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Deus ex Machina by VivettaVenray Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

A hacker seizes control of society's shared virtual paradise for herself.

Lots of cruelty and reality-manipulation in this somewhat experimental story. I had the idea for this story for quite some time. However, I wanted to wait till I felt confident enough in my writing skill to do the idea justice. Of course, that moment never came, but I wrote it anyways. I hope it's enjoyed nonetheless! Content warnings inside. Comments and constructive criticism are more than welcome!

DISCLAIMER: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Object, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, New World Order, Nose, Sci-Fi, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102521 Read Count: 151008
[Report This] Published: November 30 2020 Updated: December 01 2020
Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Gray Skies

I just created an account to compliment you on this story.

I mean I began reading a few hours ago and nearly pauseless teared through until chapter 9.

I'm looking forward to more of Delta's Actions which will probably spin out of control quickly, someone as power-hungry as she won't stay in Bruce's Copy of the Minecraft Ripoff some crafty programmers whipped up after the original was "misstepped" out of existence for too long...

If I had godmode all-access to Paradise I would edit Delta's Name to "OZ_LoveMachine". (If you have no idea what that means google "Summer Wars Antagonist" and you will see why.)



Author's Response:

Oh wow thank you, that's nice of you do! I really do appreciate comments and the like, since they help me see what people like etc.

Happy to see you are enjoying the story, and yeah I don't want to spoil things, but Delta isn't exactly the easily satisfied type per-se.

I looked up that character you mentioned, very interesting!

Thanks again for sharing your thoughts thus far!

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: December 17 2020 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Scenarios

Frankly I want to try something like the Fantasy MMO from the first third of the chapter.

And if I am allowed to choose a race (and not just a class) I will go with Fairy. (To be as small as possible. ^^)



Author's Response:

Ha, I'm happy you seemed to enjoy that chapter.

Size in MMOs, other RPGs, and in game contexts in general is interesting to me as a theme/trope/whatever. It's something I might explore later in another story, but we'll see!

Continent Stroll by VivettaVenray Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A powerful being muses as she walks on the surface of a continent.

This first-person-perspective story is giga/tera content plus some omni stuff. Content warnings inside. Comments and constructive criticism are more than welcome!

DISCLAIMER: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Vore, Young Adult 20-29, Destruction, Feet, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4544 Read Count: 10659
[Report This] Published: December 10 2020 Updated: December 10 2020
Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: December 11 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"Bipeds in general make up most of the sapient species in the cosmos." - Star Trek likes that statement. :D

"I was feeling frisky, but not in the mood to call up any of the few beings around my level of existence. Even I exchanged dalliances now and then."

For all her godhood she still feels satisfied happiness after a good meal. But does she know she's merely a fictitious being thought-up by mortal?

I really liked how fast things excalated at the end. The blonde "goddess" may have been powerless after all (going by the vague hints in the story probably just a mere millions souls strong) but she was important enough to interrupt her playtime at least.

As weird as it may be I feel like this story was actually "valuable" to me. I learned quite a few new words (english isn't my first language after all). Was the usage of more uncommon words something that just happened or was it intentional?



Author's Response:

 

The character does enjoy a nice meal I'd say. Lots of flavors in a super cluster I'm sure.

I'm pleased you enjoyed the story! I'm happy you feel it helped you to learn some new words. For this story, I just used whatever words felt appropriate. I wrote it a few days before submitting it, so my memory might not be perfect on the matter, but I don't recall deliberately using fancier prose or anything.

I'm also pleased you enjoyed the escalation and all that! The blonde "goddess" showing up in the story was in part to help show the disparity of sizes/power that could occur in this universe.

Thanks again for reading and sharing your thoughts!

Growing On Me by lil_jon Rated: R [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Ranma Saotome wakes up one morning to find something very unexpected.

 

Given that his life is full of fiancees fighting to see which one will marry him, and enemies wanting him dead daily, that's saying something.


Content Warning: Women with penises


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Growing Woman, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2454 Read Count: 3574
[Report This] Published: December 28 2020 Updated: December 28 2020
Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: December 29 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice little story.

