They’re nothing but. I’m just saying that the second part of the story felt out of place. Good storytelling and wonderful imagination though.

 

The Ugly:

I love how long this story was. I loved picturing Kendra and Macy in my head as they played with the shrunken people. I loved how they ate people and immediately forgot about them later. But the dialog was killing me. Something I’ve been working on myself, is trying to include conflict into my characters all the time. Even simple disagreements like arguing on what the time is, goes a long way. I say this, because in this story, all the characters agree with each other and go along their merry way. It’s boring to read two characters agreeing all the time with contrite sentences. Making them argue, disagree, get jealous, get mad – even if the disagreements are short-lived or last the whole novel. The only time I saw was a disagreement was the tiny ‘tiff between Macy and Tom – and that disagreement only existed because Tom was to be written off. (I did like how Macy ate him along with her sandwich though). Anyway, make your characters more human by instilling human emotions. Even nice people get pissed off from time to time.

 

Closing:

Oh wow, I didn’t mean to write so much! I love this story. Don’t take my criticism to heart. If I didn’t like this story, I wouldn’t have read the whole thing and typed up a thousand word review. The Realm of _____ stories are my favorite thing right now, even though they’re not super violent. (I like stupid violence and graphic shit.) I want to encourage you to write more and perfect your writing craft. Judging by past reviews and other comments people have made, it seems that you’ve come along way with your writing. Over 7 years of writing and perfecting one story? That’s some dedication!

I wish I could shake your hand and pat you on the back. It’s been an amazing ride reading all these stories and making Kendra, Macy, and Melanie come alive in my head. Now I’m sad that I don’t have anything else to read.

Oh, and fuck David, lol.



Author's Response:

Wow, I am speechless. Really. Where do I begin?

First I would like to sincerely thank you for your willingness to write such a well thought out review after reading my stories in their rather incomplete state. I will take your words and improve upon my work starting pretty much immediately. After all, I am still rewriting The Realm of Melanie from the ground up, almost, and adding loads of new things, so expect more chapters from there soon. As far as The Relm of Kendra, I haven't touched it in a few years, and as soon as I inish TRoM I will begin work on TRoK in the same regard. I will take everything I have learned over the years and build a newer, better story.

Dialogue: You are 100% correct. That is something I struggled with massively, and my editor did his best to try to help me along the way. I however just suck at it. But I myself have become rather learned, educated, what ever, more experienced, you catch my drift I hope; and I will be improving on it a thousand fold. The bad is a necessary section, I agree completely. I started disliking my own character myself, and he is scheduled for a massive overhaul. I have after all changed some fundamental aspects of him in TRoM from 3rd Edition to 5th Edition, and plan on adding even more as time goes on. Getting into TRoK I have even more adjustments I plan on making. The ugly, again, thank you for your words. I need critiscm, what people don't like, what they do, etc. Folks are much more prone to tell what they like, than what they don't, and I appreciate what you've written. It will help me I promise you that. I plan on rewriting all the dialogue, and seasoned readers might catch a few similarities, but it's going to be completely different.

The Fantasy Bit: I was at a loss for what to do there, and I might edit it pretty heavily to drive the story towards it more. I've so far taken out that aspect of TRoM and I am trying to decide how to best add it back into the main story line. To be absolutely honest TRoM had no plot line, it was just day by day, fun stuff every day, followed by a trippy ending and a psuedo cliff hanger. TRoK had a story line, kind of, some progression I thought, and was going to build up to a final plot point. Which I guess I executed quite poorly because of how I let my characters develope by themselves. I will definitely give it my best shot to take back the reigns and reel in their free wheeling character sheets, and fix the progression of mys story.

All in all, this is not the end, really. I am still editing TRoM, and I will start editing TRoK when TRoM is finished. And I have a third story I have been working on slowly over the past few months that will follow chronologically after TRoK. It will, I hope, tie into the first two, and bring about a fun and exciting conclusion to my non-story. TRoM is currently at 130k words in my word document, and I am only 2/5th if the way done editing. TRoK is almost 120k and I expect it to grow tremendously (because TRoK is on Revision 1 right now, and TRoM, at Revision 1, was at 96k, and now it's at 130k at Revision 5. Can you believe that?). And my third novel I plan on making of equal length, but it will be down the line.

Again, thank you so much for reviewing my work. I have had my account for a long time as well, and I stupidly deleted the First Edition coppies of both of my novels from this site. I sincerely wish I hadn't done that, but in our youth we make mistakes. Now that I have grown up a bit, I am working on making these as best as I can so that I cn move onto bigger and better things. I haven't contributed much to our community, just these stories; and I am always greatful to hear that someone has enjoyed them so much.

