Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed
Date: April 13 2024
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Here to Please
Nice to see the lovebirds doing what they can to keep things spicy and passionate between them. I imagine that Thomas is going to have to get more and more creative as Trish grows larger and larger. It's sad in a way that as she grows, Thomas may run out of ways to physically satisfy her once she reaches a particular height. While Thomas is no doubt enthralled at the prospect of Trish enlarging all the more into an outright goddess, he probably feels a tiny bit tormented that he cannot satisfy her as a traditional lover.
Part of me wonders if there might be some way for Thomas to grow himself to meet her size, or at least large enough that he can please her in some way, though he might be conflicted at the idea of such a thing, given that he prefers Trish to be outright massive compared to him, as if he were an ant standing before a blue whale in terms of size comparison. Maybe that's something you have in mind for later in the story. It would certainly be mind-blowing for the rest of the world to see the two lovebirds ascend into becoming outright titans compared to the rest of humanity, like a proverbial "Adam and Eve" standing before the rest of the human species, towering over buildings or even mountains as they consummate their love like man-and-wife turned god-and-goddess.
But I'm getting ahead of myself with the daydreaming and hypotheticals as to what direction this story ends up taking. In any case, a splendid little add-on chapter to the entire story. Kudos!
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words!
Expect the size roles to stay much the same, though I think there is room for fan spinoffs if you ever feel the urge to write one. Netherfalcon on deviantart is doing fan renders of certain scenes of this story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words!
Expect the size roles to stay much the same, though I think there is room for fan spinoffs if you ever feel the urge to write one. Netherfalcon on deviantart is doing fan renders of certain scenes of this story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words!
Expect the size roles to stay much the same, though I think there is room for fan spinoffs if you ever feel the urge to write one. Netherfalcon on deviantart is doing fan renders of certain scenes of this story.