Penname: bailey69 [Contact] Real name: tommybailey
Member Since: March 12 2017
Membership status: Member
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Summary:

A quiet and innocuous young woman is far older and far more than she seems. Yet she seems quite comfortable idling about her city and sharing an apartment with a long time friend. But what she does with the powers she hides is anything but innocious or innocent. 

 

Story I recieved a good suggestion to write from a lad on 4chan. Contains dickgirl and is largely focused on it. 

 

As always, suggestions, comments, and critique always apreciated.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Couples , Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Futanari, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9858 Read Count: 91922
[Report This] Published: August 05 2014 Updated: September 01 2014
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed
Date: May 19 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: An Ideal View

Idid'nt like the story you made the people to small and to many why have them in the story it read like her buy her self and of coarse  the lotion  

Summary:

Tim is the neighborhood punk, torturing his family and neighbors every chance he gets. But a new 'Scared Straight' campaign by supernatural forces is going to make him atone... By putting him in very unpleasant circumstances, transforming and shrinking him as they see fit.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Unaware, Butt, Entrapment, Incest, Odor, Scat
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4311 Read Count: 71564
[Report This] Published: August 22 2014 Updated: September 04 2014
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed
Date: May 22 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Don't be an asshole to your sister. (Part 1!)

I do'nt like transformation stories,when it is one sided it's not interesting,when one person is unaware and the other is that makes a story boring 

Summary:

Me and my sister are taken into a building for an experiment on us. Turns out the experiment is done to help my sister to stop me annoying her. This involves a little change and a new purpose in my life.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Odor, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Challenges: As Giantess butt toy
Challenges: As Giantess butt toy
Challenges: As Giantess butt toy
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4644 Read Count: 227720

[Report This] Published: September 14 2014 Updated: December 11 2014
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed star
Date: May 17 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The experiment

I would have liked it but you had to have the bro and sis hate each other why do that that ruind the story for me,why are brothers alwas the bully.

Aaaa by Admiral Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Highschool
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 335 Read Count: 43083

[Report This] Published: September 24 2014 Updated: October 29 2014
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed
Date: May 23 2017 Title: Aaaa

there is nothing to rate , it just started

Summary:

The Shrinking Disease is not inherently fatal, but disobeying the relative giants who find you certainly can be.  This is a lesson that the small suburban Cooke Family was forced to learn at the hands of their immense and Immune neighbors.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Warning: This material is intended for mature audiences only.


Categories: Entrapment, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Slave, Unaware, Odor, Mouth Play, Legwear, Instant Size Change, Humiliation, Giant, Couples , Footwear, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89269 Read Count: 548626
[Report This] Published: April 01 2015 Updated: July 12 2016
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed
Date: April 14 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

it was also very boring, it was to long about how horrable the pepoles life are

Reviewer: bailey69 Signed
Date: April 14 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

this story didnt make any sence

Summary:

A Neko recieves a very special birthday gift from an anonymous stranger. what ever it is though, it's sure to give her plenty of things to do.

 

Birthday gift for one of my favorite artists. Contains Neko's and Futa, along with graphic details.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Futanari, Furry, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Slave, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7334 Read Count: 35551
[Report This] Published: June 16 2015 Updated: June 16 2015
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed
Date: May 19 2017 Title: Chapter 1: A birthday to remember

there is to much lez which im not against but come on were is the boy girl at plus all the blood and gore kind of ruins the story unless you like murdering,I sure do'nt, why not keep it about xxx

Detention by FTFeet Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

A high school freshman finds himself in a smelly position after disrupting the class. 


Categories: Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10372 Read Count: 70861
[Report This] Published: August 17 2015 Updated: June 22 2016
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed
Date: June 23 2017 Title: Chapter 3: School of Feet

It's a very boring story just some kid every body hated there's nothing to the plot oops sorry there was no plot



Author's Response:

There are some who want to read action. I'm such a person. Not one to be bored by endless monotony. 

Summary:

Kayla decides to get back at Jaden. So she shrinks him. And with the amount of people who know this increasing. She must decide who to trust. And who to crush.


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Breast Enlargement, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 734 Read Count: 28358
[Report This] Published: November 22 2015 Updated: November 22 2015
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed
Date: March 21 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- a new change

what the story was about"well there was no story, it weren't worth reading unless it was a joke,it ain't funny,I can't rate part of a chapter!   

