Penname: soniti54 [Contact] Real name: Chris
Member Since: June 12 2008
Membership status: Member
Bio:

age 27


currently a college student, hate english, love creative writing (more like reading other people's creative writing)


I have a great attention span, but I seem to have misplaced it...


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Nova Force by Ginbug Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

In the future, a Marine is paired with a giantess neko as an unlikely team. They travel through the universe in search of creatures in need..what was supposed to be a quiet 3 month wait for the Marine will soon turn into a conflict beyond their wildest dreams.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114268 Read Count: 368980
[Report This] Published: January 10 2011 Updated: July 29 2011
Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Captivating story from the start. So much so that I practically starting making notes early on in preperation for the review, and due to my laziness, will be presented as such hah.

Excellent arguements supporting character beliefs, views and justifying actions.

Thrilling episodes, there's little I find more thrilling than some contagious blood thirsty zombies.

English isn't the official extraterrestrial language.

Fisc is a super cool guy.

Intense physical and emotional conflicts as well as complicated romance. Runo wasn't so much a bad kind of guy as he was the wrong kind of guy. I found this impactful because an antagonistic character does not always have to be a "bad" person, and I like that it's debatable who had really wronged who in the relationship.

Richard's hometown is in virginia, he's my homie.

Poor Will, bet he posted on fmylife.com after Ch30.

Crab's personality is epic.

Kikata deleting her messages to Richard in Ch43, god how I know that awkward feeling lol

The psychological aspect of chapter 39 felt off, considering that in a dream it's typical to either believe it's 100% figment of your imagination or 100% reality, it's hard to mentally convince someone that you're a small x% of reality within their dominating x% of imagination. It felt like there was a bit of a skip over the struggle and frustration Richard may have faced and the disbelief and denial of Kikata. I also imagined she'd have felt much more self-conscious, or coping with such, after accepting Richard's explanation, unless she really, REALLY had absolutely nothing to hide... Maybe it's just me, I have lots to hide... "Don't read that book! Put down that map! Don't you dare open that door!!" c:


It's very clear a lot of effort was put into this story and it's amazing! I'm surprised it doesn't have more attention and ashamed I didn't find it sooner!

Summary:

An adventurous teen who just happens to be five inches tall has been stuck in homeschool all his life.  When he finally enters public high school and a new world of friends, bullies, and cliques, he quickly discovers challenges even bigger than he could've imagined.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Couples, Giant, Legwear, Odor, Unaware, Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 82 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 179462 Read Count: 1050412
[Report This] Published: September 01 2011 Updated: May 26 2019
Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 16 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Pick-up Lines

Glad to see there's still progress on this story! Your main characters and even your minor characters have very real and relatable personalities that make it easy to get emersed in Peter's story. I even had fun re-reading the chapters I had already gone through!

Great work!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Glad you're enjoying it. There will be more progress on it at some point.

Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Take Stock

This is an interesting tale. I'm impressed how you've kept it so lively given the setting and environment.

The characters are excellent, and that to me is just as important as being able to express the entire story. Both of which are being done very well here-- 5 stars

 

Hope to see future additions!



Author's Response: Thanks very much; I'm glad you're enjoying it. I've been criminally slow at updating as of late but there will be more eventually.

Summary:

As the world slowly starts to change, we take a look at a slowly evolving world through a single family's perspective. (Step Family. No actual incest.)


Categories: Butt, Feet, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36531 Read Count: 306187
[Report This] Published: December 17 2011 Updated: September 15 2012
Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 30 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The New Law

I have to start with three words: What a tease!
By the end of chapter 12 I was convinced Nicole and Jenna would never collect on Dan and Kevin's misfortune.

I found this to be very plot driven, which could be dull, but not unwelcome. The characters were unique, consistent, and did well to build an entertaining atmosphere through interactions and relationship.

Very well written story. I only wish there were a chapter 16 or epilogue, but all good things must come to an end, so I'll just be happy that it was completed. :]

Unlucky by Cheezo Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Robert must learn how to survive at one inch tall when a chemistry experiment goes horribly wrong.

