Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed
Date: August 02 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Married to Barbara
I feel that for your first story your grammar and spelling are pretty good, and your dialogue is well constructed and flows naturally.
I concur with jacksmith in that this is not a parody but rather more of a commentary.
anyways I think this story is really interesting in they way that it reads like a slice of life. there is no dramatic death sequence, or over the top shrinking scene, just two people interacting with each other despite their size differences.
this story is probably the one of the closest things you can get to telling a realistic giantess story.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words.
To be honest, this isn't the first time I dabble in creative writing. And I'm 31 and started learning English at the age of 12 I think, so I got to have something to show for.
That realism is what I try to achieve, and I glad it came over that way. In retrospect I which I could have laid it on thicker, being more overdramatic in the beginning and have made the nagging more excessive.
Since I posted this story I had so much like these experiences in real life that made me think... damn, this should have been in that story.