Reviewer: raskallion Signed
Date: October 16 2017
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: MAJOR/first step (part two)
I really liked Small and all the sibling power reversal there, but I'm loving this story even more. There are some things I'm still not clear on, like the the average heights of MAJORS and minors, or even the heights of the main characters. While I like that you do not pull us out of the story by inserting the numbers within the narrative, I wonder if you'd be willing to put such data in your entertaining commentary before or after certain chapters. All that said, I eagerly await your next installment!
Author's Response: Hmmm well I do try to keep a certain flow going in the story and keep a balance between descriptions and moving the plot forward. I'll try to add hard numbers and better details in the future. Until then I give you the height for the two main characters as they're the most clear in my head:
Izzellah's the same height she was in "Small" pre-shrink. 5'7 I believe. I'll actually go look later in correct it in a end note. She's seventeen a year older than in "Small" and still has her slim dancer's figure with maybe a little more muscle from working on her car..maybe.
Sabrina's the same but she's a MAJOR so that land's her at around 8 feet which is kinda small for them. She hasn't hit puberty though so that's not her max.
And sure I'll give you Ignacio who's an adult and a pretty tall guy. I imagine him near sixteen feet and almost half a ton. That might change but he's in the upper zone. He's like 6'5 in "Small".
Hope that satisfies you for now. I'll make a chart or something and actually hammer out some numbers. Thanks for the input!