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Summary:

Vann is an adventurer, or he'd like to be, he doesn't have much in the way of strength, and despite years of trying he doesn't have any magical talent either. Desperate, he makes a plea to the divines, and finds his way to a lost temple where a forgotten goddess is willing to raise him up as her champion, granting him immense power. The catch? Well, she's the goddess of Female Domination, and the rituals and acts she demands in exchange for her blessings can be quite... interesting, as can her punishments for disobedience. Luckily Vann has his friend Tyra, herself a lady knight and experienced adventurer, to help him navigate things, and she's quite eager to make sure he performs those rituals correctly...

A comedic fantasy story about a mage in the service of a femdom goddess fond of size changing, and the adventures he has along the way.


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Muscle, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59649 Read Count: 53834
[Report This] Published: August 10 2022 Updated: September 15 2022
Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28 2022 Title: Chapter 6: The Plains

Was kind of hoping to see more of Razita at full size but I guess that'll come when she's reformed. I enjoyed the ominous foreshadowing of whats to come. I'm assuming the mistress is a former follower of zenovia but we'll see.

Ironically I love the newfound conflict between Chadwick and Eletha since she deserves some push back for her previous behavior/statements. Insinuating that your friend is interchangeable because he's not immortal is hilariously insensitive. Maybe its a coping mechanism for Eletha since she's gonna be forced to watch all her friends die but shes pretty incensitive when describing other races and their more normal lifespans so It's just hopeful thinking. Immortality always seems like a curse. Was kind of hoping Runala turned towards Eletha and said "Ishkhaqwi ai durugnul" but I guess there's always next chapter lol.

Can't wait for next chapter! Especially since we haven't really seen Tyra's new whip in action and that last scene left me wanting more Vann and Tyra scenes.



Author's Response: You might say a lot of Eletha's actions regarding Chadwick and his family, and other families she does this with, are a coping mechanism, like she definitely does love and care for them all but she's got a very warped perspective on things. To Eletha immortality is definitely something like a curse, she's too far gone to ever be happy in the Elven lands again, she's even made peace with the idea that she's probably going to die someday, which is a huge leap for an elf. Still she's unaging and an elf, so that impacts her decisions and hence the drama here where she's struggling with the idea that maybe her mortal friends might not find this whole thing acceptable.

Reviewer: Lupin Signed
Date: August 28 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Goddess Awakens

As a response to your previous response to me. Yeah I assumed Eletha's coping since if she keeps herself from getting attached to indivual friends she'll never have to mourn them which is still really unhealthy. Thus makes her look cold and arrogant since she's treating them like disposable/interchangable pets, as stated by Chadwich. Also even if she's bored of her Elvish family at least theyre all still alive. The same cannot be said about the rest of the crew who have all lost close family members. This is probably why she doesn't know how to mourn since she hasn't ever experienced personal loss unlike the rest of the crew. I wouldn't wish immortality on anybody, I'd probably kill myself before watching all my loved ones wither away especially those younger than me. Probably why Tolkien made Arwen mortal at the end of Lord of the Rings, to spare her from that same thing. 

I guess immortality has made elves cold and emotionally unintelligent towards other races. Ironic as it may be I really like the fact that the Elves might not be as wise as they make themselves out to be with then having to rely on the races they look down on for advice/information. I wonder how long it'll take Eletha and the rest of the elves to replace that arrogance with humility.

Sorry for rambling on this one I just love your take on elves as deplorable and arrogant as they may be. 



Author's Response:

Underneath all the elven smugness Eletha's actually dealing with some pretty difficult emotions, like Enid said she's not really going to be happy living among elves ever again, but living with humans means you've got to watch them die. While she's far from suicidal you might say there is a reason why Eletha accepts the possibility of dying someday a lot more readily than other immortal beings might.

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02 2022 Title: Chapter 7: In View of the Enemy

Looks like we're getting some Razita content next chapter. Hopefully she'll warm up to the party by the end of this. Really liked the fact that Tyra and Vann gave Eletha some pushback on her weird pet behavior towards Chadwick and themselves. The fact that she didn't deny that she was trying to get Tyra and Vann together just supports the fact that she needs to do some self reflexion before she alienates her "best friends" by treating them like theyre sheep beneath her judgement. Im surprised she considers Vann a best friend especially since she seemd to be indifferent to him before he got Zenovias favor. Makes me question if Tyra and Vann were also subliminally set up by Eletha but they seem to have already been heading in the childhood-friends to lovers direction before Eletha. Unless Eletha's been stalking orphans for a while which is just yikes.

