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Summary:

It has been 2 weeks since we the events of A Mother: Once Upon A Time, and things have not changed much. Liz and Norma's lives continue as before, happily. But it can not last. A new face threatens the strong bond between Norma and Liz. Love is a funny thing.

 


Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72854 Read Count: 118804
[Report This] Published: September 03 2016 Updated: April 16 2021
Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed
Date: February 18 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Punishment and Desperation

Let me start by saying that I'm a huge fan of your 'A Mother' stories. I read my favorite parts at least once or twice a week. The main strength of the story, I feel, is the relationship between Liz and her mother. Liz and Mary seem like their relationship can be fleshed out to be close second or even surpass the other relationship in terms of what it brings to the story. You're quite good at writing the sexy parts. My personal favorite is when Mary puts Liz in her mouth. Variety is the spice of life, and in size fiction, this remains true.

Unfortunately, I feel like you kind of wrote in the wrong direction with this last update. It doesn't make sense for Jenna to be able to deceive Irene and Norma, sneak into Liz's house with them sitting on the couch, not wake Mary (who is already shrunk) while finding the portasizer (which conveniently has 3 shots despite Mary being shrunk), beat Liz in a fight by being a master martial artist and stomp the portasizer to pieces (If the portasizer is built lika a phone, at best this would crack the glass over the screen and possibly pop the back plate off and battery out). I'm sincerely hoping that everything after Norma's orgasm in the car is her having a nightmare. Or that Liz never gave the other portasizer back to Brittany's sister so Mary can swoop in and save the day.

I know the other people here seem to love Jenna. I don't(her and Fred are my least favorite characters), but I get it. She's the bad girl, and the best stories have good villains. Becky was a good villain, Brittany was a good villain. Isn't it about time Liz starts getting some revenge? What good is her being an amazon she never gets to use it? When everyone else always has the upper hand and shrinks her and she never retaliates?

However you resolve this, I hope it ends quickly with a spec sized Jenna and several chapters with all 7+ feet of Liz large and in charge with a shrunken harem. Its been too long in coming. And some sexy stuff. Lots of sexy stuff.

I hope this isn't upsetting. I didn't write it with that intent, but I seem to be pretty good at upsetting people, so belated sorry in advance. I am a big fan.



