Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: December 04 2019
Title: Chapter 1: Start
I love this story as it cleverly opens story lines to any scenario. My concern is that it may shortchange character development and plot development. That being said, I really look forward to more! A few ideas...I would love a footplay story where it goes beyond just crushing. Maybe the tiny people in the city fly helicopters up to explore her giant sole and toes before she uses her feet to play with the tiny buildings. A second is to have a cruise ship scenario while she is taking a bath. It would be like a little bath toy for her. Finally, I'd love a story where the tiny guy requesting the session doesn't realize until it begins that he knows the girl. Maybe his girlfriend or sister? Just some thoughts!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
I am working on chapter 2 and it is almost finished. It will probably be online in a few hours.
The next chapter will be heavily foot related but you can expect a lot of different scenarios than just crushing but at the start crushing will be the main focus because that is what the app is for.
But soon natalie and the other characters will get creative with its use;)
I also have the overall plotlines for 4 characters ready so there will be some parts were the clients meet some familiar faces!