Summary:

A teacher finds herself in an unusual sitation. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4166 Read Count: 47580
[Report This] Published: February 15 2016 Updated: February 17 2016
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I think it's one good story keep it up have him keep his back bone make the teacher fight for what she wants and do'nt have him being obedient  like a pet that is the most used story line ever

Summary:

A nice little hub for all my commissioned stories


Categories: BBW, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Middle Age (50+), Butt, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37635 Read Count: 123354
[Report This] Published: May 14 2016 Updated: June 19 2016
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed
Date: May 09 2017 Title: Chapter 7: A Pet's Life

this was a very bad read,was this teddy a dog,cat or a pet rat you can't tell what he is ,I did'nt like because there's nothing to the story,no plot or story line .   I can't rate it because there's no story



Author's Response:

This was what he wanted. He very specifically wanted a story about nothing. Just a bit of size with someone treated like a pet lol

Summary:

A boy wakes up to find himself at the mercy of a strange woman. Snippets of their daily lives together chronicle his attempt to make sense of this new world where chicks have dicks and demons own studio apartments.

Based on a commission piece done by Modeseven at: superamiuniverse.tumblr.com/image/125200523685


Categories: Odor, Giantess, Butt, Entrapment, Futanari, Humiliation, Slave, Body Exploration
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7950 Read Count: 27778
[Report This] Published: May 21 2016 Updated: May 27 2016
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 20 2017 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions

I LIKE THE STORY,SHE ZANY WHICH I LIKED ABOUT THE STORY, TO MAKE A LONG STORY SHORT I WISH YOU WOULD HAVE WRITTEN  MORE THEN TWO CHAPTERS  

Summary:

Lanaya is sent by the Hidden Ones to investigate the rumored 'other world', but work quickly turns into play.

 

*This story contains graphic content and is not suited for minors.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Unaware, Crush, Destruction, Futanari, Humiliation, Nose, Odor, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3867 Read Count: 36741
[Report This] Published: August 29 2016 Updated: August 29 2016
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed
Date: May 21 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Discovery

what was the plot oh yah there was'nt one' when you make pepole specks that does'nt make a good story it's just her that's all  

Summary:

I've always had a gambling problem and it's gotten me into trouble before, but now I am definitely in over my head. I made one last bet with a friend, if I lose, I live on her as a parasite for a month to "learn a lesson." What will I do once her girlfriend and my sister get involved too? Can my mite sized body survive a month at the hands and bodies of three playful and taunting women?


Categories: Watersports, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Muscle, Nose, Odor, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11143 Read Count: 168721
[Report This] Published: September 06 2016 Updated: November 10 2016
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed starhalf-star
Date: March 21 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Annie Gets Her Fun

Chris was way to small,there was no enter action between chris an the girls that made it uneventful,one on one would have been good but like I said he was to small so there was no plot to the story

Summary:

The positively beautiful sisters of Omega Pi are a selective sorority who possess a very curious secret, that being, they sustain their otherworldly looks by stealing the lives and life energy of unsuspecting young men.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 128 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146327 Read Count: 910197
[Report This] Published: September 21 2016 Updated: September 10 2020
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed starstar
Date: June 23 2017 Title: Chapter 71: Jailbreak

I hope you don't have the evil girls win after following the hero who has gone so far and gets revenge agianst his evil mother or both mothers and sister they are the worst a parents can be.P.S.I hope the cannable girl gets hers bad she is a murderer,murderers are the lowest if you deside to write somemore



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. We'll see how this unfolds

Summary:

In probably the second-best part of one of the greatest Undertale fanfics of all time (Alphys' Bad School Day), Alphys and company reach the final portion of their very first day of junior high school in Hotland; why, Gaster's biology class, of course!

However, just like everything else that ends up happening in this story, the class' subject matter of the day is nowhere near what you would expect from any normal school; in fact, the students' assignment for the day is none other than to strap on a set of nanosuits, shrink themselves down to practically microscopic size and venture inside Toriel's body so that they can explore her beautifully vast and complex system of internal organs, and perhaps even theoretically learn a thing or two about how said organs work in the process!

