Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed
Date: July 17 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Annie
I just read through this story. I don't usually read non-vore stories. This one was very enjoyable. Your writing is good and compelling. I enjoy the characters, especially Annie as a wonderful gentle giantess.
At the same time, something should happen. It seems to be heading somewhere, but it's not going very fast. In fact, it almost seems to be ending in an unsatisfying place. Clearly you've got something going on with feet and trust. I'd certainly like to see both of those aspects reach some sort of fruition.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to write a review.
I'm sorry you feel the story went in an unsatisfying direction. I'm actually planning on wrapping it up in the next chapter. The whole time I was writing this story, I had a plot outline in mind that changed as I worked on it. There were several points during that process where the story could have gone in a drastically different direction, but didn't, due to me considering user feedback and what I felt the story demanded. Part of that would have involved more fetish content. But the story took on a life of its own, and changed into a weird work of metaphorical self-therapy about my macrophilia. I'd like to think that some of the story's apparent popularity comes from people subconsciously relating to that. Anyway, that's why the story's focus shifted more to Will and Annie's innocent relationship, which I guess is a metaphor for self-acceptance, and away from the fetish stuff (which I do enjoy). While I know the story isn't perfect, and certainly there's more I could have done with it, I think I pretty much said what I wanted to with it, and I'm pretty happy with Will's character development. Again, thanks for reading and leaving feedback. Glad you liked Annie and my writing.