Penname: Amateur Wordsmith [Contact] Real name: Jared
Member Since: February 09 2013
Membership status: Member
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Summary:

Would you do anything for your family? Anything?


Categories: Body Exploration, Giantess, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18897 Read Count: 83018
[Report This] Published: January 02 2013 Updated: April 01 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 18 2013 Title: Chapter 5: A 'Little' Talk

My god man your right she's just as fucked up as my Angela lol if not more so because her brand of crazy is suprisingly realistic given her age and the situation.

I'm beginning to suspect that you are the main character and that this story is real.

...

very suspicious

Btw your dialogue puts mine to shame. the dialogue tags are good lengthed and not to wordy and she talks like an actual teen which impresses me because I still have friends who are in high school so I know how they talk



Author's Response:

Hah, many others were also like "Dafuq?" when chapter 6 came out. Threw them for a loophole, lol.

As for the story being real, my middle name is Andrew... Which is where I got the name from. And thanks for the dialogue compliment! And don't be too hard on yourself! Your dialogue rocks! 

When I wrote my first story, I couldn't write worth shit, so you're doing a spectacular job for a first. But glad you like this story!

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 18 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Deja Vu

This is gettin good I couldn't stop at chapter 5



Author's Response:

Glad you think so. I have HUGE plans for this story. And I've only just started.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 18 2013 Title: Family Matters

Alright I have finished reading 'The autobiography of dudemanguy' and I have to say this was certainly a pleasing and fairly erotic story. I'm glad your a writer who finishes his stories unlike so many on this site.

Once again the dialogue is so natural and realistic that I can't help but wonder if perhaps you have experienced something the other writers have not.

my only complant is dare I say that the erotic content is a little dry and needs more  physical details to get the audience all... excited.



Author's Response:

LOL "Autobiography of Dudemanguy" I wish. Anyway, with the erotica, it's coming up in the next couple of chapters. Just wait. Glad to hear that criticism, just what I need! 

And thanks so much for your compliments on my dialogue! I always think it to be "boring and unrealistic" but I guess not!

So glad you like it!

Summary:

Heather and Lauren are nemesis'.  Heather a nerd and Lauren a jock.  After years of being picked on by Lauren, Heather decided to show that her brains can give her the upper hand.  She designed a shrink ray to shrink Lauren.  With it, she could have the physical advantage over Lauren and make her pay.  A simple mistake, however, had catastrophic results for Heather.


Categories: Adult 30-39, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5498 Read Count: 12064
[Report This] Published: January 08 2013 Updated: January 08 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed
Date: February 11 2013 Title: Chapter 1: That Should Be Me

After seeing you on the shoutbox I figured I would give your stories a try.

I enjoyed the interaction between heather and Lauren, and the fact that the bully wins is an interesting dynamic that I feel makes the domination of heather that much more devistating to her

please continue if you can



Author's Response:

Since I've gotten requests to continue with this story, I will.  I already have something in mind.  It may take awhile though.  I have requests to continue other stories; stories I had no plans going back to.  But that's the great thing about sharing your stories.  You never know how much others are going to like them.  :)

Sizer High by Youlooktasy Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 45]
Summary: A freshman guy's first day at a high school where older students can shrink younger ones.
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Entrapment, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Toilet, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22329 Read Count: 103196
[Report This] Published: January 09 2013 Updated: August 23 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I wonder what happens to these kids if and when they graduate from high school? does the cycle of shrinking and killing just continue throughout college (if they even have colleges) or maybe they get a reward with invicibility for surviving or something.

Also can adults shrink people or do they get that ability taken away from them?

Lastly I was hoping that the main character would take some kind of moral stand against shrinking, but yeah... poor red headed girl.

Awesome story. I am left with so many questions which is a good thing.

 



Author's Response: I actually have a mini story exploring their lives after graduation planned in this universe if I ever finish this story, but hopefully the upcoming chapters will answer your other questions soon enough. As for when he eats the tiny girl, I was always kind of annoyed in stories where shrinking is commonplace where the main character was the only one who didn't shrink people, with no logical reason except for the 4th wall-breaking one that the author wanted to avoid the over-dramatized M/f taboo. Thank you for the review.

Summary:

Sammy throws a party for her best friend while inviting a bunch of her enemies.  What was she thinking?


Categories: Scat, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14471 Read Count: 131985
[Report This] Published: January 18 2013 Updated: May 13 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed
Date: February 12 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I started reading this when I was a guest and let me say I am very pleased with the direction this story is taking.