 


Categories: Butt, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Insertion, Maternal, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4715 Read Count: 60054
[Report This] Published: May 17 2012 Updated: August 05 2012
Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 31 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Casey's "prank"

Fun read! Rob's giggling amused me :P

 

Hope to see more in the future

Summary:

Decided to re-do one of my stories


Categories: Scat, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Giant, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9478 Read Count: 13700
[Report This] Published: May 27 2012 Updated: May 27 2012
Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story, I like the style. :)

It's great how Ryan has a logically dictated train of thought. He's a nice well rounded character, I have to wonder what he would have been like had one of the others survived to interact with him...

It would be interesting to see a story like this made up of date by date journal entries from both perspectives. The bit at the end seemed to make Mary's personality feel more 3 dimensional and justified.

Good work, this was fun!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much.

I did plan have the other survive for longer in the original, but it didn't turn out very good, so I changed it to what it is now.

Besides, my favorite scenario is a one on one.

I wanted to keep the fact that Mary knew about his journal a surprise for the end, also Ryan didn't have a way to know what day it was.

 

Thanks for commenting.

To Use A Muse by Emma Gear Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: A frustrated writer can't seem to get anything done, and receives some much needed assistance from her muse.
Categories: Giantess, Butt, Crush, Feet, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1883 Read Count: 7054
[Report This] Published: July 23 2012 Updated: July 23 2012
Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's been awhile since I've stumbled upon a story of yours, I tend to expect a very unique perspective from you and I wasn't disappointed!

 

Very fun read, hope your inspiration comes little easier than the girl in the story.

Summary:

Well since Dead or Alive 5 is coming out soon, I thought, of a great way to make

a size fetish story for those who love the game. I love Dead or Alive girls and I wish to

see more of size fetish stories and arts about their hot girls XD


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Couples , Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Toilet, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8224 Read Count: 11658
[Report This] Published: September 22 2012 Updated: September 22 2012
Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 29 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Ayane's daily life

What can I say, I love this type of story and I love DOA. Can't go wrong when combining the two!

Also I found the personalities given to the characters to be entertaining :)

Summary:

A innocent student is shrunken by a fellow student.


Categories: Slave, Butt, Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 540 Read Count: 6420
[Report This] Published: September 27 2012 Updated: September 27 2012
Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 29 2012 Title: Chapter 1: And It Begins

Nice! Motive is weak, but that's not always important.
Interesting how all the other students seem to be aware of her capabilities. Certainly a good start.

Nova Force: 2 by Ginbug Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

A continuation of my story Nova Force:http://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=2043 which is also hosted my my Deviant art account: http://ginbug.deviantart.com/ you can also check out some artwork based on the story as well. (I strongly suggest reading the first to get an idea of who the characters are). 

 

Essentially the story is as follows: Richard and his giant sized girlfriend Kikata, an alien, are back at it. The disappearance of a friend leads them into an investigation that will, once again, change their lives forever. 

 

As for teh giantess stuff, you can expect: sex, gentle, playful, not so gentle, vore, mouth play, MALE giants (no sexual interaction on the page.), and lots of sci fi fun. 


Categories: Growing Woman, Adventure, Body Exploration, Breast Enlargement, Couples , Crush, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Insertion, Vore, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69325 Read Count: 125702
[Report This] Published: November 12 2012 Updated: April 29 2013
Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

You always seem to have just the right words in just the right place. It really is masterful work.

An engaging sequel with some very interesting characters:

Johnny and Sangela make quite the interesting pair and potential rivalry. I'm surprised I was able to like them so much despite their bitter bias towards Nova Force, no doubt due to how well they interact with one another.

I also look forward to seeing how Atrix, Issac and the ship's AI will develop in future chapters given their unique circumstances.

I haven't been this interested in a particular world since Felarya. You've done a phenominal job creating such a structurally stable and interesting universe here!

Summary:

Jake is the youngest member of an all girl family, two devious older sisters and an overly protective mother. If he thought his home life was rough before, how bad will things get when he shrinks thanks to a freak accident and is at the mercy of all three of them, each with their own feelings towards him, and with their own method of coping with his new situation.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Body Exploration, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Maternal, Toilet, Violent, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5293 Read Count: 112661
[Report This] Published: November 12 2012 Updated: April 20 2013
Reviewer: soniti54 Signed
Date: November 15 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This has great potential!

The mood was set very nicely, and the characters are both well defined and promising. The dialogue also flows very naturally which helps in their developement.

I'll look forward to future additions!

