Two friends get a chance to see the world through the other's eyes.
A young Japanese genius falls foul of his own ingenuity when his shrinking device renders him a few millimeters tall and at the mercy of his unaware siblings. Will he get their attention? Will he be restored to his original size? Will he ever publish his paper? Read and find out.
I was reminded that I hadn't fixed this, so I sorted it out. The full version is back!
The first alternative ended was the best. Death by sisters ass. Great writing
I'm glad you liked it! It was one I wanted to do in some way, and that was requested. I'm moving on to what will probably be the last two alternate endings now which hopefully will appeal to lots of people too. I'm always open to suggestions, and if Mika's backside (or someone else) is in high demand, we may see it's return! *wink*
Thanks for your support!
This was originally posted as my first GTS tale. After meticulously editing, and some drastic rework, I added some detailed concepts that will hopefully improve the overall story.
The main character "Violet', a beautiful female scientist will ultimately succeed in shrinking the entire world-wide 'male'-population..... Enjoy...
great story so far
it was a peaceful day for the occupants at the local pool until a strange phenomenon shrinks all the people down to les than 1/4 an inch. problems really start to get serious when a family of young girls arrive for some swimming.
yes, the characters are practically the same from "tales of a shrinking sister".
I really liked the tissue death
thanks man. i like deaths that are caused by normal, everyday bodily functions. it shows just how small and insignificant the woman was if she died by something a little girl blew from her nose. =)
Im loving these chapters. Great work
Love these chapters. Maybe a toilet death?
i like you idea. i have been considering doing such things but i also have to lead up to it. also, not everyone likes that stuff but i guaranteethere will be a chapter with that in it.
This was another great and creative death. I love the evil poop dome. Maybe you could go fully evil chapter and do death by tampon or maxipad
I don't think I would be doing a tampon death because I would have to say that that's just my limit. I would just not be able to get into a mindset to write about that. Also, I can't imagine these girls going to the pool while on their period and so wouldn't be using tampons.
A lonely girl sits at a bar waiting for a date who doesn't show up. The night isn't a complete loss however thanks to a friendly bartender who gives her something special to enjoy.
The second in my Danza Macabra series :)
good story. I like to assume the olive was her date
The thought had crossed my mind ^_^ I decided not to include that specifically though so people could assume it was the case or not :) Glad you enjoyed though.
Two girls end a bitter rivalry in a very unlikely fashion.
When a young man innocently inspects a foreign piece of stone found on his very doorstep, his life undertakes a drastic change along with the people around him...
I hope for this to be a long and epic story, so feedback is always welcomed!
*05/01/15 - New chapter!
Please feel free to leave a review and please give me a rating too!
And more importantly, enjoy!
Wish lauren would have burrowed the panties. Good story so far
Thanks for the review!
He just cant stop thinking about her and her greatest Asset. Through a string of unique events, he gets his wish, but the ending is not what he expected.
Love the story. Sorry not many participated in your contest. Love your captions and this story. Hope to see more of both
Adam is a man despretly trying to express his love for Alissa. After much persitance Adam is finally able to break some ground and has been invited over her house. Adam goes over intending to express his true feelings, however chickens out. shortly after he passes out to find himself shrunk upon reawakening. Alissa is Adam's only hope of survival however she is totaly unaware of his predicament.
Suppository or enema would be nice
Great suggestion, May be a bit difficult to introduce to the story though, also i don't want to be ripping of some of the ideas from "The Greatest Plans" but i'll see what i can do
With a super secret and powerful weapon stolen from a government base the weapon quickly falls into the hands of stacy, a cruel and evil 13 year old. Overcome with power she decides to use the gun to get her way and to punish everyone who has ever "wronged" her.
I really like ur creative endings for the people. I havent seen many nose death before but I liked it. Thanks for writing these
i really do like wierd and gross endings often through natural bodily function. nose, ear eyes, they are all strange and kind of gross ways to die (well, except the eye which is pretty clean but it's still unusual). anyway, if you have any creative deaths you'd like to read don't be shy to verbally demand them with capslocks =) of course the deaths also have to be in character but you get what i mean.
:) I like where this is going. Cruel is good
Wow I loved what you had Angela do....
You did a great job with this chapter. I liked how you had her listen to the baby's stomach and the line right now shes taking care of her hunger
Thank you. I'm trying to make it seem natural as posible that she is twisting and transforming into this monster. A monster with a size ray, muhahaha. Also, do you have any preference to what the next chapter should be?
And here's yet another story for the Penny Series.
Welcome to Jeff's story. It can be read on its own, but I suggest reading my other Penny story: Penny & Souls Lost first.
It follows' Jeff's Grocery trip the day before thanksgiving.
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Good story. One small typo
Picking up the penny she looked at the panicking turkey before her. "There was never a Turkey named Penny!" She laughed.
Dont u mean turkey named Lucky?
I can't believe I missed that. I should try to avoid fast writing and editing. Hope you will forgive me.
It's fixed now, thanks for the heads up!
Ever wanted to visit Forbidden Dish yourself? Now you can! Fully stocked with all of the classic characters and over 100 choices!
WOW this is huge and the writing is all high quality. Amazing job
Thank you. We had fun with it. Feel free to poke around and enjoy.
A girl is tortured by her new coffee shop coworker.
Its a hot story. loved it
Jake Miller is the newest example of those affected with the Shrinking virus. More specifically it demonstrates the natural end for them.
good to see more of ur great stories
Thanks. hopefully I get the urge to continue writing soon =)
