Reviewer: gtsfan4321 Signed
Date: December 28 2018
Title: AP Chemistry Final Project
Great story. I really like the premise and set-up, definitely a realistic story. Would be amazing to get a bonus alternative ending/extra chapter where she kept him as a foot slave or humiliated/played with him a bit more with her feet. Maybe the presentation goes as planned, but she decides to keep him (and maybe later somehow he eventually gets absorbed). Or, maybe insert a chapter: the teacher was out sick that day, so presentations were postponned and he had to stay with her for the whole weekend before the eventual group presentation. Regardless, awesome story! look forward to more. My only commentary is that it ended so quickly, would have love more interaction before the very end.
Author's Response: Thanks for your input! I heavily contemplated writing an alternate version where she keeps him as a tiny foot slave for a while, but I wanted to ensure two things: that while Katie was being friendly to Adam, it was clear that she didn't care about him all that much, and 2. Their foot interactions were completely non-sexual to her and only to him, making it that much more humiliating to him when he is trapped at the end and she just goes about her life. I will probably write similar stories in the future!
I also realize that the ending was abrupt, but I was basing this off the image I linked at the end and wanted to leave his long term fate somewhat open to the imagination.