I love stories where one gts is aware and another is unaware

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 06 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Another excelelent chapter I love it when the tinies are trapped within the gts's shoe well done

Summary:

A female explorer gets stranded on an alien planet. With no recollection of how she got there, she must find a way to coexist with the miniature civilization.


Categories: Maternal, Giantess, Adventure, Couples , Gentle, Growing Woman
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13691 Read Count: 43362
[Report This] Published: February 19 2013 Updated: February 17 2014
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter II: Countryside

Dudemanguy I must know your secret for writing so quickly I swear in the time it takes me to write a chapter you could write a whole damn story lol

And once again I gotta say dude your writtings solid keep it up



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks! I guess practice makes perfect, right?

Just keep on doin it man.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17 2014 Title: Planet of the Tinies

The final part of this chapter felt like a classical era play. The king, the giant, the craftsmen, etc. It was all quite well put together.

In a way this chapter reminds me of Shakespeare, all that tragedy and scheming.

Good job dudeman

 



Author's Response:

Wow, much shorter than I expected

Well... Thanks.

 

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17 2014 Title: Planet of the Tinies

Well if you want a longer review than ok...

First of all. The emperor is clearly the MVP of this chapter in my opinion. His heartfelt speech about how Amanda carelessly tossed Thomas's affections aside is something that all men can relate to and I felt that it was excellent.

Thomas on the other hand is a plus and a minus. On the one hand I admire his passion for Amanda, and how he went to such lengths just to figure out if she cared; on the other hand, I think he was kind of a scumbag for resorting to such deception.

All my sympathy is with Amanda right now. She walks to the emperors house expecting some standard imperial fare and instead has to witness her friend and co-pilots death, and then get publicly condemed by the leader of an entire nation.

There! I hope that has satisfied your review lust Mr.Dudemanguy

 



Author's Response:

Much Better!

Almost all of what you said here ran through my head while I was writing this chapter.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 13 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter V: Escorts

I am glad to hear that you haven't died. hope to see more updates from you soon. :D



Author's Response:

I hope to keep it that way. On both conditions.

Summary:

Jim and Carol are a married loving couple planning their very first tests of their own home made time machine. What could possibly go wrong in this tale of two small lovers. Fighting for their lives in a universe completely unaware of them, can they make it out together? Or will they bring about their own demise?

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FM/f, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11994 Read Count: 50624
[Report This] Published: March 01 2013 Updated: January 26 2014
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed
Date: March 02 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 First Test & Dinner

what an unusual couple of goofballs you have seem to have written. I enjoy the dynamic between them keep up the good work



Author's Response:

I should have tahnked you for the reveiw long ago, at that time I was still new to GTW. SoI'm sorry. Thnak you for the review and I hope you like the coming chapters in October.

Thought Given Form by UHF Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: This short story is based on a dream I had the other night. It was a pretty good dream! ;)
Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1 Read Count: 5762
[Report This] Published: March 01 2013 Updated: March 01 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 02 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It seems you draw inspiration from your dreams as well. :D



Author's Response:

I'll take inspiration anywhere I can find it. If it happens to find me first, even better!

Summary:

A high school senior with no future is shrunken will he find an opportunity for a new life or a quick route to death.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Feet, Gentle, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26708 Read Count: 78987
[Report This] Published: March 01 2013 Updated: July 11 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed
Date: April 03 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Unlikely Friendship

Sorry I misposted on Carycomics review I was meaning to say that the plot will continue on chapter 9.



Author's Response:

shut up Amateur Wordsmith you moron

Journal by Firestone Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A look into the journal of a madwoman.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7030 Read Count: 8456
[Report This] Published: March 02 2013 Updated: April 23 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 02 2013 Title: Chapter 1: March 2nd, 2013

There are few stories where it is from the giantess's perspective its refreshing to see something like this pop up every now and again keep it up

 

One Night Stand by Deelann Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Jason met Tasha and had sex the same night.  Afterwords, he regretted it when he realized Tasha's psychotic nature.  Tasha took his house key with the intentions of frequent unexpected sex-filled visits.  As Jason avoided Tasha, he met Pam.  Together they made arrangements to get the key back and get Tasha out of their lives.  Their plan didn't work out as expected when they discovered that Tasha had a plan of her own; to keep Jason forever.