Thank you.
--HK

Summary: A teenage girl is just a bit different from the rest of her family, and her aunt is coming to visit.
Categories: Adult 30-39, Giantess, Adventure, Feet, Gentle, Incest, Humiliation, Maternal, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4605 Read Count: 22101
[Report This] Published: August 15 2010 Updated: August 15 2010
Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Family Matters

I really liked this story. You should make it longer :-)

Mega Alyssa by GP10Ellison Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Alyssa becomes a giantess
Categories: Giantess, Crush, Entrapment, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Mega Alyssa
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6937 Read Count: 35021
[Report This] Published: February 19 2011 Updated: February 19 2011
Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

How have I not read this story until now? And why hasn't anybody commented on it? This story was fucking awesome. I love the growth by vore theme. That last scene in the stadium... Amazing! I really feel like you're an underrated author, you should really consider writing more stories. :-)



Author's Response:

I have written more stories but due to there being so many sites etc. I decided to focus on publishing them in eBook form on Amazon.

 

Just look for GP Ellison there and you'll find my more recent stuff

Summary: Jack the lonely science geek finds himself suddenly the BIG man on campus after an experiment goes wrong...
Categories: Unaware, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Giant, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7931 Read Count: 68298
[Report This] Published: March 01 2011 Updated: March 01 2011
Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it! Please continue with story, I'm really eager to read what happens to the girls!

Summary:

A cosmic glitch causes millions of almost microscopic people to appear in a house shared by three unaware college girls. The results are pretty much what you'd expect.


Categories: Butt, Crush, Feet, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4158 Read Count: 37151
[Report This] Published: June 03 2011 Updated: July 01 2011
Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 06 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Awakening

Nice, please continue! I love micro/unaware stories :)

Summary:

It has been nearly five hundred years since Gulliver first made his famous voyage. The divergent world’s of Gulliver have merged to become one. Improved technology has recently proven the Brobdingnagans, the Lilliputians, and the Humans are all in fact genetically human. The only difference is that certain size genes are expressed more forcefully in some strains of people then in others.

This new technological enlightenment hasn't quite made it into the law books. The bigger sects of man still look at their smaller cousins as less to the point that the Brobdingnagans actually consume the Lilliputians as a type of garnish. This story is a prequel to all of the stories so far completed in this universe.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 62649 Read Count: 162240
[Report This] Published: September 23 2011 Updated: September 03 2012
Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I've read this story a couple times through already. I love the quality of the storytelling and I love the world the author created. The scale of size between the brob and lil is my very aspect of the story. Hope to see you conclude your story soon, minuss!

Summary:

This story is based on the world created by the author minuss between Brobdingnagans & Lilliputians, specifically between a Lilliputian female and two different Brobdingnagan females (so far).


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Crush, Lesbians, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36589 Read Count: 151542
[Report This] Published: November 24 2011 Updated: June 10 2015
Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed
Date: October 07 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Brobdignagans & Lilliputians Online Dating

I'm a huge fan of the Jonathan Swift Universe (if you couldn't tell by my writings). I have visited this story on many occasions because there are some scenes and scenarios that I find--not only fascinating--but incredibly hot. My beef with the story is that you gloss over details and move on to other actions too quickly. My advice would be to slow down. You know the old writing adage, “show, don’t tell”. In this story, you are telling me what is happening. You are telling me what the characters are saying. And you are telling me what the character’s inclinations are outright.

Don’t get me wrong, I’m loving this story and eager to read more. I’m just offering some advice to make it even better. Please continue the story whenever you get a chance!

By the way, have you seen my interactive story that takes place in the same universe? I tried sending you a PM, but this site is so fucking broken, ugh.

The Foursome by Benton Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

My girlfriend Elana and I decide to shrink down Amanda, an unwitting female co-worker of mine, to take home and play with. Elana then adds a new element to the mix as she shrinks down Vince, a random young man she sees on the street, to add to the fun. FM/fm


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Couples , Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5302 Read Count: 17539
[Report This] Published: April 10 2012 Updated: April 10 2012
Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed
Date: July 30 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The Foursome

Neat! I recently discovered this story and enjoyed it immensely. I really liked the Elana's personality, I thought she was a cute giantess.



Author's Response:

Nice that you stumbled upon this! I made this humble story in 2010 and still think it's pretty neato.