Great story. I love how you depicted the relationship and power dynamic between Sabrina and Buffy. It's both cute and sexy how into it they are.

Random thoughts now that I'm more than halfway through: Miriel and Bertram are really cute together. Loved Shelby being so undiscerning towards elves in spite of that being the whole point of her job as inquisitor. At least she could figure out Miriel's innocent. And good for that candlemaker! I'm glad reverse psychology always seems to work out for shrunken people.

This story is great, and I'm impressed with how well it's written. I love the dynamic between the four main characters. The dialogue is charming and comes off natural. The characters and their relationships develop at satisfying pace, and it's fun seeing them play into the size fetish stuff (especially Quinn). Thank you for writing this story.

This is a fun (in a messed up way) story. Wasn't expecting where it went, and I love that final knife twist. For being "written in a rush," you did a great job.

This was very entertaining. The premise and overall plot were already interesting, but were heightened further by great comedic timing. I laughed a lot. The fairies were especially hilarious with how emotive (and absurdly horny) they were. The narrative is also satisfying in its own right while still being filled with plenty of good smut. 

I've never read a size poem before, and this is really cool! Your word choice is excellent, describing so much with so few. And the plot itself is very cute. 

Finally caught up!

First, love Tyrael and Arthur's relationship. Whenever they're alone together is the best and most heartwarming parts of the story. Tyrael calming Arthur down after he killed the bandit, and her drunken ramblings in the most recent chapter are standouts. There's always a bittersweet undertone to their interactions thanks to Tyrael's fear of one day losing Arthur and her reckless desire to make him immortal, and that underlying sadness bolsters the better parts of their relationship by enforcing how important it is to relish those moments.

Second, I like how constantly reinforced the theme of death is throughout the story. Whether its Arthur's inevitable death looming over Tryael, Arthur killing the bandit to protect the party, or just everything going on with Varnay and the Crown of the Lich King, the reader is continuously exposed to death and that really drives home the desperation Tyrael feels to prevent Arthur's and excites me over what sacrifices she'll be willing to make for him (and how Arthur will even feel about all this when her goals become clear to him).

Third, I'm enjoying the party dynamic. Colin is a fun addition, being the feistier of the two humans and having a stronger connection to the two apprentices (it seems it doesn't take much convincing to get him into the elves' shrinking shenanigans, though his stubbornness still starks a nice contrast to Arthur who is openly into it at this point). I like Naz so far, hopeful she'll have a chance to take center stage at some point in the future. 

Fourth, Varnay is so intriguing to me. I'm looking forward to learning more about what his deal is in assisting Tyrael (obviously its to get the crown/its power, but I'm curious as to what he plans to do with it, what his motivations/goals are, etc.). I love villains that manipulate the characters from the shadows, especially when their ruthless, bloodthirsty vampires. I was kinda shocked at how restrained his "services" in the one town were, and it will be interesting to see if he pulls off anything more heinous in the future (or at least attempts to). Also excited to see what costs the Crown is guaranteed to come with and how it affects our party (physically or emotionally).

Fifth, I don't really know if it needs to be said, but the actual smut parts are always a treat. I don't praise that stuff enough in my reviews considering it's low-key the whole reason I'm even here, but all the ways people are shrunken and played with by various body parts are always so detailed, vivid, creative, enticing and any other positive remarks I can't come up with off the top of my head.

Thanks for writing smut so good that I feel compelled to analyze its themes and wonder what the plot has left in store. It still impresses me how well you weave traditional storytelling with erotica while excelling in both simultaneously and continually.

I love that you used a game of billiards as your spin on the contest theme. It was fun switching between each character's perspective and witnessing the variety of torment they're put through.

Another great chapter! 

You're doing a good job describing all the different sizes on display. I love the details like how Ayla's breath nearly blowed Ryan away and how her tears sounded like rain to the clinic staff. Also, Ayla navigating the tiny parking lot and crushing the car beneath her knee was pretty fun. The characters continue to be very likeable, everyone's reactions in line with what'd I'd expect from them. 

If I'm to offer one criticism: there's quite a few instances of characters being referred to with the wrong pronouns, whether it's referring to the female characters as "he" or Ryan as "she" or either of them as "it." Just something to keep an eye on.

Otherwise, definitely worth the wait. I was a bit surprised how easy it was for me to jump back into this world after so much time away, but I think your writing left enough of an impact that I didn't even need to catch myself up, and then this chapter just keeps the good times rolling. Great work!

Really interesting from the get-go. That opening scene was beautifully detailed and provided everything I could want out of a mouth/vore scene (the one in chapter two was excellent as well), and I love the effort you put into establishing the sheer difference in size and power between the fairy and the giantess.

Your diction, as well as the character's names, does a great job of conveying the fae aesthetic. It makes for really strong visuals throughout the story.

Love how magic is described as strings connecting everything together. It's a visually intriguing way of depicting how magic is performed and viewed.

I was not expecting that gut-wrenching reveal at the end of the second chapter. It makes for an enticing motivation for the witch to eat more fairies, and I look forward to seeing where this story goes from here.