Cant wait for the next chapter, and yeah that Zenovia disciple thing is as obvious as it is exciting!



Author's Response:

As Eletha says "they're new," you can take that to mean that Vann and Tyra's relationship is entirely organic. Obviously Eletha's actions and the party's reactions to them are coming to something of a head, and it's not a great time with them in the middle of the wilderness about to confront a would-be Dark Lady. 

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08 2022 Title: Chapter 9: A Test of Faith

Loved this chapter to bits! I really liked the small window of vulnerability and humility Eletha had when she was about to die and I can't for her to have her talk with chadwick and the gang next chapter. Also cant wait to see how Zenovia rewards Vann after he nearly singlehandedly saved her religion even after she betrayed him without hesitation. Let's see how she makes it up to him. Also can't wait to see how you wrap up everyone else's subplots now that this volume is pretty much over.



Author's Response:

Yeah this chapter was a ride! Eletha had a bit of a breakthrough when she thought it was the end, though it didn't take her long to get back to her smug self. Zenovia did betray Vann rather quickly, but to her credit she also quickly realized what a mistake that was, like you said in a way Vann saved her too and he'll be handsomely rewarded beyond his resurrection.

Summary:

A young man is saved from certain death, but begins to suspect his savior is not who she claims to be.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10639 Read Count: 13078
[Report This] Published: August 15 2022 Updated: August 29 2022
Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 30 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Expression of Love

Typically not into evil giantess content but the yandere aspect sold me on it since she cares for hin even if its in a demented way. Kind of sad that its gonna be a short one since I was hoping to see him slowly have his mind changed by Emma before he became devoted to her. I'll look forward to the next chapter regardless.



Author's Response:

Next chapter is planned to be the last one, I hope it's a satisfyingly sadistic conclusion!

Magna Gratia by GTS33, Melanie Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 77]
Summary:

In a world where the big regularly dominate and abuse the small, Jeannine wants to break the mold. Believing all three races to be inherently equal, she rescues 'tinies' and protects them in her home. Assuming the role of 'protector' she seeks to help as many as she can, even if the world would look down on her for it.


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Fantasy, Maternal, Sci-Fi, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 182625 Read Count: 167962
[Report This] Published: August 24 2022 Updated: March 06 2024
Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24 2022 Title: Chapter 15: Part 2 - Chapter 15

What a rollercoaster of events. I really enjoyed seeing Jeannie and Nick spending a day out together even if tragedy struck almost instantly. It really makes me just want to see more chapters of them together. I know theyre just friends right now but I'm hoping to see their relationship take a more romantic approach if they get past this hurdle since their relationships alongside the politics of this world are what keep me engaged. 



Author's Response:

It won't be the last time the two of them go out. I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story as I develop the world some more. Expect a lot of changes in Parts 3 & 4.

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26 2023 Title: Chapter 23: Part 2.5 - Chapter 23

 Jeannine and Nick chapters are my favorites. I Can't get enough of their chemistry. I'll be surprised if they're not dating by the end of the series even with the size difference. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Their relationship is platonic but you're not the first to bring that idea up. I think they work better as friends but who knows? Thanks for the stars!

Summary:

 Ian's a regular young man in his early twenties wishing for an adventure. When his wishes come true though, he ends up in a world filled with multiple thick, buxom giantesses carrying a little extra between their legs. Will he be able to survive and come back to tell the tale?



Categories: Violent, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Entrapment, Futanari, Gentle, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38814 Read Count: 55375
[Report This] Published: August 28 2022 Updated: December 04 2022
Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not usually into futa but the plot here is off to a pretty solid start. Kind of hoping Ada develops feelings for Ian ngl. But most of all I hope you continue this!

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Really liking where this is going! Im guess the new giantess is Adas mother considering shes larger and older than Ada. Im hoping shes as friendly as Ada or this might get dangerous for Ian while he waits for Ada to save him. Also is it just me or is Ada kind of into Ian. Just a thought since shes constantly showing off to him. Just hoping for the best. Cant wait for the next chapter

Slimed by Greenanon Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Caleb is a young farmer in a land with few women his age, in a moment of weakness he has a rather embarrassing encounter with a slime, and things are only getting worse as it develops a pleasing feminine form and a teasing personality, and she's getting bigger every time she gets a taste of his "essence." Will Caleb find a solution to this problem before she grows out of control?

