Apple is precious, and this story is excessively adorable. The social media posts are a great touch, and the references in them are amusing and work well within the narrative. A world in which lamias come in three distinct sizes, each fully aware of humanity's position on the food chain, is truly a wonderful thing.

Starting here, so I can catch up to your current story. I like the idea of shrinking humans being a cultural practice among elves. Also enjoying the culture shock Miriel's experiencing in hume territory, and Bertram's stalwart resistance towards a hot elf toying with him. I'm excited to read further.

Great story. It's cool seeing how the characters' differing perspectives clash and affect one another (Miriel's naivete contrasting with Bertram's cynicism, Tyrael's experience with and respect for humans contrasting with her apprentices' inexperience, as well as how she bonds with Arthur whom actively wants to not be respected by elves).

As others have said, your worldbuilding is great in that you're always giving readers enough to be intrigued by without pushing the brakes on the story to give a lecture on fictional history. I've noticed that too in "Dark Elf's Apprentice," where at the time I read it, I didn't even realize it was part of a greater setting being built across multiple stories because the worldbuilding felt fully realized without having to convey every single detail about it.

Looking forward to more of Tyrael and Arthur, and I'm curious to see how they'll play out as the main characters in their story.

Hilarious premise. At least with genies, they aren't always depicted as screwing the wisher over, so it's understandable to be naïve around them. But a literal monkey's paw? C'mon, that's its whole deal! Silly witches.

I love the banter in this one, especially between Jessica and Carmella. I would've liked to have seen a more gradual escalation between Jessica and Thad in the bedroom rather than just jumping straight to sex (I was expecting more from the lego set, seemed like a fun way of flustering Thad before she really got big), but this is a more light-hearted one-shot, so I get not wanting to drag things out.

Shoutouts to random middle aged man w/ camcorder. Probably my favorite joke in this even before I realized who he was a reference to.

Overall, a lot of fun!

An awesome mash-up of a popular movie/game genre and size smut, beautifully realized, and gushing with love and homages to zombie fiction of all types. Excellent work here!

As usual, your characters were really charming, especially Barb, the geeky shut-in turned badass zombie-slayer determined to protect her tiny lover. The bleak, apocalyptic setting contrasted nicely with all the heartwarming (and sexy) moments throughout the story. Cassie and Pete were great additions too, offering a slightly different flavor of the size dynamic seen with Barb and John. And Celia made for a fantastic villain, perfectly bratty and despicable while remaining tantalizing in an almost cruel giantess sort of way.

I found it interesting that the tinies are normal sized people with bigs being actual giants considering the entire story took place in an area where everything is scaled to the giant's size, so it's almost like they aren't giant at all. Nothing wrong with that, it just stood out to me as an interesting design choice.

The story was absolutely entertaining throughout, and I really liked the happy ending with Barb finally finding her place in the world and the friends she gathered along the way, and all that other gushy goodness.   

A lot of great descriptions here. I like how kinetic the
story feels with the guy going from one mouth to the other and throughout the
body. Obviously, that’s how vore stories tend to play out, but the pacing and
details are super tight here. The scene where he’s in her stomach was cool; both
him and his girlfriend’s reactions really highlights the intimacy aspect of
vore.

Glad to see Arthur living the dream. That moment where Tyrael's reminded she'll vastly outlive him was very sweet, really tugs at the heartstrings. Interested to see where this research mentioned at the end of chapter goes since quests for immortality don't tend to go well in fiction. Looking forward to more!

I love that you used a game of billiards as your spin on the contest theme. It was fun switching between each character's perspective and witnessing the variety of torment they're put through.

Another great chapter! 

You're doing a good job describing all the different sizes on display. I love the details like how Ayla's breath nearly blowed Ryan away and how her tears sounded like rain to the clinic staff. Also, Ayla navigating the tiny parking lot and crushing the car beneath her knee was pretty fun. The characters continue to be very likeable, everyone's reactions in line with what'd I'd expect from them. 

If I'm to offer one criticism: there's quite a few instances of characters being referred to with the wrong pronouns, whether it's referring to the female characters as "he" or Ryan as "she" or either of them as "it." Just something to keep an eye on.

Otherwise, definitely worth the wait. I was a bit surprised how easy it was for me to jump back into this world after so much time away, but I think your writing left enough of an impact that I didn't even need to catch myself up, and then this chapter just keeps the good times rolling. Great work!

Really interesting from the get-go. That opening scene was beautifully detailed and provided everything I could want out of a mouth/vore scene (the one in chapter two was excellent as well), and I love the effort you put into establishing the sheer difference in size and power between the fairy and the giantess.

Your diction, as well as the character's names, does a great job of conveying the fae aesthetic. It makes for really strong visuals throughout the story.

Love how magic is described as strings connecting everything together. It's a visually intriguing way of depicting how magic is performed and viewed.

I was not expecting that gut-wrenching reveal at the end of the second chapter. It makes for an enticing motivation for the witch to eat more fairies, and I look forward to seeing where this story goes from here.