It strongly reminds me of the Zelda Majora's Mask Fanfic "Quad Towers" as it also included four female characters becoming giants to defeat an ancient evil. (MM lends itself very well to it, given the four giants that you need to rescue and Majora's Moon looming overhead all the time.)

I have two questions and a mistake to point out though:

1. Isn't the name of Ranma's father "Tenma", not "Cenma"?

2. Akane the "Brunette", isn't she more of a "Blu(e)ette", given her blueish hair color?

3. "As the three huge young women watched the sun set, they realized that the years ahead would be hard. But, they were together at least." Shouldn't that be "four huge young women" Or am I missing something?



Author's Response:

Thanks for catching those!  Yeah, it's not Cenma , it's Genma according to the Fount Of All Knowledge, Wikipedia.  I haven't seen the anime in I don't know how long, so the bluenette part slipped by me.  And yeah, it's four not three.  

 

I guess I need to proofread closer. 

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: December 29 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Forgot to point out that it really surprised me and made me happy to see a Ranma 1/2 Story pop up here.

There isn't much (and even less not plain-out bad) Ranma 1/2 Size Fiction out there.

Attack of the 49 foot giantess by GiantessFavorites Rated: X [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

She grows big and gets revenge. Join our Giantess Discord Chat room with over 3,300 Members at GiantessDiscord.com


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Futanari, Gentle, Growing Woman, Humiliation, New World Order, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3178 Read Count: 6024
[Report This] Published: December 30 2020 Updated: December 30 2020
Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: December 31 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A bit 08/15 gentle giantess story, but well executed.

And the end got a little more creative with the fact that Linda isn't stuck at her size but in fact can do way more with it than it seemed at first glance way beyond just "being about 50 feet tall".

There are two things that I don't quite get. They are in High School, right? At least Nick is, so why is he referencing a 1995 court case (wasn't that before his time?) and why don't get the authorities in touch with Linda's Parents?

I also don't get how "Lab Coat Guy" went from being overwhelmingly helpful, he didn't even blink on Nick's out-there demand for a food-stocked trailer for himself not for Linda, to antagonistic in no time.

Otherwise well made, nice little read.

Just as Nick himself said, their life will be quite interesting from here on out.

Especially given that Linda cannot "just" change herself but seemingly anyone. She probably needs to touch the person in question so that limits her powers but it's still incredible.

Big News by chainorchid Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

News stories from a world much like our own, except that some people happen to be gigantic.

Most articles will be written to accompany collages; collage links will be provided in chapter notes.

The series is focused on "the ordinary extraordinary", as one collager once put it. There will be none of the usual tropes like rampages or vore, but there will be the occasional accidental property damage.


Categories: Destruction, Giantess, Giant
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3289 Read Count: 21062
[Report This] Published: January 08 2021 Updated: January 22 2021
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Date: March 02 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Overcrowding threatens area tourism, report warns

The last update was in late Junuary and somehow I missed the sixth story until now?

 

That may be an unpopular offering as it devides where people of common heights and tall citizens are allowed to take their vacations but having designated areas similar to FKK (naked bathing) beaches in Germany may be a good idea to at least alleviate the problems.

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: January 18 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Snowball Fight Causes Delays, Blackout

One would think the Prefecture would employ giant people for (faster) snowclearing.

They don't seem to be particularly rare in Kitamura and vicinity (or this world that you've created in general).

That Nana Akiyama accidentely stole a car and four bicycles was surprisingly cute.

 

Now I can't help but think about how Stockholm's (btw absolutely insane) snowclearing machinery would operate in this world...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Yes, it would be convenient if giant people helped to clean up messes left by other giant people, wouldn't it? The reasons why we don't see that are probably going to stay nebulous, along with where all the giants live, what they eat and drink, and so on. :)

Glad you liked the bit with the vehicles. At least she gave them back!

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: January 11 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Clumsy Co-eds Crash Containers

I just read all four of this short stories and I love their light-hearted nature.

That you link collages from your GS-uploader page is a nice visualization help.

My favorite is the little tidbit about that the right boot left at the Nolden State Bridge ;) (or whatever San Narciso's Golden Gate Equivalent is called I doubt that "Bay Bridge" is the official title) is not to be auctioned as the rest of the clothes as a rare species took shelter there.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

I'm glad you appreciated the bit about the endangered species; I think that's my favorite detail from that one also. It came to me all of a sudden fairly late in the writing process.