Author's Response: Iíd like to start off by saying I take no offense to any form of constructive criticism. Which is exactly what you have brought to the table. It helps me to be a better writer and to understand the way my readers perceive my characters and style of writing. So thank you for the input, it is greatly appreciated. Iím going to try to respond to all of the comments you made and see if I can give some reasoning as to why I did certain things or how other things might have happened. I myself am a huge fan of spicing things up so the part where Mary shrinks Liz and puts her in her mouth was an obvious choice for me. Iím not a huge vore person, so I felt like it was necessary to bring some of it into the story to force me to push myself further as a writer. I feel like my biggest fault in the story so far is the lack of description of the house. I myself can see the layout as itís based on a home I frequently visited growing up. The living space is not close to the front door. Itís at the far back right of the house while the door is centered in the home. There are two doorways and well over 30 feet of hallway between them. Making it easy enough for someone to slip in quietly through the front door and head towards the stairs which are on the far left of the house. So as for Jenna coming into the house unnoticed, thatís how she did it. As for why she was there and not at her divorce hearing, that will be explained in the next chapter. Being able to sneak into the room without waking Mary would be easier than youíd think. Though I didnít put it in the story, itís safe to say Mary and Liz had been recently enjoying each other as they do on a regular basis. This leaves a much smaller Mary exhausted. And as for Jennaís presence in the room, Mary is used to Liz moving about the house freely. So even if she was somewhat aware that someone was in the room, it wouldnít be that far of a stretch to think it was Liz and not worry about it. As for the portasizer having 3 shots remaining, Mary is shrunk nearly permanently. She only grows back for special occasions. Over the last year, itís a size she has grown accustomed to and thoroughly enjoys being. Thatís why the portasizer was charged. She hadnít recently had her size changed. When it comes to Jenna being a martial artist, this was probably the one thing I just threw out there without too much of an explanation. Jenna grew up a large woman. She revels in her power over others unlike Liz who takes on a dominating tone, but a loving one. This pushed Jenna to take up a form of fighting, so she could better dominate people in her life. And for her crushing the portasizer, I can see what you mean. But remember, she is a very large woman. Not as big as Liz, but she herself is still an Amazon in her own right. So when she stomped on the portasizer, it might be a little less believable, but she was definitely able to destroy it. Remember she was heading to court, though it wasnít in the chapter, and thatís my fault, she was wearing heels as she was dressed up. I totally understand the dislike for Fred and Jenna. Fred was a one time thing. His part in the series is over. But Jenna, she was always meant to be the big villain, the final boss so to speak. Becky was a villain, but more than that, she was a messed up girl with a troubled home life and a desperation to be needed. Brittany was never really a villain so much an obstacle. Her part in it all was an inconvenience and annoyance for Liz, but thatís about it. Itís one of the reasons Liz would be able to get ďrevengeĒ on her. It would never be cruel or evil, simply force her to endure what she had to for a while. The two still remain very close and loving friends. Liz will never be the one to seek revenge. I think here in this last chapter she got the closest to it that she was capable. Hurting others just isnít in her nature. She cares too much for other people. She is too good-natured, to a fault. The amazon thing wasnít something she ever asked for. She was simply born that way. Having power and having a desire to use it are simply two different things. As long as both parties consent, she will be the dominating and all powerful Goddess. But her actual attitude towards others is that of caretaker. Itís one of the reasons she struggles so much with being shrunk and dominated. She canít do anything and is totally helpless in those situations. In many ways, Liz lacks maturity. Having no way to defend yourself and braving through that doesnít come easy to her. Others know this and take advantage. However you resolve this, I hope it ends quickly with a spec sized Jenna and several chapters with all 7+ feet of Liz large and in charge with a shrunken harem. Its been too long in coming. And some sexy stuff. Lots of sexy stuff. I canít promise it will come quickly, but all open ends and villains get their comeuppance in the end. Thatís just the way of things. And donít worry, plenty of sexy stuff to come. Again, thank you for the review. Itís nice to get so much feedback. Most of the time itís a comment on enjoying the story or a single aspect of it. I thoroughly love getting these long comments that give me something to think about and really respond to. Hope you continue to enjoy the series as we progress.

Summary:

Every few 100,000 years or so, a new person is chosen to rule over a galactic neighborhood.  They are called The Sentinels and they are blessed with near omnipotent power.  A tradition of leaving behind a journal of their adventures is left to the next Sentinel.  This is the story of the previous ruler and her tales of domination, destruction, and humor with planets full of civilizations both advanced and primitive across the stars.  Her cruel demeanor reflects in each chapter as she exposes her intentions with her god-like powers.  

 

 

Disclaimer:

Please be advised that this story will contain descriptions of violent imagery and graphic nature that is considered sensitive to uninitiated audiences.  No characters in this story are based on anyone real, living, or dead. 

 


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, New World Order, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37296 Read Count: 63869
[Report This] Published: September 06 2017 Updated: July 14 2020
Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed
Date: June 21 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Azera's World

Didn't know there would be the feelz here.

Summary:

So, it's a place for me to write short fetish stories (usually one-shot) about a lot of potential interactions. I already know what I want to write for the second chapter, but if you've particuliar ideas, don't hesitate to tell them :) !


Categories: Crush, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, BBW, Mature (40-49), Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Muscle, New World Order, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48632 Read Count: 191510
[Report This] Published: January 06 2018 Updated: December 25 2019
Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed
Date: August 22 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Nine is a great number

I hope you continue Adrien and Johanna's story!



Author's Response:

Really ? Hum, I'll think about it then ! Thanks for the comment.

Summary:

When the world is threatened by giant interdimensional monsters only a goddess can save them.


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Growing Woman, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18038 Read Count: 15474
[Report This] Published: March 07 2018 Updated: March 07 2018
Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed
Date: March 08 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

It's alive!!!!!!! I second the seconding of the first review. Please continue, this was really something special.