A one shot about a growing slime-girl.


Categories: Growing Woman, Adventure, Body Exploration, Fantasy, Entrapment, Gentle, Insertion, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8718 Read Count: 6996
[Report This] Published: December 30 2022 Updated: December 30 2022
Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Slimed

Really great short story! I love the concept and wouldn't mind seeing more of these characters with the potential this concept holds. We rarely see growth stories from you (in comparison to shrink) but theyre always a hit. Hope to see more!

Author's Response:

Yeah I tend pretty heavily towards shrink or already big giantesses, nothing against growth but I guess I just don't hit it much haha. Anyways I don't know if this one will have a sequel, but we might see the characters again in one of my fantasy stories.

Summary:

Dirk is a rough man, a veteran of the Empire's military and quick on the draw with his flintlock pistol, when he hears that he has inherited a large estate from his aunt and uncle, he sets out straight away to claim it... the only hiccup is that it's within the Amazon Queendom, a realm ruled by women who stand ten feet tall and where men serve them and tend to hearth and home. Can Dirk hope to succeed in a realm that sees men as pretty faces, where every towering woman wants a piece of him in one way or another? Or will he end up tamed?

A fantasy tale about a hardened man trying to maintain his dignity in a realm of Amazons, expect lots of role reversal situations and snu snu.

COMPLETE


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Muscle, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting, Amazon Country
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88544 Read Count: 67248
[Report This] Published: January 06 2023 Updated: January 22 2023
Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12 2023 Title: Chapter 6: Consecrated

Really enjoying this story so far! Really enjoy Dirk's personality, there's something about him maintaining his dignity even when humiliated that makes him really likable. I'm assuming Cassidy was probably just banging Tom when the raid happened but I still don't trust her as of right now. Also has Australia been confirmed canon to this universe? Just asking since Tom was singing Botany bay lol.



Author's Response:

Yeah you can determine exactly what Cassidy was doing and why she felt so guilty about the murder, although realistically there wasn't much she could've done if she was there. You might assume there's another Botany Bay in this world, and if Tom had gotten further in the song we'd hear references to wherever it might be rather than Australia lol.

Reviewer: Lupin Signed
Date: January 12 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Stranger in a Strange Land

I like to think Australia is so outlandish that it fits in with the rest of the world

Author's Response:

Well it's already got cowboys, dinosaurs, elves, steampunk stuff, monstergirls, and kinky amazons, so I guess Australia wouldn't be a huge shock to just find floating out in the sea somewhere lol

Summary:

Derrick was one of countless other shrinking phenomena victims, for two years he was reduced to tiny size without a hope of a normal future. Project Regrowth changed that, curing the shrinking condition and allowing Derrick and millions of other people to resume their lives where they left off when they shrank, so long as they keep their anti-shrinking wristbands on that is. For his part, Derrick is ready to put being small in the past, and he's off to college like he always planned... What he didn't count on was just how many girls out there would want to slip that wristband off him, or all the wild ideas they have for a tiny guy.

Quinn on the other hand never shrank, and didn't know anyone who did, but she's been harboring some wild fantasies about tinies for years, and she's set her sights on Derrick. So, how does a girl seduce a boy into shrinking for her? And for that matter is there any way to explain to him what "vore" is that won't send him running? She's got her work cut out for her...

A romantic comedy of sorts set in college, and a girl's various schemes to shrink the guy of her dreams.

Now Complete!


Categories: Lesbians, Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55807 Read Count: 73339
[Report This] Published: January 28 2023 Updated: March 22 2023
Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01 2023 Title: Chapter 2: No Outside Food

Quinn's newfound morals really made her character for me. Even if her and Iris still have a few things to learn about the abuse and cruelty Kelly and most tinies probably had to face. Hoping to see them continue to grow as characters as they are exposed to the ugly side of their fetish.



Author's Response: Yeah as much as Quinn and Iris fantasize about being evil tiny eating giantesses they aren't actually monsters. Kelly will have her own role in helping them figure out some of the nastier parts of the tiny experience.