As for the fake names, I realize they can sound silly at times but I have a few reasons for doing it... one being that it gives me the freedom to just make things up and not worry about consistency with real-life locations.

The Archives by Inwiththebooks, Asterisk Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Exactly what it says on the tin, herein are archives of RP logs from across the years of Asterisk and myself writing together. These will be a bit different than normal stuff we post as there won't be much formatting or editing done here. There may be a light bit of context given at the start of each chapter. They aren't in any order either, more of some highlights of ours posted every now and then we figured people might enjoy reading.


Categories: Adventure, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59470 Read Count: 31941
[Report This] Published: January 08 2021 Updated: August 21 2021
Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: January 12 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Black Silver

"Many still speak of your grand victory of the great shadow dragon Selithrax in these parts." He said. "I was hoping you could assist us with an infestation of bandits that have set up in a ruined castle nearby...

So they have slain the Shadowdragon? Were was prince Marth if you need him? Or did Annalisa carelessly crushed him and so they had to take over his destiny for a moment? And now they are stuck in New Game Plus totally overpowered hired to take care of some bandits...  I know that's unrelated but the situation just lent itself so good to this joke.

Otherwise, solid giantess couple sex.



Author's Response:

I mean Annalisa steps on a lot of humans carelessly, so its certainly possible Marth was one of them haha. Happy to hear you enjoyed our nonsense though!

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: January 12 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Black Silver II

"The 60-meter tall woman slid her boot[...]" So the duo grew, even if it were merely six meters, since their city-smashing sex in (or rather upon?) Farcay?

Annalisa watched the impact and the castle fall. "You know we technically have to return the princess alive." I thought Jezebel is supposed to be the (occassional) voice of reason in their relationship?

Eating the Princess would've been more impactful if they couldn't ressurect her, but then Jez would probably have merely chewed her near death's door and healed her from that point of total agony.

"And we will return you to the King. Well, at least a copy of you. Its a simple enough task to wipe some peasant, change her appearance and graft a copy of your memories onto her. A copy will be back, safe and sound. Meanwhile you, get to service us for the rest of your natural life." - Wow that's soul-crushing, especially for someone as arrogant and convinced of her own irreplacebility as Princess Astrava. And it just got better until the end.

Given the Princess' rotten personality the replacement will probably rule Reston better than the original would've eventually. The chances to find somebody with just as little empathy seem slim. And neither Anna nor Jez talked about copying her personality into the random peasant girl.

 

I liked the first chapter but I liked this one more for two reasons:

These are:

1. Showing sheer dominance (Arsekaslyx |as I read his name I was certain he would get introduced to some giant's arse btw| and his troops) and mental torment (Astrava) > complete disregard for the others caught up in their imtimacy.

2. I felt a little "cheated" that they didn't leave for their mission of bandit removal, even if the fellowing porn was absolutely worth staying in the city.



Author's Response:

Anna and Jez tend to be pretty delightfully lewd to write whenever we do it. As a personal note, not enough stories do the whole giants fighting other giant creatures and put them in their place. So its always fun to do.

Home To Stay by Zenra YAde Rated: R [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

After a stay at The Mini-Resort, Karen goes home. Her trip doesn't go as she plans.


Categories: Giant, Incest, Sci-Fi, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: M/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 512 Read Count: 3901
[Report This] Published: January 30 2021 Updated: January 30 2021
Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: January 30 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Home To Stay

Wow, that became way darker than I thought it would - and fast.

 

I guess that's kinda earned if you raise a rascist, as Karen obviously did.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback.

I'm glad you liked it.

Life Is Immense by lil_jon Rated: R [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Chloe Price is sick of the world fucking her over.  The residents of Arcadia Bay only see her as a stoner, a drop out, a loser.  The only person she has left is her First Mate, her childhood friend, Max Caulfield.

 

But life is going to get so much more interesting for them both.


Content Warning: Women with penises


Categories: Giantess, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4149 Read Count: 5239
[Report This] Published: February 08 2021 Updated: February 08 2021
Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed
Date: February 08 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

As I saw the title my first thought was it would be similiar to the video "Life is Giga" by analternateusername.

