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Castaways by RMWALA Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 46]
Summary:

Three friends get in a huge and messy accident, findind themselves stranded on an island completely uninhabited by people. There's a few species however that should be taken note of on the island, and a mysterious force surrounding that said island has left them with a big surpirse and unknowingly to them a big gift as they enter and attempt to survive their predicament. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Couples , Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Maternal, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25593 Read Count: 107115
[Report This] Published: January 14 2014 Updated: March 21 2015
Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22 2014 Title: Castaways

I can see why Aren wants to keep his friends a secret.  After his "break up" with Natalie, he wants these 2 for himself.  For Michael, its about staying safe.  He and the Captain have the biggest disadvantage of all the groups on the island, they're normal sized.  For Natalie, its plain shock.  She's not the biggest anymore.  And if going by how she handled being the biggest in a group of normals, Izzy would probably take over and displace her new leadership role.  I don't want to be any of them when its discovered they lied to their new companions.  Though Izzy may be neutral on human companionship, what about MALE companionship  She's the oldest woman on the island so far and appears to have been there the longest.  Unless she's a lesbian and if Ally and Dea are any indication, she's going to want to have some male fun.

Please continue!

Erica's House by realRS Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

When every member of her family is shrunk to doll size 16 year old Erica becomes head of the house. 

Will the Rockwell family adapt to the once shy Erica being in charge?  Will Erica let the power go to her head?  


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, New World Order, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28671 Read Count: 97245
[Report This] Published: January 16 2014 Updated: September 29 2016
Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection

I'm glad to see this story continue.  As you said, I'm looking forward to the kinky stuff.  In the first chapter, it looked like Erica was trying to maintain some kind of social life for her siblings.  Maybe even trying to set some of them up.  For her, it could be a way to eventually unload some of her tiny family members by partnering them off to someone else that would take responsibility for them.  The fewer shrunken family members she has to take care of, the more freedom she has to pursue some measure of her own life.  I can already forsee that Britanny is going to have a rough time when she shrunks with her soriority caring for her.  Interested to see how she can be rescued from that.  Keep up the writing!



Author's Response: I'm looking forward to the kinky stuff too! The story began as an fantasy romp, but as I grew to love the characters I back more invests in exploring their transitions. There will definitely be some pure embarrassing fun in the coming chapters, but the real crazy kink will have to come in other stories. Next chapter though is going to have our shrunken heroes dealing with a whole group of giggling girls, exploring how to have fun with women other than Erica, and generally finding out what life as a toy really entails.

Reviewer: riczar Signed
Date: January 17 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection

A good start.  I look forward to maybe getting a little more background info on this world.  Is shrinking common?  How has society dealt with it?  I noticed some references to some of the giant people having crushes on the small members, and potetial relationships being encouraged.  Would those end up being somewhat "normal" relationships (as possible with the size differences), or is a pet/master relationship?  Lots of potential here and many possible stories that can be told.  Hopefully all this info with trickle out in future chapters!



Author's Response:

I wanted to start things up with an interesting situation rather than just give a data dump, but a lot more info about this world will be coming soon.  If I leave anything unexplained just let me know and I'll fill in the blanks.

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Managing the Suck

Good story so far!  I know its going to be a while, but I'd really like to see  Erica set the brothers up with the girls that had crushes on them.  I'd like to see what kind of "normal life" they can try to have.  We're seeing how Erica as the guardian treats them, but what about the everyone else they knew and society at large?



Author's Response:

I'm actually a bit anxious to get back to the present as well, I have a bunch of notes on their ongoing lives once everyone has adjusted to the new world.  It'll be awhile though, maybe I'll insert a 'back to the present' chapter at some point.

 

 

Summary:

It's been three years since Arell returned to her home planet and while everyone tries to recover from the trauma of her arrival, a scientist and her team performs an experiment that results in catastrophe that is even bigger than Arell herself. Bradley Peterson, who had returned to his normal life, finds himself reunited with his friends as they get wrapped up in another enormous adventure as the military tries to deal with an immense new threat.


