Penname: shall328 [Contact] Real name: Shawn
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Swan #627918 by OneInch Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary: In 2015, when the world is dealing with an incredibly rare disease named 'Disease #627918', a young girl takes it upon herself to travel to a friends who she hasn't seen in 3 years to look after her, after she is diagnosed. Did she make the right choice or will she live to regret it.

WARNING: THERE WILL BE SOME GIANT MALE CONTENT IN THIS STORY.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Giantess, Couples , Feet, Footwear, Giant, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f, FM/f, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18367 Read Count: 109331
[Report This] Published: April 23 2015 Updated: May 25 2015
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 07 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11 - Confessions To A Doll

It was nice to see Amy stand up for herself, but I've got to admit, I loved seeing Chloe's respond how she did. I'm also glad that Amy seems pretty durable, which allows Chloe to be rough with her. That can definitely lead to some interesting scenarios between the two. Keep up the great work.



Author's Response: Ohhh you betcha there's lots of exciting stuff coming soon! Thanks for another review, means the world to me. :)

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12 - Trevor's Return

It's nice to see you back again. I really enjoyed the interaction this chapter. The part with Chloe rubbing Amy between her feet, while she was covered in spit, was a great bit. I can't wait to see what comes next. 



Author's Response: Thank you, I agree. It was my favourite bit. You can expect more stuff similar to come soon ;)

Training Day by AnonWriter Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

A girl learns the power of self control and focus. The hard way.


Categories: Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1995 Read Count: 20089
[Report This] Published: June 21 2015 Updated: July 01 2015
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 22 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Rough Start

A bit of an abrupt ending, but it definitely leaves me wanting more. I really like the setting of the story, with the sparring, its a nice change from the regular settings. I can't wait to see more. 



Author's Response:

Topic change at the next line. Sorry :c

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Self Control

I didn't mean that last review as a complaint, if anything it left me wanting more, which is a good thing. I'm really digging the mental humiliation, you've got a great balance going with it and the physical side of things. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

I didn't take it as a complaint, it just meant you wanted more c:

Summary:

Velia Valspar is a typical heroine just trying to get through life. She fights crime, doubles as a waitress to pay the bills, and has to wait in traffic like everyone else. As far as she is concerned the world is just as simple as Heroes and Villains and very little else need be said on the matter. That is until a chance meeting with a villainess in a Laundromat has her start to question what she thinks to be true and false. Soon enough she finds herself exploring long dormant fantasies with a woman who's day job is mayhem and destruction.

Everyone needs a little crazy in their lives.


Categories: Adventure, Body Exploration, Couples , Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39177 Read Count: 74060
[Report This] Published: June 29 2015 Updated: September 27 2015
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Dinner with the Dragon

Awesome job so far, I'm really enjoying it. I've been wanting to see a superhero story starring a shrunken woman, and this looks like just what I was hoping for. Both characters are very well thought out, and very different, so I can't wait to see how they are together. I'll be eagerly waiting to see your next chapter.



Author's Response:

I've had the idea rattling around for a bit since I've wanted to actually write a superhero story for a long while now. Pleased to see I wasn't the only one who considered it a possibly good concept! Hopefully I can keep your interest in the chapters to come!

-Books

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Working Through The Bad

I love what you've been doing so far, and I'm really enjoying each additional chapter. You've got a good balance of size play and normal interaction going. The way the characters are written is great, and they play off of each other really well. You seem to have a good understanding of the roles of S&M, the fact that it's not all pain and pleasure. That there is a lot of planning and precautions to take. It is something that is featured heavily in a comic I read on deviantart, called Sunstone. Again though, great job, and I can't wait to see what's next.



Author's Response:

S&M was something I knew little about before actually doing a bit of research myself. Before that I figured it was just whips, cuffs, and gags. However there is a good bit of safety concerns to address. Time spent in actual bondage, comfort zones, experimenting to see what works best and what doesn't and even of thinking up scenes to do with each other. I want to make those elements apparent for both since Velia is still relatively 'fresh' on the scene and Alatha isn't used to the concept of size play being actually attainable. Its actually more fun to write about the planning behind their scenes and the thought processes behind them and what they want to do than the scenes themselves!

I haven't actually read that comic though it sounds like something I might want to consider peeking at!

Hope to keep your interest with the chapters to come!

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Role Reversal

I'm glad to see you came back to this story, I was hoping you would. It was definitely worth the wait. It was a nice change of pace to have the girl's roles reversed, and you did a great job portraying their fear and excitement at try different roles. I'll be looking forward to seeing where you go next.

Summary:

Lucy's desprate to help Cana become an S-Class Wizard, just how desprate though?