 

It's not like it at all (besides Max and Chloe become a pair of giantesses) but well written. They don't seem to act too much out of character, which is a good thing in all thing Fanfic.

I'm always a fan of accelerating Growth Spurts that get out of hand soon.

The fight against Ares in his function as the God of War was a little too easy for my liking, but otherwise not many complaints. I don't get why they had to become futas given you didn't do all that much with it but that's your's to decide.



Author's Response:

I guess I made the fight with Ares too easy, because of my dislike of Davd Madsen as a character.  If you've played the game(s), then you know he's a very easy person to dislike. I guess I could have made a human (albeit a very changed one) going up against a god, a stronger fight scene.

 

As for the futa, I let my tastes add something that really wasn't needed.  You're right, I didn't do anything with it, much

 

Thank you for the review!

Post E.M.P. Fun by Zenra YAde Rated: R starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

A power failure leads to two new lives.


Categories: Adult 30-39, Fantasy, Giant, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: M/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 641 Read Count: 2736
[Report This] Published: February 14 2021 Updated: February 14 2021
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Date: March 04 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow that got dark out of nowhere (in two ways I guess).

 

"You never truly know someone before you saw them in a position of unrivaled power" really is true I guess.

At least as far is Derek is concerned. I'm surprised that Cindy even wanted home to Greg as he heard before that he isn't the nicest person to be around...

A change or two... or three ! by Kurogane335 Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Jake find himself obtaining the power to change the world at a whim... what will he do with that is for you to decide !


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Breast Enlargement, Growing Woman, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49003 Read Count: 120391
[Report This] Published: February 28 2021 Updated: November 21 2021
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Date: March 02 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Regarding the title: [...]or three(hundred) perhaps?

 

"[...], he had to sleep with the windows open, praying that nothing nasty would come in." - I don't get Jake here... Has he never heard of Fly Screens? They're cheap too. Did work out for him as he didn't block out the green lightning bolt, but still...

“Okay, how about it… my previous change concerning Andrea Lawson is unmade – and until further notice, when I make a change, I’ll be the only one in the universe who remembers the world as it was before, for everyone else, it’ll be as if nothing had ever changed!” -I love this. It really reminds me of a Roleplay Promt I would've a lot of fun with in which I obtained a Genie and wiahed to "be unable to tell lies as the universe would change to make my statement true and nobody would take notice unless I started a gradual change with my statement or defined otherwise." As this is almost the exact same I'm eager to learn what another one's mind does with the prefix.

“The person she’s married with has no problem with her height.”

Maybe you should ask Jake to bend reality a tiny byte here? :P

 

I am a little sad that turning "Sam" into a mere nickname for "Samantha" is the least popular choice in the Strawpoll. Combining Sizeplay with gender bending just happens to be another one of my favorites, but I guess that would be "to good to be true".



Author's Response:

Yeah, Samantha was not to be... but I hope you'll like the new chapter :) !

And thanks for the tips, I'll try to correct some of it.

And I wanted for him to actually have some problems adjusting because he remembers the world as it was.

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 10 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

"Perhaps it was because having so many peoples over two meters tall in the same town was exceptional,[...] Peoples?

"[...]that she was super aroused by such a turn of events."

"He wanted to have a taller girlfriend because he loved being dominated slightly – or perhaps a little more than slightly." - Isn't his power a problem in this case? It's kinda hard to feel truly dominated if you know you can change the very fabric of reality itself with just a few words.

*a little bit later in the story* Knew it!

"[...], he could see that the creepy vibe she had always given off had reduced greatly."

“I mean, I’m not a whore,[...]"

"She laughed and it seemed that the breasts he had kept enhancing almost spilled out of bra and her shirt, which was jaw-dropping for me, since I could tell that her bra was more reinforced steel than frisky laces. Her presence didn’t seem to bother the other couples much, none even looked at her and I suddenly wondered if it was a common sighting for them, to see her walk around when they fucked in her house. Perhaps it was just accepted by everyone, an open secret which I didn’t know until now." - Why is this paragraph suddenly written in First-person perpective?