Categories: Gentle, Butt, Adventure, Crush, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23493 Read Count: 53315
[Report This] Published: January 19 2014 Updated: January 28 2014
Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The Teleportation of Dr. Elizabeth Monica

Looks like things are getting into full swing.  Since Dr. Monica is stuck giant-size, maybe Arell's people can use her to help guide Earth towards a peaceful future.  The first of a new breed of giant-size Earthies.  Looking forward to future chapters.

Summary:

What started out as an accident led to the blooming love between a boy and a giantess. Both struggle to live in each other's worlds as their differences become obvious.


Categories: Gentle, Giantess, Feet, Couples
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58169 Read Count: 173024
[Report This] Published: January 21 2014 Updated: May 30 2015
Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Day 0: An Accident

A good start!  I agree that asking for the date came too quickly.  You could have built the relationship up a little more before he did that.  It was possible, since he was going to see her the next day anyway while she delivers his new scooter. 

I'm going to assume by the way you've worded things that this is a world with only giant women, no giant men.  Does that mean in order to produce more giantesses, they have to breed with normal size males?

While reading I was wondering if this was a world where all females are giant, and all males are small.  You didn't mention the sex of any other person, so it could be a possibilty (one that I welcome btw).

I looked forward to seeing how this pans out.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I plan on expamding on the gender distribution in the future, but for now I've only had giantesses in mind. Do you have any preferences to this?

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Day 2: Close Encounter

Good chapter!  And since you asked . . . I would go with the giantess only route.  In order for there to be harmony between tinies and giantesses, I would imagine they would need something from the other; a way to relate to eachother as intelligent beings.  Otherwise you get a giantess race of oppressors who will squash, eat, and toy with the tinies.  So either the giantesses are science enhanced humans, humans with a gene for giantism, or magic.  This would enable the giantesses and tinies to breed with eachother.  Giantism could be a recessive gene, only active in females.  Occasionally you get a tiny family that would suddenly birth a giantess.  They would stay with the family for a year or two before they could no longer care for her, then an adult giantess or the government would take her and raise her in the giantess zone.  Unless one of the parents is a giantess.  Nothing is obsolute in nature, so male giants are possible, but extremely rare and they have same chance to produce giant offspring as everyone else, or not.

Going with what you have so far, maybe there was some tension between the races in the past.  Since giantesses need tiny males, they would kidnap them and use them.  Giantesses couldn't oppress tinies forever, since tinies are more numerous and combine that with advanced technology, tinies could kill giantesses, possibly to extinction.

Just some ideas.  In the end I just like to see happy giantess-tiny relationships, and not have it be too rare, but rare enough when you probably consider the small size of the giantess population compared to the relatively large tiny population.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! I was thinking of separating the two races, actually. While inter-species romance is possible, the two are like lions and tigers: clearly different, but nothing's stopping them ;p I'm still thinking on how they rely on each other, but I might have hit an idea while I was writing. Look forward to it!

Reviewer: riczar Signed
Date: June 29 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Day 0: An Accident

I bet the Northern Giantesses want to talk to the Southern Giantesses about importing some tinies.  I imagine that any tiny that could fled to the south, leaving the poor, sickly, and crazies (that would probably be us) behind.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, riczar!  They certainly have an agenda,  but you'll see how it unfolds :) 

Summary:

The story about a rampaging giantess and the only hope to stop her, a young superhero. 


Categories: Destruction, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Growing Woman, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15630 Read Count: 85645
[Report This] Published: January 27 2014 Updated: February 23 2014
Reviewer: riczar Signed
Date: February 23 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: The Aftermath

This ending is better then the first one, but still seems kind of weak.  I liked the almost omninous way you had Allison survive in the last one.  Like she could return some day.  Remember, the shrinking formula was untested and rushed.  It was nice for Mark to learn a lesson from this, but it just rubs me the wrong way that he would subordinate himself to Chuck and become a hero.  It might seem better if he became an anti-hero, or a hero with an attitude.  I just think you wrapped it up a little TOO cleanly.



Author's Response:

I know what you mean.  Especially about Mark subordinating himself, but I had a reason for this.

 

*Cough* Sequel *Cough*

Summary:

2018 update: It’s been 4 years since I last updated but I hope you all still enjoy the story!