Summary:

The first year of college can be a blur, and not every encounter is worthy of a full story.  Some can only be vignettes, bite-sized tales that only take a few minutes.


Categories: Muscle, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Footwear, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore, Butt, Entrapment, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Gamma Tau Sigma
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11370 Read Count: 44147
[Report This] Published: July 12 2018 Updated: August 31 2020
Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Bonding Experience

It's a wonder people don't notice that Fulda is a blackhole. Men go near her and never return.

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed
Date: August 26 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Proud Boy

Ew, he's too gross to eat. Fulda needs to up her standards for meals

 



Author's Response:

Even she deserves some junk food now and then

[Report This] Published: January 22 2019 Updated: August 20 2020
Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed
Date: August 13 2019 Title: Chapter 32: Redux Chapter 8 - Submission

That was your best chapter so far. I think this version of the story is a massive improvement over the first one. Only issue is, I'm still looking forward to Heather taking the focus from Jason. And I'm looking forward to Heather unchained. I take it that eating people is how they increase their growth potential? Hopefully you'll have a chapter of Heather hunting and eating people now that she's got a taste of human.

Goddess Heather ftw.



Author's Response:

Literally just posted a chapter that you might like. Enjoy

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed
Date: July 23 2019 Title: Chapter 31: Redux Chapter 7 - Victory

I think it would be cool if Heather had something Jason lacked to be an equalizer. Maybe she actually held back on her growth due to feeling torn between Ben and Jason and 1.7 miles is the tip of her iceberg. Maybe she can steal growth potential from people who haven't undergone the process and it adds up. Or AJ could butt in with her own augmentation or stealing ben and piss off Heather leading to a massive increase in Heather's growth potential.

Jason may always be the bigger man, but a big man needs a much much bigger woman. ;)



Author's Response:

I really don't want to say anything, and that's saying too much.

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed
Date: August 15 2019 Title: Chapter 34: Redux Chapter 10 - Vignettes

So....I hope this means Heather eats a bunch of people in the next chapter. Goddess Heather is so close, I can taste it. I hope she scares the crap out of Jason so bad he's shaking. I hope the government pisses their pants. Maybe you can give Heather a different power set than Jason. Or she eats so many she gets his abilities and more. Like energy blasts, teleportation, duplicating herself, Taking over other people's bodies, precognition. Make her blow Jason out of the water. I believe in you.

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed
Date: September 11 2019 Title: Chapter 37: Redux Chapter 13 - Devour

Finally Heather comes out on top. Thank you. I hope you've come up with some powers for Heather to have since she's eaten so many people. And she's not even done with the mission yet.

My ranking for who comes out in what place is:
1. Ben - He's still a normal man, but gets the important things. He gets his girlfriend back and she's become even more of a goddess
2. Heather - She's eaten thousands of people, so she should have all of Jason's powers and many more
3. AJ and her tiny - She was right. Jason was holding Heather back. That counts for something
4. The world - Heather is its new goddess
5. Jason - Its the box for him. Or Heather can remove his power to grow. Or eat him



Author's Response:

I wonder how Ben would rank himself right now, given that his life is sort of wrecked. Maybe Heather will cheer him up soon.

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed
Date: September 14 2019 Title: Chapter 38: Redux Chapter 14 - Heather

Can I call this the 'First Church of Heather' with AJ as her prophet? Love the Heather-portation, elevation of AJ and disintigration of her enemies. Not enough stories give their giantesses powers, so this is scratching an itch. Can't wait to see what else she can do. Maybe tinies can get uppity, and she can smite some cities. I hope Jason stays in the box, Heather needs her time to shine.

I've been thinking about where you would branch this for multiple endings and it seems to me that in chapter 12, AJ could be concerned with Heather having lost it completely leading to an Evil Heather ending. In chapter 13, you could have Heather fail to keep her thoughts from Jason for a Jason ending. Also, in chapter 13, you could have a twist where AJ is a liar and uses Ben to turn Heather and Jason against each other long enough to surpass them/ weaken the competition for an AJ ending. That way you'd have potentially more time to expand upon each ending.



