Reviewer: R_OKU Signed
Date: August 23 2017 Title: Chapter 82: A Test of Wills

I've been following this story for a while now, and I just realized I haven't reviewed! I made an account just for you ;).

First of all, I'd like to congratulate you for writing an absolute fucking masterpiece. This story is so goddamn good it gives me hope for the GTS fandom. The way you've managed to take an idea and give it a twist to make it feel original is well executed. You've started off on the right foot by making the characters ACTUALLY likable and ACTUALLY realistic. Props for that, too many stories have shit for plot, shit for characters. And the thing about that is, it prevents the reader from CARING about the character. You made me feel awful when Cam was eaten (please let him be alive somehow) because he is a likable, fun, realistic character. These characters feel real, and even though the situation you've put them in is purely fantasy, how they deal with it is realistic. Your main character, Oliver, started out a little bit bland but you fleshed him out easily with his guts, fighting skills, and also by showing his character through dialogue instead of text. It makes me want to see what he will do next and if he will survive. And god, you made these hot girls whom I was excited to see get in on some GTS action, EVIL as hell. It actually disgusted me when Brooklyn was fucking Cam, a feeling I haven't felt before from a GTS scene of that type.

All in all, you've set up an amazing base plot and lovable, and hatable, characters. I can't wait to see where you'll go with this story. Props for sticking with it this far and not leaving it unfinished, a story like this deserves an amazing ending. I would love to see an Attack on Titan like scene where Oliver uses his razor blade to fuck a chick up. It certainly wouldn't be out of character. In any case, thank you for giving me an amazing read!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much not only for taking the time to read this slowly unfolding drama but also for taking the time to make an account and share a review. I am humbled by your kind words of praise. I guess I write what I like and that means characters I can invest in either love or hate. Evolving characters under stressful situations makes me think what would I do if this shit was happening for real, some crack (Cam) and others excel. Yes these girls are smoking hot but oh so predatory and that's their lure to draw their quarry in. I think I'm going to have to stick with one until the end. Thanks again👍

Reviewer: R_OKU Signed
Date: July 24 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Did you by any chance take inspiration from a certain 4 page long hentai doujin while writing this? I was never into odor, scat, anal, etc. until I found your stuff. I loved it, this is like my third time coming back to your profile and reading through your stories, so I decided to leave a review on probably my favorite. Keep up the good work! I'd really enjoy another nipple insertion scene in any of your next works as well.

Author's Response:

I think I know the doujin you're talking about. There's a couple of them out there, also commissioned by the same person who commissioned this story, WaffleLeech. The idea for this story and the plot all came from them.

Thank you for the praise, I'm glad I could share a few fetishes with you like this. I don't know when I'll do nipple insertion again since I rarely do breast stuff but next time I do maybe I'll have it go all the way inside.

Reviewer: R_OKU Signed
Date: November 13 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Your Girlfriend's Thick New Toy

Another fucking masterpiece. My main issue with the story was trying to understand whether he was the bead itself or just encased in it (maybe if I had read the first part on writing.com i wouldnt have had that issue). Nonetheless, I eagerly wait for more from you. Unaware is the way to go for sure.

Author's Response:

Thank you! In the writing.com story the main character is a squishy person with a malleble body. They get squished into a bead shape and then sprayed with a coating to make them harden. I left out some of the details about the main character's squishy body to make it less confusing, sorry if that actually made it more confusing!

Reviewer: R_OKU Signed
Date: May 13 2023 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Stuck In Her Ass Again

A very timely release, I was just thinking about Zelda's ass again with the new game. Been a long time fan, please continue this series if you're able! Or write something else entirely, I'll enjoy anything you put out :] have a good one

Author's Response:

Thank you! It makes me very glad to hear you'll enjoy any of the things I put out. I'll keep doing my best!

Reviewer: R_OKU Signed
Date: August 16 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to AA Apartment Complex

Wow, lots of progress this chapter! The tiny boyfriend dating the goddess of the apartment complex. Love how forward Anna is and the intricacies of this size-change world. Poor Clover 😂

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like how this is developing, there's still some stuff to come in the size difference dynamic (pretty soon if I say so myself) and yeah, some stuff with Clover as well xD

Reviewer: R_OKU Signed
Date: August 14 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Changing His Answers

Following up on my previous review to let you and any other eager fans know that I decided to write my own version of this story, my first piece here on the site! After checking out justanbox's many stories I fell in love with the concept, and I felt it fitting to continue the chain of inspiration and say "fuck it, I'll just do it myself!". 

If you want to give it a read, it's in my profile! The title is "A Response Forever Changed", and uses the sister's pantyhose from the original story, rather than the mom's thong. I found it sexier personally, and it helps keep our two versions separate. Cheers!