Penname: billyevil [Contact] Real name: billy
Member Since: March 21 2006
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Father's Daughter by Vord Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: After his wife died, a father learns more struggles he will have to face as he begins to shrink. And only his 17 year old daughter can be the one to help him out, if she lets him.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Gentle, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15977 Read Count: 206219
[Report This] Published: February 11 2007 Updated: March 13 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02 2007 Title: Chapter 11: Evening Rush

I'm curious about Beth. She doesn't seem to be all there as a person and may have some anger towards men from her father leaving them that she might take out on Linda's dad. I'm really enjoying this story and really look forward to the next chapter. Thank you!

Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 13 2007 Title: Chapter 13: Midnight Play

gotta love psycho chicks like beth, just makes you wonder what is wrong with women sometimes when they flip out and do the crazy on you.. some might think you should feel bad for her about losing her father and all, but the way I see it, the chick really let herself get messed up and any punishment that comes her way for her derangement shouldn't be blamed on anyone else. Great story though, I love what i've read so far, the ballet flats confuse me but I dig it. Keep it going.

Dreamlike by trahoovi Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: A date that's also an experiment. The narrator doesn't know or remember much, but the experiment is a total success.
Categories: Giantess, Slow Size Change, Crush, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4560 Read Count: 17289
[Report This] Published: March 07 2007 Updated: March 07 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 08 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Disturbing but very fun. I enjoyed the way you described everything, it was very real and makes me wish for my own Gwen to cover me with her feet on the carpeted floor of her car..

Summary: A wife leaves her husband for another man, however when he comes to get the last of his stuff he finds himself going through a unreal transformation.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Object, Transformation, Feet, Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: The Differences between Like and Love
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5237 Read Count: 20320
[Report This] Published: March 21 2007 Updated: March 21 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed the story. Especially when you talked of the girl's sock and playing with his nose. Gotta love the fun of transformation stories. Thank you for this!

Swift Retribution by Nigma Rated: PG starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

a girl gets even with a pervert


Categories: Instant Size Change, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3094 Read Count: 13294
[Report This] Published: March 27 2007 Updated: March 27 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstar
Date: March 28 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A little more violent than I can enjoy, but it was an interesting story. Thank you for sharing your story with us.

Summary:

When my wife finds out about my GTS fetish things get a little wild when her birthday comes around.


Categories: Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Couples
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10073 Read Count: 85071
[Report This] Published: March 30 2007 Updated: April 09 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 01 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story has an interesting start. I'm curious to see what the wife has in store for her husband, and exactly how devious she intends to be with the shrinking. Having that kind of power over another might bring back years of being teased by others and cause her to take it out on her tiny husband. Then again I also think it would be interesting if she left him in a public place, shrunk down, so the people weren't aware of the tiny man. Whatever routes you take, I'm enjoying this story. Thank you.

Unlawful Desire by Ajora Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A brother is shrunk by his siter and used for her enjoyment


Categories: Crush, Feet, Incest, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4713 Read Count: 34851
[Report This] Published: March 31 2007 Updated: March 31 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 01 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is one of the best stories I've read in quite a while. I know that feeling of finding a girl's sock disgarded and the overwhelming curiousity to smell it.

I really hope you write more as you have captured the fetish very well and kept it both fun and exciting to read. I hope this short review encourages you to continue, because I do think you have a talent for writing stories and will add alot to this site on the whole with your work. Thank you!

One funny thing was when they were talking back and forth I kept getting flashbacks to the old Connect Four commercials with the brother and sister.

Michelle "I win!"
Ryan "where? I don't see it.."
Michelle "See here...diagonally.."
Ryan "Pretty sneaky sis!"
*Michelle smiles in triumph*
Ryan "Bitch.."
Michelle "I'm a bitch??"
*Michelle stomps Ryan like a bug!*

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, im making another incest story similar to it but ill have alot more descriptiveness to it.

Summary:

A man is crushed by the unstoppable path of a woman's boot.


Categories: Crush
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1290 Read Count: 11213
[Report This] Published: March 31 2007 Updated: March 31 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstar
Date: March 31 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow that went quick, but it was fun. Thanks.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Summary:

Ryan confesses about his foot fetish to his mother and has to deal with the concequences


Categories: Feet, Incest, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3594 Read Count: 51585
[Report This] Published: April 02 2007 Updated: April 02 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very well done man. I think your stories are fun and capture the fantasy just perfect. You've done a great job with it all and I look forward to whatever is next on your mind. Thank you!

Summary:

after being shrunk by my mother she takes me to work


Categories: Couples , Feet, Incest, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4156 Read Count: 30982
[Report This] Published: April 05 2007 Updated: April 05 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 05 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked the love story aspect of it all. You do nice work, thank you for the story.

Summary: A young teenager boy named Samuel Taylor, who found his way into a giantesses living room only to be accidently stepped on by her and ontop of that she didn't know he was down there to begin with! 
Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 894 Read Count: 26164
[Report This] Published: April 09 2007 Updated: April 17 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed
Date: April 16 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The Discovery.

Did you really need to break that into two chapters?