Author's Response:

Yeah... Evil Heather is an... Alternate... Ending... >_>

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed
Date: September 16 2019 Title: Chapter 38: Redux Chapter 14 - Heather

...I figured this was chaotic neutral Heather...

Summary:

The Pantheon of Maids follows the stories of 7 new Goddesses as they inherit a universe.

I would like to Thank TitanTheia as a co-author inspired me to write better more engaging characters and pushed this series into existence.

Optional Origin Story is Chapter 37 of "Charlotte's Universe"

This series now has a conclusion.

The story continues in "Privilaged Protest" & "Charlotte Reborn"


Categories: Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, New World Order, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Pantheon of Goddesses Universe
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 60593 Read Count: 48261
[Report This] Published: February 10 2019 Updated: May 02 2019
Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed
Date: April 06 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Sensitive | Cassi, Sarah

I like the idea of Sarah wanting to play mortal for a bit and having a daughter and a husband. But, actions have consequences. So, i think it would be cool if something happens to the universe because of this and Sarah and Hannah have to fix it due to being the Goddesses out of time. Maybe they can each gain a new aspect upon successfully keeping the universe from imploding or exploding or something bad...ing.

Don't know how much ahead of Chapter 14 has been written, but what's the plan for Victoria? Maybe She tries to fight, fails since divine power is finite, and its explained to her that she was intended to be the Goddess of Balance or something. And she and Hannah explore their new demi-goddess status together.



Author's Response:

Hey there, Panzerhunter, thank you for your review! We really do appreciate it! Now, about the consequences you mentioned; you'll be happy to know that as soon as JFT showed me the draft of 'Hannah's chapter', I also thought that this ought to be followed up by some consequences! I've already put them into chapter 15 (which should hopefully go out soon-ish), but I'm afraid they won't be quite as all-encompassing as something bad happening to the entire universe, but I still hope that they're bad enough that Sarah (and Hannah) are forced to deal with it in a manner that leads to some character growth.

And there is also (at least) one chapter written that looks back at what Victoria was doing before and after the tournament, which would/should end with a drastic choice laid out at the end. However, the outcome of that decision has yet to be determined by JFT, so we'll have to see what happens to her and/or if she'll get to bond with Hannah.

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed
Date: May 02 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Singularity

This is a good ending for this. Satisfactory explanation to what's happening in Privileged Protest. Something the Goddesses don't mention and I hope privileged protest covers is what happens to the powers that have been stripped from Arianna, Fiona, and Ella. Do they need new hosts or can they be restored to the originals?

Anyway, Good work.

Balancers by ReyRiles Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

An advanced human civilization dominates the multiverse with size changing technology. One citizen named Jake succeeds in obtaining a secret job as a Balancer, which allows him to destroy worlds who do not meet the standards of his empire. He soon learns he isn't the only Balancer in the family.


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Giant, Growing Woman, Incest, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14551 Read Count: 19983
[Report This] Published: February 22 2019 Updated: February 22 2019
Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 23 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hot and fun. Hope you write more!

Summary:

A young college freshman runs a protest to demand equal rights for a select group of people.

 

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Categories: Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, New World Order, Slave, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: Pantheon of Goddesses Universe
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30240 Read Count: 47721
[Report This] Published: April 20 2019 Updated: June 10 2019
Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed
Date: April 27 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Family Protests

Emma is just so confused isn't she? I've got some ideas. I'm assuming this is still tied to PoGU since their homeworld is Gwental Minor and their first Empress was Hannah.


1. Since Emma will be joining her sister in the field, maybe they can conquer a world using their powers.

2. Maybe their world and Earth and the tirsgardians can be in the equivalent of a galactic preserve that the goddesses leave alone. They end up sailing their fleet outside of it and they can encounter the goddesses and learn that they aren't the top of the food chain. So they get an unwelcome -to them- role reversal. And maybe Hannah has to say to the other goddesses, 'knock it off, those are my great, great...... great granddaughters.'