A seemingly average college student struggles to live a normal life while afflicted with a rare genetic disorder...


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adventure, Body Exploration, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34427 Read Count: 78104
[Report This] Published: February 01 2014 Updated: October 08 2018
Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: The truth comes out

Your story is coming along pretty good.  I like the interaction and relationship between the characters.  Play it right and you could be on your way to a classic.  You're going at a pretty good pace too.  Never having to wait too long before the next chapter.  The coming chapters look like they'll be interesting.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the support! Unfortunately, the speed of my chapter-posting will probably decrease, as I'm writing this on my own while also attending college.

Summary:

A young successful man got the shrinking virus, a disease his father got before he did. How will he cope up with the fact he gets weaker ? And how will act his family and friends ?


Categories: Slow Size Change, Giantess, Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46432 Read Count: 260071
[Report This] Published: February 08 2014 Updated: April 16 2014
Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 11 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Back at school with friends.1/2

Looking at the way Steven thinks about his relationships and how it would be when he shrinks noticably, you'd wonder why he isn't considering suicide.  I hope he can come to terms with it, find someone that can actually care for him and dig out some kind of tolerable life when he's too small to live normally.



Author's Response:

Well this disease kind of destroyed his whole future so it is really hard for him to deal with that. He is however too pride to let himself die or submit. He is in a bad mood at first because he doesn't know how to react, I don't want to tell too much what's coming next but don't forget that he has many friends and even back home he can counts on his big sister and brother. Don't worry you'll see a badass Steven and some good allies pretty soon. ;) Thanks for your review !

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The shrinking virus

Good chapter and a bit uplifting of the mood of the last few chapters.  Honestly if I were in his shoes I would be doing everything in my power (while still able to) to safeguard myself after I get too small to live a normal life.  Especially so that his stepmother doesn't become his guardian.  I would think he could still designate a guardian at this point.  There has to be counseling and general support for people in his situation.  His father acted too slowly and thus stuck with his bitch of a wife.  Scott at least had something to offer his wife to take care of him and his family.  Steven has nothing to offer except practical enslavement.  I look forward to seeing where you go with this.



Author's Response:

Hi, really interesting comment, Thanks.

Yes Steven is now seriously thinking about his future, what will he do ? Where will he go ? And also with who ? Will he let Megan and Scott in this house or will he be able to do something to help them ? 

You let some proposition in your comment that are really interresting, of course there should be some organization to help shrinkers but Steven is not the kind to let himself be guided somewhere without checking by himself, He would rather find by himself where he could go or who he could call for help and find someone who could be his guardian,the problem is that in this society shrinkers are seen as source of disease and less than human, so he has to be sure his potential guardian won't be someone like that. 

Thanks for the review and stars ;)

Italykeke 

Reviewer: riczar Signed
Date: March 14 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The shrinking virus

Glad that you're still writing.  Steven's a smart guy, but his pride is going to ruin him.  I hate to point out the obvious.  He's putting himself right into Jade's clutches.  He can resolve this by simply telling everyone.  He still has enough size to matter.  If he does what Jade tells him, he's guranteeing that Jade and her mother will get custody of him.  I really would like to start seeing some common sense from him.  The clock is ticking and he doesn't have time to mess around being Jade's slave and giving up half his money.  I look forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

More chapters will be added soon, Yes he is indeed a really pride person, but as he isn't stupid he will deal with it don't worry for that, the problem is that anything in this society is done against shrinkers, and it's really hard for them to just run away from their home. Will Steven manage to escape before it's too late or not ? I guess we'll see soon! Thanks for your kind words too ! 

Reviewer: riczar Signed
Date: March 17 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The shrinking virus

I was just going to comment on the previous chapter and how things seemed to finally be looking up for Steven.  Then I read the latest chapter and it looks like he's stuck again.  He's not THAT small yet, can his stepmom really seize control like that?  A couple of chapters ago, I thought that the law treats shrinkers as disabled people with guardians, but the last couple of chapters I'm getting the impression that shrinkers have no rights whatsoever.  Troubling and even more for a reason that Steven gets his friends involved and makes some moves to extract him from that obvious unhealthy household.  Frankly I think his side of the family needs to get out of that house fast!  Is Megan really that inept?  It's going to take her finding some courage to start turning things around.  She might be able to get a job, get custody of her brother and maybe make a deal with her stepmother for her father (he keeps helping her with her job in exchange for letting him go).  For now I ride the emotional rollercoster of your fine story and pray for a happier ending.