Author's Response: I don't know I was in the middle of fixing ideas. There was a preface which explained everything but when I tried to put it into the story but the action I wanted didn't work so I have to continue the story.

My Stepsister by dietz Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

A normal day at Brian's house goes awry when he finds himself shrinking.  His one and only hope is his stepsister, Jen.  But would she be so nice to him??

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Instant Size Change, Feet, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1724 Read Count: 31515
[Report This] Published: April 20 2007 Updated: April 20 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Jen's Room

I'm really enjoying this story so far and wanted to thank you for it. I look forward to seeing where it goes.

Author's Response: thank you for the compliment ^^

Neverquest by Cassadria Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Neverquest was supposed to be a game, a virtual reality world, an MMORPG where Women rule. But after a virus enters the system, the characters begin to question their own reality as it slowly changes around them...

This is the FIRST book in the Adelais series.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adventure, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 161 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271518 Read Count: 1715464
[Report This] Published: April 20 2007 Updated: May 21 2012
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01 2007 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

This is just an amazing story Cassadria. It has a feel of an Alice in Wonderland with a bit of Tolkien and Tron. While having minor similiarities, it is in a class of it's own and just blows me away with how well you just pull me into it and let me lose myself in Neverquest.

I really hope there is more to come and soon, as I really would like to see how they manage to save those people who are stuck in the game. If they save them at all. I wonder if disconnecting their physical bodies from the game may also leave their minds trapped in the server. Whatever happens needs to happen soon, as a body can only go a short time without food and water, and I don't even want to think about the release of wastes.

You have a brilliant mind for writing and your sense of humor is always you, which is both funny and insane at the same time. You are one of the great authors that create worlds people like me can fall into and enjoy being lost in for a short time. It is quite an experience seeing your Neverquest in my mind and feeling for these people you created.

I consider myself lucky to both know you as a friend and to have read and lost myself in this story, because both experiences have been wonderful.

Summary:

A group of Halloween pranksters prank the wrong house.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Crush, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6805 Read Count: 40051
[Report This] Published: April 20 2007 Updated: April 20 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I really enjoyed the story. It was a real shame what happened to the boys, but I guess they got what they deserved. They seemed a little too fragile to me and for some reason I thought they would be a little more durable. I did enjoy reading the story and look forward to more from you. Thank you.

Summary:

Batman and his sidekicks are miniaturized and must rely on the aid of their female allies, the Birds of Prey (A shamelessly goofy piece of fanfiction. I regret nothing!).


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16919 Read Count: 160930
[Report This] Published: April 30 2007 Updated: April 30 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue

Very well done. I was so glad to find that you went with the comic versions of them instead of the TV show. While I did enjoy the show, the comic rocks, and wow Harley Quinn. This was a real treat. Thank you and you shouldn't regret anything, this was a great story!

Summary:

A boy gets shrunk and must seek help from his friends sister. Will she help him?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4820 Read Count: 121001
[Report This] Published: July 20 2007 Updated: August 18 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Will She Help or Not?

I wish you would break it into paragraphs, but that is a minor issue compared to how much I love this story.

Reviewer: billyevil Signed
Date: July 25 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Punishment 1: The Jog

This is really getting good. Thank you for breaking things up into paragraphs, it really makes the reading alot more enjoyable. I'm curious what she has planned for him.

Summary:

On hiatus. Ms. Merrick is mistress of her mansion, and knows how to keep order. But things get shaken up when a new maid arrives...


Categories: Giantess, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5668 Read Count: 35156
[Report This] Published: August 04 2007 Updated: August 18 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed
Date: August 06 2007 Title: Chapter 2: The house on the hill

A very cool beginning. I can't wait to see where things go. Thank you for this.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Billyevil! Please let me know your thoughts as the story unfolds.

Summary:

On hiatus. Sophie and Ned have reached a point in their relationship where hard decisions must be made. Unfortunatly for Ned, those decisions become even harder when he finds himself tied up, a foot tall, and at the mercy of the woman he loves.


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6755 Read Count: 50776
[Report This] Published: August 06 2007 Updated: August 20 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 06 2007 Title: Chapter 3: A Brief Reprieve

Wow! He really needs to get a clue on how to respond to women when they say something as important as I love you.. The sad thing is he's alot like most guys in his unfortunate choices in reactions.. hopefully he learns what a girl wants before she seriously hurts him.. :) I love the story. Thank you so much. Please continue:)

Author's Response: He might seem like the typical male, but I've been trying to drop hints that there is hope for him yet. We'll just have to see!

Summary: Twelve years ago, Carrie Schultz had a father... a father she never thought to be alive. She was the daughter of a man who incredibly shrank to the point that he was thought for dead. But now after all these years, her father is believe to be alive.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Gentle, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12490 Read Count: 131567
[Report This] Published: August 06 2007 Updated: March 14 2008
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 08 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

I'm really enjoying this story, and didn't think that I would. The first chapter and setup just didn't seem too interesting to me. Though, as I've read, I'm really finding myself drawn into the story and I love what I'm seeing. Thank you so much.