 

Story commission for a friend of mine, i hope you all enjoy.

Anime - Fairy Tail ~ If you don't like it then your insane so don't read it... actuelly watch the anime then read it you'll enjoy it.


Categories: Crush, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7570 Read Count: 5599
[Report This] Published: July 30 2015 Updated: July 30 2015
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30 2015 Title: Chapter 1: True Friend's

Nice to see you back on here. I really liked the story, especially the fact that you used Cana. You continue to impress me with how much your stuff seems like the original series. It's like a Moore erotic episode of the anime, which is great. As always, I'll be looking forward to whatever you come up with next.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you still like my writing Shall :) i'll try to please with my future work.

Summary:

The rather narcissistic shut-in prince of a rather dimunative race is sent out into the world with the goal of finding the right suitor to marry. A rather simple goal... if every single one of his 'matches' weren't bigger than he. Not all are proper benevolent ladies either. With an informed retainer that is never around when he needs him as his only companion the prince sets out on a journey of self discovery, peril, and the occasional steamy encounter.


Categories: Incest, Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51596 Read Count: 189505
[Report This] Published: August 04 2015 Updated: December 30 2020
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Prospect #1 Marie Delacour Pt. 2

Great job on the new story. It's a very interesting idea, and you've done great with it so far. I like the first princess you decided to go with. She does a good job of showing the prince exactly what he has to look forward to. Add to that the fact there are 100 suitors, and you have the opportunity for this to be an amazing story. I look forward to seeing where you take things.



Author's Response:

Many thanks! They will probably be varied little encounters. Some might be more silly, like the first one. Others might go in a more steamy direction like the 2nd one is shaping up. Like I said out of the gate really it will be mostly what I'm feeling up to writing at the moment. Hopefully there will be a little something for everyone.

Thanks for the review!

Summary:

Naomi's hiding something from her girlfriend, Lorelei. She wants to surprise her, so she's doing something she never does- she's lying to Lorelei. The guilt is eating her up inside, but she hopes that Lorelei will forgive her. She's decided to go with the excuse of wanting a new car for why she's taken on a second job. It's tiring, and most of the time she's been leaving before Lorelei wakes and coming home to Lorelei having fallen asleep, but Naomi is persevering. She thinks it'll all be worth it in the end.

Lorelei is scared and furious. Naomi has a second job now, and she's given a bullshit excuse. Lorelei admits it's an adorable attempt at lying for the ultimate good girl who's never so much as omitted the truth in her life, but it was also a major red flag. So, Lorelei stalked her girlfriend and followed her to work- and she's meeting up with that damnable bimbo, Sammi, an ex-girlfriend of Naomi's that still flirts with her constantly. Problem for her is that Naomi is now dating LORELEI, and she's not keen on sharing.


Categories: Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: Silent Dance
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29155 Read Count: 79001
[Report This] Published: August 07 2015 Updated: August 13 2015
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 10 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Games- Everyone

I just finished reading all 11 chapters in one sitting, so that should be a good indicator as to what I think. An absolutely fantastic story so far, great job by both of you.



Author's Response:

Indeed it is.

We are highly proud of what we've wrought, and it's almost sad that the story is more than halfway over. That's not to say you won't be seeing more of Naomi, Lorelei, and everyone else- I can't predict the future, and I can't predict crossovers- but let it be known that PCKR won't last much longer.

Summary:

Two married couples swing with each other. This is the journal of what happens when they receive a shrink gun.


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Giant, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 855 Read Count: 13714
[Report This] Published: November 29 2015 Updated: November 29 2015
Reviewer: shall328 Signed
Date: November 29 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 0: The Prologue

Definitely an interesting idea, with a lot of combinations and situations to be used. I'd really like to see more.

Summary:

Isabelle Strauss has a very particular fetish -- power. Personal, financial, social: it doesn't matter. When her superiors tell her she'll be overseeing a clumsy titan ordered to community service for tripping onto some houses, the woman is overjoyed; ordering around a titan seems like the perfect outlet.

If only she knew what would become of her. 


Categories: Body Exploration, Giantess, Breasts, Fantasy, Gentle, Humiliation, Lesbians, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16333 Read Count: 60402
[Report This] Published: December 03 2015 Updated: April 13 2016
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Nice development happening in the bar with Allison meeting Courtney, though I don't expect she'll be unfaithful with Isabelle. I assume it's Lilith pulling the strings, and that should be very interestiing to see play out later. I look forward to seeing exactly what happens next.

Summary:

Lindsay likes to dress up. In fact she likes it so much that it is all she wants to do, and when there is an opportunity to take it to new heights she simply can't let the offer pass...


