Caitlin's got a sort of twisted attraction or crush on Jack right? Like she wants to interact with him because he's caught her eye and possibly (secretly) likes him. But she seem's to be afraid to openly admit it. Either she knows people like her parents would disapprove (maybe they hate betas) or she's hyper sensitive to her friends opinions (like Amber, who loved hurting Jack). In her weird way she cares for Jack, I think I remember she cuddled with him when she kidnapped him and forced him to stay in her house. And today at school, she immediatly intervened when a different alpha was hurting Jack. But she keeps falling back to violence and threats, even when it's jsut the two of them. Maybe it's because she doesn't realize how easily she hurts him when she thinks she's holding back or how terrifying her threats sounds giving she's already stuffed him in bags and boxes and manhandled him.

I think we will see her learn his leg is injured later (whether because it bruises up of he limps) and she actually shows concern by inspecting it and trying to give him some first aid. Maybe this will be when Jack realizes Caitlin has some kind of interest in him beyond just bullying and hurting him. Question is which friend has more influence on her behavior towards betas, Alex or Amber?

Finally I wonder if Caitlin can take rejection? If she does hit a turning point with Jack, and does start to open up to him, eventually she's going to come to terms with the act that Jack and Penny are already smitten with each other.Caitlin's always gotten her way in life, would she really be satisifed with Jack being with someone else?

Uggghh, I want this series to have a sequel so badly.

No! Please let Willow's competent friends or even the useless Ryan rescue her. Even if it's after she gets taken away, abused, and traumatized, someone's gotta want to try and help her by hitching a ride to this next house. Don't kill off our best girl in this cruel world :(

Well now, really curious to see how his adoptive family and the GPF treat him going forward. I have a feeling that since he holds the password to killing the information leak, and he might not be in a cooperative mood when he wakes back up, that his punishment ordeal might not be over. I can see the GPF ordering him to be tortured into compliance, and his mother carrying it out "for the greater good", leaving his sister as the only one who can't bring herself to do anymore to him.

I thought there would be another shrinking dynamic in the story after Liz's sudden shrinking incident. Pleasantly surprised it was Alexis and not Ashley that ended up shrinking. If any of Alexis' victims other then her father are still around, here's hoping Ashley will drop them off to the authorities/shelters so they can go home/get help. The eventual sibling reunion chapter will be an interesting one to see.

They seem to have a co-dependence streak going on between them. If their relationship continues to develop in a submissive, rough, but not overly violent fashion; I wonder if we'll see some genuine affection and protectiveness from Meredith. To qoute Mean Girls "It's only funny when I say that". A scene where she lets him slip into danger from others and has to rescue her "toy" could hint or reveal if this relationship is one they can both enjoy and develop, or if she's one bad day away from snuffing him out for her own satisfaction.

Hmm, if the story is only getting one more chapter I feel like it will leave a lot of unfinished plot lines. Is his mother going to enact law changes in the Senate? I recall she was proposing allowing Smalls the right to chose who/where they live with/at. Is it implied Paul will try to live with his old crush Hannah, try to move to a new plain Small community, be too broken spiritually to ask for a transfer, or be held in captivity by his family as an embarrassment? If Brie feels like she's sufficently broken him will she sell him off to the girl Paul avoided, Jen, whose father is a powerful senator?

You revealed quite the Chekov's gun with the revelation that a Small can sometimes grow to be a big. Will you truly let Paul or one of the tiny women who cared for him become a Big, such as Kate or Bethany growing and claiming him?

Then there's the fact that outside the repopulated cities most of the country is considered wild and only populated with Smalls communities. Paul's father was a border soldier killed by a trap laid by Smalls was he not? They've yet to make an appearance in the story.

I've enjoyed the world building and storytelling up to this point, and I'm sad that you've chosen to end it so abruptly.

I liked the start of this story. I'm interested in seeing how they get comfortable with each other and start to coax more backstory out of each other.

Hmm, a bitter tasting ending. I guess we can't always expect characters experiencing self reflection to end up growing at the end of it. Little human saved your life and made you evaluate your opinion of them for a time? But she said mean words to you? Better report her and have her rights stripped and turned into your prisoner/plaything. Quite the ego on the big lass. I'm interested in seeing if a sequel chapter down the road comes out showing what's become of Florina down the road, if Sona has developed a mean streak or delivers a more then meets the eye surprise.

Hmm, the question rattling in my head have is if Tanisha has the same powers as Meredith or if she's normal. I think that will determine if she approaches Meredith to threaten or beg to be let in on the fun with the little toy. The other scenario I could see is her overpowering and knocking out Meredith, taking her "posession", powers or not. I'm curious to see if Tanisha has a sadistic itch she wants to fill or if she turns into an even bigger softie then Meredith with a tiny at her disposal. An "I deserve to torment you even more then her" or an "OMG, is she abusing/raping/threatening you little guy?!" situation. You havent added a F/fm tag to the story, so I'm anxious to see what twists you've planned out.