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Daily differences between being and belong. by Exosaur Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Danny Wakahisa is a common Japanese boy with high expectative in life upon entering middle school, thinking in things like “Will I fall in love?” “Will I meet cool friends?” or “Maybe the demon eye will awaken in me?” The first day the entire classroom freeze when a foreign beauty enters the class: Monica Riedel.

In first year of high school was still impossible for him to get closer to Monica, although it was also like that to the rest of them.

After hanging in an exit after school, he notices the mysterious girl taking a unusual way to home, triggering a sequence of events that will turn his last year of high school into the impossible life he once desired years ago, as well as the… imminent? Destruction not only of the earth, but from the entire universe and the existence itself.

"You fell directly into my trap… stupid human, now you belong to me!"

Due to the format I’m using and the kind of story this is, you can see it as some kind of light novel.

Link to the spanish version: https://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=9164&index=1


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Animal, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Object, Body Exploration, Body Part, Breast Enlargement, Butt, Couples, Destruction, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Sci-Fi, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: DDBBaB / DDESyP Series
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99051 Read Count: 97944
[Report This] Published: July 13 2020 Updated: January 16 2023
Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 23 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 — Normality has various perspectives.

To be honest, this is better than a good amount of light novels that Ived read. If someone were to come to me and tell me that this is a light novel(or web novel) I would believe it for how detailed it is.

For the story itself like I said is above average if compared to most light/web novels and really good for a size fetish story ( it doesnt just instantly dive into the size fetish part and gives time to make the two characters feel alive ). The fact that theres also more awaiting with the other fact that theres a something might be happening as a sort of big event is thrilling me

Amazing work 9.5/10

(If this looks weird im thinking this as a actual novel and not just a fetish story, that's how I think pretty highly of this work)

Author's Response:

Well, I can't tell you how happy your review makes me feel, that my story generate so good reviews, thank you! ;) 

Nanomachines by VivettaVenray Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

At the turn of the 22nd century, a woman enhances herself with nanotechnology to enjoy herself at the expense of the humanity she evolves beyond.

This story is quite long at over 27,000 words, so I tried breaking it into chapters for ease of reading. On deviantart it's a pdf, and on giantessworld uses the built in chapter system. The story revolves around a woman who's size and powers are based on nanites, and explores what that could entail. This story contains feet, stirrup leggings, vore, digestion, lewdness, cruelty, god-like-powers and growth as well as stuff like absorption, nano-swarm-vore and transformations. It also features a vast range of sizes from same-size bullying all the way up to terra-scale combat. This story was written in just under a week and a half. Comments and constructive criticism are more than welcome!

DISCLAIMER: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27742 Read Count: 60461
[Report This] Published: September 08 2020 Updated: September 08 2020
Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 08 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Beginning

A really really really sadistic and destruction filled size story, it litterally has most of my unknown fetishes here. It's also really entertaining if you just want to go read a size fetish story without outlandishly plot, this one is really straightforward. And I adore it for that



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment! I wanted to make sure all the nanite-related things were understood, so I stayed away from anything too complicated plot wise.

Undeserved by Inwiththebooks Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Power rarely goes to those that deserve it. It rarely seems fair in how it winds up in the hands of others. Whether they deserve it or not, those expressions of power remain real and those at the mercy of it at the whims of fantasy.


Categories: Crush, Destruction, Feet, Sci-Fi, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15849 Read Count: 44751
[Report This] Published: September 12 2020 Updated: September 16 2020
Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed
Date: September 15 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Guessing by the ending of chapter 7 I'll guess that this is this end? Maybe one to three more chapters, honestly just enjoying this as a casual read before going in to reread it(if this is the final chapter)with trying to see what could better enhance the reading expirience.



Author's Response:

Chapter 8, so just one Chapter off. Good guess though! Look forward to hearing how you liked it.

Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 23 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This may have took a while, but I am now submitting a full review

Overall, this is way better than I would have thought of, the pacing is alright though I think It could be done better since I feel like you could put one or two more chapters, though its just my thought. The writing is pretty chaotic though you could still understand it. On it's own it's already a good work but you'll really realise how good it is till you actually read works that has these extreme of fetishes(like really, the only works I could remember in my head are yours and nanomachines) with an actual story, and not just... destruction and all that. All in all this would be a 8/10 for me. I think it is overall a good work, but it could be better

Author's Response:

Happy to hear you enjoyed it! Yeah the pacing was pretty much just a case of me going through the stages of growth and power, didn't really linger on any scale for more than one chapter. Which can lead to it feeling a bit rushed.

Now the choas was intentional on my part, wanted it to just feel like an utterly chaotic mashup where this girl gets that power and there are just no breaks on the train of her wrecking things. Thanks for the thought out criticism I appreciate it!