Author's Response:

Thanks for showing that much interrest in the story.
This story shows 2 different things in society: If the government do present them as disabled person, who need someone trustworthy to take care of them, many persons doesn't accepts them as normal persons, as the disease isn't well known at all there are multiple rumours about shrinkers that only engender hate towards them. Megan is introduced as a weak minded person,scared and became more and more submissive person since her father shrunk at first. I don't really want to speak too much of her evolution througout the story but she might be one of the key character that will influence in a good way ( or not ) Steven.

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 16 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The shrinking virus

I've suspencted for a while that there was more to Jade and her "obssession" with Steve.  I can only hope that her feelings are true and that this won't go horrible wrong.



Author's Response:

Ha ha, I guess you'll find out in the coming chapters ;)

Summary:

Chloe finally gets to use the serum, and along with Jennifer's help, two more unsupecting victims fall into the ultimate experience. 


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59028 Read Count: 172818
[Report This] Published: February 16 2014 Updated: April 27 2014
Reviewer: riczar Signed
Date: March 25 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Bob keeps descending further and further into shrinking man hell.  It seems every bad thing possible is going to happen to him.  And now he's stuck with total strangers, so his chances of getting back to his wife are very low, unless he gets help.  Not likely considering how every woman he's encountered has treated him.  I hope things start turning around for him soon.  Keep going!



Author's Response:

Ha!  Yeah, He's getting passed around like a hot potato, but- he did have a pretty nice time with Diane?  At least, he didn't end up going on the road with Roseanne! I don't know if he'll ever get back to his wife, although he doe's still stand a slim, but small chance of reuniting with her...

Summary:

Different entertwining stories from a world much like our own yet incredibly different. 


Categories: Violent, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Couples , New World Order, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39561 Read Count: 85262
[Report This] Published: February 17 2014 Updated: June 29 2014
Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Runt of the Litter

You could spin this chapter off into its own story.  Teenage years are hard enough, but to be part of a shrinking minority or normal people could make it harder.  It might be nice to see his school life or hanging out with friends.  Maybe he has a normal girlfriend that elevates suddenly and having to deal with the awkwardness of relating to each other or deciding whether to continue the relationship or not.  But regardless, these stories are pretty good and you should definitely continue.



Author's Response:

We will be returning to Tyler soon and see what it's like for him at school. Maybe he has a girlfriend maybe he doesn't? Maybe he has a crush on an elevated girl? Maybe an elevated girl has a crush on him and can only show it buy bullying him so he doesn't move on to a normal girl? Who knows. I could see this as kind of a spin off but I'm afraid I might run out of ideas. We'll see. Anyhow thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 26 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Arrangement

I have a feeling things are going to hit the fan at Tyler's party and/or the upcoming wedding.  I too see that these stories just might be converging.  A very good chapter.  Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Quiet!...You're giving the plot away.

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 24 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Arrangement

And cue Super Ramona!  She just had another evolution.  Maybe this would include some kind of sense of  her loved one's condition and their location?  Anyway, I think Greg can kiss his remaining independence goodbye.  I'm anxious to get back to Dave and his problems.  Unlike the other normals, only his daughter cares what happens to him and she's too young to do anything about it.



Author's Response:

I can say Ramona doesn't have any power that lets her sense Greg besides that paranoia we all have sometimes. If she did Grag wouldn't have even made it to work. 

You're probably right Ramona may never let him leave the house again if she's not too distracted hunting down and murderering Greg's assailants

Dave....well..his life sucks. I'm surprised you readers even care about him. He probably deserves his own chapter but he's not that lucky. We'll get back to that soon, but we have other people to check on....maybe he'll win the lottery or something he's earned some good karma.

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Arrangement

Class 3, but still grows to the now "average" 15 feet.  We don't want to destroy all of Rain's dreams now do we?



Author's Response:

Hmmm. interesting.