 

And I am back to choosing the least popular option in the Strawpoll...

I didn't expected a new character to be introduced - and already screw Jake - within a single chapter but no complaints. Serene is very different, so a different behaviour is maybe just consequential. I'm actually interested in her parents as she got her tremendous size by "normal means".



Author's Response:

Concerning the 1st person POV it's because I'm writing another story with that writing style, sometimes I slip back to it without wanting it ^^'

And yeah, I hope that Serene will return someday !

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

"The whole house shifted and changes formed."

"Sure, he wasn’t supposed to change himself without specifically stating it,[...]"

" “Oh Jake… I’ve loved you for so long.” she sighed,[...]"

"[...]when I’m leaking.” she explained,[...]"

"Do you mind if I pick you up to make it easier?” "

" “Uh, yeah, sure.” "

"I’m just a little confused about how to use them, but I guess I’ll find it out soon enough.”

"He could see that they all looked like very little kids, at best, compared to her,[...]"

"Making people shrinks…" <- delete the s

For once I took the most popular option with Growth Milk. I am still surprised how far Jake takes his reality bending as far as Jackie's Breasts go.



Author's Response:

Well I am a breast man so... you know... I kind of have to implement it. Even if hips and asses are obviously also great !

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 23 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

The first scene helps me a little to get over the "loss" of a Samantha. As this thwarted bully scene, though quite typically, has been written expertly. Especially Sam's super-weak excuse was great.

 

[...]", I truth you." That's a weird statement of Jake. I hope the universe doesn't do anything strange with that one...

[...]pixie bob, and half of it was dyed blue.

It didn’t take long for him to decide that he wanted to use his powers again anyway – they were addicting. - Of course they were.

 I went for "Someone in the Crowd" to get more important characters. But I guess I won't be able to cajole enough people to my point. I just learned the vocable cajole by the way.



Author's Response:

Thanks for all your grammatical corrections ! I need to implement them, but I'll try my best !

And yeah, so far, no luck for your choices, hopefully you'll get to be among the majority someday XD

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 11 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

" “everyone’s used to me talking to myself like that without caring about what I say, you know, uh… Amanda?” he tried, finally remembering the brown haired, plain looking, girl’s name. " - Even if Jake misremembered Amanda's name it would always have been her name the moment he called her so anyway, or do I misinterpret his powers?

" “I better see you back in my room in ten minutes Jake,[...]"

"It wasn’t one of those paper thin walls from the South of the US, not it was really a sturdy one,[...]"

"[...], since he quickly realized that she was actually very careful not to hurt him,[...]"

Looking at the Results of the Strawpoll I seem to be impeccable in choosing the least popular choice. I don't know how to feel about that.

I am surprised that they went to bed/sex so fast I expected Jake to screw around with some guests for another chapter or two, but I am not complaining. Even if he's maybe a little to concentrated on his crush given he can change the whole world if he feels like it. But given "Giants exist" is so unpopular...

Come on Jake, "share" your luck.

Btw:

is missing

should be removed



Author's Response:

Again, thanks for the correction, I'll implement them soon !

Smash and Grab by Emma Gear Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: This is a short story commissioned by someone anonymous! It's about a young woman who decides a good way to make a living is to rob banks. And by rob banks I mean she shrinks and picks them up wholesale. It's a bit different from my normal fare and features some car crush as well!
Categories: Footwear, Crush, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3616 Read Count: 3140
[Report This] Published: March 09 2021 Updated: March 09 2021
Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

(Haven't read it yet)

This concept is very suprising to me as just a week ago one of my friends came up with the answer: "Bank Robbery (the whole building!)" whilst playing Quiplash for the question: "You can get away with any crime. What would you do?"

 

"Sighing, she pulled her boot away, knowing there was no money in crushing valuable buildings. Some day she would need to turn her application onto entire neighborhoods so she could have her way with tiny structures guilt-free,[...]" - Monica has an... interesting way of judging "guilt".

 

Monica is absolutely insane. But I actually liked her car massacre, that's quite creative. But she was lucky that the highway wasn't a elevated road or her shrinking app would likely have shrunken that as well as her phone would probably wrongly assigned it as "building".

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.