I actually really enjoyed the premise of clones/self-love combined with apotheosis. I don't think it's been done before, I hope you continue this. Big fan of your other stories too.

I like the premise! Writing is pretty good too, flows alright. Is there going to be futa? There isn't enough good giantess futa.

Certainly among the greatest giant couple stories there are! I'm excited to see more chapters added :3

Great addition! It's awesome to get to see a bit more of this world's futa community, hopefully we'll get to see these characters again and more :)

I did want to point out though, I think your weight calculations are a bit off. Max was listed as 450+ pounds a few days ago, and now she's 350? I figure you're already aware, but a doubling in height would mean an eight-fold increase in weight, or even more if she's getting buffer or better endowed. 
The best way to do it would probably be (base/prior weight)*(percentage increase in height)^3, and tag on a dozen or so extra pounds for the additional appendage growth :P

Too fast? No such thing! Faster means bigger, and bigger is ALWAYS better <3
I can only imagine how big poor Max's nuts are going to swell from blue-balling herself for an entire month. Great addition!

Alright, this was awesome. Definitely a unique story (in the best way), and I found myself enjoying Amber and Maria's changes far more than I thought I would.

A few things I'm curious about if you were to continue, which you definitely should!

Now that the nanobots are disconnected from Alex's control, they've reverted to an autonomous mode, right? Will they make changes themselves? Maybe even fall under the subconcious or conscious control of the girls?

And what about Maria's children? Have they inherited their own nanobots? Or will they just naturally grow into catgirls of that caliber on their own?

I'd love to see what happens as the catgirls unleash themselves upon the world, and maybe, hopefully, get even bigger!

This is actually pretty hot! Unaware/reality change is always fun, and there isn't a ton of it out there so it's a treat to have another story featuring it. At the same time, though, there are a few things that could make it that much better.

First and foremost is the formatting. I realize the editor on this site isn't the fanciest thing in the world, but the text is awfully small with the default settings, and having huge run-on paragraphs makes things tedious to read. It can sometimes be difficult to decide where to cut a paragraph, but you can always get creative - maybe break the paragraphs up where her size shifts larger?

Second is the second-person point of view. Maybe I'm just nitpicking because I'm a female reader, but I had a hard time putting myself in the shoes of either of the characters, and I've always struggled to write second-person without more than five percent of my word count being the word 'you'. Might just be a silly thing to criticize, but second-person has always just been harder to both read and write for me.

I also realize that this is your first English-language story on this site, but rejoice - your English is actually pretty dang good! The two things I pointed out have a much bigger impact on the readability and flow of the story than any issues with grammar. Hopefully my unsolicited advice can at least be somewhat useful, and I'd love to see another story from you in the future!

Even though we're not quite to the size content yet, I find myself checking for a new chapter almost every day! It's not often that we get stories on here that are interesting on their own merits (discarding the fetish aspect) but this is definitely one of them; a well-written fan fiction through and through. I have some guesses already, but I'm really eager to see where you take this!

Author's Response:

The size content is still quite a ways away. I did debate with myself on whether I should only post on AO3 because there is quite a number of chapters until the fetish content reveals itself. Most stories on here either have the size content in the first chapter or within the first three. I have little peeks here and there for several chapters until the MC finally has a proper encounter. (Had to retype this response several times to avoid unintentional spoilers) Thanks for reading.

I'd been wondering if there would be a twist like this! The Greenclaws aren't natural in origin after all... I can't wait to see what's in store on Wednesday!

Fucking. Amazing! Even better than the first two chapters, I love how easily the dialogue and action flows between the two of them... and I can only imagine how much bigger she's going to be next match. First she tripled... then she quadrupled in size? If she keeps up a rate like that, the whole CITY will fit under her toe by the last match! I hope she just gets completely drunk on her own power, I can't wait for the next chapter! <3