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Catherine, aged 20, was just enjoying her day playing Magic: The Gathering at a local comic shop. Then, the strongest foe she'd ever faced turned up. The outcome... may not be what you expect.
I love a fresh take on the shrinking 'magic' genre, and this story is great! Lots of detail, and the gimmic is fun and new. On the smut end, great description and detail. As a personal taste thing, I don't enjoy the bug stuff but it's not the focus for too long. I'd like to see more MTG games, I can see a Yu-Gi-Oh style battle format, with giant consequences. Great job.
Everyone on campus knows Leah as the 'quiet girl' However, what they don't know is that she's been the one responsible for several of the disappearances lately. Shrinking down unsuspecting students and having her way with them has become a Friday night routine for her, but the most recent group is different.
Heavily revised on 10/6 to be more in line with how I wanted originally but lacked the writing skills to effectively convey, on account of it being my first ever story!
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I really enjoyed this read, it was nice to have so much variety in a shorter story. I'm secrelt hoping the tiny stuck in the spit lived to be crushed later on 😈
The descriptions were great, the increase in sexual tension building up was well paced. The ending was kinda cute, almost bittersweet.
Thank you so much! Its really nice to get a review on an older story <3
I'm glad you liked the build up, its always a pretty big focus for me in what I write! Totlly agree though that being crushed in spit is super hot!
Paige, Dylan and Jordan are part of a group of political activists who decide to attack a Vortex processing centre, with the aim of sabotaging their machines and saving thousands of people from being eaten. Things appear to go well at first, but then they run into problems...
This is an erotic story that is aimed at mature adults with macro- and vorarephilia. It contains depictions of physical and psychological violence that some people may find disturbing. Minors and people who feel that such depictions upset them are therefore explicitly asked not to read this story. Furthermore, this story is entirely fictional and all erotically portrayed characters are at least 18 years old.
Tags: Aware, Casual, Cruel, Digestion, Disposal, F/fm, Fatal, Human, New World Order, Shrinking, Soft Vore, Unwilling, Violent
This story gets so much right. Love the perspective swaps mixed with the differences in emotional tone; desperation and callous indifference. A good mix of watching and participating on both sides of the vore, with a surprising amount of character development in a short time while still being smut-driven. It reads like a good horror script, a nice 'will they survive?' suspense as the tinies are recognized. New to the vortex style, the themes of recognition and playful indifference are certainly among my favorite. Digestion is often overlooked or swept over, but I like the intense and pervasive detail here. My only complaint would have been to request some hard(er) vore but this is obviously a matter of personal taste and not of actual criticism. Going to come back to this one, and try the others.
Thank you very much! Yes, the perspective switches are something I enjoy writing for many different reasons. First of all, they just allow me to describe things from different points of view, thus enabling me to go into more details, but they also somehow serve to intensify the emotions involved, maybe because you literally get to see both sides of the story. It's always difficult to 'justify' the preds' actions in vore stories, but I always found stories that manage to portray their behaviour in a plausible way particularly appealing, and that's what I'm trying to achieve here as well.
Recognition features in some of my stories, though not all, whereas playful indifference is a recurring theme in pretty much all of them. And this is actually one of the few stories that doesn't feature any hard vore at all, whereas the others usually have at least one scene where some of the prey get chewed up - it also depends a bit on who the pred is. Drive-through is probably the one with the most hard vore so far. As a heads-up, that story also features a brief scene with a male pred, but that can easily be skipped since it isn't relevant to the rest of the story.
Caleb has a huge crush on his best friend's older sister. And by a stroke of luck, he gets be intimate with her. Very intimate.
Great work! A nicely executed short story, the descriptions were extremely explicit, which is a very good thing. I especially enjoyed the esophageal segment, not a lot of time is often spent on the space between the swallow and stomach. I liked the interior descriptions, and of course the detailed female masturbation.
I'm familiar with that comissioners preferences, and I think you brought the intestinal 'trip' to life quite well.
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On a stormy evening, a knight returns victorious from a bloody war that's ravaged her kingdom for decades. Expecting to be hailed a hero, she's perplexed to find the castle seemingly barren.
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Great start to what should be a very engrossing read! A good amount of characterization, and of course the unaware deaths were very well done. Certainly left me wanting more, I hope the next chapters arrive soon!!
I especially liked the spit scene, not a common method. Especially unaware!
Spit stuff is something I've felt has always been underused! Definitly one of my favorite ways to think about killing a tiny. Drowing in spit is undoubtedly towards the top of the list as pathetic ways to go out! The next two chapters are signficantly longer, but I felt like this was a good length for an introduction chapter! Really glad your liking it so far <3
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Thousands of humans are teleported to a foreign world via mysterious rifts. However, they hit a double whammy, when merely inhabiting the world shrinks them down even further. Fortunately, a team of esteemed scientists discovered a tree sap that not only stops the shrinking, but provides all-around nourishment to the humans. But there's a catch. The sustained harvesting of this sap kills the host tree, and as such, humans are perceived as a destructive invasive species in this world. The dominant species, giant elf-like creatures, perceive the humans as pests, and have embarked on a campaign to eliminate them. Can our heroine, Lin, and the other humans discover the secret of the rifts to return back to Earth? Or are they doomed to be eliminated with the legacy of an invasive pest?
I had the pleasure of reading an early copy of this story for editing and review. I must say that I adore the story and worldbuilding. There is so much here to explore with the Arpakies and characters that I really want to see more in this universe. I think that for more emotional impact (and more smut), a longer story needs to be told. I'm excited to see where this one will go, and I'm happy to have been given a chance to add my own input prior to the release. You have a good grasp of storywriting, and I think the scene with Arto is well done. I will be looking forward to more chapters, and I'm always willing to chip in my two cents if you'd like a review.
Keep it up, the possibilities you have here are endless and I'm sure you will bring some interesting perspectives to the genre.
Thank you so much for your comprehensive critique and admiration! I hope I can continue to meet expectations, and turn this story into something really special!
Jobless for many months and in desperate need of money, Josh goes to a rich house to do a quick computer repair for Mr. Fernandes, a very affable man.
Unfortunately for Josh, Mr. Fernandes' twin daughters are everything but gentle and he will learn it the hard way…
Copyright: This is a story written by me, and all characters/situations are my original work or are used with permission/'expectancy of permission' from other authors (which are mentioned in such cases). There's no intention of disrespecting anyone's work.
A fun story, I think it's certainly got a lot to offer. I enjoy the language swapping, it's easy to follow and adds some authenticity. There's a fun dynamic of speaking a language he doesn't understand. There's a lot of variety in interaction, and while I'm not usually into toilet stuff I can still appreciate it.
My only criticism would be to dwell a little longer on the steamier bits. The section where he's inside the sock gets a lot of attention, while the vore gets just a few sentences. That might just be my personal preference.
Oh, thank you for you review and criticism, they're very welcome! This story was originally commissioned by a Portuguese guy, closely based (at least physically) on two twin sisters he knows in real life, so to add to the 'realism' of the sisters in this story, I wrote them being Portuguese and speaking European Portuguese, as they do in real life.
About the little attention to the vore scene, it's because that vore scene in the first chapter isn't the main vore event of the story. There will be more vore and, yes, the incoming vore scene will receive a lot of attention. :D