Summary:

Cala, a girl with a low IQ, drinks a growing potion. She grows when she gets upset and rampages through Denver


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet, Growing Woman, Toilet
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8240 Read Count: 70171
[Report This] Published: November 15 2012 Updated: November 15 2012
Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 15 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Unique, amusing, and well written. The ending seems inconclusive, but it's there. :]

Well done!

Reviewer: soniti54 Signed
Date: November 15 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, as an added note, you should probably up the rating, it's not quite "G" material lol

Author's Response:

I fixed the rating. Indeed, I forgot to change it, thanks for telling me.

Summary:

Joy, a tiny person who lives in the  the kingdom of Arcken during the Medieval era, has to find a way to survie from the rest of the world.  Can she trust the princess of the lands, or is she as bad as the subjects that live there?


Categories: Watersports, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Unaware, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore, Scat
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40261 Read Count: 101688
[Report This] Published: November 16 2012 Updated: April 14 2013
Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 21 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is an interesting one, I'd like to read more sometime. Though I think I've liked all of your stories, so I wouldn't mind if you decided to work on something else either lol

Summary:

In an effort to permanently escape from his real life, Gage performs a dangerous hack that enhances his power far beyond the Level 100 Cap found in the hyper-realistic video game, Perfect Dimension. In exchange, he happily sacrifices his ability to return to the real world... but just past the 100+ threshold, there lies dangers that Gage hadn't bargained for.


Categories: Adventure, Butt, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44284 Read Count: 225607
[Report This] Published: April 09 2013 Updated: November 19 2013
Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 04 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah, I can imagine how being underaged would have a heavier impact and possibly facilitate stronger emotional reactions within the story. Personally I think it does fit better. I really don't see the issue with it and wouldn't have thought that one would have come up. Certainly nothing to be embarrassed about.

If I'm not mistaken the story began rated R and moved on to X, so I'm disappointed that an adult would be so offended by something only subtly hinting at a more contraversial subject. He didn't trick anybody. It's called a plot twist. An extremely common part of most good, well thought-out stories. And like most good, well-thought out stories, this one also has a plot twist.

To be blunt, one of the only things that offends me are people who are easily offended-- since they are the ones that tend to ruin things for the majority of others.

(pardon the side-track)

As one of my favorite stories by far I'll definately see this one through till the end.  :)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, soniti54. I'm glad you're staying with me. I think we're at about the halfway point, so you'll be getting plenty more of Gage, Charis, and Rima!

Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Very good work capturing the intensity in this chapter, poor Charis makes a convenient punching bag since she isn't jailbroken lol

Always looking forward to additions!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your continued reviews, soniti54 (and TinyDann). Sorry I haven't been responded to your comments; I've been extremely busy recently and have pared down all of my GiantessWorld.net activities to essential systems only (writing chapters and posting them). Hopefully I'll get more active again with reviews and whatnot soon.

And yes, Charis was/is a totally expendable asset in these fights from a cold-blooded strategic standpoint, but she seems game. I'm hoping to develop her further in upcoming chapters, and also to continue to improve my pacing. Glad you're still with me.

Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Nice action in these chapters and a great job creating the imagery of it all :3

Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Excellent! I'm a sucker for Virtual Realities and you've rolled it in fantastic here! I think it takes more imagination and organization to thoroughly create an engaging alternate reality, and this is thoroughly engaging.

The main character is unique, Gage is an unusually strong willed and witty individual in spite of his predicament, he's one of my favorite male characters that I've seen since Chijinda in the Shrink High RPG.

So far Charis and Rima seem less dynamic than Gage, but I think that's more due to their limited character interaction, since Gage is the one the story follows. Though their interactions with Gage have still made them very entertaining characters. :]

I don't think I've ever read 14,000 words this fast, it makes me wish I'd slowed down even. This is very well written and I'll very much be looking forward to future chapters!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much for the kind review. The fact that Charis and Rima have been a bit flat has been bothering me too, so I hope to address that in upcoming chapters. Anyway, check back every Monday for the next riveting installment!

Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I welcome Rima's burst of characterization! Topped with Gage's smug innocense, lol I got even more than I expected in this chapter :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. The next few chapters will be more characterization followed by some really intense action. It's funny you call Gage's demeanor smug innocence... let's just say I have a huge twist in the works that I hope you'll enjoy!

Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Hahah something tells me things are about to get even more interesting. :3



Author's Response:

Oh yes... very interesting...