Categories: Object, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4568 Read Count: 19705
[Report This] Published: March 04 2016 Updated: June 29 2019
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 05 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice so far. I'm really interested in seeing where you take things .

Summary:

Anna is a single mother who is barely capable of keeping up with her young, strong-willed daughter, Alice, who seems to take more after Anna's independent and seemingly-perfect older sister, Shirley.

It's all a little more than she can bear. Suffice it to say, the LAST thing she needs is to come down with the shrinking disease, and be stuck at the size of an ant, at the mercy of her sister, daughter, and daughter's friends. 


Categories: Vore, Butt, Breasts, Feet, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Lesbians, Odor, Nose, Unaware, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17408 Read Count: 76875
[Report This] Published: June 18 2016 Updated: July 07 2016
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm really enjoying the story, and you're doing a great job. I check back every day looking forward to the next chapter. I'll be looking forward to your next story too.

On a side note, just wanted to let you know that you double posted the whole of this chapter.

Summary:

Titan Legion. A sci-fi VR shooter with incomparable graphics, its own tactile peripheral that puts you through what your character is experiencing, and a wild array of interesting characters.

One of the lesser-marketed game modes in Titan Legion, called "Morale" has an interesting handicap system. Each place you are from 1st, your height is cut in half- 2nd place is half their normal size, 3rd is 1/4 of the norm, 4th is 1/8 what they should be, et cetera. By making losing players increasingly small, they can evade bullets more easily, so it's a common newbie testing ground.

However, "Morale" was added last-minute, and not all the things it promised are fully fleshed out . . .


Categories: Butt, Crush, Feet, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2558 Read Count: 4900
[Report This] Published: July 08 2016 Updated: July 08 2016
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Newbies on the Pro Circuit

Awesome story, as expected of one of your stories. Also, as a gamer, I really enjoyed the use of all of the terminology. I'm excited to see what you and Rythmear do with this new universe.

Summary:

Titan Legion. A sci-fi VR shooter with incomparable graphics, its own tactile peripheral that puts you through what your character is experiencing, and a wild array of interesting characters.

One of the lesser-marketed game modes in Titan Legion, called "Morale" has an interesting handicap system. Each place you are from 1st, your height is cut in half- 2nd place is half their normal size, 3rd is 1/4 of the norm, 4th is 1/8 what they should be, et cetera. By making losing players increasingly small, they can evade bullets more easily, so it's a common newbie testing ground.

However, "Morale" was added last-minute, and not all the things it promised are fully fleshed out . . .


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Crush, Entrapment, Footwear, Instant Size Change, Sci-Fi, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1770 Read Count: 4931
[Report This] Published: July 08 2016 Updated: July 08 2016
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 09 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great companion piece to the story by Silent-One. I loved Georgia's attitude throughout, and I hope to see more.



Author's Response:

Aye; she's a splendid author to work with!

Summary:

Harley Quinn and Bat-Girl have an utterly one-sided showdown in an old toy factory...

 

This story was a commission.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2338 Read Count: 8593
[Report This] Published: July 14 2016 Updated: July 14 2016
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Missed this story somehow. I loved it, you did a great job. Makes me realize how few shrinking or giantess stories there are involving superheroes.



Author's Response:

It's a bloody shame 'aint it?

NPC by TufLove Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

In a world where virtual reality (VR) is a thing, you are given the opportunity to experience what it means to be an NPC.

This is a transformation and partially object story, with a large male. Written in 2nd person. So many things are touched on. You have been warned.


Categories: Object, Unaware, Body Part, Fantasy, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Muscle, Sci-Fi, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FM/f, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3918 Read Count: 25369
[Report This] Published: November 08 2016 Updated: November 08 2016
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really awesome and unique idea you have here, and so far you're doing a fantastic job. Great job, and I look forward to seeing what's to come.

Summary:

Following the events of Micro Inc. Mikal Nelson finds himself behind the camera as his sentence is transferred to Micro incorporated.

Jasmine learns of what happened to her favorite petite and other models are introduced. 

Those who are expected to perish might not and those who aren't might, nobody is safe and no character is free from torture. Anything is possible in the adventures so gear up, and make sure your suit is charged, failure to do so may lead to permanent damage or something worse than death.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, BBW, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Giant, Insertion, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Violent, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25785 Read Count: 72618
[Report This] Published: April 24 2017 Updated: September 28 2019
Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 26 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like the setup for the story, you've definitely got me interested. I look forward to seeing all of the different models and how they are treated.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2:Word Choice

Damn, Dick really had it rough there. Very nice chapter. You really captured the difference between how Dick felt about his situation, and how Alexis felt about it. Also, nice touch with the unintended torture by Julia.