Penname: abc3643 [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: November 30 2009
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I am male.


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The Climber by Ann Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

to be input later


Categories: Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1040 Read Count: 6221
[Report This] Published: June 25 2006 Updated: June 25 2006
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a classic.

Summary: A lonely woman discovers a ten-inch man at her doorstep, and then goes on to discover her sadistic side as she torments her tiny captive.  Then she captures his sister, and goes on to develop her skills of torture.
Categories: Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24714 Read Count: 87593
[Report This] Published: November 28 2009 Updated: February 10 2010
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted

(I originally reviewed this story but deleted my review so I could expand on it...)

This story is very very good.  In fact, while I am a long-time visitor to this site, I just now registered simply so I could positively review this story.

The narrative is of a considerably higher quality than I have seen in most other stories.  If I was a publishing editor and this story was submitted to me, I'd recommend some grammatical tweaks and other minor narration clarifications.  (Perhaps write in the 3rd person...?)  You might even want to consider expanding it with even more character development for the Pamela character.  Pamela, you might even consider submitting this story to a fetish-related magazine.

Something that I very much enjoyed was the apparent ease with which the narration came.  It flowed well, was not choppy nor amateurish, and it almost seemed that you enjoyed writing it.  I envy that because I would find good narration personally difficult to write.

Overall, though, the story idea itself is excellent and, as a man with the tiny-man fetish, it is much more pleasing coming from a woman; I don't feel like guy is trying to verbally jack me off.

Pamela, you definitely have talent.  I'd love to ask you some questions about yourself and this story... 

Thanks for posting it!  I look forward to reading more of your work.



Author's Response: I started in third person and then switched it.  Next time I will do third person and see if that is actually easier.  Feel free to email me at pamelapleases@aol.com with any questions or comments.  I'd like to learn more about the clarifications and tweaks you mentioned so I can fix them.  And I'd consider sending to a magazine if I knew of any! I am too new to know that kind of stuff just now, but am interested in learning more.  I did enjoy writing it.  My background is more in the BDSM/Dominant/submission world so I think it translated well to a Giantess theme.  Thank you for your kind words of encouragement.

Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: December 01 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted

I would not change the ending of the story at all.  It ended as it should have.  Again, you might want to expand on the Pamela character's background.  Do not change Tim in any way nor give him any background; he is a mystery and that is the way it should be.  This story focuses on the Pamela character and that, too, is the way it should be.

Author's Response: So you think I should rewrite some background information about me into the story? Or do another one, with more information in IT?  And since I am so new to this genre, I didn't give him much background because I couldn't think of any to give him! I felt like I was cheating, but am glad it did not come across that way.  Thanks for the input. -- Pamela

Nova by FleetingMoment Rated: R [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

After a nuclear holocaust, civilization had to move into enourmous cities. During this time humanity discovered an alternet source of power called Eyous. However several years after this discovery, people have been disapearing off the streets from both the middle level and the lower level.

The story begins with the lead protaginist named Alice Vermire. Her parents and herself are driving on the highway when a tragedy befalls them. There she caught a glimps of what looked like a monster and another human sized figure covered in a blood colored tattered cloak called Red Raven.

Reviews may contain spoilers. Please be advised.

[AWHILE AGO I CHOSE TO REARRANGE SOME PLOT POINTS BECAUSE I THOUGHT I COULD DO A BETTER JOB THEN THAT SO YOU MAY HAVE TO RETURN TO A PREVIOUS CHAPTER]

I actually was in the process of writing a different story but I wanted to test some of the ideas for it here. Any criticism is greatly appreciated. And I don't want to sound like a jerk but Some more reviews would be nice.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Breast Enlargement, Growing Woman, Instant Size Change, New World Order, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Slow Size Change, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 102487 Read Count: 107172
[Report This] Published: August 23 2011 Updated: March 08 2015
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: March 08 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Ravens fly towards Death

Ayous is an African wood.  How is it a miracle "discovered" power source?

Description

Ayous or Obeche is creamy-white to pale-straw in colour with no clear distinction between sapwood and heartwood, though the wide sapwood is more susceptible to discoloration and insect attack. It is the lightest low-cost utility hardwood in general use, the density being about 0,38 seasoned. The grain is slightly interlocked; the texture open. When cut on the quarter and stained it has some resemblance to African mahogany. Large logs commonly contain brittleheart. The wood has a ribbon-like aspect on quarter-sawn faces, and is lustrous. Fresh wood has an unpleasant smell, which disappears upon drying.



Author's Response:

I actually had no idea that the word Ayous was already taken. When I was thinking up a name I just took the word Ion and played around with it. I also had planned to rewrite it as Eyous instead but I have been having difficultiy with editing at this time and have sent a message about this issue I was having. I honestly thought it just sounded like a really space like name. Thanks for letting me know and when I can I'll make changes to it. Unless of course there is a meaning to the word Eyous as well then I might just throw the word in the garbage and simply use Reaver instead.

Summary:

A young man must come to terms with the fact that he no longer enjoys the station in life that was his by birthright and must now adjust to the cruel fate that life has dealt him.


Categories: Crush, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Humiliation, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave, Butt
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39102 Read Count: 430193
[Report This] Published: July 06 2013 Updated: January 28 2021
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: July 14 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice to see this story back!  Definitely, one of the best!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the great incentive Abc!  It was time to dust this one off and get it going again. ;)

Summary:

A man unwillingly becomes the test subject of a brilliant elderly scientist who has decided to continue on her late husband's research regardless of the lives she has and will continue to ruin in the process as the ends justify the means in her philosophy.


Categories: Body Exploration, Middle Age (50+), Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Maternal, New World Order, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7335 Read Count: 28958
[Report This] Published: December 28 2013 Updated: December 29 2013
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: April 03 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Consider revisiting this too!



