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Member Since: February 20 2012
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Sizer High by Youlooktasy Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 45]
Summary: A freshman guy's first day at a high school where older students can shrink younger ones.
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Entrapment, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Toilet, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22329 Read Count: 128009
[Report This] Published: January 09 2013 Updated: August 23 2013
Reviewer: Ghost254 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a really well written story. It has a lot of potential, so I encourage you to write more for this story. I literally took the time to decode my long lost account here, as I usually just read and not give reviews, to make sure you continue this story. 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I only hope the greatness you saw in the first update will be ewchoed in later ones to make getting back your account truly worthwhile.

Summary:

A high school senior with no future is shrunken will he find an opportunity for a new life or a quick route to death.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Feet, Gentle, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26708 Read Count: 104502
[Report This] Published: March 01 2013 Updated: July 11 2013
Reviewer: Ghost254 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 02 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Friendship and Betrayal

Wow. That was extremely unexpected way for this to turn out to me. Good sotry, really interesting way you incorporate stuff. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it Ghost

Reviewer: Ghost254 Signed
Date: July 06 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Showdown: Priya Vs. Angela

Interesting story. Hard to follow and wth a lot of unexpected twists at every turn, but still good. Keep it up. 



Author's Response:

Welcome back Ghost254 I'm glad you find my story enjoyable.

I have really worked to improve my writing and after this final chapter I feel everything will be a lot clearer

Summary:

Danny is a tiny on the run. He has no family, no friends, no anything. When he is at his lowest point he will come across a safe haven and find himself a caring, sweet, and a bit over protective giantess willing to help him.


 


Categories: New World Order, Body Exploration, Teenager (13-19), Feet, Gentle, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7760 Read Count: 50452
[Report This] Published: April 07 2013 Updated: April 07 2013
Reviewer: Ghost254 Signed
Date: April 07 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 (Elena): His Birthday

Really nice story, not like al the other on this site, unique in it's own way. Can't wait to see how you take it further. Maybe a little voyeur, I don't know. I'm sure whatever you do will be good though. 

Summary:

Two long time friends(male and female) find themselves in a difficult position when the one of them is shrunken down and left at the mercy of his now ecstacy-high crush


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 618 Read Count: 7895
[Report This] Published: April 07 2013 Updated: April 07 2013
Reviewer: Ghost254 Signed
Date: April 08 2013 Title: Chapter 1: A new step

Cool story, would love to see how it turns out in the future. Short nfo/background but enough to give the reader an idea of how the emotions of eahc character should play out and the significance of this event. I don't review much here because im not good at criticizing, but I want to see this story advance. A bit fast-paced, but that's ow people usually like it here.Maybe a bit more detail on describing her, but that's ll I can think of for now. 

Summary:

This is the story of a young man who hates his current situation in life but finds a way to turn it around and live a life of adventure and new beginnings. All characters in this story are completely original and any likeness to anyone living or dead is merely coincidental.


Categories: Slow Size Change, Butt, Body Exploration, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40050 Read Count: 370143
[Report This] Published: May 06 2013 Updated: May 18 2015
Reviewer: Ghost254 Signed
Date: July 03 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Ethan and Lori

Such a twist, for me. Especially with this chapter. I was thinking that it was going to be Minnie, what with this only being possible with her as the "goddess" so you got me really good with this. Its a great story, keep it up.

Summary:

This will be an interactive story in which you, the reader can help influence what happens to Jake next! Simply leave a review with a general idea of what you'd like to see Jake put through next, don't forget to actually review though!

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Follow Jake, a half inch tall teenager as he adjusts to his new home life at his new shrunken size. In a world where a rare few are shrunk by a virus, and in which the shrinkees are typically abandoned or put out of their misery, Jake thought he was "lucky" to be going home with his family from the hospital, however, his three older siblings, a brother and two sisters, and their mother, might not have his best interests at heart as they each deal with their little brother in a variety of ways.


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), BBW, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18753 Read Count: 546402
[Report This] Published: June 25 2013 Updated: August 18 2013
Reviewer: Ghost254 Signed
Date: August 17 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

May one of the endings be him 'supposed killed off' but in the clutches of say Tara? Been reading this since it first came out, been a great story.

Pionus by QuiteTheCharmer Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Set in a fictional bronze-age world, a powerful, young, ambitious, and tactically genius warrior king finds himself with a very large challenge. This is my first one of these stories, so please give constructive criticism. 


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8553 Read Count: 30555
[Report This] Published: July 01 2013 Updated: July 05 2013
Reviewer: Ghost254 Signed
Date: July 03 2013 Title: Chapter 4: The Slave King

Just wanted to say you're doing a great job with this story. The fight sequences are done out well, including this one. Keep at the pace and rate you're going, want to say hurry up because of how good it is, but I don't want you to rush the quality of your great work. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you like the fight sequences, I think they're my specialty. And I will definitely keep at this pace, around a chapter a day. 

Summary:

The world's most average teenager finds himself shrinking down into the playful clutches of various gigantic women and facing sexy macrophilic doom of truly familiar proportions.

A short-ish parody of giantess fiction.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10396 Read Count: 66721
[Report This] Published: October 13 2013 Updated: October 26 2013
Reviewer: Ghost254 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Unsexual Set-up Bit That Many People Skip

Nice prologue, your sense of humor in this makes it very enjoyable to read. Pretty unique around here. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  More will be up soon.

You Decide by ChaosDuck Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 46]
Summary:

This will be a story completely dependant on you the readers.The premise starts us out in small town USA where young Jimmy Niele is a fumbling scientist working as a intern to Professor Janks a world class professional in the field olf molecular physics.Young Jimmy stumbles upon a formula intended to enhance human properties such as intelligence,strength and vitality.Well things don't go according to plan when Jimmy's girlfriend Sarah mistakes the formula as a bottle of soda because Jimmy foolishly stores it in the refrigerator.(Updated note :Jimmy can shrink in this story as well,the premise was originally about Sarah's growth however that limits your ability to pick the storyline)

At the end of each chapter there will be two to three choices,the option chosen by you the reader will determine the next phase of the story.The selection with the most votes will be the one we go with.


Categories: Adventure, Giantess, Growing Woman, Insertion, Young Adult 20-29, Butt
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3794 Read Count: 60632
[Report This] Published: March 18 2014 Updated: April 10 2014
Reviewer: Ghost254 Signed
Date: March 20 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two :Option B

Option A.

Reviewer: Ghost254 Signed
Date: March 22 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three:Option D

Option C. Actually like this democracy system, nice call. 

Reviewer: Ghost254 Signed
Date: April 10 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six :Option B

Option C...Maybe a little unaware with sister? Just an idea.



Author's Response:

Yeah that's a definite possibility.I don't know how I could incorporate it with the plot i've laid out ,although.....accidents happen.