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Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2907 Read Count: 39654
Date: April 05 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction and beginnings
I have always liked these micro civilization stories. Good job thus far someguy.
Date: April 06 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Lesly Ventures In to Lauren's closet
I really digged the descrptions of laurenville and peek into there lifestyle. This is fantastic.
Date: April 09 2007 Title: Chapter 3: The Devistation of Lesley
I loved the way this chapter ended, very powerful. Keep it going.
Categories: Adventure, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 932 Read Count: 13463
Date: April 12 2007 Title: Chapter 1: My escape and capture
I was hoping for a bit longer unaware scene, but its still a great start. I hope you continue your other story as well.
Candy is enjoying her life as a lap dancer and her new found status in the town
Categories: Body Exploration, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2005 Read Count: 9987
Date: April 16 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 2
Just a couple of things, why does your story start with chapter two.
But anyway, I think your story would be better taken if you add in some paragraph breaks. Anytime somebody talks should be a new paragraph. No matter how short it is, and then anytiime you are expressing a new idea.
Right now, with the story as one paragraph its kind of daunting.
Author's Response:
Chapter one is there in the archives, thanks for your comments, i have only been writing for a year so your input is very helpfull to me.
Kind regards
Rory
Categories: Giantess, Crush, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14154 Read Count: 66532
Date: May 27 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Joining The Tribe
This is really a differnet story then i first thought it was going ot be when reading it. I am really enjoying where you took this one. It's nice to see a story that isnt just another gts story.
Author's Response: thank you...a review from you is like being Knighted by the Queen.
Categories: Giantess, Insertion, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1557 Read Count: 11244
Date: May 30 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
this is a pretty unique take at the whole gts thing. I for one enjoyed it alot as it was so fresh and unlike what i had read before and best of all it was written well toboot. great job.
A young married couple's relationship dramatically changes during a camping trip after the wife expores new ways of satisfying herself...
Categories: Crush, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2830 Read Count: 29655
Date: June 12 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Squirm With The Sperm
Really unique take, i loved how you fit characterization into such a short amount of space and you still managed to write a interesting tale. good job.
Categories: Giantess, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Slave, Toilet, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4346 Read Count: 13231
Date: July 11 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this story, it was concise and cohesive.
A boy gets shrunk and must seek help from his friends sister. Will she help him?
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4820 Read Count: 120969
Date: July 21 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Will She Help or Not?
i like what you presented but the lack of proper spacing made it a chore to read.
Date: August 23 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Less than Normal Night
glad to see you reformatted the story, its much easier to read. Keep up the good work.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Gentle, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12490 Read Count: 131517
Date: August 23 2007 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen
I love the plot to the story thus far, Its nice to see something that feels like an actual story. That isn't done as much as it use too. I hope you continue this, its great, and the writing mistakes can be easily overlooked for the overall enjoyable story.
Categories: Incest, Giantess, Entrapment, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Insertion, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16532 Read Count: 45201
Date: August 23 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Excellent start, the writing here is of a extremely high level. Its still seems a bit early, so i will hold off on further critque until i get more of the story. But im definately digging whats been presented thus far.
Author's Response: thanks you so much for the review, Asukafan! i'm awfully glad you enjoy it ! :-) i've started the second part. poor Max hasn't seen anything yet, i'm affraid ;-)
A shrunken man in the 22nd century ends up in the hands of a cruel college-aged taskmistress
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3318 Read Count: 11726
Date: September 02 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
interesting tale, i feel kind of bad for the guy and would have liked to see the thought process that led him to accept his face.
Categories: Insertion, Feet, Instant Size Change, Body Exploration
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15743 Read Count: 319653
Date: November 01 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Under Her Shoe
excellent start, some good descriptions. i hope you continue it. I always like a good unaware story.
Categories: Adventure, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11654 Read Count: 73215
Date: November 06 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: This sucks
another good chapter, iliked the vaccuum. it was suspenseful and the injury made him seem more human, it created abit of sympathy for him where before he was just kind of portrayed as a pig.
Date: November 04 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Ashley
so far so good, i like the adventure feel this story has.
Date: November 07 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Another very enjoyable chapter. I am enjoying how you are really bringing some humanity into him, and making this brittany kaplan out to be evil one.
The other thing i think you are doing well, is the pacing. The excitement has really been increasing each step of the way, building up.
The only real complaint i have, is how many people have found him, and then lost him moments later. I think the story may be better served if he is struggling to gain the attention of his friends. However, thats really up to you, and what you are doing now is working more then fine. I for one can't wait for the next chapter.
Categories: Adventure, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1302 Read Count: 5272
Date: November 06 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
excellent light heated tale. I didnt know you were such a writer, but i find myself enjoying your stories.
Categories: Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 669 Read Count: 6492
Date: November 04 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The pool game
Nice short story, i wish you would have ended after the there nightly escapedes but its a enjoyable read.