Author's Response:

I sure will consider it Abc..  And thank you for the prod too!

Summary:

When Charlie and his mother go to the beach, hes forced to do things to please his mother, which he eventualy starts to get interested in.


Categories: Butt, Body Exploration, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1168 Read Count: 13579
[Report This] Published: May 11 2014 Updated: May 11 2014
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: May 11 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: To the Beach

Welcome!!  I look forward to more from you.

Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: May 11 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: To the Beach

Welcome!!  I look forward to more from you.

Summary:

She took gentle care of him, and they were in love.

But she was starting to wonder just what the limits were. 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Body Exploration, Couples , Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19494 Read Count: 77070
[Report This] Published: May 16 2014 Updated: October 19 2014
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: May 18 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The Panty Prison

Welcome!  You do a wonderful job and my kind of GTS too!



Author's Response: Oh gosh, thank you :3 you're actually the first person to welcome me! Haha. And I'm glad you like it :)

Author's Response: Oh gosh, thank you :3 you're actually the first person to welcome me! Haha. And I'm glad you like it :)

Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: October 19 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Morning Breath

Glad to see you are back!

Summary:

There's only one way into the Omega sorority...all pledges must simply make it through one night hanging out with the current sisters. The only catch: each pledge is reduced to a quarter-inch in height. You leave the Omega House during pledge night only one of two ways...either as a member or as a stain. 

(Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.)


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, BBW, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7837 Read Count: 52851
[Report This] Published: May 21 2014 Updated: June 01 2014
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: June 01 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Welcome, Chelsea!  I was wondering.... What was the motivation for this story?

Olympus by Uncle Funkle Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 95]
Summary:

Deleted


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4 Read Count: 54650
[Report This] Published: June 12 2014 Updated: February 14 2017
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: October 01 2014 Title: Olympus

Nice so far.  My only quasi-negative comment is the dates on the first chapter.  I used to work in the space industry.  Rule of thumb is that it takes 30 years to develop a space system - assuming that it isn't defunded.  You should throw on at least 100 years to the dates.

Summary:

Based on the life of three space travelers that were pulled into another planets atmosphere and thrust into this strange new world.  Upon realizing that himself, and his other crew members can't ever get back home.  They're forced to overcome some of the worst, and best happenings that could ever be imagined...  However, this planet is very much like their own, only one thing is actually different....


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, BBW, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146270 Read Count: 408457
[Report This] Published: June 23 2014 Updated: February 27 2015
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed starstar
Date: October 18 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a good story for the most part although 1) spellchecking is desperately needed 2) I think there's some inconsistency about the number of dead in the early chapters 3) some grammar issues at times that can lead to confusion.  Overall, this is a good story though!



Author's Response:

........ "desperately", 'needed'?   I don't think there's That, many spelling errors!  You may find a few, but, hey,... I'm doing this on 'Notepad', So....

I might miss a key stroke occasionally, but... I wouldn't say that it's "desparately" needed,... you make it sound like it's really bad.  How many misspelled words did you find?

Overall,... good huh?  and yet only two stars?   Thanks for the review,  I Think,...  :/


Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: November 16 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

We need an update!!  Chop! Chop! my good man. Chop! Chop! 

(http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chop_chop_(phrase))

Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: November 30 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

¿¿¿¡¡¡Next chapter!!!???

Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: November 05 2014 Title: Chapter 40: 'The Hospital'

I like your work very much, but, please, spell check!!



Author's Response:

Tanks Man!  I well be vury watchfull of these misspellin's!  ;`)

Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: April 05 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Are we ever going to get another installment???

Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: November 08 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have to agree that this is the best story - by far - on this site.  Well, spell check is an important thing.  Bad spelling helps dissuade suspension of disbelief.  This story has the capability of being elevated and converted into a screenplay.  

As for "suspension of disbelief", I don't think space marines would act as undisciplined as their dialog suggests, but I can let that slide.  Still, with some clean-up governed by an editor perhaps, this story, if embellished and cleaned-up a bit, could go mainstream and be made into a movie. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Man!  I can understand what you're saying about the misspelled words, and-  it is, 'sometimes 'distracting', but I'm just 'Playing it by ear', so to speak; Freestyle, for lack of a better word,  that's just how I write...  ('Spellcheck' is cheating, in my book)  I like a blank sheet of paper, with no bells and whistles...

Samuel Coleridge's original statement came into a restrictive clause:  "...that, 'willing'- suspension of disbelief, for the moment, which constitutes 'poetic faith', of necessity implies, that there are different sorts of 'suspension of disbelief' and specifies that, 'Poetic faith' is one instance of a larger class.

One need not choose to believe that it's real; or that the events are actually taking place,... more often than not, you know that what you're reading isn't real,... you only temporarily allow yourself to believe it...

.... for the sake of the fantasy itself.

Either way,.. I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I hope that you can overlook the occasional misspellings, and continue to read on!  ;`)

Summary:

A young japanese girl loves exotic sushi, preferably of the male variety.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adventure, Body Exploration, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2569 Read Count: 6111
[Report This] Published: October 10 2014 Updated: October 10 2014
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: October 10 2014 Title: Chapter 1: A Girl and Her Sushi

I'm glad that you wrote this story because it needed to be written.  I've been eating sushi the past few nights partly because I've been having fantasies this past month of young Asian girls using chopsticks and playing with my tiny self...

Broken by Nigma Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A short story about two young women, a bottle of wine on a summer's day and a tiny, broken slave.


Categories: Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1269 Read Count: 9455
[Report This] Published: April 21 2015 Updated: April 21 2015
Reviewer: abc3643 Signed
Date: April 22 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I don't understand. So what happened at the end? What were they going to do to him? It didn't make sense.