Penname: rabbithole [Contact] Real name:
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Summary:

Tom, a normal guy, gains the ability to change reality in whatever fashion he pleases. And whatever changes he makes becomes the norm with everyone acting as if the changes were always present. Even though many changes are possible the only changes Tom will be creating is size related


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing Woman, Odor, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26780 Read Count: 218524
[Report This] Published: November 25 2015 Updated: July 02 2021
Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: June 26 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Visiting the Beach

Man this story came back with a vengeance. Glad to see another chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed it.



Author's Response: Yeah, well, it was probably because of you. You got that ball rolling. I'm thinking of adding another chapter tonight to see if it will continue that ball. This is probably one of my favorite stories (Of mine) and would love to see it continued by others.

Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: January 12 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction with vore

Hooray you're alive!

Thanks for the high praise it means alot to me. I've liked your longer segments in this series more than the quick moments of this and that. Your ability to build things up really shine in the longer segments.

The nano nose is just a request of mine and can be ignored if putting it in is too much of a hassle. It's not a commission. The skyscrapers is just an idea I threw out since people might want to cover new ground despite the range of what has happened already.

I just didn't want to see this die that was all.

Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: January 14 2018 Title: Chapter 11: The Penalty Shootout (asapshvn)

Thanks for contributing! Hopefully this leads to a second wave of writers. Seems you've pointed the story towards my skyscrapers so I appreciate that. Hope you continue to write more yourself.

Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: June 12 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Housewarming by rabbithole

Thank you so much for such high praise. It's even more so coming from my favorite smut writer. Maybe it's because it hits some of your sweet spots (house shrink, extreme difference, ass).

I see where you're coming from on Kelly. I felt I dragged her introduction too long and cut what I planned on writing instead of cutting what I already wrote so her transition to monster was not as developed as I was hoping. But I do appreciate you liking her.

I still think of this whole story as yours so I've gotta decline co-authorship. I'm just a big fan that didn't want to see the series go. Thanks for making this a round robin since there's no way I could've made my first story a self post.

Please keep up the good work.



Author's Response: Yes, it did hit a lot of my sweet spots. The only way it would be better is if there was a relationship power difference between the giantess and the victims. Like parent and child, young and old, superior and subordinate. Those are good. But yours is obviously still amazing. It does feel weird getting such high praise for my stories but I feel that if you start writing you may get similar fanfare. It's not so bad dragging out an introduction as long as you don't let it take away from the main smut of the story that people want. Well, ,my series are never dead. They're just always on hiatus until I continue them. Maybe I'll continue this one again soon. Though I don't know when. Not exactly a scheduled writer. Thank you, again, for adding such a good chapter to my story.

Summary:

Short stories written as practice with a lot more variety and different scenarios.


Categories: Muscle, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Breast Enlargement, Couples, Gentle, Growing Woman, Destruction, Giant, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10431 Read Count: 57077
[Report This] Published: February 20 2016 Updated: March 03 2019
Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: January 10 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Science Above All

I'm really loving this scientist. I hope you continue to write and hopefully pick up on this one first. You're just a joy.

Summary:

Four young college girls discover shrunken civilizations and people in their new shared student apartment, each of their very different personalities determines how they treat the tiny inhabitants.  

The decisions the girls make through violence, sadism, passion, caring, and friendship affect millions of tiny lives, but their age, lack of maturity, and naivety might make life difficult and terrifying for everyone involved as they are forced to submit to the lives of the four giantess roommates.  

This story takes place from multiple perspectives and different characters both big and small but will focus on the main cast of women.  

 

 

Disclaimer:

Please be advised that this story will contain violent imagery and descriptions of graphic nature that is considered sensitive to uninitiated audiences.  No characters in this story are based on anyone real, living, or dead and are purely coincidental.  All references to products, items, or applications in this story are trademarks owned by their respective companies.  

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Legwear, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 371271 Read Count: 742326
[Report This] Published: October 16 2016 Updated: December 21 2021
Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: July 15 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Sabotage

Nice to see this updated. Hope to see more of your work soon.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, I will finish this and start to expand into other ideas I've always wanted to work on

Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: December 19 2018 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Elle's Reward Part 2

Good to have you back.

