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World of Silver by geeman Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary:

In a world where giants rule and humans are left to scrounge for scraps, a man named Tommy finds himself in the possesion of a mysterious silver-haired giantess.

 

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*Hey guys, I added drawing-less chapters for those that prefer to go: full imagination with their reading or those who don't like cartoony drawings or something. It's just an option!

Someone let me know if doing two versions of chapter's is breaking a rule and I'll take the extra ones down, thanks!


Categories: Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Maternal, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74011 Read Count: 180336
[Report This] Published: July 04 2013 Updated: July 30 2014
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 22 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Lots of sexy vampire giantess action in this chapter. 



Author's Response:

There wasn't too much GTS in that chapter but I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I just noticed this story Gadget. Congrads on uploading your first of hopefully many stories.

First off, the pictures are an interesting touch. Not a lot of people use the picture finction anymore so props for using that. 

Secondly, the quality of this work is far above the average of most first stories. Your grammar is excellent, the dialogue is used well (not too much, not too little), and its well paced (no timeskips or leaps in plot logic).

Lastly, I like how candid the story is. Those two paragraphs after the word "CRUNCH" really got me excited for future chapters.

I look foward to reading more of this sometime.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you like it, the story does get more gentle later on, but I'm starting to get to violent gts again in the most recent chapters and plan to have a good mix of gentle and violent...Also, there are drawings scattered throught certain chapters, whenever I felt like drawing them...So far chapter 13 is the only one, but I've only recently started doing drawings for this story...

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Made some good progress on this story today. Thought I'd leave you another review. (I use reviews as bookmarks for large stories.)

Its very interesting the way Kim treats Tommy. She often flips between treating him as a sexual partner, pet, toy, and child. This I believe serves to highlight the conflict going on inside her in regards to her feelings about Tommy.

Good show friend. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, she can be kind of random sometimes, but thats part of her character. Thanks for taking the time to read this, not many people wanna play catch up to a story like this.

Summary:

Chelsea decides it's time to redifine the parameters of her longstanding friendship with tiny faerie Elishtaya.    


Categories: Humiliation, Teenager (13-19), Lesbians, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6832 Read Count: 5277
[Report This] Published: July 05 2013 Updated: July 05 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Of Faeries and Friendship

Are you trying to say that my opinion of the story is wrong? How is that even possible? An opinion by its very nature is neither right nor wrong.

Don't be an idiot.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Of Faeries and Friendship

This may have been the most sadistic story you two have produced yet. It is so simple and brutish to use someone to satisfy ones sexual urges, but the fact that Chelsea loves Elishtaya as she tortures her makes it that much more cruel and twisted.

You two transcend the typical "girl tortures tiny" dynamic and take it a whole new level.

And I love how most of the time your giantesses arn't evil (at least in my opinion), but rather are just naturally sadistic and very dominant. I feel that giantesses like these are what true sadistic giantesses should be.

Bravo! 10/10.



Author's Response:

Fun note, as I'm not completely sure that you realized this based on your response, but TinyOne wrote Chelsea's part in this work.  It's a rare sight to see me as the tiny, but I had a lot of fun being one.  It was nice to know that I still had the knack to do both sides of the giantess power exchange somewhat well!

Summary:

a bunch of people are candiates for the GTS-Space darwin awards. They are people who got killed in stupid ways dealing with giantesses.


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2120 Read Count: 3373
[Report This] Published: July 08 2013 Updated: July 08 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would say that Mike gets the reward for making a ridiculous assumption and screwing up not just his own life but his girlfriends as well.

 

Summary:

The Syndrome lives on in this tale of a desperate man, who seeks sanctuary with a strange woman, hundreds of miles from home.

 

 


Categories: Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: The Syndrome
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23632 Read Count: 53015
[Report This] Published: July 08 2013 Updated: July 19 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - A special place

This is a good concept. and your writing style is polished so I can't really criteque it, but I'd say the one thing I would like to see is society's reaction to those with the syndrome.

Overall good job I will continue reading as soon as I get the opportunity.



Author's Response:

Thank you, appreciate you reading, and I touched a bit on society and the syndrome in the first syndrome story, and plan on touching on it a bit here.

 

 

Married to Barbara by Pico Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

A short pre-evening with Daniel and his wife Barbara.

Up front I must warn that this short story is a spoof. So I apologize in advance if my sense of humor is very strange or even non-existent at all to you. If you make it to the end, then thank you.