3. They discover how to be goddesses themselves.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review :) Emma's had some manipulation take hold, something I plan on bringing more to the front soon.

I can neither confirm nor deny the existence of divine beings in this universe.

1. Yes, This is a possibility i think, Lucile really wants Emma to be a "true" titan.

2. I can neither confirm nor deny the existence of divine beings in this universe.

3. I can neither confirm nor deny the existence of divine beings in this universe.

 

If you have any other thoughts i welcome them :)

 

Kind regards

JFT

 

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed
Date: April 30 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Protesting the Rules

I knew it. I knew it. So, I assume that a was Hannah, since she can't be lied to?

I voted in your pole for 'send them out into the universe'. The reason being, you were already setting that up for sooner or later, or had seemed to be with Lucile declaring Emma would be joining her over the summer. And there's only 3 weeks left.

Maybe Ria goes with?

But of course I'm 100% for more divinity.

I'm curious to see what the Goddesses need Emma for...

Summary:

Goddess Charlotte is reborn into a broken Universe.

Before she can fix what has been broken, She first needs to reclaim her lost power.

(Sequel to Charlotte's Universe & Pantheon of Maids, Not required reading)

 


Categories: Insertion, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Lesbians, New World Order, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Pantheon of Goddesses Universe
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8931 Read Count: 20088
[Report This] Published: May 30 2019 Updated: July 22 2019
Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed
Date: May 30 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Goddess Reborn

So, since it says 'Not required reading', this is non-canon?

I thought you were doing good with 'Privilaged Protest'. It was becoming more and more interesting with the dynamics of the former goddesses, mixed with the Titans and the representatives.

I personally liked the idea of Charlotte essentially commiting suicide like Cassi thought. Divinity wore out its welcome with noone to share it with.



Author's Response:

Hi Panzerhunter,

 

It's not Canon until I merge the end of Priviliaged Protest and Overwhelming Divinity into it.

Goddess Charlotte and I have recently reconnected and this story is her request. Privilage and Overcoming Divinity both stopped generating feedback which kinda makes it feel like casting words out to the void. This one is atleast being reviewed by Charlotte which inspires me to write.

I'm holding off on merging my other stories for now, Just to make sure this isnt a phase.

 

Many thanks

JFT

Discovery by Curse Crazy Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

A science experiment like no other has volunteers shrinking to four centimeters tall and living in a tiny community. Their lives are under the supervision of a mature scientist, but for one particular volunteer, she's more than just a motherly overseer. When given the opporunity, a woman in the community does what she can to receive the personal attention she craves.

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Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Lesbians, Sci-Fi, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101500 Read Count: 74614
[Report This] Published: August 06 2019 Updated: July 16 2021
Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed
Date: May 18 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Part VIII

I love Sierra and Duval's relationship. It feels real that a tiny and a kind normal could get on this way, especially after all they've been through. Excited about the conference. So many possibilities, my brain's been exploding.

Could Duval sneak Sierra on her person? A necklace with a special pendant or locket so Duval could keep Sierra close at all times and Sierra can experience being out and about with no one the wiser? Or would Sierra be stuck in the vault?

Could their relationship flourish in the privacy of a hotel room? Body exploration? Sex...like activities? Bathing together? Boob climbing?

Could a rich, sexy investor lady hit on Duval and Sierra say yes please for 2 giants, 1 tiny Sierra? Or sexy investor lady could ask to be shrunk down for the experience of 2 tinies 1 giant Duval? Porque no las dos?


Love it! Can't wait to see the future.

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed
Date: May 22 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Part X

Ericka's got to be fucking with Duval. She totally knew Duval took Sierra in there, and if she didn't, Duval's and repeated 'get to the bottom of it' *tap tap would have tipped her off. She probably moved the Rook to give Duval a way to retreive Sierra without being obvious. I bet she got a thrill watching her steps as she passed over Sierra's tiny body.

And Sierra struggling against Duval's nipple. Mercy! And Duval almost pleasing herself with Sierra still in her pocket. Just too good.

Look forward to more escalation.