Categories: Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Instant Size Change, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5146 Read Count: 8282
[Report This] Published: March 04 2013 Updated: March 04 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04 2013 Title: Chapter 1: One Night Stand

another good story deelann once again though I find myself jealous of your ability to write dialogue lol

anyways Keep up the good work



Author's Response:

Thank you Amateur Wordsmith.  I learned that dialog is critical.  Not only does it place the reader deeper into the story, it lengthens the story.  Each time someone speaks, you have to make a new paragraph; making the story longer. <---  A little trick of the trade.  ;)

Summary:

Lindsey took a cruise to get away from stress and to find love.  She found herself stranded on a beautiful island with tiny inhabitants.  While struggling to coexist with the tiny inhabitants, Lindsey finds that love may be hard to find, but pleasure is for the taking.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13659 Read Count: 61612
[Report This] Published: March 09 2013 Updated: March 13 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Stranded but not alone

Deelann has anybody told you how lucky you are to have a girlfriend who shares your interest? because if not than im going to let you know now.

anyways I love this story the fact that both a girl and a guy were responsible for writing it really shows. It makes the emotions of lindsey seem that much more realistic and combined with your imagination deelann its just well...exquisite.

I haven't finished it upon writing this comment but ill let you know once i'm done :D



Author's Response:

Good Evening Amateur Wordsmith,

Deelann would looooove to comment to you on how lucky he is to have me but sadly (for him), he did not obey command #1. As I type, he is crying out as I smoosh his tiny body with my massive foot. I don't think he's feeling too luck now. (Evil Grin)

Don't worry, I will still allow him to write and post more stories, he'll just be doing so a tad bit bruised.

Glad you are enjoying the story, more to come!

 

oxox!

Mistress Anez

"Never wake a sleeping Giantess...she might be hungry!"

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Goddess of War

This story has so many possibilites I'm excited for whats to come. Will they join forces with her to destroy other villages? or maybe she will just go nuts and kill all of them?


Also both of you are very industrious writers  I mean the two of you have put out 4 chapters since the last time I read this.


 


btw Anez if you don't mind me asking how did you discover that you had a thing for this?



Author's Response:

Good Evening Amature,

 

I'm very happy that you are enjoying our story but need to tell you that we had already finished it when we were posting. We wanted to post a chapter at a time to see how it would go over. While we wanted this story to do well, we were estatic at the response of the readers. <3

 

To answer your question about this new discovery...well, I've always loved to read and I have a very open mind. Dee put his trust in me and allowed me to read his work. I thought it was one of the most sexiest things I have ever read. Then to learn that this was an actual genre I was in awe. Little by little Dee would allow me into this world when all I wanted to run in and see what was next. 

Dee helped me to bring out my inner giantess. I felt like Alice in Wonderland choosing "Eat me." to make me grow. Seeing things from a different prespective was so exciting.... and powerful. My love for this world has grown as spicy as my love for Dee. 

I am an extremely busy Giantess and ALWAYS on the go. As much as I would love to be here to chat and someday to write on my own story, it doesnt work out. I love that I had this opportunity to finally create this with my little man. He small enough to whisper exotic fantisies in my ear, to use as a foot massage and to fit into my heart when I'm on the go. Nothing can beat a portable little man.=)

I hope that answered your question...sorry if it was lengthy but I couldnt help this opportunity to lift up my little man and show my love.  Thank you again for your reviews and truly happy that you enjoyed the story!

 

Mistress Anez

 

 

Summary:

A girl plays with an ant. Featuring an alternate ending!


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Animal, Crush, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1226 Read Count: 10085
[Report This] Published: March 17 2013 Updated: March 17 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 18 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow this is really arousing and you have quite the way with words, instant favorite for me.

Mimi by wildcatman Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

A Shrinking story.  Your suggestions will be used in the next chapter.  Just review what you'd like to see happen to tiny Dan,  but, nothing too crazy.....


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12232 Read Count: 30713
[Report This] Published: March 24 2013 Updated: September 22 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed
Date: March 25 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'd hate to sound like one of those people but I would enjoy some feet interaction

Also I find it curious that the age of the giantesses is only barely hinted at. Was this done on purpose because if so its a good writting strategy and congrads on using it properly.



Author's Response:

Yes, the 'age' is disreguarded, in this one.  I plan on just making a quick 'Daydream-like' exsperiance.  A hortatory work, meant to inspire , and honour the Hesperus.