Categories: Adult 30-39, Couples
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4955 Read Count: 4072
[Report This] Published: July 25 2013 Updated: July 25 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Married to Barbara

I feel that for your first story your grammar and spelling are pretty good, and your dialogue is well constructed and flows naturally.

I concur with jacksmith in that this is not a parody but rather more of a commentary.

anyways I think this story is really interesting in they way that it reads like a slice of life. there is no dramatic death sequence, or over the top shrinking scene, just two people interacting with each other despite their size differences.

 

 this story is probably the one of the closest things you can get to telling a realistic giantess story.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words.

To be honest, this isn't the first time I dabble in creative writing. And I'm 31 and started learning English at the age of 12 I think, so I got to have something to show for.

That realism is what I try to achieve, and I glad it came over that way. In retrospect I which I could have laid it on thicker, being more overdramatic in the beginning and have made the nagging more excessive. 

Since I posted this story I had so much like these experiences in real life that made me think... damn, this should have been in that story.

Summary: Alana Masterson was always smart, scary smart. Later, some would say she was too smart for her own good. Find out what happened the day Alana decided to show the world just how smart she truly was; the day she changed the world forever.
Categories: Humiliation, Giantess, Butt, Crush, Feet, Instant Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Crime & Punishment
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1 Read Count: 6053
[Report This] Published: July 25 2013 Updated: July 25 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very well done UHF. I particularly enjoyed just how well this story flowed from scene to scene. you probably are one of the most polished writers on this website.

If I may make a suggestion though. I feel like this story deserves a sequel perhaps a fan of her work breaks her out of prison by causing her to grow?

either way good work UHF 



Author's Response: This story is part of a series. The other story in the series isn't finished yet. wink wink

Summary:

The beginning of the After Shrink High series. A "What-if" scenario where Chijunda lost to the Director on top of the tower. Despite his best efforts, he runs out of time and all living things are shrunk to 1/100th their size.

The story focuses on one of the newly rebuilt, in a sense, cities, Atlanta, GA, and one of its many Ranger squads. Ranger Squad 5 will find itself thrown right into the middle of the war between the Society and the Resistance. Only to uncover a mystery that may bring to light truths they never meant to find...

Much like Shrink High itself, the story and characters are the bigger focus rather than sex. There will be sex scenes, however. Also, not played/gotten the cliffnotes for Shrink High will not make the story unreadable. I made sure to limit things that you would have to have played Shrink High to get as simple shout-outs/gags. The story assumes you have not played the game and brings you up to speed/explains everything.

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Crush, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: After Shrink High
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142018 Read Count: 155956
[Report This] Published: August 04 2013 Updated: January 30 2014
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 15 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Things Change

I joined the fold, I hope that you will return the favor and join mine Zan.

Anyways, onto the story.

Just want to say that I appreciated the prologue in the beginning of this chapter, it really helped me out since I didn't play the games.

Also in my opinion the explainations you provided did justice to the universe you were trying to build. The hunting trip was an interesting way of introducing the characters and I aplaud the fact that you did this.



Author's Response:

Never.

 

Glad it got you up to speed and that the explainations were good. Thanks for the praise.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed
Date: August 15 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: But Stay the Same

Gotta say I'm liking the use of dialogue in this.

btw I review bomb stories so get ready for a load of reviews



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it.

 

And bring it on, I like reviews.

Summary:

Follow Nathan Pierce. A young, 19 year old high school dropout who finds himself in quite the predicament as he awakes within a strange new gigantic land. Merely two inches tall, and suffering from Amnesia, the poor soul is soon to find himself back exactly where this all began as he searches for answers, and a way out of this new hell.

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Universe: Alpha. [Involved] (See profile for details.)
Title #: 01. (Of series.) 

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This story has nothing to do with disco's. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25102 Read Count: 58507
[Report This] Published: August 08 2013 Updated: April 21 2014
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 13 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Filling In.

An interesting start. As of how far I read we have a shady company and A kind girl looking after our main character., and the promise of some interesting action further down the road.

I'll make sure to look out for this story, and hopefully continue reading the rest of it.

If I hade to offer one critisism it would be that when you switch speakers you need to start a new paragraph in order to indicate the shift in who is speaking.



Author's Response:

Many thanks! I look forwards to your reading it as it continues through it's paces, and hope you enjoy it and see it through to the end!

I know I mentioned a reply to the criticism you had at the Writer's meeting, but I'd like to also reply here just for the sake of any new readers that might see this review: I think that begins around chapter 3 (An Unexpected Visitor I) as UHF suggested that as well before. =)

Many thanks again for the review! I appreciate them, as always, and look forwards to any more you might have in the future.