Sequence Break by VivettaVenray Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

The Monster Lord anxiously awaits the heroine of legend. She arrives sooner than expected while bringing far more than he was prepared to handle.

This story draws inspiration from JRPG and game-exploitation tropes (hence the title). I wanted to try and write a more light-hearted and (hopefully) humorous story. I also wanted to try and write something soon after finishing another story, where I normally take a break. This story was written over two days. Comments and constructive criticism are more than welcome!

DISCLAIMER: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Feet, Growing Woman, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5845 Read Count: 4695
[Report This] Published: September 20 2020 Updated: September 20 2020
Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed
Date: September 29 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well to summarize it this looks like a speedrun. That's literally all I need to say, on another note I liked how you're trying different and "unique" concepts on this which is pretty fun to read I must say



Author's Response:

Hi thanks for reading! Efa's tactics are definitely fit for a speedrun, and she certainly finished her adventure far faster than the Monster Lord was planning I'm sure.

Evolvement by VivettaVenray Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

A crashed meteorite hands a young woman the keys to self-evolution. Along the way, Aoi decides to share it with her love.

This story started as a typical kaiju-themes inspired piece, but it grew into a rather long and experimental story. Content warnings inside. Comments and constructive criticism are more than welcome!

Special thanks to those who gave good advice for the story.

DISCLAIMER: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Growing Woman, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Nose, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41862 Read Count: 76067
[Report This] Published: September 29 2020 Updated: September 29 2020
Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed
Date: September 30 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Crater

I feel like this has some similarities to nanomachines yet oddly unique, pretty impressive stuff I must say, wouldnt be far to say you're one of the best writers in the gts community

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the comment! That's very high praise; I'm flattered! I do notice a lot of areas I can improve my writing though. In particular, I need to work on my prose some more, and this work in particular has a lot of telling-instead-of-showing and stuff like that.

That said, I really do appreciate it. Even one comment that someone enjoyed a story brightens my day and makes having written the story feel even more worth it.

 

There are some similarities to Nanomachines, true. It can go with the themes of undeserved-power/ascension that I do enjoy quite a bit (I've done many an RP along those themes, for instance). I was hoping the more fleshy aspects and couples content would help set it apart, among some other facets.

Eldritch Enrichment by VivettaVenray Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A woman plagued by frailty uses dark powers to bloom into something far, far greater.

This is another empowerment/ascension story. I wanted to write an eldritch themed story, and also a story where the character has plant-related powers/traits. So, I ended up combining the two! Content warnings inside. Comments and constructive criticism are more than welcome!

DISCLAIMER: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Growing Woman, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24245 Read Count: 45022
[Report This] Published: October 09 2020 Updated: October 09 2020
Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed
Date: October 11 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Ball

This is definately a good work, I wonder how many more ideas you have in that brain of yours. Since if I always see quality stuff like this, I'd be definately waiting for your next work!
Also something intresting, this gave me a really cool concept for a character. I swear it's always fetish stories that give me great ideas for characters

Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words! I have plenty more ideas don't worry: both for these empowerment/ascension type stories as well as other size-related stories and such.

I will make RP characters from my story ones now and then myself (e.g. Saki Satori from Nanomachines), so please don't do that. However, it sounds like you were just inspired to make your own character which is fine and sounds fun! Good luck; I'm sure they'll turn out great!

Nanormity by Sapphique Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary: In a world consisting of multiple different-sized races, a Nano called Jake decides to sign his life over to his Prodigan "best friend".
Categories: Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10511 Read Count: 14035
[Report This] Published: March 18 2022 Updated: September 02 2022
Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It is rarely that i set a review on this site, so rare in fact that this name i have? This is a name i have abandoned years ago. You have made me entertained in your story from start to finish, while i do knew how it was gonna end like, it still thrilled me in the perspective of jake, as he slowly loses hope, only to regain it, build a flourishing nation by which he has seen from the ground up, as if they were actually abandoned by a goddess and left to their own devices.

Sarah really fit her role here, as she felt like a goddess that would slowly neglect the humanity of her subjects to the point of being treated less than dirt by her. Really showed how much power she had over the nanos.

The thing that really hit me is the very ending:
"Jake?"
It really felt like how a goddess that neglected their subjects would react. There are a number of emotions ived felt by just that one word that it would be too long to write, but it really is great ending the story on such a note.

I may be reading far too ahead of this, but i really enjoyed it from start to finish. If you were to write a sequel to this I would be very interested in how you would write it. But for now this story is one of my favourites and damn well am i satisfied with it.

Author's Response:

My thoughts exactly! I'm really glad there are people who understood my intent with that. After all, the ending is kind of an interpretive one; so it's easy to imagine it going many different ways. Thanks so much for the supportive words!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.