Nice little chapter.  Ominous cliffhanger.  I was thinking that as a parting gift for all that he's endured, that whoever girl he ends up with in the end should have the power to change his size.  If its a girl he likes, he'd enjoy it, and I'm sure she'd enjoy it.  Keep up the good work!

You've touched on this a little bit in your other stories, but what about sexual relationships?  I recall that GTS Goddesses can't change their size, which makes those kind of relationships difficult at best.  But I wonder if their assistants are allowed to get small every so often?  Maybe a weekend pass to visit the boyfriend?

But wasn't said earlier that the invulnerability wears off?  Did Cheryl forget to mention this in the hopes that Mark would get killed?  Would Emily believe him if he told her? Keep up the good work!

I was going to comment after the last chapter, but I'm glad I waited. 

I like to immerse myself into stories; put myself in the lead character's shoes.  So I felt the worry and anger that the main character was probably feeling.  And the shock that his mother didn't seem to be worried about the daughter's resistance to her "betrothal". 

There appear to be some issues that Sandra and the Narrator need to work out.  Despite the hate sex, will they?   Or are his concerns brushed aside so casually?  I guess I'm still trying to wrap my head around how the sexes relate to eachother.  Are men really just toys, and are treated as such?  Are their opinions still taken into consideration?  Your other stories took place during and just after the BOS, so there was still alot of "equality" in the relations.  Probably a hold over from before.

This is the first time I've heard about any kind of telepathic link.  Is that a one way connection?

I bet Julia's going to get injured really badly or killed, clearing the way for her younger sister to inherit the throne; whom will become just as violent as her mother and sister after having the spice.

If its true that killing someone while you're on red spice, absorbs their soul and makes you more powerful, ithe mass killings make sense now.  You had me convinced that Red spice turned women into homicidal monsters.  Granted, I still don't approve of the wholesale slaughter and cheapening of human life.  But now if there's a motive behind the killing besides spreading fear . . .   It gives me hope that Livia can maintain her self control and still be a "good person".  If she can accumulate her power through volunteers and criminals, she might not fall too far behind her sister.

Good chapter and very informative!

Still doing great!  I just needed to point out that Trish is Bob's sister-in-law, not niece.  I noticed that mentioned a number of times in this chapter.

Well, that's sad.  Unless you plan to surprise us, we've just been told how this will end.  Miserably.  No future, not even as a toy.  Its still early in the story, maybe they'll be an unexpected plot twist.

I can't say I'm a big fan of this genre (gentle fan here), but occasionally you drop something good in. Much of what follows in personal opinion, but some of it could make the story better overall.

A criticism I have is the duration of punishment.  You never said what it was, but the summary indicates indefinitely.  No fair court would make the punishment open ended.  Its either life-long, death, or certain conditions that need to be met for release (usually a period of time with a possibility of early release).  This would affect the mindset of the characters.  Life imprisonment would mean Scott has nothing more to lose and fall to depression, insanity, suicide, or escape.  A limited duration imprisonment would force him to take the punishments and try to be on his best behavior with him looking towards hopefully better things in the future.

Unless his lawyer lied to him (possible if his mother is involved).  He mentioned that this punishment is better and shorter then what he would have received normally.  Just didn't want you to forget that point.

An observation I should make in Scott's defense is that this has been brewing for a long time.  His punishments have been abusive and its his strength of will that hasn't caused him to go insane, which any of us would have done after the first time or two. 

I don't know how much longer this series will go for, or even if you have an ending in mind for Scott.  I do hope that he'll be able to eventually step away from this and have a happy life.

I figured that shrinking Sandra was what would happen.  I was initially worried about his time with Sandra, but as the chapters went on, it looked like he was gaining some sort of peace and acceptance of it.  Unlike when his wife possessed him.  I bet Jennifer is going to take Sandra, since I can see the 2 shrinkees hooking up if they were left together.  So I have mixed feelings about it.  They way Sandra treated him was close to how his wife should have been treating him(I prefer a little gentleness though).  We can only hope that his wife starts treating him a bit more like a shrunken spouse then a china doll.  Good stuff.  Its going to be tough to wait for part 3.