- Xan. (Aetron.) 

. by zaneofbane Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

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Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1 Read Count: 13378
[Report This] Published: August 09 2013 Updated: March 04 2014
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed
Date: March 05 2014 Title: Chapter 1: .

I was hesitant to read this story after I read "7 year old" in the summary. However, now that I read the first chapter I can see why this story is becoming so popular.

You use the thoughts and viewpoints of your characters well. I felt like I understood every action your characters took. Keep up the good work.

Summary:

 

A group of mercenaries is hired to covertly assassinate a target. Little do they know, they're in for the BIGGEST mission of their lives.

 


Categories: Feet, Adventure, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1722 Read Count: 4243
[Report This] Published: August 10 2013 Updated: August 10 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Crazy prologue, if you continue writing this it should be interested to see where it goes.

I wonder what Rachel is like? is she a sweet little angel, or a mean bitch. I know that if I was screwed out of a childhood of wealth and luxury, i'd be a total ass.

Destiny's Throne by UHF Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Movie Announcer Guy's Voice:

In a world with no chairs...

After hours of standing, one young woman's legs were growing tired. Pushed to the breaking point, with no relief in sight, a traveler from an alternate dimension vowed to ease her suffering. Getting down on his hands and knees, he politely offered her a seat. His strong and willing back would change their lives, forever.

Categories: Giantess, Butt, Gentle, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1 Read Count: 10745
[Report This] Published: August 12 2013 Updated: August 15 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 16 2013 Title: Destiny's Throne

It's amazing what one simple difference between universes can make. I love that he ended up exploting the fact that they didn't know what chairs were for cash because if I were in his position I would totally do the same.

Also the constant positivity of the story made it really enjoyable to read.

 



Author's Response: Yes, I wanted it to be a happy tale. There are plenty of dark and scary GTS stories out there. I should know, I've written a few of them myself. Sometimes a happy ending is nice too.

Summary:

There are all sorts of things that the rich take for granted.

 

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34522 Read Count: 78978
[Report This] Published: August 18 2013 Updated: September 17 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - It is MY Birthday!

I beat UHF to the 40th comment

Summary: A LAND OF THE GIANTS/RETURN OF THE JEDI crossover.
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Crush, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15848 Read Count: 90516
[Report This] Published: September 06 2013 Updated: December 06 2015
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: OBLIGATORY INTRODUCTION

I'm a bit lost here, please tell me if I read correctly.

Basically a ship from the star wars universe and what sounds like some kind of experimental aircraft from our universe get sucked into a wormhole and land in some girls soupbowl?

Genius.



Author's Response: Almost. But, not quite. ;-D

Lethal Beauty by lfcfan Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

A modern-day city at the mercy of an unforgiving giantess. My attempt at a classic city rampage.


Categories: Destruction, Butt, Crush, Insertion, New World Order, Violent, Vore, Sci Fi / Fantasy
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21272 Read Count: 91855
[Report This] Published: September 10 2013 Updated: March 18 2014
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter four

And so the slaughter continues. I only wish I had more opportunities to indulge myself in reading, so that I could enjoy this story as it is updated.

God I loved it when she swallowed those cars. I'm a huge fan of mouth play and vore, so the thought of that massive giantess tossing those citizens into her mouth was quite exciting.

I look foward to reading more



Author's Response:

Thanks AW! I too have this problem where I can't really find the time to simply sit down and enjoy reading the updated stories these days. I have to catch up to your latest chapter on Maria's Prison, quite a few chapters on the Silver Haired Giantess, Splinter's Edge etc.

Hopefully next month, I'll have more free time. Can't want to also start writing my next story too. :)

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter three

I apologize for not reading in a while my RL has been hectic. Anyways I love the continous slaughter and I look foward to reading the rest of this.

Also...

"she was the ultimate monster because she represented everything that the human mind feared. She represented the ultimate unknown, the first basic fear, an entity so familiar in form, but so strange and terrifying in scale and behaviour at the same time that it was too difficult to accept and make sense for the human mind."

Dude... I think you just sumed up the whole fetish in a single paragraph.



Author's Response:

Heh, I'm very glad you liked that part! Since I've started writing, I've found myself to like lingering on those psychological aspects that define our fetish, and it's great that you've picked that up! :)

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter two

I enjoyed the cat and mouse part near the beginning where she got inside her preys head. It made the slaughter that followed afterwards quite exciting and at the same time much more personnal because we the reader had been given both sides of the disaster.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I guess what you described was my aim, and I must have done well! :D