It's years later.

And it ended at a good point.

But this girl captivates me and I'd love to see more with her and her proclivities. The way she's done this before and is crazy enough to not care BUT still care about the baby when she could very well have killed a lot of babies when she was "rampaging." That's a good psychosis to watch.

Well she was unaware at first, but now despite knowing she doesn't question anything.

This moved really quickly and unless I missed something in the backstory she's just big all of a sudden. Seems like this will be more inclined towards a Hedin-esque story given her size and attitude.

Granted it is also 2+ years late but maybe.

Highly enjoyable, and respective of the characters if such a scenario were to happen. Chun's reluctant approach and Juri's sadistic tendencies were a lovely combination to an outside reader away from the carnage. Shame it ended so quickly.

The "dream" slow down of time parts were a little awkward though. But I guess we need some quiet time for a build up to the action.

Here's hoping you do something for SF V.

Given the idea of the city, she is either an attempt to cleanse things effectively or the universe has a sense of humor.

25 chapters is quite hefty even if they don't take too long. And I'm looking forward to the categories getting explored. Good attitude for her to have, hope to see more soon.

A year late but I agree with Blueapple's last sentence about the SF girls being good all over.

Yes even Poison.

This was really an Ibuki story but the trio had their parts too. Poor Elena was pushed aside. I guess you just tend too much to violence and Elena is too pure for such things. That moment were the phone was ringing was all kinds of fun though.

I like how you managed to show Makoto's softer side for a bit.

Now I not only want more but an Udon comic about this story.

Needs more feet. Crossover with the Chun and Juri story.

Very nice setup. Could allow for some family bonding from Ashley and Brianna if they eventually catch wind of what is happening, would allow for some characterization and development. Also looks like some comedy bits are peppered throughout so despite the family issues it won't be all bleak.

I'm with BillMann in that I can recall only one other story with a similar bent (Atlas) and it didn't have substance despite being a full story. Your piece has potential and a wonderful parting scene that I hope continues.

I hope time is nice to you so you may write more of this one.

In some twisted, perverse, yet surprisingly in line with the characters, you managed to write something that made sense. From Ritsuko's ideas, Misato's attitude, Kaji's distance, Shinji's spine, Rei's compliance, and of course Asuka's need to be #1 - this really held true in a fetish sort of way.

And any out of character extrapolations can be the result of the chemicals. I acknowledge your pushing aside the techno babble that essentially had Asuka do a "Rei" towards the end of Evangelion, in a sense.

You also really seemed to capture Asuka's fractured mindset. From the labeling of dolls, her vacillating acceptance of not going back to normal to enjoying herself, how she wants to help but enjoys the destruction, her musing with the adults, her belittling of Shinji but insatiable need to have him near her, and her interactions with the people. This was quite a character study.

Oh and the sex was great, too.

I hope this isn't your only story. If I ever need well written fetish driven fanfiction then I must seek you out.

It's hard to get a bead on Tiffany's size. She can somehow take out the support of the building yet the top isn't falling off and she can see outside the structure despite seemingly being stuck in a "U" position.

But even so it's just her butt that's there while her legs and arms are on the "lobby" floor but given her size they should be somewhere else. And still humans shouldn't seem that small to her yet to the point where even speakers are squeaks she can barely make out. I suppose that whatever is causing this is messing with her senses anyway.

She has great control of her muscles if those people weren't killed despite hiding in her special place. The imageries you put forth are erotic and sharp. But since this is a journal and she's just writing this down all casual either she's come to accept things fully or there is some disconnect. Even if she's going as a stream of conscious, she is spending a lot of time on her sexcapades. I would think she would let that out slowly as time went by, revealing her debauchery to the "reader" of her diary as time goes by. Unless she goes from trying to mitigate things like how you have her not just collapsing the building immediately to rampaging for fun to show her loss of humanity.

And I wonder how she's writing this down and why people would put up with allocating resources to someone who is going to ruin the economy even more than it already is in shambles simply by existing. You can't exactly force someone like this Tiffany to become a weapon of war unless they grab her family and hold them hostage or threaten to cancel her favorite program.

I wish it didn't end here. I love how trance-like Bianca has become with her one track mind. I can't recall any story that has the giant be so cute and yet vulgar. I've love at least one more chapter where she's attempting to get off at her new size and humanity is just ineffective.

The people: What are your demands?

Bianca: FUCK ME!

There's something endearing to me about caps lock for a giant when the story is juicy and entertaining.

I miss this story like you wouldn't believe. 
The details are so juicy much like the "animals" Justine eats. Even the bodily actions are mesmerizing to read about when enhanced to such a degree.

The whole place is falling apart. And I loved devouring the words you've written.

I wish there could be more.