Shrunken to beyond micro size, Beth must now contend with her brother and his massive body
Loved every aspect of the story. The shrinking and descriptions of her point of view. The sperm the size of great whites was especially imaginative. Kept picturing them circling her. Lol. I love how the shrinking wore off as she was falling back towards her brothers penis and ends up impaled on it as she grows out of nowhere from the brothers view.
Part of one of your paragraphs appears to have been cut and added to the bottom of your story. You can see where the letter 'e' from the word she is cut off and begins again at end. I included the two paragraphs to show you.
He then goes to get something off the floor, bending down to grab it, Beth thinks that he’s finally seen her and hopes she’s saved, only for him to grab her sock and pick it up with her inside it. As sh“Eric! Please, you're looking right at me! Please see me!”
Suddenly the two siblings hear something downstairs. “Kids, I’m home!”e tumbles down to the bottom and looks up to see her brother staring right at her without seeing her, she begins to fear that she will never be found.
Other than the editing error. I really hope to see more just like this story from you.
Thanks for the feed back and I'll try and fix the error as soon as possible
A security system that shrinks intruders, or other by accident
I love when the realize they screwed up. 😂
Brother and sister go on vacation, but a technical error on their flight causes a little problem.
Loving the story so far. So curious if she already did call the help line to initiate the data restore process? Or is she gonna "forget" to do that? Also if he is 1/4 inch tall does the shrinking process make him more durable or is he fully vulnerable at that size? As such an abusive brother it would be funny if he ended up being given to someone else or lost all together by the end. Or maybe she says that's what happens and keeps him as her toy.
Seen a vote option for a male giant antagonist. Wonder if he was to be brought in maybe a cock vore scene cause I don't think I've seen one with a male shrinky before. But what ever you do with your story will probably be an amazing read from what I've seen so far. Can't wait for more.
Maria is hosting a sleepover for her son and his best friend. She's struggling with her horniness since her recent divorce, and her son's friend just happens to look like the spitting image of her beloved ex...
[Involves shrinking vore and sex]
Amazing read. Can't wait for more.
Thank you <3
Miles takes advantage of a loophole in the new ShrinkMe app to get a new pet.
Great first chapter. Will he shrink her small enough to barely be seen? Will he show her what the inside a penis looks like? Will he shrink her to 2-3 feet in height to control her and take advantage of her? Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
My mom paid me a birthday visit on the rescaler bus.
Amazing and exciting read. It doesn't feel like you are a multi chapter type writer so I assume this is the end of it as well. Although if you did write more I'm sure they would be great reads also.
13-year-old girl in 2008 acquires shrink ray gun from shrunken time travelers.
Great so far. Looking forward to see where it goes.
Thank you for your review, I've worked on this for a long time that's why it's better than my usual stories.
Cammie comes home to visit her family on a vacation from school.. too bad she'll spend most of it under them trying to get their attention!
Loving the feel of the story. Very well written. Did seem to have one issue though for me. Her clothes did not shrink, yet you mentioned she has silver bars through her nipples. Wouldn’t those not shrink either and result in some heavy damage to her nipples or breast?
Sophie Hanson is a substitute teacher in her late 30's, and her life is pretty much shit. She has a deadbeat husband, an ungrateful stepson, and a whole classroom full of students who mock and disrespect her day in and day out. She tries her best in everything she does, holding down her household and her job, but the strain is starting to take a toll on her. She feels trapped in her dead-end life, with no way out.
Until....
One day, walking home from school, she gets splashed with a mysterious purple liquid. Soon her breasts begin growing bigger...and bigger...and BIGGER. And she's starting to lactate a strange green milk. And there's something special about this milk. Any males who go near her lactating breasts seem to be mesmerized by their power, and all they want to do is breastfeed. Sophie soon realizes that she can control men like this. And even better, the milk makes them SHRINK...FAST. It's time for Sophie's revenge...Sophie's liberation.
Tags include: revenge, fast shrink, big breasts, breast enlargement, breastfeeding, milk, humiliation
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Loving this story. Can”t wait for more.
Stories too short to post on their own. Themes and roles vary from story to story. Mainly shrunken women and shrunken men stories.
Nice story. Wasn’t feeling the minimizing guilt thing at the end. But other than that very well written and entertaining.
Amazing story. Thanks for sharing.
When Becca and five of her closest friends decide to spend the day relaxing in their backyard, her father's shrink ray going haywire could cause some problems for them. Very heavily influenced by Honey I Shrunk the Kids.
I thought Becca’s friends were gonna shrink a second time to really micro size. Surprised me when they didn’t but being surprised is always a good thing.
Thanks!
Amazing chapter. Can’t wait to read more.
Thanks!
Wonderful read. Did notice slight discrepancy in story. Early chapters had the shrink ray only affecting one person at a time, even when the shrunken girls were on a person. Girls on them didn’t shrink again. But then this chapter has 2 tiny folks next to each other but grows back only one. It’s said that is how it works. Tiny ended up on the re-enlarged girl. Then now the shrink ray can’t grow back the tiny without turning normal girl into giant. Other than that it was a great chapter or ending. Thanks for uploading.
Seems like a bit of a nitpick, considering I’m not a professional writer and do this for free. But to each their own I guess.
It's the distant future, and the key to becoming God has been discovered! What could possibly go wrong?~
(A omnipotent Male focused story: really hope you guys enjoy it!~)
Great so far. Love transformation stories.
An alien princess lands and attempts to subjugate the people of Earth, but learns rather fast it might have been wise to do some research before landing.
Loved the role reversal. It is always funny how someone changes their tone and starts begging and saying please after not caring what they were doing before when the roles are reversed.
Poor dear didn't expect it, who could have possibly foreseen it? Certainly not her.
A physics student and her boyfriend are working on a shrink ray for an upcoming science competition. However when an accident happens that causes her boyfriend to be shrunk to a few millimetres tall, she rushes out to gather equipment and information to reverse the process
Unfortunately her dim-witted and nosy younger sister arrives home and begins snooping around her room.
And she doesn't like bugs.................
PS: This is my first story so I would appreciate it if you could leave a review
Fun to read. But the ending left something to be desired. I was picturing the sisters red hot rage leading to her grabbing the shrink gun and pointing it at her sister. Feel it would have been where the story was going when her holding back on her sister for so long and then her heart breaking as well as her sisters treatment of insects would have lead. To her becoming insect size herself.
First of all thank you very much for reviewing 🙂
I purposefully left the story on a cliff-hanger ending because I wanted the audience to be left in the heat of the moment and use their imagination as to what could possibly happen next.
But yes I can totally see it that this would be the most likely thing Emma does next given the seriousness of what Oliva has done and to teach her a lesson.
So glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Alan and Emily have been cheating on their respective partners, Ivy and Chris, right under their noses. As their secret is kept unknown, they all meet up at Ivy’s place for a small get together. Alan and Emily prepare for a casual night of fun, or so they think…
Great revenge torture storie so far. Looking forward to what comes next.