It was nice to see the thought processes of the characters. Motivation does wonders for the good bits. You also have a grasp for setup and payoff that I really appreciate in these stories.

Certainly went off the walls with building this country. Very imaginative. Loved Elle exploring its downfall. Poor Elle too.

Sad to see the disappearance of the last shrunken country though since that is probably my favorite size in this story.

Bringing back Isabelle is promising. I know you have plans with her but I'm hoping she continues to stay out of the loop.

Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I know, I love extreme size difference stuff too, but we never know what's going to happen.   Look forward to hearing more comments from you, every single one helps.  

Soul Food by Macsquizzy Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

An otherworldly female who absorbs living energy for sustenance visits a world to have some fun at it's inhabitants expense.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Destruction, Feet, Humiliation, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48034 Read Count: 93819
[Report This] Published: October 28 2016 Updated: November 28 2021
Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: January 11 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Little Tease

Giga is hard to make work but when it works it's out of this world. Military at her breast gotta be my favorite part since she didn't even mean to do that.



Author's Response:

Wow thanks! I guess that means I did it right then. I'm glad you liked that scene, it was a lot of fun to write. I'm always trying to cram more and more detail into every little part I can because I know there's always something going on even with the most mundane actions. Or at least there COULD be something going on. I think I still have improvements to make though but feedback like this really inspires me to keep writing.

Shrink Note by Haloichigo Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Yes it is as the title says this is a parody-esque story of Death Note, but instead of people instantly dying, they shrink.

Abigail Amir is a high school teacher by day and a hostess by night, whose life takes a turn for the weird when she comes across a book that claims it can shrink anyone whose name is written in the book to any size the writer imagines. How will Abigail handle her new power? Can she deal with the imp who now haunts her and can she survive a game of death against eight other Shrink Note owners?

 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Feet, Crush, Footwear, Mouth Play, Instant Size Change, Vore, Violent, Nose, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11730 Read Count: 15685
[Report This] Published: April 27 2017 Updated: March 19 2018
Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: March 19 2018 Title: Chapter 2: The Second Name

Happy to see this updated. I love how extreme you went with the shrinking as it is one of my favorite ranges and doesn't get a lot of content. I do prefer your works in third person though. I also think if you want to continue this story it needs more motivation from the main character beyond getting out of a bad situation. It doesn't kill the story for me but it makes the shrink scenes feel less built up and more random. All in all I do hope to see more of your stuff (the Elite 50 was straight up everything I could want from a story).



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment. It has been a while since I went with shinking of that scale in a story so I decided to just go for it. As for the prespective I find it more fun to write first person. It flows alot better for me and I like getting a feeling of the situation fully from a characters eyes. As for shrinking motivation I would take what you wrote to thought, but this was intentional on my part. There is no prior build up to the shrinking because it is not what she wants to do. Unlike in lets say a story like the elite 50, where the protagonist is a sadisitc murderer on a vengence spree. This protagonist would prefer not to kill and is shoved into situations that force her into doing something she would consider horrible and test her as a person, especially at the end of this chapter since she is seeing an appeal from her two killing experiences. I persoanlly feel she is the most human character I have written since she can be somewhat relatable unlike my past characters who are boarderline psychopaths(which I love).

Summary: In the not too distant future, technology has evolved to include shrinking technology which has been used by companies in many different industries. Some of these include safety defenses for cars, others include burglar traps for robbers while others are simply used for easier transportation while in your car. These are just some of the stories that have involved this technology.

This is based on a short series created by MShrinker on Deviantart. Go check out their work, it's really good.
Categories: Crush, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Instant Size Change, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10235 Read Count: 62041
[Report This] Published: May 18 2017 Updated: May 22 2017
Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: May 22 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Road safety is important

Great to see you writing again, always loved your work. Possible story idea? Spoiled brat gets new car, makes donuts around a big target, system triggers, proceeds to domineer?



Author's Response: Like, you mean a spoiled brat uses the device to shrink a building or establishment? Or the security systems of the establishment shrinks the car?

Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: May 23 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Road safety is important

Thanks for the response. Yeah the car shrinks the target. The idea came from the third story with the crazy driver that shrunk the limo.

Test Anxiety by Vintovka Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

When you drop a class, be sure you actually drop it, or you may find the exam is a bit too big for you.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Giantess, Legwear, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2177 Read Count: 8980
[Report This] Published: July 09 2017 Updated: July 09 2017
Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: July 09 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Test Anxiety

Really liked this story. You sold the condescension and pity well. I hope to see more of your writing.

Summary: This is a commission I am doing for Vanderband. It will have 9 chapters.

A powerful, magical teacher often takes detention in order to permanently punish the naughty and disobedient students. She has set up a series of games to punish them for their crimes. Will any of them survive? No, they won't.
Categories: Violent, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Humiliation, Nose, Odor, Scat
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36064 Read Count: 180224
[Report This] Published: July 26 2017 Updated: September 28 2017
Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: August 02 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Timothy's nose problems

It's like you're going through my checklist or something.



Author's Response: Well, I had to repay you back for the wonderful addition you made to my story previously. It seems we're both into very similar things.

Summary:

Whether against elves or demons or slimes or even fairies, humanity is such a small and insignificant race that no matter what they encounter, their scattered kingdoms are doomed. These are the stories of humanity, one of the most inferior species in the Shared Realm, and their interactions with the superior, more significant species around them.


Categories: Giantess, Fantasy
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11914 Read Count: 40842
[Report This] Published: August 20 2017 Updated: July 17 2020
Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: August 27 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Half Elf

Would love to see those ideas. Slime would be interesting out of sheer uniqueness and I'm personally hoping demons can do illusions.

Summary: These are a collection of story beginnings. Let me know what you think.
Categories: Mature (40-49), Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Object, Butt, Destruction, Futanari, Giant, Incest, Instant Size Change, Odor, Unaware, Feet, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12561 Read Count: 78335
[Report This] Published: September 10 2017 Updated: December 02 2017
Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: September 12 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Teleporter Accident

you posted all 5000 mate



Author's Response: meh, oh well. It's probably better this way. My first upload of the story had heaps of spelling and grammar errors. So now everyone can have the better revised version.

Summary:

So, it's a place for me to write short fetish stories (usually one-shot) about a lot of potential interactions. I already know what I want to write for the second chapter, but if you've particuliar ideas, don't hesitate to tell them :) !


Categories: Crush, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, BBW, Mature (40-49), Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Muscle, New World Order, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48632 Read Count: 245897
[Report This] Published: January 06 2018 Updated: December 25 2019
Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: January 09 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Nine is a great number

You could probably fill this up just with Johanna's 8 exes. If you're feeling better could I request an unaware story about a dust sized airplane?



Author's Response:

I have plans for Johanna, but hadn't thought of that, strangely enough ! And I'll do my best to write your the airplane story :)

Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: January 10 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Nine is a great number

Didn't think you'd put it up so fast. Was not expecting world building to go with my request but thank you.

Summary:

What would you do if you woke up  to find that your best friend is a giant and is using your city, your world as her personal plaything? Every single day. Your friend seems to have the power to alter the world around her, but is it real or an illusion?

 

This is the story of a boy being pulled into the games his best friend plays by changing the size of herself and others. All for her pleasure. 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Nose, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21942 Read Count: 133291
[Report This] Published: January 06 2018 Updated: April 04 2024
Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: January 09 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Morning Routine

Really like how Kelly enjoys her omnipotence. It's not going mad with power so much as a casual why not and makes her cute. I imagine she would conjure a city just to ignore it as she pays attention to something mundane.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're liking how Kelly is handling things so far. Casual and fun is what I'm going for with her view of things. I actually do have something like you suggested planned out! So I hope you enjoy that! Like she would shrink a city but then suddenly remember she has homework and forget it's there until later.

Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: January 11 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Physical Education

I'm loving this character interaction. I hope it carries through the rest of your story. Can't wait to see what you have in store for me!

Reviewer: rabbithole Signed
Date: January 15 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Homework

Called it! And boy was that a treat. This odd couple is just too cute and funny to turn away from. Hope your week goes well. Can't wait to see what you write next.