Jack's best friend calls him over for a day. He stays alot longer than that. She's got a secret to show him, one that he'll surely NEVER forget.
I won't deny, I liked this story quite a bit. It was a well written "heat of the moment" type affair that had allot of heart put into it. However, as the story progresses, I've noticed a lack of attention from the author. It saddens me to admit that, but in the end this sometimes happens to good stories. My honest words to the author would be best said as: "Don't let it get you down, just keep writing what you feel strongly about and forget about the stuff you've lost vision in." Because remember, you can't force yourself to do (in this case) write something if you aren't feeling it anymore. That being said, it was a great story while it lasted. Cheers mate.
~Johnny
Jack, a 'regular'-sized 17-year-old in a world now populated predominantly by humans twice that height, struggles to cope with life in a school and society built for people far larger than he will ever be.
This story has been quite compelling, I never know where it will lead to next! I am on the edge of my seat and highly anticipating the next chapter(s).
~Johnny
I think your story is coming along incredibly well. As I've said before each chapter (even the happier ones) leaves me on edge, ever and forever wanting to know what will happen next. You are a writer of unbelievably high magnitude and don’t ever try to convince yourself otherwise. You certainly have what it takes to be a published writer as well, of that I am sure. I’ll be looking forward to your next installments very much so.
~Johnny
Thank you so much! I've tried to make each chapter long enough so that something actually changes, whether it's moving the plot forward, or learning something about one of the characters, or even just a bit of exposition so you know how people are feeling. It can be hard to find convenient places to break from the story, as it's not designed to flow as a load of chapters, I'm trying to write it as if 'real' even though, obviously, I have control over it and no the other way round (oh yeah, I forgot)!
Deffo don't have what it takes to be a published writer! One word - deadlines! But thank you, it's high praise; I like to think I'm good at what I'm trying to do with this. If I ever get the opportunity to do anything that realises this type of story in film or animation, or whatever, I will carry over this approach into it and try and do it justice, just as I have done with every other bit of giantess content I've produced.
As I've said, as hard a job as it is you are certainly capable of being a published writer. I shall await the next installments with great anticipation. In the meantime, take care of yourself and be well.
~Johnny
What started out as an accident led to the blooming love between a boy and a giantess. Both struggle to live in each other's worlds as their differences become obvious.
I have taken great joy from reading this story so far. It is very expertly written and I have always been a sucker for star-crossed love stories such as this one. It is my sincerest hope that you will be coming back to it in due time. Just be sure you are ready when you do. A writer is nay a writer without their passion. I expect BIG things from you (pun intended). ;)
~Johnny
Thanks Prodiginous! Glad you enjoyed it :) I've been bogged down with my studies recently, and I'm actually not doing so well, so I had to stop writing to focus x.x There was a period where I did write something over the semester break, but I got scared off by the new site UI, thinking something happened here lol >.< I honestly don't see myself writing any time soon, but it's my hope that I can pick it up again in the future!
Once again, thanks for reading! Hopefully my grades pick up too, hahaha... *self-deprecating laughter*
The official sequel to "Who's Really the Bigger Person Here?"
It's been about a year since the events of the last story have taken place. Amy, Ben, Mark, and Johnny reunite for a summer all to themselves. The town is more tolerant of Amy, the military hasn't returned, and things are looking up.
That is until a few new visitors come to town. Who are they and what are their intentions? All of that can be summed up in one statement . . . . . shit happens.
I've been following all of your stories on here, and in my honest opinion you are and can be a very accomplished writer. That being said, just remember not to force yourself to write something either. Writing is best done when you feel the passion behind what you write. It is our ship’s sails (forgive the silly analogy). Let it come to you in due time. Your truest of fans will always be waiting patiently. That being said I'd like to also remark that your latest chapter is just fine. I feel it falls perfectly into place with the situation thus far, and I look forward to the next. You are a good writer, don't worry yourself about that. Just take care of yourself, as well as your life's baggage first and as they say "leave the wolf out the door". ;) Anyways, I've rambled long enough; take it easy out there ya hear?
~Johnny
Now if only I had the attention span to be an accomplished writer, then I might get somewhere in life. But in all seriousness I truly appreciate your kind words. It's encouraging to know that there are people who like what I write and understand the process and the time it takes. Although I don't know if I'd call you fans as I'm not entirely sure I'm good enough to have earned "fans" yet, maybe one day. But thank you SO much for reading and liking my stories, I can't express what that means since I love to write. I'll keep taking care, thank you.