Bob's story continues. The six inch tall author has some more experiences in the land of giantess women...
Very much loving the fear of the hunt. Great story.
A young Alyssa Wilson works at a local daycare centre when she mysteriously shrinks to 3 inches. She is then heavily abused and mistreated by the children there in her fruitless quest to find help.
Cool Story. Well done.
I just finished chapter 3 and I find this story wonderful so far. I decided that I had to write to you. Love the girl finding them and how she finds them. So realistic.
Thanks,
Diesel
My only add to your great story would have been that when Laura had gained the confidence of the little people that she would have taken them to the park. It would have been their belief that she would set them free and they would have trusted her and told her where the others would be. Maybe she would have brought food for them. Then she could have captured them and maybe a few more that were in the park.
I always find it interesting for a story when a young girl finds little people and then eventually her mother finds them. Great story. Nice twists.
Thanks,
Diesel
This story is so well done. Laura and Paige are both great Giantesses.
Laura and Paige are two of the best characters that I have ever read. Will you ever do a second story with Paige?
A man unwillingly becomes the test subject of a brilliant elderly scientist who has decided to continue on her late husband's research regardless of the lives she has and will continue to ruin in the process as the ends justify the means in her philosophy.
Loved this story. I enjoy your writing style very much. I like the Giantess speaking in caps. It does give the feel of size. I like your slow style and I am waiting anxiously for her to pick him up. How small is he? I assume he is pretty small.Being shrunk by a scientest who really does her work is scary. Will she eventually do things to him scientifically without putting him to sleep? I like the reward if you are good and punishment if you do not listen. You have set up both chacters very well. Looking forward to more.
Thanks,
diesel
He's about BLANK inches tall.. He, he. She will be measuring him shortly and this will be revealed to you then Diesel.. And yeah, about the all caps I don't get what the fuss is over but the scientist is acutely aware of the volume of her voice in regards to his extremely tiny ear bones so will be offering him a remedy in that regard that will not be so very high tech but very practical and down to earth.
I agree with you about the scientist and all of the creepy potentialities that her character along with her philosophy about her subjects opens up. A lot of potential for real horror there.
As to whether she will do things to him while he's awake, rest assure that she will. Her main concern in the beginning is to get people past the Go Insane shock. Once that seems to have passed the person probably will wish that they initially had.
I'm very happy that you like this story so far Diesel and hope that you will continue to enjoy it as it twists and turns into the abyss of terror.
Any new news about continuing this fine story?
Author's Response:
None for now, but I will inform you when a chapter is ready Diesel. That you can rest assured on. :)
How are things going on continueing this fantastic story?
Love this story. How are things going on the next few chapters?
Thanks,
Diesel
I haven't picked this one up for a while I'm sad to report Diesel.
I've been busy with a lot of other life stuff lately I appologize.
After her younger sister gets herself into trouble by playing with their father's invention, Kylie must keep an eye on things until her mother gets home and the two of them can change everything back to normal for a small group of people.
I greatly enjoyed the story. The Mother was fantastic. Well written. I would love to see another story like this.
Loved this chapter. Well done and fun. They should be mad and have a sense of awe.
Love the set up. Nice having the older sister take charge of the situation. Now the really big question is what will Mom think? Very much looking forward to this.
Please continue,
Diesel
Greatly enjoyed the first 2 chapters. Hopefully mom will decide that the little people can not tell anyone what has happened to them. Will the mom put her heels back on?
Thanks
Diesel
So far so good. I like the concept. Zoey and Kelly seem really interesting. How will Ms.Jones class go? What will she do if someone acts up in her class? Looking forward to more.
Nice job,
Diesel
When every member of her family is shrunk to doll size 16 year old Erica becomes head of the house.
Will the Rockwell family adapt to the once shy Erica being in charge? Will Erica let the power go to her head?
Greatly looking forward to when you continue this.
Later ,
Diesel