Of course, however, the students' actual intentions during the assignment are anything but educational; in fact, as it turns out, Gaster's plan the whole time was actually to have Alphys and her friends sneak inside Toriel's brain and take control over her body to make her have the sexual intercourse of her life with her husband Asgore in the janitor's closet!

Do I really need to explain how fucked-up this is?
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Breasts, BBW, Body Exploration, Middle Age (50+), Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Furry, Futanari, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Nose, Odor, Unaware, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6511 Read Count: 12485
[Report This] Published: October 15 2016 Updated: October 15 2016
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed half-star
Date: March 28 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Alphys & Friends: Toriel's Inside Story

this story sence no made,it was to weird to read to be interesting!

Summary:

My name is Adrien, and I live in a strange society; a homophobic society, xenophobic, differentophobic (if you prefer). Furthermore, there are rumors about existential mutant lifeforms in our world, which doesn't help to suppress the fear of the other that exists in everyone's mind. After complicated junior high school years, I invite you to come and discover the world I found myself in after awaking in a strange place.

It's a story mainly based on gentle interactions, but there will be passages more violent (sadistic perhaps).

My first ever story !

 

~Thanks to the unbelievable help of a friend, here is the translation of my original story's first chapter : Mutant Day !!
It has always been a dream of mine to translate one of my stories in English, and here we are ! Thank you so much benblue20  !~


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5170 Read Count: 23943
[Report This] Published: December 04 2016 Updated: January 05 2017
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed
Date: March 23 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 + 6

I couldnt make heads or tails out of the story or the begining,what was it about 



Author's Response:

From the very start of the story or just these last 2 chapters ?

If you're speaking about the story in its entirety, I guess you could say that this story follows the life of a young man named Adrien, as he struggles with day to day life, being a teenager who doesn't bend under general social tendencies such as homophobia or xenophobia. But as he was having a party to celebrate his 18th anniversary, he blacked out. 

These last 2 chapters follow him as he wokes up, and makes some strange discoveries...

Please be indulgent with the story so far, I am VERY aware that my first chapters were rather bad until then, but it'll get better with time. It was my first story and I learned to write along with the chapters passing by :)

Also, you'll see that things will get progressively clearer as Adrien begins to understand the world in which he livres in.

Summary:

Luna wants to get a gift for her date with Mirana, and she knows the perfect place : Crystal Maiden's shop.


This story contains adult content. 


Categories: Vore, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Futanari, Scat, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1037 Read Count: 9982
[Report This] Published: January 13 2017 Updated: January 13 2017
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed half-star
Date: May 21 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The Shop

why do writers alwas make people out of specks' there is never inner action I mean death is a big turn off to 

Ominous Future by Lexander Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Follow David as his life falls apart!


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18505 Read Count: 19374
[Report This] Published: February 18 2017 Updated: March 04 2017
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed
Date: March 12 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Shattered Reality

If your going to put out a chapter once a week,don't make it so boring and slow.So many people will write a story that's drawn out where you lose enteress or write a couple of lines promising a hot mouth watering story but never going beyond those few lines. A chapter a week needs to have more then getting out of bed an to your sister's room so far I'm sorry but it's way to slow! I can't rate the story because it's not a story yet' I hope you do keep writing because you do have talent  



Author's Response:

Thank you for giving me some criticism on my writing. I do agree that the pacing of action in chapter 1 and 2 is fairly slow and is something I am working on. Now adressing the lack of "hot mouth watering story", my intent is for David's life is to progressivly change for the worse so action will increase with most chapters.

Summary: In what can only be described as the much more erotically-focused Parappa The Rapper equivalent to the infamous Motherly Fuckery from the Undertale fandom, Parappa shrinks himself and goes inside Lammy's head, and...well, I'm not even going to spoil how shit ends up going from there; just see for yourself, and be appalled.
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, BBW, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Fantasy, Feet, Furry, Futanari, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Muscle, Nose, Odor, Scat, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19045 Read Count: 30881
[Report This] Published: February 20 2017 Updated: February 20 2017
Reviewer: bailey69 Signed
Date: May 21 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

this story do'nt make any sence at all' it's not worth  reading because at all' a person should under stand a story there reading this one you can'nt