Reviewer: R_OKU Signed
August 23 2017
Chapter 82: A Test of Wills
I've been following this story for a while now, and I just realized I haven't reviewed! I made an account just for you ;).
First of all, I'd like to congratulate you for writing an absolute fucking masterpiece. This story is so goddamn good it gives me hope for the GTS fandom. The way you've managed to take an idea and give it a twist to make it feel original is well executed. You've started off on the right foot by making the characters ACTUALLY likable and ACTUALLY realistic. Props for that, too many stories have shit for plot, shit for characters. And the thing about that is, it prevents the reader from CARING about the character. You made me feel awful when Cam was eaten (please let him be alive somehow) because he is a likable, fun, realistic character. These characters feel real, and even though the situation you've put them in is purely fantasy, how they deal with it is realistic. Your main character, Oliver, started out a little bit bland but you fleshed him out easily with his guts, fighting skills, and also by showing his character through dialogue instead of text. It makes me want to see what he will do next and if he will survive. And god, you made these hot girls whom I was excited to see get in on some GTS action, EVIL as hell. It actually disgusted me when Brooklyn was fucking Cam, a feeling I haven't felt before from a GTS scene of that type.
All in all, you've set up an amazing base plot and lovable, and hatable, characters. I can't wait to see where you'll go with this story. Props for sticking with it this far and not leaving it unfinished, a story like this deserves an amazing ending. I would love to see an Attack on Titan like scene where Oliver uses his razor blade to fuck a chick up. It certainly wouldn't be out of character. In any case, thank you for giving me an amazing read!Author's Response:
Thank you very much not only for taking the time to read this slowly unfolding drama but also for taking the time to make an account and share a review. I am humbled by your kind words of praise. I guess I write what I like and that means characters I can invest in either love or hate. Evolving characters under stressful situations makes me think what would I do if this shit was happening for real, some crack (Cam) and others excel. Yes these girls are smoking hot but oh so predatory and that's their lure to draw their quarry in. I think I'm going to have to stick with one until the end. Thanks again👍